Comments received on poems by Edthepoet
The Butterfly
RSM0812 said:
Your poem was really good. I like the rhyme scheme at the end
December 21st, 2023 11:57
RSM0812 said:
Your poem was really good. I like the rhyme scheme at the end
December 21st, 2023 11:57
Both teams to score before half time
jarcher54 said:
Here I am watching Bournemouth v Liverpool with the sound off while I stumble on your poem. LOL I don\'t bet but I share the sentiment nonetheless.
August 19th, 2023 10:37
jarcher54 said:
Here I am watching Bournemouth v Liverpool with the sound off while I stumble on your poem. LOL I don\'t bet but I share the sentiment nonetheless.
August 19th, 2023 10:37
Better make it a million plus two
Caring dove said:
Nicely expressed poem )) ljke your words
June 23rd, 2023 11:32
Caring dove said:
Nicely expressed poem )) ljke your words
June 23rd, 2023 11:32
Flame The Fuse
Bobby O said:
Seems that you like this person ? Smooth and eloquent piece. Songs that aren’t enough… what a cool way to convey that it’s almost impossible to imagine what is enough ? Tip-some Classic Smokey Robinson ?
June 22nd, 2023 19:19
Bobby O said:
Seems that you like this person ? Smooth and eloquent piece. Songs that aren’t enough… what a cool way to convey that it’s almost impossible to imagine what is enough ? Tip-some Classic Smokey Robinson ?
June 22nd, 2023 19:19
3 Days Sober
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how this poem came off as this one long train of thought. The mind is truly capable of self-destruction; however, as you put in this poem, is it really fair to label it as such when everyone else has their own addictive issues? A pensive verse that is thought-provoking.
May 23rd, 2023 07:21
Rocky Lagou said:
I love how this poem came off as this one long train of thought. The mind is truly capable of self-destruction; however, as you put in this poem, is it really fair to label it as such when everyone else has their own addictive issues? A pensive verse that is thought-provoking.
May 23rd, 2023 07:21
3 Days Sober
L. B. Mek said:
purposed rage
is a powerful tool for coaxing our muses
a great read of acute commentary
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(all the best)
May 22nd, 2023 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
purposed rage
is a powerful tool for coaxing our muses
a great read of acute commentary
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(all the best)
May 22nd, 2023 04:05
Lest This Love Turn To Hate
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah, wish i had your wisdom
and treasured those gifted days
in the now
than admiring them in this rear-view mirror, of too late)
so well written, and relatable
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 30th, 2023 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah, wish i had your wisdom
and treasured those gifted days
in the now
than admiring them in this rear-view mirror, of too late)
so well written, and relatable
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
January 30th, 2023 04:46
Kicked you in the cooch
Edthepoet said:
Just a little 😂. As a trainee psychologist I understand why people place so much utility in the online world.. But I still find it baffling.
September 30th, 2022 13:02
Edthepoet said:
Just a little 😂. As a trainee psychologist I understand why people place so much utility in the online world.. But I still find it baffling.
September 30th, 2022 13:02
Kicked you in the cooch
Neville said:
I\'m very much with the old dog down under on this one ..
September 30th, 2022 10:56
Neville said:
I\'m very much with the old dog down under on this one ..
September 30th, 2022 10:56
Kicked you in the cooch
Doggerel Dave said:
A little disillusioned with virtual interaction, Ed?
Should be more of it, otherwise virtual morons will take over the world in real time.
A problem well defined in skilled versification.
September 30th, 2022 08:53
Doggerel Dave said:
A little disillusioned with virtual interaction, Ed?
Should be more of it, otherwise virtual morons will take over the world in real time.
A problem well defined in skilled versification.
September 30th, 2022 08:53
The line of truth
L. B. Mek said:
so, so well written
thank you! dear poet
\'yeah, those brief moments
of genuinely sincere connections
fuel all our laboured, efforts\'
just an Awesome read
June 28th, 2022 02:52
L. B. Mek said:
so, so well written
thank you! dear poet
\'yeah, those brief moments
of genuinely sincere connections
fuel all our laboured, efforts\'
just an Awesome read
June 28th, 2022 02:52
True Love Language
L. B. Mek said:
\'Please spare me
Your latest ted talk reincarnation\'..
Ha!
great, raw lines
of harsh reality\'s
truths..
thanks for sharing
May 10th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'Please spare me
Your latest ted talk reincarnation\'..
Ha!
great, raw lines
of harsh reality\'s
truths..
thanks for sharing
May 10th, 2022 05:09
True Love Language
_lonely__side said:
you\'ve expressed the emotion quite well. It just gets so much difficult to convey our feelings sometimes and feels like everything we say to express it is just making it more and more complicated
May 10th, 2022 03:21
_lonely__side said:
you\'ve expressed the emotion quite well. It just gets so much difficult to convey our feelings sometimes and feels like everything we say to express it is just making it more and more complicated
May 10th, 2022 03:21
Their fleeting thoughts of me
geekslutnerdgirl said:
love this. especially the 2nd stanza…
“Unless we bleed
In symphony”
May 8th, 2022 14:20
geekslutnerdgirl said:
love this. especially the 2nd stanza…
“Unless we bleed
In symphony”
May 8th, 2022 14:20
It\'s midnight in Sacremento, and I won\'t be this man tomorrow
Dahlia said:
very nice I enjoyed the beat of mystery about not being the same person tomorrow, I don\'t think we ever are...
