Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Struck Down.
Louis Gibbs said:
Much appreciated, this one! Well done bit of humor, Goldie.
August 19th, 2017 07:00
Louis Gibbs said:
Much appreciated, this one! Well done bit of humor, Goldie.
August 19th, 2017 07:00
Struck Down.
Accidental Poet said:
\'Tis a good day to start with a laugh. Great write Goldfinch. ; )
August 19th, 2017 04:08
Accidental Poet said:
\'Tis a good day to start with a laugh. Great write Goldfinch. ; )
August 19th, 2017 04:08
Struck Down.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write G. I thought I heard a variant on this, where the priest was swearing, but I can\'t recall it. Either that, or I swooned and forgot the ending!
August 19th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write G. I thought I heard a variant on this, where the priest was swearing, but I can\'t recall it. Either that, or I swooned and forgot the ending!
August 19th, 2017 01:48
Struck Down.
Michael Edwards said:
More than just a bit of a laugh - it\'s great - starts the day off well.
August 19th, 2017 01:40
Michael Edwards said:
More than just a bit of a laugh - it\'s great - starts the day off well.
August 19th, 2017 01:40
Reaching Nirvana.
myself and me said:
Thank you for the hope and guide. Nirvana still exist and there is a path to it.
To me, here is a place close to Nirvana.
August 18th, 2017 21:26
myself and me said:
Thank you for the hope and guide. Nirvana still exist and there is a path to it.
To me, here is a place close to Nirvana.
August 18th, 2017 21:26
Reaching Nirvana.
WL Schuett said:
I have some peace and some contentment, but nirvana that\'s a long bumpy road I\'m afraid ... nice writing
August 18th, 2017 15:16
WL Schuett said:
I have some peace and some contentment, but nirvana that\'s a long bumpy road I\'m afraid ... nice writing
August 18th, 2017 15:16
Reaching Nirvana.
malubotelho said:
Delightful reading this piece. Long time ago I\'ve begun my path on that road. Little baby steps being taken. I feel much, much better today than 20 years ago.
August 18th, 2017 13:10
malubotelho said:
Delightful reading this piece. Long time ago I\'ve begun my path on that road. Little baby steps being taken. I feel much, much better today than 20 years ago.
August 18th, 2017 13:10
Reaching Nirvana.
Louis Gibbs said:
Wish you had dropped some bread crumbs along the way. Your path is beyond my zip code.
This is a classic, Goldie! Thank you for sharing it.
August 18th, 2017 09:53
Louis Gibbs said:
Wish you had dropped some bread crumbs along the way. Your path is beyond my zip code.
This is a classic, Goldie! Thank you for sharing it.
August 18th, 2017 09:53
Reaching Nirvana.
burning-embers said:
Oh that it were so simple to achieve nirvana. However this tempts the unaware with the road less travelled one hopes. A path we find ourselves walking into freedom and love. Another piece of your excellence sir!
August 18th, 2017 05:43
burning-embers said:
Oh that it were so simple to achieve nirvana. However this tempts the unaware with the road less travelled one hopes. A path we find ourselves walking into freedom and love. Another piece of your excellence sir!
August 18th, 2017 05:43
Reaching Nirvana.
Michael Edwards said:
Can you give me map references please - great write
August 18th, 2017 02:30
Michael Edwards said:
Can you give me map references please - great write
August 18th, 2017 02:30
Reaching Nirvana.
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there Finch. Like the tone, keep it up.
August 18th, 2017 02:07
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there Finch. Like the tone, keep it up.
August 18th, 2017 02:07
Reaching Nirvana.
Fay Slimm. said:
The road to sheer bliss and so beautifully described here Gold with both verse and picture. A delight of a read.
August 18th, 2017 01:57
Fay Slimm. said:
The road to sheer bliss and so beautifully described here Gold with both verse and picture. A delight of a read.
August 18th, 2017 01:57
Reaching Nirvana.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I travelled some paths less - got lost in woods, and over-shot the particular exit where I intended to emerge! Some trees are tilted over like Pisa. It\'s daft, but I hurry past those ones, thinking they are going to fall at any moment.
