Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Barge Life.
Michael Edwards said:
Wish I was there today instead of painting garden furniture - fine write Andy
July 22nd, 2018 02:48
Michael Edwards said:
Wish I was there today instead of painting garden furniture - fine write Andy
July 22nd, 2018 02:48
Barge Life.
Poetic Dan said:
What a great first Sunday morning read and listen, I\'m now ready for todays mission going no faster than you\'ve mentioned.
Take it eeeasy
July 22nd, 2018 02:39
Poetic Dan said:
What a great first Sunday morning read and listen, I\'m now ready for todays mission going no faster than you\'ve mentioned.
Take it eeeasy
July 22nd, 2018 02:39
Barge Life.
dusk arising said:
idyllic. I\'m envious of my ex who\'s managed to live on a narrowboat for some years now and in some luxury too.
Your writing encourages me to romance the idea again.
July 22nd, 2018 02:30
dusk arising said:
idyllic. I\'m envious of my ex who\'s managed to live on a narrowboat for some years now and in some luxury too.
Your writing encourages me to romance the idea again.
July 22nd, 2018 02:30
Barge Life.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Did our horses go more than 4mph in 1066?
July 22nd, 2018 01:47
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Did our horses go more than 4mph in 1066?
July 22nd, 2018 01:47
The Car of My Dreams.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
That was a fantastic video!
I enjoyed your dream sequence!
If I win the lottery, those “wheels” will be yours...
along with someone else who wants to own some special “wheels”!
~Laura~
July 21st, 2018 14:19
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
That was a fantastic video!
I enjoyed your dream sequence!
If I win the lottery, those “wheels” will be yours...
along with someone else who wants to own some special “wheels”!
~Laura~
July 21st, 2018 14:19
The Car of My Dreams.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Yes indeed ANDY ~ Cars ! I have a Brother who is a car freak ~ he gets one with his Job and usually manages to wangle a BMW. I\'m on the rota for ferrying elderly Ladies to and from Church so I have an Austin Meriva with high seats ! I\'ve never been interested in fast cars ! ANGELA would like a MERCEDES when we\'re married ! Loved the VIDEO but I am a PACIFIST and I think Warfare became inhuman when NOBEL (He didn\'t get a Peace Prize !) invented GUNPOWDER ! I have written to Theresa and suggested we scrap TRIDENT and put the NHS on a secure Financial Footing ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
July 21st, 2018 14:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Yes indeed ANDY ~ Cars ! I have a Brother who is a car freak ~ he gets one with his Job and usually manages to wangle a BMW. I\'m on the rota for ferrying elderly Ladies to and from Church so I have an Austin Meriva with high seats ! I\'ve never been interested in fast cars ! ANGELA would like a MERCEDES when we\'re married ! Loved the VIDEO but I am a PACIFIST and I think Warfare became inhuman when NOBEL (He didn\'t get a Peace Prize !) invented GUNPOWDER ! I have written to Theresa and suggested we scrap TRIDENT and put the NHS on a secure Financial Footing ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
July 21st, 2018 14:00
The Car of My Dreams.
dusk arising said:
How could you be so unfaithful???? That lovely Anglia 105E sat in your driveway has served you and yours so well since 1968. Never let you down, always willing to do the Morrisons run or that stolen weekend at Weston. Never been too greedy at the fuel pumps... and now, look at you making a fool of yourself over some sprightly young thing.... really, a man of your age.... you should be ashamed..... where are the keys i want to take her for a spin....
July 21st, 2018 08:50
dusk arising said:
How could you be so unfaithful???? That lovely Anglia 105E sat in your driveway has served you and yours so well since 1968. Never let you down, always willing to do the Morrisons run or that stolen weekend at Weston. Never been too greedy at the fuel pumps... and now, look at you making a fool of yourself over some sprightly young thing.... really, a man of your age.... you should be ashamed..... where are the keys i want to take her for a spin....
July 21st, 2018 08:50
The Car of My Dreams.
Heartwriter said:
Hope your dreams come true! I just want mine to keep running. Lol
July 21st, 2018 04:33
Heartwriter said:
Hope your dreams come true! I just want mine to keep running. Lol
July 21st, 2018 04:33
The Car of My Dreams.
Poetic Dan said:
If it helps I can really see you in it
So in my world your wheels are spinning
Just do me a favour and keep dreaming
Thanks for sharing
July 21st, 2018 04:22
Poetic Dan said:
If it helps I can really see you in it
So in my world your wheels are spinning
Just do me a favour and keep dreaming
Thanks for sharing
July 21st, 2018 04:22
The Car of My Dreams.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Did they have any in 1066?
