Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



\"Where Are My Glasses?\"
lasergraph said:

Damn, I can identify with this so much. I have been on some hunts very much like this. I have looked for keys I couldn\'t find because they were IN MY HAND.

January 19th, 2018 15:49

Climbing to Eternity.
Caring dove said:

walking to the top of a hill , you are both walking the way you want to in the same direction so it does not matter who reaches the top first .. because you will both reach the same place in the end .. lovely piece of writing .. i like how you used the idea of walking to the top of a hill, to describe reaching a nice destination , very nice indeed

January 19th, 2018 14:30

\"Where Are My Glasses?\"
Caring dove said:

i find this so utterly annoyng , when i am trying to find something and no matter how much i look i can\'t! maybe just maybe we are so desperate to find what it is we are searching for that in our hurried and annoyed mind , we end up not looking properly , that or not doing a good enough search lol !

January 19th, 2018 14:26

\"Where Are My Glasses?\"
Caring dove said:

brilliant write ! i love how you have wrote such a light hearted read based on experience, enjoyed reading this .. you have a ghost lol scary the ghost sounds mischevious lol

January 19th, 2018 14:23

\"Where Are My Glasses?\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANDY ~ Lost Glasses the scourge of Society ! I\'m thankful I\'m still too young to need them ! Although I fail to understand why the print in the TIMES gets smaller each year ! Also why GIRLS on the opposite Train Platform look beautifully blurred ! Yours BRIAN ~ Should I go to SPECSAVERS ?

January 19th, 2018 12:33

\"Where Are My Glasses?\"
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 19th, 2018 09:33

\"Where Are My Glasses?\"
FredPeyer said:

Goldie, you really hit a nerve here. Do you know how many times I had to call my wife\'s cell phone so we would hear it and hopefully find it? Won\'t even mention glasses.

January 19th, 2018 05:09

The Key of Life.
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, tears for breakfast. Beautifully heart felt my friend, this is the love that keeps us strong and you my friend are a champion. Thanks for putting the bar so high

January 19th, 2018 04:20

\"Where Are My Glasses?\"
Michael Edwards said:

I only have a mobile so we can use it to find my wife\'s when it goes missing. Just a few minutes ago we were searching the freezer for some roasted peppers which my wife prepared a few days ago - out came the drawers and no luck \'they\'re in a freezer bag here somewhere\' she assured me. Anyway we finally found them - not in a freezer bag but in a storage tub !! Yes I can relate to this Andy.

January 19th, 2018 03:38

\"Where Are My Glasses?\"
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write Gold. I did something too. Someone mislaid a wallet. We searched high and low, and revisited local shops to see if it was there, but nothing. it was hiding under a hat all the time!

January 19th, 2018 02:51

Artists.
FredPeyer said:

Your great poem is right on, Goldie!
While the impetus may come from the outside, turning it into a work of art does come from inside!

January 18th, 2018 17:24

The Key of Life.
FredPeyer said:

Goldie, I said it before, but here it is again: I admire you, your courage and your strength. But remember, she may be in her own world, but you are taking care of her in this world, and I for one am convinced that the love you give her does travel through to her world. She may not be able to acknowledge it, but believe me, it is there!

January 18th, 2018 16:48

The Key of Life.
Christina8 said:

This is so sad but so well expressed! I can tell how devoted you are to her. I will say a prayer for you Goldie!

January 18th, 2018 13:58

The Key of Life.
lasergraph said:

It may well be the saddest of all things that can happen, while we watch the one we love slip ever so deeply into their unknown world. I send my prayers that she will be able to give still more mental visits in the future.

January 18th, 2018 12:36

The Key of Life.
Aislinn Wilson said:

Well writ

January 18th, 2018 10:24

The Key of Life.
Louis Gibbs said:

As difficult as your experience is, be comforted in knowing that her new world is no doubt far less troubled than yours, Goldie. Beautiful, poignant write, my friend.

January 18th, 2018 09:43

The Key of Life.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 18th, 2018 09:40

The Key of Life.
WL Schuett said:

Great write , this is a personal issue for me as well though with my Mother not my spouse. I wish you strength and some days of happiness as your struggles continue .

January 18th, 2018 08:59

The Key of Life.
Michael Edwards said:

Lovely words Andy

January 18th, 2018 05:27

The Key of Life.
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Gold,
This IS so so sad! My heart is breaking for you and Joyce! I shall listen to Johnny Mathis’ song and think of your dear wife and you! Sincere good thoughts and prayers I send your way while I’m listening to Johnny Mathis’ rendition of UNFORGETTABLE!

With love...
~Laura~

January 18th, 2018 03:39

The Key of Life.
orchidee said:

A poignant write Gold. Thinking of you and Joyce.

January 18th, 2018 03:03

Artists.
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 17th, 2018 11:40

Artists.
Laura🌻 said:

Totally agree, Goldie! Artists’ creations amaze me! I will never forget the first time I saw Michelangelo’s PIETÀ! I was only ten years old...many moons ago...and still remember that feeling! An awesome write! Enjoyed it very much!

~Laura~

January 17th, 2018 09:35

Artists.
Louis Gibbs said:

Creativity comes from within, indeed, but usually assisted by a muse, who deserves some of the credit to my thinking. Excellent write, Goldie!

January 17th, 2018 09:12

Artists.
Aislinn Wilson said:

Wonderful write!

January 17th, 2018 09:10

Artists.
Michael Edwards said:

Spot on Andy - the most difficult paintings I do are the commissions where in order to remain faithful to the subject I have to limit artistic licence which in turn affects artistic interpretation.

January 17th, 2018 03:36

Artists.
orchidee said:

A true write Gold. Sometimes it distracts me if I think of writing for others, to please them, as it were.
It\'s best where I am original. I mean we ought not to write, paint, sculpt, etc, to try to please others, if that means we restrict ourselves.
Ohh, got headache now. All that thinking this time of morning!
l

January 17th, 2018 03:14

Am I There Yet?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing ANDY ~ I do miss our regulars ! A great TRIBUTE to the NHS ~ I have nothing but praise for them. I pray for people to be healed and GOD often reminds me \"Brian I am hand in glove with the NHS ~ in the UK ~ and the Medical Profession Worldwide !\" ~ AMEN Trust you will soon be 100% OK ~ BRIAN

January 16th, 2018 15:26

Am I There Yet?
Samreen Chowdhury said:

Wow this was quite powerful, thanks for sharing!

January 16th, 2018 14:44

Am I There Yet?
Christina8 said:

So glad to see that you are well and are still with us. Hopefully for a very very long time!! Please take care of yourself! :-)

January 16th, 2018 13:24



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