Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
What is Time?
Seek said:
What a write! Glad I found time to read it; thoroughly enjoyed yours. A refreshing perspective on time. And the coincidence did not escape me. Only yesterday I uploaded my own poem on time with a different take \"Friendly Tyrant\". You may wish to compare notes.
September 15th, 2017 01:42
Seek said:
What a write! Glad I found time to read it; thoroughly enjoyed yours. A refreshing perspective on time. And the coincidence did not escape me. Only yesterday I uploaded my own poem on time with a different take \"Friendly Tyrant\". You may wish to compare notes.
September 15th, 2017 01:42
Endless Love.
malubotelho said:
Very touching write. I\'m happy to know you still love her and taking care of her. I have cases like this on my family but they were not so luck. Sending love for you two. God bless your heart.
September 14th, 2017 23:54
malubotelho said:
Very touching write. I\'m happy to know you still love her and taking care of her. I have cases like this on my family but they were not so luck. Sending love for you two. God bless your heart.
September 14th, 2017 23:54
Endless Love.
poetboy123 said:
This was a beautiful, I\'m speechless, I only look at you with more respect with each poem you write. Simply wondeful.
September 14th, 2017 19:11
poetboy123 said:
This was a beautiful, I\'m speechless, I only look at you with more respect with each poem you write. Simply wondeful.
September 14th, 2017 19:11
What is Time?
dusk arising said:
If i only had time
to learn my five times table
a timely reminder
Once upon a time a gal called Rosemary (who couldn\'t spell) married time.....
nice writing sir
September 14th, 2017 18:24
dusk arising said:
If i only had time
to learn my five times table
a timely reminder
Once upon a time a gal called Rosemary (who couldn\'t spell) married time.....
nice writing sir
September 14th, 2017 18:24
Endless Love.
dusk arising said:
God has shown you what love is my friend. Real unconditional love is what you are telling us here i think. Very moving writing, from your heart, and affects one and all who read your words here. Saved to favourites.
September 14th, 2017 18:15
dusk arising said:
God has shown you what love is my friend. Real unconditional love is what you are telling us here i think. Very moving writing, from your heart, and affects one and all who read your words here. Saved to favourites.
September 14th, 2017 18:15
Endless Love.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANDY ~ Thanks for reminding us of the heartache you bear because of your Dear Wife\'s Condition. It is so so sad My Dad 65 and my Mum 60 are still hanging in mentally but mnobility for my Dad is getting worse. I attended a Church reunion recently an it was sad to see friend of 70+ incapacitated and not even recognizing me As you say at the end of your poignant POEM ~ Love and more Love is the answer ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN Thanks for Clair de Lune a family favorite !
September 14th, 2017 17:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANDY ~ Thanks for reminding us of the heartache you bear because of your Dear Wife\'s Condition. It is so so sad My Dad 65 and my Mum 60 are still hanging in mentally but mnobility for my Dad is getting worse. I attended a Church reunion recently an it was sad to see friend of 70+ incapacitated and not even recognizing me As you say at the end of your poignant POEM ~ Love and more Love is the answer ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN Thanks for Clair de Lune a family favorite !
September 14th, 2017 17:15
Endless Love.
myself and me said:
There are so many diseases far beyond the reach of today\'s medicine, while love is the only hope for all the suffer.
Your love is the best support for your wife.
Very touching poem. Well done.
September 14th, 2017 12:09
myself and me said:
There are so many diseases far beyond the reach of today\'s medicine, while love is the only hope for all the suffer.
Your love is the best support for your wife.
Very touching poem. Well done.
September 14th, 2017 12:09
Endless Love.
Allysnewworld said:
There\'s no real way to quantify poetry but having read this I can say, this is the closest thing to the true heart and beauty that poetry intends on conveying. Honest read with meaning and emotion. I feel it all and I wish you all the best. I hope you find the beauty in the path you will both be walking together.
