Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Stumbling Service.
WL Schuett said:
Love the humor and what a beautiful church looks very old
August 23rd, 2017 14:01
WL Schuett said:
Love the humor and what a beautiful church looks very old
August 23rd, 2017 14:01
Stumbling Service.
malubotelho said:
Some days things just don\'t go right. Stumbled but lifted is still good.
August 23rd, 2017 13:52
malubotelho said:
Some days things just don\'t go right. Stumbled but lifted is still good.
August 23rd, 2017 13:52
Stumbling Service.
orchidee said:
Was it shock, horror, outrage, when the pews were removed?! We\'ve a town church from about the 12th Century. Looks like 1066 (!) on the outside, but modern inside.
August 23rd, 2017 08:32
orchidee said:
Was it shock, horror, outrage, when the pews were removed?! We\'ve a town church from about the 12th Century. Looks like 1066 (!) on the outside, but modern inside.
August 23rd, 2017 08:32
Stumbling Service.
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Goldfinch. No matter how stumbling the service is, as long as it gets the message across, everybody is fine. And you DID get the message across.
August 23rd, 2017 04:09
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Goldfinch. No matter how stumbling the service is, as long as it gets the message across, everybody is fine. And you DID get the message across.
August 23rd, 2017 04:09
Stumbling Service.
dusk arising said:
Evesham, just down the stumbling road from me, give or take a wrong turn or two. Amusing tale nicely put together. \\Enjoyed it.
August 23rd, 2017 02:30
dusk arising said:
Evesham, just down the stumbling road from me, give or take a wrong turn or two. Amusing tale nicely put together. \\Enjoyed it.
August 23rd, 2017 02:30
Stumbling Service.
Michael Edwards said:
I enjoyed this and could visualise the event - which river is it ? looks a great location.
August 23rd, 2017 02:05
Michael Edwards said:
I enjoyed this and could visualise the event - which river is it ? looks a great location.
August 23rd, 2017 02:05
Stumbling Service.
orchidee said:
Doh! good write G/F. It\'s a killer if a verse of a hymn is omitted, and not everyone remembers. \'Omit the starred verses\' as in some hymn-books. Then we\'re all singing from the same sheet, but singing different verses between us!
Also, some \'round\'s that go wrong, can \'murder\' a song. I hate them.
August 23rd, 2017 01:58
orchidee said:
Doh! good write G/F. It\'s a killer if a verse of a hymn is omitted, and not everyone remembers. \'Omit the starred verses\' as in some hymn-books. Then we\'re all singing from the same sheet, but singing different verses between us!
Also, some \'round\'s that go wrong, can \'murder\' a song. I hate them.
August 23rd, 2017 01:58
Insignificance.
dusk arising said:
Makes you wonder surrounded by such beauty. I\'m sure none of us are insignificant though. Lovely writing.
August 23rd, 2017 00:53
dusk arising said:
Makes you wonder surrounded by such beauty. I\'m sure none of us are insignificant though. Lovely writing.
August 23rd, 2017 00:53
Insignificance.
myself and me said:
\"I reach the top of the hill and stop\"
How significant is this.
All the eternal space around you has been there the same all the time, but you climb all the way from the bottom to the top, kept them beneath your feet.
Significant writing.
PS: I have Acrophobia, when I read your poem, I had to sit back and hold my chair arm tight. :)
August 22nd, 2017 20:59
myself and me said:
\"I reach the top of the hill and stop\"
How significant is this.
All the eternal space around you has been there the same all the time, but you climb all the way from the bottom to the top, kept them beneath your feet.
Significant writing.
PS: I have Acrophobia, when I read your poem, I had to sit back and hold my chair arm tight. :)
August 22nd, 2017 20:59
Insignificance.
burning-embers said:
Oh no.... you\'re one of gods chosen sir and blessed with a voice we need to hear along with countless other talents of which we know little or nothing. Of all the wonderous things there are in creation, if we were to start taking things away we would lessen it. My belief is that we are all here to find our path thru thhis existence and into the next. Yes you are significant.
August 22nd, 2017 13:59
burning-embers said:
Oh no.... you\'re one of gods chosen sir and blessed with a voice we need to hear along with countless other talents of which we know little or nothing. Of all the wonderous things there are in creation, if we were to start taking things away we would lessen it. My belief is that we are all here to find our path thru thhis existence and into the next. Yes you are significant.
August 22nd, 2017 13:59
Insignificance.
malubotelho said:
Oh! How I like your writing. So simple and full of truth. It seems to me that you are a wise man full of autonomy. Thanks for sharing.
August 22nd, 2017 13:34
malubotelho said:
Oh! How I like your writing. So simple and full of truth. It seems to me that you are a wise man full of autonomy. Thanks for sharing.
August 22nd, 2017 13:34
Insignificance.
WL Schuett said:
Good to guestion our mortality. such vastness often makes me seem insignificant also ....good poem
August 22nd, 2017 12:55
WL Schuett said:
Good to guestion our mortality. such vastness often makes me seem insignificant also ....good poem
August 22nd, 2017 12:55
Insignificance.
Louis Gibbs said:
Considering that the \"vastness of nature\" and the \"infinite universe\" are mere props on the stage that we, as aspects of Creator, have created upon which to act out our roles ... I\'d say it was the other way around.
A fine, thought provoking poem, Goldie!
August 22nd, 2017 08:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Considering that the \"vastness of nature\" and the \"infinite universe\" are mere props on the stage that we, as aspects of Creator, have created upon which to act out our roles ... I\'d say it was the other way around.
