Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Better World.
Michael Edwards said:

I did a watercolour workshop today - quite demanding - and in the car on the way home put on Einaudi - so relaxing it took me to another world - (had to reset the sat nav - only joking) so yes I know exactly what your poem is saying so well.

February 1st, 2018 12:38

Better World.
Fay Slimm. said:

A perfect description of what music can do when listened to Goldi - - I have had that feeling when listening to sax or clarinet revealing the true lure of jazz.

February 1st, 2018 09:28

Better World.
Lorna said:

Thanks for the wonderful \"wakeup\" music this morning Goldfinch....

February 1st, 2018 07:41

Better World.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. No trace of me there singing to that jazz? That would have ruined everything! lol.

February 1st, 2018 02:45

My Artist.
dusk arising said:

This reads like you were a dry sponge soaking up the beauty of the image you beheld. Life\'s like that sometimes we are spellbound by the contrast such finery has to the everyday - recharges our batteries

January 31st, 2018 18:51

My Artist.
Fay Slimm. said:

The Pre-Raphaelytes were the best of the finest for clarity and detail and I too just love W.Holman Hunt - - so pleased you enjoyed the your time with some of his paintings dear friend.

January 31st, 2018 05:17

My Artist.
Michael Edwards said:

I also love the PR groups work and this stunning piece is a great example. Strangely imho it breaks a number of compositional rules the main one being the figures on the right and the figure in the distance all lead the eye out of the painting instead of into it towards the focal interest thus splitting the picture in two and yet it doesn\'t seem to matter - it still works as a whole. I\'ve not been to the Ashmolean and yet I went to Ashmole School in North London - I must make the effort to go there. Next week I will be visiting the Tate Gallery to view the impressionist exhibition - something I\'m looking forward to . All this and I\'m forgetting to comment on your superb poem - well written Andy.

January 31st, 2018 03:11

My Artist.
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Gold. Yes, I \'ve been there a couple of times. Lovely place.
There\'s St Mary\'s Church there too - a scary tower to climb if you get vertigo - I do! A couple of other towers there too.

January 31st, 2018 03:01

Music In My Soul.
FredPeyer said:

Great, great poem, Goldie! I don\'t listen to the same kind of music, but my music too does the same thing for me!

January 31st, 2018 01:38

Music In My Soul.
dusk arising said:

I couldn\'t imagine living without music. If its not playing then im making some sort of music noise myself.

January 30th, 2018 15:52

Music In My Soul.
Michael Edwards said:

You\'ve encouraged me to listen to more of his works - fine work Andy

January 30th, 2018 12:50

Music In My Soul.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 30th, 2018 09:52

Music In My Soul.
TrystanBehm said:

I really like this - I couldn\'t exist without music, or at least not exist that way I want to. Your poem reminded me of the below quote. Great write!

Music is a moral law. It gives soul to the universe, wings to the mind, flight to the imagination, and charm and gaiety to life and to everything - Plato

January 30th, 2018 08:43

Music In My Soul.
Lorna said:

Thanks for this Goldfinch! I LOVE the music - you have introduced me to some I didn\'t know. I\'ll go find his \"stuff\"!

January 30th, 2018 04:16

Music In My Soul.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. What can be annoying is a tune in our mind that we don\'t want. Some insane ditty or jangle - or hearing me sing! heehee.

January 30th, 2018 03:23

Path of Love.
Aislinn Wilson said:

Interesting conclusion. Very revealing

January 29th, 2018 14:07

Path of Love.
dusk arising said:

Lovely words.

January 29th, 2018 09:25

Path of Love.
Christina8 said:

A wonderful write GF! I am lucky to have that long path in life that is \"paved with love\". Thanks for sharing that beautiful line with us!

January 29th, 2018 07:31

Path of Love.
Michael Edwards said:

There is always sunlight at the end of a journey if only we look for it. good write Andy.

January 29th, 2018 06:51

Path of Love.
FredPeyer said:

I live in the States, we don\'t walk, we drive, so the longest drive will lead us into sunlight, most likely the sunset at the Pacific coast in California!
Love your poem, Goldie!

January 29th, 2018 04:44

Path of Love.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. May it be so for your \'long paths\' in life.

January 29th, 2018 03:01

Help Me Lord.
FredPeyer said:

I said it before, Goldie, I admire you. Your love for her shines through every day, and your faith does and will help you. But, you are only human, and there are days when even the strongest man needs to rest, needs to recharge the batteries. There are days when even the strongest believer has doubts and questions.


January 28th, 2018 23:20

Help Me Lord.
Accidental Poet said:

God bless you Andy for your devotion to your wife and faith. Alzheimer\'s disease is a sad and tragic thing to have, and I believe its not God\'s intention for anyone to be affected by its stealing of memory and personality. Its as many other things in our world that we have no reasons why they are there, but must endure. God\'s gift to your wife is you Andy. He knew you would give her the best possible care available. Give to her your best before sending her back to him. From your loving arms to God\'s loving arms.

January 28th, 2018 08:05

Help Me Lord.
Michael Edwards said:

Much of what was about to say has been written above - suffice it to say that this is written from the heart of a caring loving man - my heart goes out to you Andy.

January 28th, 2018 07:51

Help Me Lord.
Fay Slimm. said:

So very moving this honest appeal for help dear friend - - wishing you rest and peace while your wife is being cared for elsewhere. Life can be such a trial at times. A powerful write.

January 28th, 2018 06:46

Help Me Lord.
dusk arising said:

My heart goes out to you my friend. I think you show us here the torture youre enduring.
Hold that faith firmly in your heart. None of us know what awaits us ahead but i know i wouldnt want to be without my firm belief.
Make use of this respite time, you are still a warm sentient being, do things which bring some joy.
It feels odd to say tis goes into my favourites but i\'m so moved by your words that it must go there.

January 28th, 2018 06:10

Help Me Lord.
Caring dove said:

aaw bless you and i am so sorry for your wife....i am not sure if it is punishment , i guess bad things happen in life but i can understand why you say this , it is very unfair , this illness she has and of course it affects you , so sorry , its not fair at all . why do so many unfair things happen to people? i honestly do not know , but i can say i have had the same type of questions about my own life with all of my hurt which i have had to endure, it also makes me feel like i am being punished, for what i do not know. and although i am not a huge believer in god, my opinion is... bad things happen to people in life and god does not control what does and does not happen , its just life, its cruel and bad things happen . i am sorry for you and your wifes pain

January 28th, 2018 05:00

Help Me Lord.
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Gold. It\'s easy to give \'pat\' answers, if we have any. We may only then appear \'super-spiritual\'.
I don\'t know what I would have done, e.g. in Peter\'s shoes. Probably run away with him and the other disciples at Jesus\' trial. In that case, Jesus knew they would run away.
Hope you find some true Christian support. I admit I play \'going to church\' a bit, and may not get too involved there. Then I feel bad if I genuinely need to ask for help - but I should not feel bad really.

January 28th, 2018 03:41

Look at the Stars.
FredPeyer said:

Really like this poem, Goldie! We do need to \'look at the stars\', or see only the good!

January 27th, 2018 21:30

Look at the Stars.
Fay Slimm. said:

Beautiful thoughts and comforting words.

January 27th, 2018 15:52



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