Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Quiet City.
burning-embers said:
Aaaaaah so you\'re not a punk fan eh. Funny that, i\'ve pictured you with a lime green mohican scribing away at your poetic niche whilst twiddling the safety pins thru your nostrils. But not really. Amazed at how you create something like this out of the ether.
August 16th, 2017 19:06
burning-embers said:
Aaaaaah so you\'re not a punk fan eh. Funny that, i\'ve pictured you with a lime green mohican scribing away at your poetic niche whilst twiddling the safety pins thru your nostrils. But not really. Amazed at how you create something like this out of the ether.
August 16th, 2017 19:06
Quiet City.
Michael Edwards said:
If music be the food of poetry write on - and so it is with me - great write.
August 16th, 2017 10:30
Michael Edwards said:
If music be the food of poetry write on - and so it is with me - great write.
August 16th, 2017 10:30
Quiet City.
malubotelho said:
Wonderful piece of writing. So soft and graceful. Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 10:10
malubotelho said:
Wonderful piece of writing. So soft and graceful. Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 10:10
Quiet City.
Louis Gibbs said:
Music, as well as anything that stirs emotions, is a great trigger for a poem to emerge. I\'ve shared your experience, Goldie, and can appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing!
August 16th, 2017 07:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Music, as well as anything that stirs emotions, is a great trigger for a poem to emerge. I\'ve shared your experience, Goldie, and can appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing!
August 16th, 2017 07:24
Quiet City.
FredPeyer said:
This is beautiful, Goldfinch. Am just glad you didn\'t hear rap music!
August 16th, 2017 02:04
FredPeyer said:
This is beautiful, Goldfinch. Am just glad you didn\'t hear rap music!
August 16th, 2017 02:04
Do You Take Sugar?
Heather T said:
This just wrecked me for you, sir. I was extremely close to my maternal grandmother, and it made me think of some of the things she started to say as she got worse. We lost her to pneumonia before she got very bad. I remember the first time she forgot how to turn on the shower. Oh, I\'m just holding the both of you so close in my thoughts and prayers.
August 16th, 2017 00:48
Heather T said:
This just wrecked me for you, sir. I was extremely close to my maternal grandmother, and it made me think of some of the things she started to say as she got worse. We lost her to pneumonia before she got very bad. I remember the first time she forgot how to turn on the shower. Oh, I\'m just holding the both of you so close in my thoughts and prayers.
August 16th, 2017 00:48
Do You Take Sugar?
sue.evans said:
The everyday question asked by your wife intensified the sadness of your situation. Dementia is a very cruel disease - more for the spouse having to watch the decline of a loved one. Your poem left me feeling quite sad.
August 15th, 2017 16:37
sue.evans said:
The everyday question asked by your wife intensified the sadness of your situation. Dementia is a very cruel disease - more for the spouse having to watch the decline of a loved one. Your poem left me feeling quite sad.
August 15th, 2017 16:37
Do You Take Sugar?
Brycycle said:
Got me a little sad hearing this. My thoughts are with you and your wife, i wish all the best for you.
August 15th, 2017 14:13
Brycycle said:
Got me a little sad hearing this. My thoughts are with you and your wife, i wish all the best for you.
August 15th, 2017 14:13
Do You Take Sugar?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Sad but expressed swell in rare compassion n feeling. I hope such good poetry n friends n other of family here will help u cope. Thumbs up poet.
Nice to read from u again. Hope u will write your thoughts too about my latest poem, under it. I have been writing on other sites and they say they get fun and things from It.
August 15th, 2017 13:19
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Sad but expressed swell in rare compassion n feeling. I hope such good poetry n friends n other of family here will help u cope. Thumbs up poet.
Nice to read from u again. Hope u will write your thoughts too about my latest poem, under it. I have been writing on other sites and they say they get fun and things from It.
August 15th, 2017 13:19
Do You Take Sugar?
malubotelho said:
I can see the sadness on your poem yet you wrote it in such lovely way. Your love is showing here and I\'m sending my prayers for you both.