September 14th, 2017 11:49
Allysnewworld said:
There\'s no real way to quantify poetry but having read this I can say, this is the closest thing to the true heart and beauty that poetry intends on conveying. Honest read with meaning and emotion. I feel it all and I wish you all the best. I hope you find the beauty in the path you will both be walking together.
September 14th, 2017 11:49
Endless Love.
WL Schuett said:
Bless you brother you\'re a good man , keep being strong I know you love her it\'s very evident.... beautiful poem too
September 14th, 2017 07:48
WL Schuett said:
Bless you brother you\'re a good man , keep being strong I know you love her it\'s very evident.... beautiful poem too
September 14th, 2017 07:48
Endless Love.
FredPeyer said:
Reading your incredible poem, Goldfinch, made me think of my dad\'s best friend. For years, after he could not care for her anymore at home, he visited his wife who had Alzheimers, every day, fed her, stayed with her, read to her, even though eventually she did not recognize him anymore. We all have to be prepared to be in the same position one day, and your poem, even though it did bring tears to my eyes, also gave me a lot of hope. It is like a beacon of light in a dark place!
September 14th, 2017 03:36
FredPeyer said:
Reading your incredible poem, Goldfinch, made me think of my dad\'s best friend. For years, after he could not care for her anymore at home, he visited his wife who had Alzheimers, every day, fed her, stayed with her, read to her, even though eventually she did not recognize him anymore. We all have to be prepared to be in the same position one day, and your poem, even though it did bring tears to my eyes, also gave me a lot of hope. It is like a beacon of light in a dark place!
September 14th, 2017 03:36
Endless Love.
orchidee said:
Also, I was struck reading a bit of Revelation lately. It says a time will come with no more mourning, death, crying, or pain. In that time those things are called \'former things\'. Meanwhile they remain, as we all know. Those sort of verses inspire me to some of my most, well, inspirational, poetry. Not that ALL of the present life is as a vale of tears though.
September 14th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
Also, I was struck reading a bit of Revelation lately. It says a time will come with no more mourning, death, crying, or pain. In that time those things are called \'former things\'. Meanwhile they remain, as we all know. Those sort of verses inspire me to some of my most, well, inspirational, poetry. Not that ALL of the present life is as a vale of tears though.
September 14th, 2017 01:51
Endless Love.
orchidee said:
It\'s not the first time a poem of yours triggers something in me - some feeling, and then I shed a tear or two. Even some lesser emotive themes and experiences. Thinking of you both. Love wins through somehow, some way. Anyone can just SAY that, but not the same as living through it.
September 14th, 2017 01:49
orchidee said:
It\'s not the first time a poem of yours triggers something in me - some feeling, and then I shed a tear or two. Even some lesser emotive themes and experiences. Thinking of you both. Love wins through somehow, some way. Anyone can just SAY that, but not the same as living through it.
September 14th, 2017 01:49
Endless Love.
Frank Prem said:
Terrible for you both. I wish you only the best in weathering it.
September 14th, 2017 01:39
Frank Prem said:
Terrible for you both. I wish you only the best in weathering it.
September 14th, 2017 01:39
Endless Love.
Poetic Dan said:
Reading this with sunrise in my eyes
As a tear falls down from your words
I thank you for a humble start to my day.
May the this day pass blissfully for you both.
September 14th, 2017 01:27
Poetic Dan said:
Reading this with sunrise in my eyes
As a tear falls down from your words
I thank you for a humble start to my day.
May the this day pass blissfully for you both.
September 14th, 2017 01:27
Endless Love.
Michael Edwards said:
Reading your poem and the accompanying comments made me well up too. To have your poem \'adopted\' by the healthcare professionals is an accolade so well deserved for a moving and beautiful write.
September 14th, 2017 01:18
Michael Edwards said:
Reading your poem and the accompanying comments made me well up too. To have your poem \'adopted\' by the healthcare professionals is an accolade so well deserved for a moving and beautiful write.
September 14th, 2017 01:18
What is Time?
Simple-Man87 said:
I love \"time is moments.\"
I really enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing.