well done poet
Dahlia
April 1st, 2022 18:24
Dahlia said:
very nice I enjoyed the beat of mystery about not being the same person tomorrow, I don\'t think we ever are...
well done poet
Dahlia
April 1st, 2022 18:24
All the lonely souls
Rocky Lagou said:
Music is my all-time remedy. Great poem, I love the imagery and the repetition is meticulously placed. 👍🎶
February 9th, 2022 13:12
Rocky Lagou said:
Music is my all-time remedy. Great poem, I love the imagery and the repetition is meticulously placed. 👍🎶
February 9th, 2022 13:12
Poor Choice
L. B. Mek said:
\'About a bus driver poet\'
(Paterson\'s not just a film
it\'s a work of art
and like all art, it\'s very
subjective..
\'in my humble opinion\') lol
really enjoyed the climbing down steps - feel
of spiralling bad choices your poetry portrayed,
insightful commentary, aside
a little introspection and yesteryear musing\'s..
a poignant cocktail of poetic melancholy..
thanks for sharing, a great read..
(and loved your last three lines_
\'fucked over
is an understatement, time
will heal all and crown me victor
but, the immediacy
of my humiliation slows: that ticking clock.\'
(don\'t explode, lol
Fight, the good fight!
and write
write it all out
imagine each poem
as saving hundreds
on a counselling session) lol
February 8th, 2022 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'About a bus driver poet\'
(Paterson\'s not just a film
it\'s a work of art
and like all art, it\'s very
subjective..
\'in my humble opinion\') lol
really enjoyed the climbing down steps - feel
of spiralling bad choices your poetry portrayed,
insightful commentary, aside
a little introspection and yesteryear musing\'s..
a poignant cocktail of poetic melancholy..
thanks for sharing, a great read..
(and loved your last three lines_
\'fucked over
is an understatement, time
will heal all and crown me victor
but, the immediacy
of my humiliation slows: that ticking clock.\'
(don\'t explode, lol
Fight, the good fight!
and write
write it all out
imagine each poem
as saving hundreds
on a counselling session) lol
February 8th, 2022 05:50
Devil on my shoulder, but she ain\'t much company
L. B. Mek said:
a never ever ending battle
to stay, clean
once you\'ve chosen to cross that line
and save yourself
the pain..
(admittedly a harrowing read
but still, thanks for sharing)
stay strong!
January 24th, 2022 09:03
L. B. Mek said:
a never ever ending battle
to stay, clean
once you\'ve chosen to cross that line
and save yourself
the pain..
(admittedly a harrowing read
but still, thanks for sharing)
stay strong!
January 24th, 2022 09:03
Time to feel like we\'re falling
L. B. Mek said:
a poised, portrait of love
in its Phoenix form
inked rhythmically, Poetic..
what a great read, thanks for sharing
\'Speak to me of beauty
Speak to me of truth\'
(\"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,--that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.\")
her be: the greatness of Keats\'
written centuries
before, we ever gurgled
our disquiet of life...!
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-14542
January 17th, 2022 07:13
L. B. Mek said:
a poised, portrait of love
in its Phoenix form
inked rhythmically, Poetic..
what a great read, thanks for sharing
\'Speak to me of beauty
Speak to me of truth\'
(\"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,--that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.\")
her be: the greatness of Keats\'
written centuries
before, we ever gurgled
our disquiet of life...!
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-14542
January 17th, 2022 07:13
Congratulations, you have a new match!
Poetic Dan said:
Internet dating was alot of fun but most definitely glad it\'s over!
Fabulous flow as always and good luck on this year\'s journey....
Keep up the write
January 5th, 2022 11:14
Poetic Dan said:
Internet dating was alot of fun but most definitely glad it\'s over!
Fabulous flow as always and good luck on this year\'s journey....
Keep up the write
January 5th, 2022 11:14
Looking back in sweet disbelief
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Ed and so true, we have a great deal to mend in our world to save it as it was.
Andy
December 25th, 2021 03:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful words Ed and so true, we have a great deal to mend in our world to save it as it was.
Andy
December 25th, 2021 03:28
Just let me cry
L. B. Mek said:
you\'ve written these words
as if dipping within your tears
of absolution, as ink
to guide your inspiration..
a great effort, I laud your passion
thanks for sharing
December 10th, 2021 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
you\'ve written these words
as if dipping within your tears
of absolution, as ink
to guide your inspiration..
a great effort, I laud your passion
thanks for sharing
December 10th, 2021 04:42
Just let me cry
C E Thomas said:
You display an amazing grasp of structure! I love the reflection across the three stanzas. A great poem - please do me a favour and write many more!
December 9th, 2021 22:10
C E Thomas said:
You display an amazing grasp of structure! I love the reflection across the three stanzas. A great poem - please do me a favour and write many more!
December 9th, 2021 22:10
While the colours run off the page
spilleronsheet said:
Great words dear poet
It sure is mustering up courage and let go the fear within
November 26th, 2021 10:28
spilleronsheet said:
Great words dear poet
It sure is mustering up courage and let go the fear within
November 26th, 2021 10:28
While the colours run off the page
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m not even gonna lie this is fantastic. A job well done to you good sir.
November 26th, 2021 10:24
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m not even gonna lie this is fantastic. A job well done to you good sir.
November 26th, 2021 10:24
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