July 21st, 2018 01:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Did they have any in 1066?
July 21st, 2018 01:21
Threshold of Your Mind.
poetboy123 said:
Wow this was an incredibly thought provoking piece, a teacher in occupation does not always translate to the true meaning; not in the way you\'ve represented it here, brilliant write Gold!
July 20th, 2018 17:08
poetboy123 said:
Wow this was an incredibly thought provoking piece, a teacher in occupation does not always translate to the true meaning; not in the way you\'ve represented it here, brilliant write Gold!
July 20th, 2018 17:08
Threshold of Your Mind.
dusk arising said:
We are all teachers and students too. I\'m sure you\'ll agree we never stop learning. The teaching done at school is the easy stuff, regimented into a curriculum. The teaching done away from school is the important stuff in living.
Its a hit and miss game how we learn and what lessons we actually do learn in that way. But it never stops and daily we are given the opportunity to re-learn and change some aspect of our outlook upon this existence.
July 20th, 2018 04:33
dusk arising said:
We are all teachers and students too. I\'m sure you\'ll agree we never stop learning. The teaching done at school is the easy stuff, regimented into a curriculum. The teaching done away from school is the important stuff in living.
Its a hit and miss game how we learn and what lessons we actually do learn in that way. But it never stops and daily we are given the opportunity to re-learn and change some aspect of our outlook upon this existence.
July 20th, 2018 04:33
Threshold of Your Mind.
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Yes indeed their are..we, As poets are some of those teachers
July 20th, 2018 03:13
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Yes indeed their are..we, As poets are some of those teachers
July 20th, 2018 03:13
Threshold of Your Mind.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ BACH a perfect start to FRIDAY ~ no work tomorrow and the end of Term is in sight ~ AMEN !
Average TEACHERS tell us to open our BOOKS ~ Great TEACHERS tell us to open our MIND ~ Thanks for caring & sharing. Please check MADE IN MICHIGAN ~ Yours B & A !
July 20th, 2018 03:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ BACH a perfect start to FRIDAY ~ no work tomorrow and the end of Term is in sight ~ AMEN !
Average TEACHERS tell us to open our BOOKS ~ Great TEACHERS tell us to open our MIND ~ Thanks for caring & sharing. Please check MADE IN MICHIGAN ~ Yours B & A !
July 20th, 2018 03:02
Threshold of Your Mind.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I heard a teaching method, in 3 stages
* I (the teacher) do; you (the pupil) watch.
* You do; I watch
* You do! (without me watching)
July 20th, 2018 01:51
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I heard a teaching method, in 3 stages
* I (the teacher) do; you (the pupil) watch.
* You do; I watch
* You do! (without me watching)
July 20th, 2018 01:51
Nature\'s Canvas of Majesty
lasergraph said:
The grand images that nature gives us are ever changing and we get to take our glimpse at any moment in time.
July 19th, 2018 15:43
lasergraph said:
The grand images that nature gives us are ever changing and we get to take our glimpse at any moment in time.
July 19th, 2018 15:43
Nature\'s Canvas of Majesty
onepauly said:
you are a poet.
you know how to create poetry.
July 19th, 2018 15:28
onepauly said:
you are a poet.
you know how to create poetry.
July 19th, 2018 15:28
Nature\'s Canvas of Majesty
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SKY above is brighter Blue
EARTH beneath is sweeter Green
Something gleams in every Hue
Godless eyes have never seen !
Because I am an Environmental Scientist
I see extra dimensions in Nature
But it is as a Christian that I see it as
The handiwork of my Creator God
That is see its true Beauty ~ Purpose ~ Order & Design !
Thanks for sharing & inspiring ~ Yours B & A
Finlandia is always in my TOP 10 ~ and of course it inspired
that great Hymn \"Be still my Soul ....... !\"
July 19th, 2018 13:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SKY above is brighter Blue
EARTH beneath is sweeter Green
Something gleams in every Hue
Godless eyes have never seen !
Because I am an Environmental Scientist
I see extra dimensions in Nature
But it is as a Christian that I see it as
The handiwork of my Creator God
That is see its true Beauty ~ Purpose ~ Order & Design !
Thanks for sharing & inspiring ~ Yours B & A
Finlandia is always in my TOP 10 ~ and of course it inspired
that great Hymn \"Be still my Soul ....... !\"
July 19th, 2018 13:28
Nature\'s Canvas of Majesty
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Nature and Music...