August 18th, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I travelled some paths less - got lost in woods, and over-shot the particular exit where I intended to emerge! Some trees are tilted over like Pisa. It\'s daft, but I hurry past those ones, thinking they are going to fall at any moment.
August 18th, 2017 01:55
Reaching Nirvana.
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, just had to mark this one as a favorite. If everything on that road is like you describe, you might have reached Nirvana, and I would love it if you could draw me a map!
August 18th, 2017 01:52
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, just had to mark this one as a favorite. If everything on that road is like you describe, you might have reached Nirvana, and I would love it if you could draw me a map!
August 18th, 2017 01:52
Dancing with Shadows.
poetboy123 said:
I\'m glad it came because this dance was music to my ears Gold!
August 17th, 2017 20:50
poetboy123 said:
I\'m glad it came because this dance was music to my ears Gold!
August 17th, 2017 20:50
Dancing with Shadows.
sue.evans said:
I enjoyed this - its strange where our mind takes us when it\'s given freedom to roam!
August 17th, 2017 18:15
sue.evans said:
I enjoyed this - its strange where our mind takes us when it\'s given freedom to roam!
August 17th, 2017 18:15
Dancing with Shadows.
malubotelho said:
Such lovely words. Sweet inspiration speaking to your heart.
August 17th, 2017 11:49
malubotelho said:
Such lovely words. Sweet inspiration speaking to your heart.
August 17th, 2017 11:49
Dancing with Shadows.
orchidee said:
I wrote a poem like this too. It started: \"I lay in a darkened room / Recovering from sherries.....\"Then I did not write any more! Strange that. lol.
August 17th, 2017 08:47
orchidee said:
I wrote a poem like this too. It started: \"I lay in a darkened room / Recovering from sherries.....\"Then I did not write any more! Strange that. lol.
August 17th, 2017 08:47
Dancing with Shadows.
Louis Gibbs said:
As we all dance with the shadow-world we see. Well done, Goldie!
August 17th, 2017 08:23
Louis Gibbs said:
As we all dance with the shadow-world we see. Well done, Goldie!
August 17th, 2017 08:23
Dancing with Shadows.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
VERY APT ANDY ! I have many Friends & Family ~ in your age group ~Lying in darkened rooms ~ Dancing with Nature\'s Shadows ! Every Blessing ~ DOCTOR BRIAN ! Please check my MIDDLEMAN ~ Yours BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 07:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
VERY APT ANDY ! I have many Friends & Family ~ in your age group ~Lying in darkened rooms ~ Dancing with Nature\'s Shadows ! Every Blessing ~ DOCTOR BRIAN ! Please check my MIDDLEMAN ~ Yours BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 07:36
Dancing with Shadows.
private poet said:
Your love of nature and beauty shine through. Well written and a good springboard for my thoughts today.x
August 17th, 2017 04:35
private poet said:
Your love of nature and beauty shine through. Well written and a good springboard for my thoughts today.x
August 17th, 2017 04:35
Dancing with Shadows.
FredPeyer said:
And I dance with your beautiful poem, Goldfinch!
August 17th, 2017 03:25
FredPeyer said:
And I dance with your beautiful poem, Goldfinch!
August 17th, 2017 03:25
Dancing with Shadows.
Michael Edwards said:
It just came and it\'s just great - I do like this Andy.
August 17th, 2017 01:58
Michael Edwards said:
It just came and it\'s just great - I do like this Andy.
August 17th, 2017 01:58
Dancing with Shadows.
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this a lot. The feeling it gives is similar to how it feels outside right now. Good one Finch.
August 17th, 2017 01:07
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this a lot. The feeling it gives is similar to how it feels outside right now. Good one Finch.
August 17th, 2017 01:07
Quiet City.
myself and me said:
listening to the peaceful music, reading your poem, the beautiful moment of my day.
August 16th, 2017 20:11
myself and me said:
listening to the peaceful music, reading your poem, the beautiful moment of my day.
August 16th, 2017 20:11
Quiet City.
Heather T said:
The inspiration certainly bleeds through your words with much beauty!
August 16th, 2017 20:02
Heather T said:
The inspiration certainly bleeds through your words with much beauty!
August 16th, 2017 20:02
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