Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Waiting Words.
dusk arising said:
A time of mixed emotions maybe? I know unsteady/unstable times for me leave me unable to focus upon writing a piece.
The mind has to be running in the right fashion to set ones head and hand to the task.
February 11th, 2018 08:27
dusk arising said:
A time of mixed emotions maybe? I know unsteady/unstable times for me leave me unable to focus upon writing a piece.
The mind has to be running in the right fashion to set ones head and hand to the task.
February 11th, 2018 08:27
Waiting Words.
Accidental Poet said:
But words that congregate can be a vehicle of adventure and amazement for the heart and soul to express the joys and sorrows. Beautiful write Andy.
February 11th, 2018 08:15
Accidental Poet said:
But words that congregate can be a vehicle of adventure and amazement for the heart and soul to express the joys and sorrows. Beautiful write Andy.
February 11th, 2018 08:15
Waiting Words.
Michael Edwards said:
We share a love of words - currently reading Anna by Arnold Bennett and it\'s so rich in the use of language.
February 11th, 2018 06:23
Michael Edwards said:
We share a love of words - currently reading Anna by Arnold Bennett and it\'s so rich in the use of language.
February 11th, 2018 06:23
Waiting Words.
orchidee said:
Words words, and more words! Sometimes we may feel constricted with one-poem-per-day on here. Yet we would not have time to read hundreds of poems of each poet at once, not to post loads of our own poems each day.
Of course, we can always write as many as we wish, off-site, to our heart\'s content. Unless we dry up a while, that is!
February 11th, 2018 03:25
orchidee said:
Words words, and more words! Sometimes we may feel constricted with one-poem-per-day on here. Yet we would not have time to read hundreds of poems of each poet at once, not to post loads of our own poems each day.
Of course, we can always write as many as we wish, off-site, to our heart\'s content. Unless we dry up a while, that is!
February 11th, 2018 03:25
I Awoke Today
FredPeyer said:
Your great poem speaks to the converted here. At my age, every day is a gift. And as you say, this gift is filled with wonder and adventure, even on a slow day!
February 10th, 2018 20:03
FredPeyer said:
Your great poem speaks to the converted here. At my age, every day is a gift. And as you say, this gift is filled with wonder and adventure, even on a slow day!
February 10th, 2018 20:03
I Awoke Today
Christina8 said:
I wish we could all share your amazing outlook on life! Thanks for sharing this inspiring piece!
February 10th, 2018 19:52
Christina8 said:
I wish we could all share your amazing outlook on life! Thanks for sharing this inspiring piece!
February 10th, 2018 19:52
I Awoke Today
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ another perfect blend of Poem \'n Pic ~ Love both. ! \"Every day I wake ~ I know it is going to be a good day\" I figure you would have to be retired to be able to say that with confidence ? Roll on 2053 (70 !) Yours BRIAN
February 10th, 2018 10:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ another perfect blend of Poem \'n Pic ~ Love both. ! \"Every day I wake ~ I know it is going to be a good day\" I figure you would have to be retired to be able to say that with confidence ? Roll on 2053 (70 !) Yours BRIAN
February 10th, 2018 10:09
I Awoke Today
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Gold. I awoke to rather angry red sky - Red sky in morning, shepherd\'s warning?!
February 10th, 2018 02:37
orchidee said:
Good write and pic Gold. I awoke to rather angry red sky - Red sky in morning, shepherd\'s warning?!
February 10th, 2018 02:37
God and Religion.
ZIGGY said:
Hi O I like this theme a conversation with God, as we all know the problem with religion is faith this is very well thought out piece can see nothing I would change well penned indeed
February 9th, 2018 16:26
ZIGGY said:
Hi O I like this theme a conversation with God, as we all know the problem with religion is faith this is very well thought out piece can see nothing I would change well penned indeed
February 9th, 2018 16:26
God and Religion.
dusk arising said:
It seems there now are many of us who were brought up in the christian tradition who have become dissatisfied with the way that religion has been \'taught\' to us in a strict and archaic \'god fearing\' manner and realised the contradictions between the lesson and the tradition/church. Having the courage to look further is truly eye opening.
These days i think of god as being \'the way\' rather than a deity. I am a spiritual person and hold those christian ethics i grew up with to be wholesome but cannot accept \'holier than thou\' attitudes from any fundamentalist regardless of their \'faith\'.
It seems that whatever god is, \'he/she/it\' has given us the ability to love and living a loving life (thats love in its broadest sense i.e. not just romantic love) surely must be the key to living a life close to \'god\' whatever that may be.
Very thought provoking writing sir!
February 9th, 2018 14:06
dusk arising said:
It seems there now are many of us who were brought up in the christian tradition who have become dissatisfied with the way that religion has been \'taught\' to us in a strict and archaic \'god fearing\' manner and realised the contradictions between the lesson and the tradition/church. Having the courage to look further is truly eye opening.
These days i think of god as being \'the way\' rather than a deity. I am a spiritual person and hold those christian ethics i grew up with to be wholesome but cannot accept \'holier than thou\' attitudes from any fundamentalist regardless of their \'faith\'.
It seems that whatever god is, \'he/she/it\' has given us the ability to love and living a loving life (thats love in its broadest sense i.e. not just romantic love) surely must be the key to living a life close to \'god\' whatever that may be.
Very thought provoking writing sir!
February 9th, 2018 14:06
God and Religion.
FineB said:
Hi Goldfinch!
A powerful, evocative poem on religion. Thank you!
God is good all the time, mankind can be disruptive often dishonouring him.