A perfect combo enhanced with your beautifully penned poem which completes the canvas!
I enjoyed your share very much!
Now I’m ready for my cup of coffee to be enjoyed while listening to a wonderful CD filled with “Poetry In Motion” compliments of the fabulous SYSTEMA SYNTHETICA!
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 07:51
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Nature and Music...
A perfect combo enhanced with your beautifully penned poem which completes the canvas!
I enjoyed your share very much!
Now I’m ready for my cup of coffee to be enjoyed while listening to a wonderful CD filled with “Poetry In Motion” compliments of the fabulous SYSTEMA SYNTHETICA!
~Laura~
July 19th, 2018 07:51
Nature\'s Canvas of Majesty
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve been doing a lot of this lately - fine write Andy.
July 19th, 2018 02:48
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve been doing a lot of this lately - fine write Andy.
July 19th, 2018 02:48
Nature\'s Canvas of Majesty
Heartwriter said:
Great poem Goldie. Nature inspires us in so many ways. It is a topic that is endless.
July 19th, 2018 01:43
Heartwriter said:
Great poem Goldie. Nature inspires us in so many ways. It is a topic that is endless.
July 19th, 2018 01:43
Nature\'s Canvas of Majesty
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I looked up, and a thundery-cloud appeared. It blew over though. Not a drop of rain - unfortunately?
July 19th, 2018 01:43
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. I looked up, and a thundery-cloud appeared. It blew over though. Not a drop of rain - unfortunately?
July 19th, 2018 01:43
Perfection Failed.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ The perfect fusion of JAZZ & CLASSICS ~ Like Yehudi Menhuin & Stephan Grapelli ~ is awesome ! Love the message in the Poem ~ However in many walks of life we do strive for perfection and sometimes get near it ! When GOD designed the plants ~ He built in Biosynthetic Pathways to produce the DEEP RED of a Rose or the scent of JASMINE ! You know that using Radioactive tracers we can now examine these pathways ~ thinking God\'s thoughts after HIM. When I worked on Plant biosynthesis and unravelled the route ~ I felt this was perfection because we were exploring the creative Mind of God ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
July 18th, 2018 16:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks STEVE ~ The perfect fusion of JAZZ & CLASSICS ~ Like Yehudi Menhuin & Stephan Grapelli ~ is awesome ! Love the message in the Poem ~ However in many walks of life we do strive for perfection and sometimes get near it ! When GOD designed the plants ~ He built in Biosynthetic Pathways to produce the DEEP RED of a Rose or the scent of JASMINE ! You know that using Radioactive tracers we can now examine these pathways ~ thinking God\'s thoughts after HIM. When I worked on Plant biosynthesis and unravelled the route ~ I felt this was perfection because we were exploring the creative Mind of God ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
July 18th, 2018 16:34
Perfection Failed.
Heartwriter said:
There is so much wisdom shared in these words! We do often strife for perfection which is impossible to obtain. Thanks for reminding us we are only human. Great write.
July 18th, 2018 06:20
Heartwriter said:
There is so much wisdom shared in these words! We do often strife for perfection which is impossible to obtain. Thanks for reminding us we are only human. Great write.
July 18th, 2018 06:20
Perfection Failed.
dusk arising said:
Firstly, a big BIG thank you for introducing me to the Classical Jazz Quartet. Wonderful to hear a familiar and famous piece played with feeling by obviously excellent muso\'s. I will definately be investigating them further.
Great writing again today conveying a wholesome message.
Satisfaction with ones achievements along a path of improvement - possibly seeking the mytical goal of perfection - will indeed bring happiness. Being aware of and accepting ones own shortcomings is true self knowledge. In recent years a songwriter penned - in words of admiration - \'your perfect imperfections,\' perhaps bringing the subject more easily into focus.
July 18th, 2018 05:53
dusk arising said:
Firstly, a big BIG thank you for introducing me to the Classical Jazz Quartet. Wonderful to hear a familiar and famous piece played with feeling by obviously excellent muso\'s. I will definately be investigating them further.
Great writing again today conveying a wholesome message.
Satisfaction with ones achievements along a path of improvement - possibly seeking the mytical goal of perfection - will indeed bring happiness. Being aware of and accepting ones own shortcomings is true self knowledge. In recent years a songwriter penned - in words of admiration - \'your perfect imperfections,\' perhaps bringing the subject more easily into focus.
July 18th, 2018 05:53
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