Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
New Times.
myself and me said:
Ha, finally I got the reason that I could not write a beautiful piece like this, because I look the Moon at wrong time, not morning but night.
Beautiful and thoughtful.
August 20th, 2017 22:00
myself and me said:
Ha, finally I got the reason that I could not write a beautiful piece like this, because I look the Moon at wrong time, not morning but night.
Beautiful and thoughtful.
August 20th, 2017 22:00
New Times.
WL Schuett said:
Cool poem ,very optimistic ...we all look for that peace
August 20th, 2017 15:07
WL Schuett said:
Cool poem ,very optimistic ...we all look for that peace
August 20th, 2017 15:07
New Times.
malubotelho said:
This is truly having that poetic feeling and uncontrollable poetic thoughts that takes us from one minute to other to places and sights to make us write. Just awesome.
August 20th, 2017 09:36
malubotelho said:
This is truly having that poetic feeling and uncontrollable poetic thoughts that takes us from one minute to other to places and sights to make us write. Just awesome.
August 20th, 2017 09:36
New Times.
rrodriguez said:
Gf, your dream of peace will transpire in a future realm. Right now let us work together to keep the sliver of peace we enjoy, alas, the world is in a cacophony of divergent calls for hate, fights, wars, etc. But, I like you, am a peacemaker. Moreover, I like your treatment of time. Time doesn\'t wait for us. Carpe diem; you never know what tomorrow will bring, but for today sow what you want tomorrow. Thanks for sharing...
August 20th, 2017 09:30
rrodriguez said:
Gf, your dream of peace will transpire in a future realm. Right now let us work together to keep the sliver of peace we enjoy, alas, the world is in a cacophony of divergent calls for hate, fights, wars, etc. But, I like you, am a peacemaker. Moreover, I like your treatment of time. Time doesn\'t wait for us. Carpe diem; you never know what tomorrow will bring, but for today sow what you want tomorrow. Thanks for sharing...
August 20th, 2017 09:30
New Times.
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome pic/poem combo. I too hope we all get to see your dream come true.
August 20th, 2017 06:47
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome pic/poem combo. I too hope we all get to see your dream come true.
August 20th, 2017 06:47
New Times.
burning-embers said:
Amen, i echo your plea in my recent piece. Once again excellent writing Goldfinch.
August 20th, 2017 02:32
burning-embers said:
Amen, i echo your plea in my recent piece. Once again excellent writing Goldfinch.
August 20th, 2017 02:32
New Times.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful poem - I live for the tomorrow and no looking back - great words.
August 20th, 2017 02:13
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful poem - I live for the tomorrow and no looking back - great words.
August 20th, 2017 02:13
New Times.
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. Wanting the moon to go to a full moon (from crescent to whole), not a new moon (vice versa). Though we could then write about \'new\' times of the new moon. Doh! Sometimes I take analogies too far, and end up in a tangle!
August 20th, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. Wanting the moon to go to a full moon (from crescent to whole), not a new moon (vice versa). Though we could then write about \'new\' times of the new moon. Doh! Sometimes I take analogies too far, and end up in a tangle!
August 20th, 2017 01:52
Struck Down.
burning-embers said:
Oh dear lol he mised the communion wine that day. Nice one
August 19th, 2017 14:48
burning-embers said:
Oh dear lol he mised the communion wine that day. Nice one
August 19th, 2017 14:48
Struck Down.
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m actually laughing pretty hard right now. This is as golden as the Gold in Finch, and speaking of: A round of applause. Well done.
August 19th, 2017 08:47
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m actually laughing pretty hard right now. This is as golden as the Gold in Finch, and speaking of: A round of applause. Well done.
August 19th, 2017 08:47
Struck Down.
Louis Gibbs said:
Much appreciated, this one! Well done bit of humor, Goldie.
August 19th, 2017 07:00
Louis Gibbs said:
Much appreciated, this one! Well done bit of humor, Goldie.
August 19th, 2017 07:00
Struck Down.
Accidental Poet said:
\'Tis a good day to start with a laugh. Great write Goldfinch. ; )
August 19th, 2017 04:08
Accidental Poet said:
\'Tis a good day to start with a laugh. Great write Goldfinch. ; )
August 19th, 2017 04:08
Struck Down.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write G. I thought I heard a variant on this, where the priest was swearing, but I can\'t recall it. Either that, or I swooned and forgot the ending!
