Comments received on poems by Edthepoet



The line of truth
L. B. Mek said:

so, so well written
thank you! dear poet
\'yeah, those brief moments
of genuinely sincere connections
fuel all our laboured, efforts\'
just an Awesome read


June 28th, 2022 02:52

True Love Language
L. B. Mek said:

\'Please spare me
Your latest ted talk reincarnation\'..
Ha!
great, raw lines
of harsh reality\'s
truths..
thanks for sharing

May 10th, 2022 05:09

True Love Language
_lonely__side said:

you\'ve expressed the emotion quite well. It just gets so much difficult to convey our feelings sometimes and feels like everything we say to express it is just making it more and more complicated

May 10th, 2022 03:21

Their fleeting thoughts of me
geekslutnerdgirl said:

love this. especially the 2nd stanza…

“Unless we bleed
In symphony”



May 8th, 2022 14:20

It\'s midnight in Sacremento, and I won\'t be this man tomorrow
Dahlia said:

very nice I enjoyed the beat of mystery about not being the same person tomorrow, I don\'t think we ever are...
well done poet
Dahlia

April 1st, 2022 18:24

The Local
dean langmuir said:

Good one,deja vu,take care

March 26th, 2022 17:03

All the lonely souls
Rocky Lagou said:

Music is my all-time remedy. Great poem, I love the imagery and the repetition is meticulously placed. 👍🎶

February 9th, 2022 13:12

Poor Choice
Lorna said:

This caught me - thanks!

February 8th, 2022 14:54

Poor Choice
L. B. Mek said:

\'About a bus driver poet\'
(Paterson\'s not just a film
it\'s a work of art
and like all art, it\'s very
subjective..
\'in my humble opinion\') lol
really enjoyed the climbing down steps - feel
of spiralling bad choices your poetry portrayed,
insightful commentary, aside
a little introspection and yesteryear musing\'s..
a poignant cocktail of poetic melancholy..
thanks for sharing, a great read..
(and loved your last three lines_
\'fucked over
is an understatement, time
will heal all and crown me victor
but, the immediacy
of my humiliation slows: that ticking clock.\'
(don\'t explode, lol
Fight, the good fight!
and write
write it all out
imagine each poem
as saving hundreds
on a counselling session) lol

February 8th, 2022 05:50

Devil on my shoulder, but she ain\'t much company
L. B. Mek said:

a never ever ending battle
to stay, clean
once you\'ve chosen to cross that line
and save yourself
the pain..
(admittedly a harrowing read
but still, thanks for sharing)
stay strong!

January 24th, 2022 09:03

Time to feel like we\'re falling
L. B. Mek said:

a poised, portrait of love
in its Phoenix form
inked rhythmically, Poetic..
what a great read, thanks for sharing
\'Speak to me of beauty
Speak to me of truth\'
(\"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,--that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.\")
her be: the greatness of Keats\'
written centuries
before, we ever gurgled
our disquiet of life...!
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-14542

January 17th, 2022 07:13

Congratulations, you have a new match!
Poetic Dan said:

Internet dating was alot of fun but most definitely glad it\'s over!
Fabulous flow as always and good luck on this year\'s journey....

Keep up the write

January 5th, 2022 11:14

Looking back in sweet disbelief
Goldfinch60 said:

Very powerful words Ed and so true, we have a great deal to mend in our world to save it as it was.

Andy

December 25th, 2021 03:28

Just let me cry
L. B. Mek said:

you\'ve written these words
as if dipping within your tears
of absolution, as ink
to guide your inspiration..
a great effort, I laud your passion
thanks for sharing

December 10th, 2021 04:42

Just let me cry
C E Thomas said:

You display an amazing grasp of structure! I love the reflection across the three stanzas. A great poem - please do me a favour and write many more!

December 9th, 2021 22:10

While the colours run off the page
spilleronsheet said:

Great words dear poet
It sure is mustering up courage and let go the fear within

November 26th, 2021 10:28

While the colours run off the page
Nicholas Browning said:

I\'m not even gonna lie this is fantastic. A job well done to you good sir.

November 26th, 2021 10:24

Keep your heart in the hustle
Edthepoet said:

Thanks man, much appreciated

November 16th, 2021 17:35

Keep your heart in the hustle
L. B. Mek said:

almost a cathartic, reading experience
I laud, the empathy you imbued into your lines
thanks for sharing

November 16th, 2021 05:25

Man
Paul Bell said:

Strong words, and at some point in our lives we\'ll come across some of them.

October 26th, 2021 12:02

How Did You Use Your Hurt?
L. B. Mek said:

\'Though it matters not
The severity of your pain
But how severely your actions
Bring about a change
For the strong know how to manifest
Their screams into their dreams
While the weak welcome bitterness
And get by on happy memories\'
\'It matters not how did you live your life
But how did you use your hurt?\'..
Insightful words
and a meaningfully positive message
you choose to poetically share
thank you! dear poet

August 2nd, 2021 04:10

How Did You Use Your Hurt?
Saxon Crow said:

I love this one Ed. Great attitude and totally relatable

August 2nd, 2021 00:17

On the tallest of trees
Alex Arnot said:

Great rhythm and the consistency of the language is superb. I love the evolving metaphor of the seed, really great stuff!

July 27th, 2021 21:48

Mia
rebmasters said:

Beautifully capturing the inevitable inequality of life and relationships 🖤

July 25th, 2021 09:09

Tattoo You
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive words Ed.

Andy

June 8th, 2021 23:56

Tattoo You
Saxon Crow said:

Lovely meaningful poem Ed.

June 8th, 2021 14:16

Tattoo You
Jerry Reynolds said:

A well-written poem, Ed.

June 8th, 2021 14:14

Tattoo You
Teddy.15 said:

If all that is left of a love is a tattoo then so be it, I found you have lost someone you truly loved in this poem and a reminder to all, that love is delicate. Just gorgeous. Ps nice to meet you.

June 8th, 2021 14:03

Freckled Girl
Rainbow said:

Lovely poem

May 10th, 2021 16:20

Lay back down beneath
Rainbow said:

I like this . The way you have included parts of nature . It also flows very well. Has a soft feeling to this poem

May 10th, 2021 16:17

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