September 13th, 2017 12:24
Simple-Man87 said:
I love \"time is moments.\"
I really enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing.
September 13th, 2017 12:24
What is Time?
myself and me said:
I got lost in your time, and forgot my time.
Great.
September 13th, 2017 11:38
myself and me said:
I got lost in your time, and forgot my time.
Great.
September 13th, 2017 11:38
What is Time?
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, I think the lines \'Time, that never-ending line of moments\' must be one of the best descriptions of time I ever read. Great poem!
September 13th, 2017 10:30
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, I think the lines \'Time, that never-ending line of moments\' must be one of the best descriptions of time I ever read. Great poem!
September 13th, 2017 10:30
What is Time?
Louis Gibbs said:
So glad you find time to share your poetry, Goldie! Always enjoyable.
September 13th, 2017 09:54
Louis Gibbs said:
So glad you find time to share your poetry, Goldie! Always enjoyable.
September 13th, 2017 09:54
What is Time?
orchidee said:
Cooee, I forgot to fill up the syphon with water. Pssst! Do you hear that pesky whisky-waterer?!
September 13th, 2017 08:29
orchidee said:
Cooee, I forgot to fill up the syphon with water. Pssst! Do you hear that pesky whisky-waterer?!
September 13th, 2017 08:29
What is Time?
Goldfinch60 said:
May there be more for your enjoyment of life. Thank you MD
September 13th, 2017 08:09
Goldfinch60 said:
May there be more for your enjoyment of life. Thank you MD
September 13th, 2017 08:09
What is Time?
Mugsdaddy said:
I am so glad I had time to read just in time to appreciate it in a timely fashion. So thanks for this time, until the next time... Oh I\'m out of time.
Mugsdaddy
September 13th, 2017 07:56
Mugsdaddy said:
I am so glad I had time to read just in time to appreciate it in a timely fashion. So thanks for this time, until the next time... Oh I\'m out of time.
Mugsdaddy
September 13th, 2017 07:56
What is Time?
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t mind a bit of water in my scotch but only water and nothing else - will find time for one before lunch.
September 13th, 2017 04:45
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t mind a bit of water in my scotch but only water and nothing else - will find time for one before lunch.
September 13th, 2017 04:45
What is Time?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for this ANDY ~ Time is endless it has neither beginning nor end ! The beautiful Song and your equally beautiful Poem echo the Words of SOLOMON \"To everything there is a SEASON and TIME to every PURPOSE under Heaven \" Ecclesiastes 3 v 1. TEMPUS FUGIT so CARPE DIEM ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check \"Seasons of Love\" an S & B collaboration ~ Thanks S & B
September 13th, 2017 03:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for this ANDY ~ Time is endless it has neither beginning nor end ! The beautiful Song and your equally beautiful Poem echo the Words of SOLOMON \"To everything there is a SEASON and TIME to every PURPOSE under Heaven \" Ecclesiastes 3 v 1. TEMPUS FUGIT so CARPE DIEM ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check \"Seasons of Love\" an S & B collaboration ~ Thanks S & B
September 13th, 2017 03:10
What is Time?
Frank Prem said:
It is indeed a fine time, every time, GF. Cheers.
September 13th, 2017 02:17
Frank Prem said:
It is indeed a fine time, every time, GF. Cheers.
September 13th, 2017 02:17
What is Time?
orchidee said:
A fine time for this write G/F. Meanwhile - a long as there\'s time for me sherries and porkies, no other time matters! heehee.
September 13th, 2017 01:47
orchidee said:
A fine time for this write G/F. Meanwhile - a long as there\'s time for me sherries and porkies, no other time matters! heehee.
September 13th, 2017 01:47
What is the Time?
rrodriguez said:
Gf, smartly done... The question about time is so endless... Enjoyed it!
September 12th, 2017 15:57
rrodriguez said:
Gf, smartly done... The question about time is so endless... Enjoyed it!
September 12th, 2017 15:57
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