Comments received on poems by Edthepoet
Keep your heart in the hustle
L. B. Mek said:
almost a cathartic, reading experience
I laud, the empathy you imbued into your lines
thanks for sharing
November 16th, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
almost a cathartic, reading experience
I laud, the empathy you imbued into your lines
thanks for sharing
November 16th, 2021 05:25
Man
Paul Bell said:
Strong words, and at some point in our lives we\'ll come across some of them.
October 26th, 2021 12:02
Paul Bell said:
Strong words, and at some point in our lives we\'ll come across some of them.
October 26th, 2021 12:02
How Did You Use Your Hurt?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Though it matters not
The severity of your pain
But how severely your actions
Bring about a change
For the strong know how to manifest
Their screams into their dreams
While the weak welcome bitterness
And get by on happy memories\'
\'It matters not how did you live your life
But how did you use your hurt?\'..
Insightful words
and a meaningfully positive message
you choose to poetically share
thank you! dear poet
August 2nd, 2021 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'Though it matters not
The severity of your pain
But how severely your actions
Bring about a change
For the strong know how to manifest
Their screams into their dreams
While the weak welcome bitterness
And get by on happy memories\'
\'It matters not how did you live your life
But how did you use your hurt?\'..
Insightful words
and a meaningfully positive message
you choose to poetically share
thank you! dear poet
August 2nd, 2021 04:10
How Did You Use Your Hurt?
Saxon Crow said:
I love this one Ed. Great attitude and totally relatable
August 2nd, 2021 00:17
Saxon Crow said:
I love this one Ed. Great attitude and totally relatable
August 2nd, 2021 00:17
On the tallest of trees
Alex Arnot said:
Great rhythm and the consistency of the language is superb. I love the evolving metaphor of the seed, really great stuff!
July 27th, 2021 21:48
Alex Arnot said:
Great rhythm and the consistency of the language is superb. I love the evolving metaphor of the seed, really great stuff!
July 27th, 2021 21:48
Mia
rebmasters said:
Beautifully capturing the inevitable inequality of life and relationships 🖤
July 25th, 2021 09:09
rebmasters said:
Beautifully capturing the inevitable inequality of life and relationships 🖤
July 25th, 2021 09:09
Lay back down beneath
Rainbow said:
I like this . The way you have included parts of nature . It also flows very well. Has a soft feeling to this poem
May 10th, 2021 16:17
Rainbow said:
I like this . The way you have included parts of nature . It also flows very well. Has a soft feeling to this poem
May 10th, 2021 16:17
Lay back down beneath
L. B. Mek said:
\'I guess it\'s hidden in the inhales
Of the words that we don\'t speak\'..
a wonderfully paced write, with incisive use of imagery and natural flow
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 8th, 2021 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'I guess it\'s hidden in the inhales
Of the words that we don\'t speak\'..
a wonderfully paced write, with incisive use of imagery and natural flow
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 8th, 2021 03:08
Better the devil you know
L. B. Mek said:
some wonderful imagery, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 12th, 2021 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
some wonderful imagery, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 12th, 2021 05:50
The Hangman\'s Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:
not sure about your message or context of content, but
I salute your tremendous prowess for tightly woven rhythmic brilliance..
I can only assume this took a few redrafts to come out so smooth in delivery,
brilliantly executed in my humble opinion
March 8th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
not sure about your message or context of content, but
I salute your tremendous prowess for tightly woven rhythmic brilliance..
I can only assume this took a few redrafts to come out so smooth in delivery,
brilliantly executed in my humble opinion
March 8th, 2021 05:27
In Ghosts I Never Believed
L. B. Mek said:
*\'Oh how I wish you could see
In tall gestures of empathy
You\'ve grown as blind as me\'
*\'Oh how I know you believe
In warm gestures of honesty
You\'ve grown as cold as me\',
how pitifully bleak your perspective of reality: reads...
but still, what a wonderful write you\'ve Chosen to share with the world,
thank you
January 15th, 2021 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
*\'Oh how I wish you could see
In tall gestures of empathy
You\'ve grown as blind as me\'
*\'Oh how I know you believe
In warm gestures of honesty
You\'ve grown as cold as me\',
how pitifully bleak your perspective of reality: reads...
but still, what a wonderful write you\'ve Chosen to share with the world,
thank you
January 15th, 2021 04:59
In Ghosts I Never Believed
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ed, maybe that ghost will become reality one day.
Andy
January 15th, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ed, maybe that ghost will become reality one day.
Andy
January 15th, 2021 01:36
My cheap imitation of i
Poetic Dan said:
Really needed this! Thank you for what only your Poetic soul can do...
Keep up the write
Always appreciated
January 4th, 2021 06:53
Poetic Dan said:
Really needed this! Thank you for what only your Poetic soul can do...
Keep up the write
Always appreciated
January 4th, 2021 06:53
Freckled Girl
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Have a Happy Holiday and Stay safe.
December 24th, 2020 16:36
Freckled Girl
Poetic Dan said:
So good to see your name pop up, that\'s a perfect gift!
Like I said before, incredible flow sat perfectly with my soul!
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
December 24th, 2020 15:15
Poetic Dan said:
So good to see your name pop up, that\'s a perfect gift!
Like I said before, incredible flow sat perfectly with my soul!
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
December 24th, 2020 15:15
Beyond Pinecone
Poetic Dan said:
You must draw this straight in the moment and I don\'t know if it is a reflection of your inner working, but truly inspirational stuff and a flow that sits with the soul!
In another work! Incredible..
Thanks for sharing
Much peace and respect
December 24th, 2020 15:12
Poetic Dan said:
You must draw this straight in the moment and I don\'t know if it is a reflection of your inner working, but truly inspirational stuff and a flow that sits with the soul!
In another work! Incredible..
Thanks for sharing
Much peace and respect
December 24th, 2020 15:12
Freckled Girl
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Love freckled girls! Particularly girls with freckles in their cleavage.
The past tense of \'shine\' is \'shone\'.
December 24th, 2020 13:36
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Love freckled girls! Particularly girls with freckles in their cleavage.
The past tense of \'shine\' is \'shone\'.
December 24th, 2020 13:36
Journey to Shadow
jarcher54 said:
A startling concluding stanza. Knowing where the monsters reside may come in handy. I appreciate the subtle dance between the speaker and the monsters. I know they can hear. That is a profound observation.
September 3rd, 2020 02:37
jarcher54 said:
A startling concluding stanza. Knowing where the monsters reside may come in handy. I appreciate the subtle dance between the speaker and the monsters. I know they can hear. That is a profound observation.
September 3rd, 2020 02:37
04.07.20
MissileOfUncertainty said:
I really enjoyed the read. The flow was excellent! It’s a perfect testimony to the modern world.
June 28th, 2020 17:11
MissileOfUncertainty said:
I really enjoyed the read. The flow was excellent! It’s a perfect testimony to the modern world.
June 28th, 2020 17:11
You matter to me and I matter to you
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Ed and the line \"With love, respect and unity.\" is so true for all in our lives.
Andy
June 8th, 2020 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Ed and the line \"With love, respect and unity.\" is so true for all in our lives.
Andy
June 8th, 2020 00:12
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