Comments received on poems by Edthepoet
Heard it all before
FredPeyer said:
I like it, Ed! Could be lyrics for a song. Great writing!
October 25th, 2017 11:29
FredPeyer said:
I like it, Ed! Could be lyrics for a song. Great writing!
October 25th, 2017 11:29
Kardashyish. (Comedy Bit, not for the easily offended)
orchidee said:
I reckon I know which way she is going. There\'s an eclipse of the sun wherever she goes, due to her large....... heehee.
October 15th, 2017 01:20
orchidee said:
I reckon I know which way she is going. There\'s an eclipse of the sun wherever she goes, due to her large....... heehee.
October 15th, 2017 01:20
Kardashyish. (Comedy Bit, not for the easily offended)
FredPeyer said:
Am not offended! :-) Love it.
Ed, you are quickly becoming my favorite stand-up comic!
October 14th, 2017 19:59
FredPeyer said:
Am not offended! :-) Love it.
Ed, you are quickly becoming my favorite stand-up comic!
October 14th, 2017 19:59
Trump This
FredPeyer said:
Ed, absolutely love this! You are genius! Maybe you should become a stand-up comedian!
October 13th, 2017 17:36
FredPeyer said:
Ed, absolutely love this! You are genius! Maybe you should become a stand-up comedian!
October 13th, 2017 17:36
9 of Diamonds
Louis Gibbs said:
Well done enjoyable poem, Ed! If I might suggest a correction that caused me a distraction: The contraction of \"you are\" is you\'re, not \"your\". \"Your\" indicates possession. Hope you are not offended. Write on!
October 11th, 2017 11:20
Louis Gibbs said:
Well done enjoyable poem, Ed! If I might suggest a correction that caused me a distraction: The contraction of \"you are\" is you\'re, not \"your\". \"Your\" indicates possession. Hope you are not offended. Write on!
October 11th, 2017 11:20
Life Feels Like Forever
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the \"He cares about\" sequences in this good write. Well done, Ed!
October 6th, 2017 16:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the \"He cares about\" sequences in this good write. Well done, Ed!
October 6th, 2017 16:30
Life Feels Like Forever
lasergraph said:
Sometimes life does feel like forever. Age will fix that. Days still pass slow but years pass in an instant.
October 6th, 2017 09:47
lasergraph said:
Sometimes life does feel like forever. Age will fix that. Days still pass slow but years pass in an instant.
October 6th, 2017 09:47
Come A Time
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Quite true Ed. There is a time and place for everything. A very nice write and I really enjoyed it! Thanks Ed!
October 1st, 2017 08:09
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Quite true Ed. There is a time and place for everything. A very nice write and I really enjoyed it! Thanks Ed!
October 1st, 2017 08:09
So long sweet Simoné
malubotelho said:
Great writing Ede. I like the format also. Sweet Simone, so long. Quite sad though.
September 29th, 2017 08:00
malubotelho said:
Great writing Ede. I like the format also. Sweet Simone, so long. Quite sad though.
September 29th, 2017 08:00
Something a lot like love
dusk arising said:
Oh absolutely superb writing! Could nave been written for me. Goes into my fav\'s.
September 28th, 2017 18:30
dusk arising said:
Oh absolutely superb writing! Could nave been written for me. Goes into my fav\'s.
September 28th, 2017 18:30
Love Doesn\'t Ask
Christina8 said:
I really like your poem, it\'s really sweet. Nice rhymes, too. From someone who\'s been in a relationship for a long time, love is worth the risk! But you are right, love doesn\'t wait.
September 27th, 2017 20:43
Christina8 said:
I really like your poem, it\'s really sweet. Nice rhymes, too. From someone who\'s been in a relationship for a long time, love is worth the risk! But you are right, love doesn\'t wait.
September 27th, 2017 20:43
Love Doesn\'t Ask
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Ed! Relationships are sometimes so complicated! We want to say the right thing, but end up doing otherwise. We want to do the right thing, but do wrong. But it is always worth the risk!
I really like your poem!
September 27th, 2017 12:56
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Ed! Relationships are sometimes so complicated! We want to say the right thing, but end up doing otherwise. We want to do the right thing, but do wrong. But it is always worth the risk!
I really like your poem!
September 27th, 2017 12:56
Love Doesn\'t Ask
Sunflowers Bloom said:
awesome write! I feel like this sometimes! THank you for it.
September 27th, 2017 09:25
Sunflowers Bloom said:
awesome write! I feel like this sometimes! THank you for it.
September 27th, 2017 09:25
Take Back Your Love
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem, Ed, but unfortunately I am neither a lyrics, nor song-writing type!
September 26th, 2017 17:17
FredPeyer said:
I like your poem, Ed, but unfortunately I am neither a lyrics, nor song-writing type!
September 26th, 2017 17:17
El Bandito
dusk arising said:
And if i ever have a son i\'m gonna name him Sue
Yours is a great tale from out of the fantasy wild wild world someplace inbetween there and who knows where.....
Whatever .... it was great to read and wonderful ending.
September 23rd, 2017 09:57
dusk arising said:
And if i ever have a son i\'m gonna name him Sue
Yours is a great tale from out of the fantasy wild wild world someplace inbetween there and who knows where.....
Whatever .... it was great to read and wonderful ending.