A fine, thought provoking poem, Goldie!
August 22nd, 2017 08:42
Insignificance.
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful music as the words are being read - - - none of us who are gifted with life are insignificant my friend -and this verse is a lovely reminder of that divine blessing.
August 22nd, 2017 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful music as the words are being read - - - none of us who are gifted with life are insignificant my friend -and this verse is a lovely reminder of that divine blessing.
August 22nd, 2017 04:19
Insignificance.
FredPeyer said:
I agree with sue, Kat, and Michael.
While we are totally insignificant when compared to the Universe, we are very significant to the people who love us.
Love your poem!
August 22nd, 2017 04:12
FredPeyer said:
I agree with sue, Kat, and Michael.
While we are totally insignificant when compared to the Universe, we are very significant to the people who love us.
Love your poem!
August 22nd, 2017 04:12
Insignificance.
Accidental Poet said:
I think not Goldfinch, the universe is inspired by you. ; )
August 22nd, 2017 03:59
Accidental Poet said:
I think not Goldfinch, the universe is inspired by you. ; )
August 22nd, 2017 03:59
Insignificance.
Michael Edwards said:
We are all important stitches in life\'s tapestry - the value drops for each one missing - or so the Auctioneers tell me. Good write Andy.
August 22nd, 2017 03:37
Michael Edwards said:
We are all important stitches in life\'s tapestry - the value drops for each one missing - or so the Auctioneers tell me. Good write Andy.
August 22nd, 2017 03:37
Insignificance.
sue.evans said:
Enjoyed reading this. I love walking somewhere that gives you such a view - it dies remind you how big the world is - but if it\'s only you there I get an overwhelming sense of cleanliness and peace. Sorry rambling on! As for being significant we are all that to someone or some place!
August 22nd, 2017 02:58
sue.evans said:
Enjoyed reading this. I love walking somewhere that gives you such a view - it dies remind you how big the world is - but if it\'s only you there I get an overwhelming sense of cleanliness and peace. Sorry rambling on! As for being significant we are all that to someone or some place!
August 22nd, 2017 02:58
Insignificance.
Frank Prem said:
Perspective is a wonderful thing, isn\'t it? Allows you to see what you need to see.
August 22nd, 2017 02:50
Frank Prem said:
Perspective is a wonderful thing, isn\'t it? Allows you to see what you need to see.
August 22nd, 2017 02:50
Insignificance.
orchidee said:
Oohh no - very significant, of great value, can\'t do without you, etc, etc. Now one reason there is eternal space is so there\'s enough room to escape from me singing! You can hear me at least as far as Mars. heehee.
August 22nd, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
Oohh no - very significant, of great value, can\'t do without you, etc, etc. Now one reason there is eternal space is so there\'s enough room to escape from me singing! You can hear me at least as far as Mars. heehee.
August 22nd, 2017 01:55
Panic Over.
FredPeyer said:
Great write Goldfinch, if only all \"problems\" had such easy solutions!
August 21st, 2017 16:14
FredPeyer said:
Great write Goldfinch, if only all \"problems\" had such easy solutions!
August 21st, 2017 16:14
Panic Over.
myself and me said:
The story was unfold so well at the end. A little surprise yet reasonable.
I guess the bird try to broken the glass to read your poem.:)
August 21st, 2017 15:44
myself and me said:
The story was unfold so well at the end. A little surprise yet reasonable.
I guess the bird try to broken the glass to read your poem.:)
August 21st, 2017 15:44
Panic Over.
burning-embers said:
Im thinking this metal bird had slipped from the memory of your good lady as you had mentioned before. How great to see the amusement in this event and bring it before us with your style sir. I love the way you tell us your tails.
August 21st, 2017 11:58
burning-embers said:
Im thinking this metal bird had slipped from the memory of your good lady as you had mentioned before. How great to see the amusement in this event and bring it before us with your style sir. I love the way you tell us your tails.
August 21st, 2017 11:58
Panic Over.
malubotelho said:
Cute and fun. Your picture is stunning. Lovely read. We have a fake eaglet on our garden and I love to see the real eaglets eating together with the pvc one.
August 21st, 2017 09:28
malubotelho said:
Cute and fun. Your picture is stunning. Lovely read. We have a fake eaglet on our garden and I love to see the real eaglets eating together with the pvc one.
August 21st, 2017 09:28
Panic Over.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. It\'s good if we can nurse back an injured bird. Hmm, I thought a cat was attacking a bird, until the cat did not move. it was a statue. doh! (too much sherry, Orchi).
August 21st, 2017 08:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. It\'s good if we can nurse back an injured bird. Hmm, I thought a cat was attacking a bird, until the cat did not move. it was a statue. doh! (too much sherry, Orchi).
August 21st, 2017 08:05
Panic Over.
Louis Gibbs said:
You had me going there, Goldie. Glad it turned out well. Enjoyed it!
August 21st, 2017 07:20
Louis Gibbs said:
You had me going there, Goldie. Glad it turned out well. Enjoyed it!
August 21st, 2017 07:20
Panic Over.
Michael Edwards said:
This gave me a gentle smile touched with a sprinkling of sadness - nice piece Andy.
August 21st, 2017 02:41
Michael Edwards said:
This gave me a gentle smile touched with a sprinkling of sadness - nice piece Andy.
August 21st, 2017 02:41
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