Keep writing
FineB
February 9th, 2018 03:58
FineB said:
Hi Goldfinch!
A powerful, evocative poem on religion. Thank you!
God is good all the time, mankind can be disruptive often dishonouring him.
Keep writing
FineB
February 9th, 2018 03:58
God and Religion.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I\'m rather fundamental. There can be many avenues, though I don\'t see everyone as worshipping the same God.
February 9th, 2018 03:54
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I\'m rather fundamental. There can be many avenues, though I don\'t see everyone as worshipping the same God.
February 9th, 2018 03:54
My World of Age.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Ohh, but we\'re both millions of years old! Not evening yet. Only about 5 minutes past midnight of a new day! heehee.
Know what you mean though! Arghhh a birthday soon for me. And I\'m dreading KP\'s Valentine!
February 8th, 2018 09:11
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. Ohh, but we\'re both millions of years old! Not evening yet. Only about 5 minutes past midnight of a new day! heehee.
Know what you mean though! Arghhh a birthday soon for me. And I\'m dreading KP\'s Valentine!
February 8th, 2018 09:11
My World of Age.
Christina8 said:
Great write GF! Glad to hear all is well with you. Thanks for sharing!
February 8th, 2018 07:52
Christina8 said:
Great write GF! Glad to hear all is well with you. Thanks for sharing!
February 8th, 2018 07:52
My World of Age.
Laura🌻 said:
A fine write, Gold!
Enjoyed the song!
Let the music play
to soothe our soul!
~Laura~
February 8th, 2018 05:22
Laura🌻 said:
A fine write, Gold!
Enjoyed the song!
Let the music play
to soothe our soul!
~Laura~
February 8th, 2018 05:22
My World of Age.
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Andy, there is a season for all things. Great poem, and great song.
February 8th, 2018 05:22
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Andy, there is a season for all things. Great poem, and great song.
February 8th, 2018 05:22
My World of Age.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing ANDY ~ Love the song and love the BYRDS ! It reminds us that the cycle of life is inevitable for all of us from the Cradle to the Grave ~ I hope to see 2083 (100) but I might be called home to Glory today ! We have to cherish every hour of every day ~ AMEN ~ Yours JOHN !
February 8th, 2018 04:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing ANDY ~ Love the song and love the BYRDS ! It reminds us that the cycle of life is inevitable for all of us from the Cradle to the Grave ~ I hope to see 2083 (100) but I might be called home to Glory today ! We have to cherish every hour of every day ~ AMEN ~ Yours JOHN !
February 8th, 2018 04:58
Growing Love.
w c said:
Thanks Goldfinch! I admire your Love for your life mate.
February 7th, 2018 17:28
w c said:
Thanks Goldfinch! I admire your Love for your life mate.
February 7th, 2018 17:28
Growing Love.
myself and me said:
It is so beautiful to see the love growing deeper and stronger. Lovely.
February 7th, 2018 08:39
myself and me said:
It is so beautiful to see the love growing deeper and stronger. Lovely.
February 7th, 2018 08:39
Growing Love.
Lorna said:
People always talk about \"living in the moment\" but if you don\'t have the past, what is the present? And you are able to see the past when you look at your wife and how she would love you for that!
February 7th, 2018 07:51
Lorna said:
People always talk about \"living in the moment\" but if you don\'t have the past, what is the present? And you are able to see the past when you look at your wife and how she would love you for that!
February 7th, 2018 07:51
Growing Love.
Laura🌻 said:
Gold,
This write is so beautiful! It’s pure love personified! My first read of the day! It brought tears to my eyes!
I look at my mom and see how she misses the man she took care of and loved!
A love such as yours for your lifetime partner is to be admired and praised every single moment of the day! YOU ARE GOLD!!! Keep playing that Johnny Mathis song! All the best !
~Laura~
February 7th, 2018 06:23
Laura🌻 said:
Gold,
This write is so beautiful! It’s pure love personified! My first read of the day! It brought tears to my eyes!
I look at my mom and see how she misses the man she took care of and loved!
A love such as yours for your lifetime partner is to be admired and praised every single moment of the day! YOU ARE GOLD!!! Keep playing that Johnny Mathis song! All the best !
~Laura~
February 7th, 2018 06:23
Growing Love.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THIS MADE ME CRY ANDY ~ I admire the strength of your love for your wife and the fact that you share that it grows every day ! I see that in some of our OLDER CHURCH members just how much they LOVE (that is the virtue !) and Care for their \"Life Partner\" to the very end and beyond ~ I pray that I will be the same ! When a Friend of mine had a stroke ~ His wife divorced HIM so there is the other side as well ! Love Johnny Mathis ~ Love the SONG ~ God\'s richest Blessing to you both ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
February 7th, 2018 04:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THIS MADE ME CRY ANDY ~ I admire the strength of your love for your wife and the fact that you share that it grows every day ! I see that in some of our OLDER CHURCH members just how much they LOVE (that is the virtue !) and Care for their \"Life Partner\" to the very end and beyond ~ I pray that I will be the same ! When a Friend of mine had a stroke ~ His wife divorced HIM so there is the other side as well ! Love Johnny Mathis ~ Love the SONG ~ God\'s richest Blessing to you both ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
February 7th, 2018 04:34
Growing Love.
dusk arising said:
This read to me like a preface for a book about how love matures and teaches us. A book i\'d love to read.
February 7th, 2018 03:39
dusk arising said:
This read to me like a preface for a book about how love matures and teaches us. A book i\'d love to read.
February 7th, 2018 03:39
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