September 23rd, 2017 09:57
Smoke and Mirrors
dusk arising said:
Daft isn\'t it...you meet someone who amazes you in the way you feel about them, you\'re stunned like a rabbit caught in the headlights.... suddenly youre not you anymore..... feeling like you need to step up a notch.... Then she says one magic thing and you realise.... she\'s already marked you out. Great writing again Ed.
September 22nd, 2017 17:36
dusk arising said:
Daft isn\'t it...you meet someone who amazes you in the way you feel about them, you\'re stunned like a rabbit caught in the headlights.... suddenly youre not you anymore..... feeling like you need to step up a notch.... Then she says one magic thing and you realise.... she\'s already marked you out. Great writing again Ed.
September 22nd, 2017 17:36
Smoke and Mirrors
Louis Gibbs said:
Great insight expressed in this one, Ed. Very well done! Love it.
September 22nd, 2017 10:19
Louis Gibbs said:
Great insight expressed in this one, Ed. Very well done! Love it.
September 22nd, 2017 10:19
Aint No Gun
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so true, it is always the person behind the weapon who is the killer.
September 22nd, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so true, it is always the person behind the weapon who is the killer.
September 22nd, 2017 00:50
Aint No Gun
lasergraph said:
Great piece. Without the interaction with man, the weapons remain inanimate and harmless.
September 21st, 2017 15:01
lasergraph said:
Great piece. Without the interaction with man, the weapons remain inanimate and harmless.
September 21st, 2017 15:01
You May Say I\'m A Dreamer
dusk arising said:
< the crowd raised Ed onto their shoulders amidst rapturous applause and much cheering, carried him three times around the tavern and out into the street ensuring along the way his jar was never empty of his favourite tipple\'
Hoorah Hoorah for the outspoken one who has shown us the way to live life as we should on our wonderful planet in harmony with all creatures great and small.
Excellent piece or writing.
September 19th, 2017 21:52
dusk arising said:
< the crowd raised Ed onto their shoulders amidst rapturous applause and much cheering, carried him three times around the tavern and out into the street ensuring along the way his jar was never empty of his favourite tipple\'
Hoorah Hoorah for the outspoken one who has shown us the way to live life as we should on our wonderful planet in harmony with all creatures great and small.
Excellent piece or writing.
September 19th, 2017 21:52
You May Say I\'m A Dreamer
Christina8 said:
Great write. We\'d definitely be \"equals\", now wouldn\'t we?
September 19th, 2017 09:38
Christina8 said:
Great write. We\'d definitely be \"equals\", now wouldn\'t we?
September 19th, 2017 09:38
Shine A Light
dusk arising said:
Sometimes it just cuts through all the crap we build around ourselves. The magic that is a touch..... you\'d tell youself youre being silly reading too much into it but,...... it was electric, it was a foundation stone...... you laid that stone together today.
September 18th, 2017 15:57
dusk arising said:
Sometimes it just cuts through all the crap we build around ourselves. The magic that is a touch..... you\'d tell youself youre being silly reading too much into it but,...... it was electric, it was a foundation stone...... you laid that stone together today.
September 18th, 2017 15:57
Falling Into Freedom
Edthepoet said:
Thank you Gary. I appreciate the depth of your feedback. Could you explain the first part of your comment in layman\'s terms for me?
September 16th, 2017 15:52
Edthepoet said:
Thank you Gary. I appreciate the depth of your feedback. Could you explain the first part of your comment in layman\'s terms for me?
September 16th, 2017 15:52
Falling Into Freedom
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice near and end rhyme (abab cdcd efef ghghgh) and predominate, trimeter acentual-syllabic meter. Your philosophical underpinning that nature is perfected by grace and hence, liberated (i.e. falling into freedom) is a message many are desperate for. Check sp \"released\" in your final stanza. Well done my friend.
September 16th, 2017 14:50
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice near and end rhyme (abab cdcd efef ghghgh) and predominate, trimeter acentual-syllabic meter. Your philosophical underpinning that nature is perfected by grace and hence, liberated (i.e. falling into freedom) is a message many are desperate for. Check sp \"released\" in your final stanza. Well done my friend.
September 16th, 2017 14:50
The Manics Said It Best
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Pervasive final stanza! This irrational evil will be defeated and in forgiveness, we as a universal people will truly set ourselves free. United in faith...
September 16th, 2017 14:31
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Pervasive final stanza! This irrational evil will be defeated and in forgiveness, we as a universal people will truly set ourselves free. United in faith...
September 16th, 2017 14:31
The Manics Said It Best
F.G. Franklin said:
I don\'t understand any religion that worships God as a loving Creator and then sets about to systematically destroy and kill in the name of that same God. Such a religion seems an inherent oxymoron to me.; the epitome and irony of blasphemy.
September 16th, 2017 13:30
F.G. Franklin said:
I don\'t understand any religion that worships God as a loving Creator and then sets about to systematically destroy and kill in the name of that same God. Such a religion seems an inherent oxymoron to me.; the epitome and irony of blasphemy.
September 16th, 2017 13:30
Stuck Under Thunderstorms
dusk arising said:
The dread of all those who are called away to \'do their duty\'.
You captured the essence of this loss here.
September 10th, 2017 18:21
dusk arising said:
The dread of all those who are called away to \'do their duty\'.
You captured the essence of this loss here.
September 10th, 2017 18:21
Stuck Under Thunderstorms
Christina8 said:
A very well written but sad poem.
September 10th, 2017 17:31
Christina8 said:
A very well written but sad poem.
September 10th, 2017 17:31
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