August 19th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write G. I thought I heard a variant on this, where the priest was swearing, but I can\'t recall it. Either that, or I swooned and forgot the ending!
August 19th, 2017 01:48
Struck Down.
Michael Edwards said:
More than just a bit of a laugh - it\'s great - starts the day off well.
August 19th, 2017 01:40
Michael Edwards said:
More than just a bit of a laugh - it\'s great - starts the day off well.
August 19th, 2017 01:40
Reaching Nirvana.
myself and me said:
Thank you for the hope and guide. Nirvana still exist and there is a path to it.
To me, here is a place close to Nirvana.
August 18th, 2017 21:26
myself and me said:
Thank you for the hope and guide. Nirvana still exist and there is a path to it.
To me, here is a place close to Nirvana.
August 18th, 2017 21:26
Reaching Nirvana.
WL Schuett said:
I have some peace and some contentment, but nirvana that\'s a long bumpy road I\'m afraid ... nice writing
August 18th, 2017 15:16
WL Schuett said:
I have some peace and some contentment, but nirvana that\'s a long bumpy road I\'m afraid ... nice writing
August 18th, 2017 15:16
Reaching Nirvana.
malubotelho said:
Delightful reading this piece. Long time ago I\'ve begun my path on that road. Little baby steps being taken. I feel much, much better today than 20 years ago.
August 18th, 2017 13:10
malubotelho said:
Delightful reading this piece. Long time ago I\'ve begun my path on that road. Little baby steps being taken. I feel much, much better today than 20 years ago.
August 18th, 2017 13:10
Reaching Nirvana.
Louis Gibbs said:
Wish you had dropped some bread crumbs along the way. Your path is beyond my zip code.
This is a classic, Goldie! Thank you for sharing it.
August 18th, 2017 09:53
Louis Gibbs said:
Wish you had dropped some bread crumbs along the way. Your path is beyond my zip code.
This is a classic, Goldie! Thank you for sharing it.
August 18th, 2017 09:53
Reaching Nirvana.
burning-embers said:
Oh that it were so simple to achieve nirvana. However this tempts the unaware with the road less travelled one hopes. A path we find ourselves walking into freedom and love. Another piece of your excellence sir!
August 18th, 2017 05:43
burning-embers said:
Oh that it were so simple to achieve nirvana. However this tempts the unaware with the road less travelled one hopes. A path we find ourselves walking into freedom and love. Another piece of your excellence sir!
August 18th, 2017 05:43
Reaching Nirvana.
Michael Edwards said:
Can you give me map references please - great write
August 18th, 2017 02:30
Michael Edwards said:
Can you give me map references please - great write
August 18th, 2017 02:30
Reaching Nirvana.
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there Finch. Like the tone, keep it up.
August 18th, 2017 02:07
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there Finch. Like the tone, keep it up.
August 18th, 2017 02:07
Reaching Nirvana.
Fay Slimm. said:
The road to sheer bliss and so beautifully described here Gold with both verse and picture. A delight of a read.
August 18th, 2017 01:57
Fay Slimm. said:
The road to sheer bliss and so beautifully described here Gold with both verse and picture. A delight of a read.
August 18th, 2017 01:57
Reaching Nirvana.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I travelled some paths less - got lost in woods, and over-shot the particular exit where I intended to emerge! Some trees are tilted over like Pisa. It\'s daft, but I hurry past those ones, thinking they are going to fall at any moment.
August 18th, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I travelled some paths less - got lost in woods, and over-shot the particular exit where I intended to emerge! Some trees are tilted over like Pisa. It\'s daft, but I hurry past those ones, thinking they are going to fall at any moment.
August 18th, 2017 01:55
Reaching Nirvana.
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, just had to mark this one as a favorite. If everything on that road is like you describe, you might have reached Nirvana, and I would love it if you could draw me a map!
August 18th, 2017 01:52
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, just had to mark this one as a favorite. If everything on that road is like you describe, you might have reached Nirvana, and I would love it if you could draw me a map!
August 18th, 2017 01:52
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