Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Infinity.
orchidee said:

I\'m careful with the humour about \'brain cells\' on holiday. I wouldn\'t mean it in any offensive way - people with mind problems, etc. But my mind may have always been a blank. No change there then?! heehee.

April 6th, 2017 03:30

Infinity.
Jooles said:

Lovely write 😊

April 6th, 2017 03:07

Infinity.
Michael Edwards said:

I am so touched by this - it just has to go into my favourites - what a fine write - thank you so much for the dedication Goldfinch.

April 6th, 2017 02:43

Infinity.
Fay Slimm. said:

A well expressed journey into the mind\'s unknown and fine tribute to Michael\'s wonderful art-work - your words express the depth which we as souls have available if only we cast doubt aside and enter infinity\'s void. A most compelling read G.F.

April 6th, 2017 02:20

Infinity.
Frank Prem said:

Nice GF. This flowed inward, well.

April 6th, 2017 02:01

Infinity.
orchidee said:

A fine write G. I looked into my mind, and found an infinity..... of nothing! Well, maybe one or two ideas. The rest were on holiday!

April 6th, 2017 02:00

\"Where\'s My Stick?\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks BROTHER for creating humour out of the frailty of increasing age ! Love the concept of the EPITAPH ! \"Here lies Mrs Jick ~ no longer shouting ~ Honey where\'s my stick. She\'s Heaven bound and there no walking sticks or Zimmer frames are found \". We all have a foible and a \"cri de coeur\" Where\'s my Glasses ~ Wallet ~ Keys ~ Handbag ~ False teeth ~ Wig ~ Umbrella etc ! The list is endless ! Thanks for scaring ! BRIAN

April 5th, 2017 12:41

\"Where\'s My Stick?\"
rrodriguez said:

The experiences we share with our loved ones are so unique. That\'s what keeps us together sharing this uniqueness to the grave. Nicely done my friend.


April 5th, 2017 06:36

\"Where\'s My Stick?\"
willyweed said:

she needs a bracelet to attach her to her stick? or GPS devise, love this fun piece. ww

April 5th, 2017 05:49

\"Where\'s My Stick?\"
Michael Edwards said:

I love this simply written but so effective poem with its gentle humour - it sounds a bit like my wife with her \'Have you seen my glasses\'

April 5th, 2017 02:24

\"Where\'s My Stick?\"
orchidee said:

You got that stick? You found it yet?! Good write. heehee.

April 5th, 2017 01:35

Saved By A Robin.
MendedFences27 said:

Oh, nice one. A dream gone astray, or like you said , maybe a rescue, or maybe there are herds of gentle horses. I always await the return of robins to the trees, I then know spring has arrived and I can put away the shovel, and bring out the garden tools. You got me thinking spring thoughts. Thank you. - Phil A.

April 4th, 2017 20:50

Lost in a Book.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Diamond.

April 4th, 2017 16:58

Saved By A Robin.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Christina. It is a great way to wake up.

April 4th, 2017 16:56

Saved By A Robin.
Christina8 said:

What a wonderful write. And a nice way to wake up and start your day--with a chorus of a robins song to listen to.

April 4th, 2017 13:07

Saved By A Robin.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Phil much appreciated.

April 4th, 2017 12:36

Saved By A Robin.
Philip said:

The robin\'s song is a glorious sound I am glad it started your day so positively and you were able to portray it so well. Phil.G

April 4th, 2017 11:52

Saved By A Robin.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Brian. Did not know that about a robin.

April 4th, 2017 08:38

Saved By A Robin.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks BROTHER ~ Horses in dreams represent energy and the image can be positive or negative ! If they are charging at you ~ they can indicate \"trouble ahead\". Robins are symbols of faithfulness and calm ~ it indicates that someone (or an Angel) is watching over you ! Thanks for sharing ~ so graphically ! BRIAN

April 4th, 2017 08:27

Saved By A Robin.
willyweed said:

wild horses? was you listening to the stones before bed? the birds wake me every morning, unless the dog starts barking first? enjoyed this nightmare goldfinch

April 4th, 2017 07:17

Saved By A Robin.
orchidee said:

Doh! A guy was less sympathetic. He said \'I will ******** kill that dawn chorus, keep waking me up!\' oohh.

April 4th, 2017 02:42

Saved By A Robin.
orchidee said:

Good write. Why were those horses charging at you? I can\'t get all psychological about it this time of the morning. I shall only get another headache for thinking too much!

April 4th, 2017 02:41

Saved By A Robin.
Michael Edwards said:

Also one of the most promiscuous of birds so they\'ve got a lot to sing about. Good read and well written.

April 4th, 2017 01:54

Saved By A Robin.
WriteBeLight said:

They sing at night, sometimes, here in the New England Summer time. Glad he woke you from the bad dream to a beautiful song and new day Goldfinch!

April 4th, 2017 01:41

Banquet Places.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

April 3rd, 2017 08:52

Banquet Places.
P.H.Rose said:

Very very good GF60
Your handle sounds
Like a sports car...
That flowed just
Like one... well done !!

April 3rd, 2017 07:39

Banquet Places.
willyweed said:

true is true I like this one very much!

April 3rd, 2017 06:29

Banquet Places.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Garry.

April 3rd, 2017 03:41

Banquet Places.
Garry said:

Hm. Food for thought, in many ways.

April 3rd, 2017 02:56

Banquet Places.
orchidee said:

Good write. Yes - seems so.

April 3rd, 2017 02:26



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