August 15th, 2017 10:51
malubotelho said:
I can see the sadness on your poem yet you wrote it in such lovely way. Your love is showing here and I\'m sending my prayers for you both.
August 15th, 2017 10:51
Do You Take Sugar?
Louis Gibbs said:
A stunningly sad disease and its wrath captured so well in your poem, Goldie! My heart is with you.
August 15th, 2017 07:41
Louis Gibbs said:
A stunningly sad disease and its wrath captured so well in your poem, Goldie! My heart is with you.
August 15th, 2017 07:41
Do You Take Sugar?
burning-embers said:
You\'re a man who sees beauty with his eyes and shows it to us with his words Goldfinch. My heart goes out to you as you treasure the times when she is with you.
August 15th, 2017 05:31
burning-embers said:
You\'re a man who sees beauty with his eyes and shows it to us with his words Goldfinch. My heart goes out to you as you treasure the times when she is with you.
August 15th, 2017 05:31
Do You Take Sugar?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ Beautiful Music but very sad lament. I\'ve never had a Wife ~ but in prospect ~ her gradual deterioration would be the saddest thing ! Praying for strength for you ~ BRIAN Please check my wordless Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 15th, 2017 03:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ Beautiful Music but very sad lament. I\'ve never had a Wife ~ but in prospect ~ her gradual deterioration would be the saddest thing ! Praying for strength for you ~ BRIAN Please check my wordless Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 15th, 2017 03:10
Do You Take Sugar?
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, my heart is bleeding. My mom was in and out of dementia before she passed away, with short times of clarity and long times of ....
Thank you so much for your poem, I pray for you and your wife!
August 15th, 2017 02:04
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, my heart is bleeding. My mom was in and out of dementia before she passed away, with short times of clarity and long times of ....
Thank you so much for your poem, I pray for you and your wife!
August 15th, 2017 02:04
Do You Take Sugar?
orchidee said:
Thinking of you both. Yes, those words from a programme - radio I think: \'Does he take sugar?\' (did you know it?). It was about people who are overlooked by some, due to some disability. People would ignore the \'special needs\' person and talk to their carer, partner, etc instead, as though the other person did not exist.
August 15th, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
Thinking of you both. Yes, those words from a programme - radio I think: \'Does he take sugar?\' (did you know it?). It was about people who are overlooked by some, due to some disability. People would ignore the \'special needs\' person and talk to their carer, partner, etc instead, as though the other person did not exist.
August 15th, 2017 01:44
Do You Take Sugar?
Michael Edwards said:
Oh this made my heart drop a beat - so so sad - be assured my thoughts are with you and your wife Andy.
August 15th, 2017 01:29
Michael Edwards said:
Oh this made my heart drop a beat - so so sad - be assured my thoughts are with you and your wife Andy.
August 15th, 2017 01:29
Test of Faith?
myself and me said:
Why \"Roman Catholic \"?
I did burst into laugh at the end.
A nice poem in a humor way.
August 14th, 2017 21:38
myself and me said:
Why \"Roman Catholic \"?
I did burst into laugh at the end.
A nice poem in a humor way.
August 14th, 2017 21:38
Test of Faith?
burning-embers said:
Faith needs a backup, a hipflask and an ungodly wish
August 14th, 2017 18:26
burning-embers said:
Faith needs a backup, a hipflask and an ungodly wish
August 14th, 2017 18:26
Test of Faith?
Louis Gibbs said:
Faith doth have its limits, dothent it. Cute one, Goldie!
August 14th, 2017 06:53
Louis Gibbs said:
Faith doth have its limits, dothent it. Cute one, Goldie!
August 14th, 2017 06:53
Test of Faith?
Michael Edwards said:
Great ending quite unexpected - super stuff Andy.
August 14th, 2017 01:49
Michael Edwards said:
Great ending quite unexpected - super stuff Andy.
August 14th, 2017 01:49
New Generations.
burning-embers said:
A sign of ageing, yes my friend. Do you remember when you first noticed how young the policemen were these days? Nice work again. pleasure to read.
August 13th, 2017 21:38
burning-embers said:
A sign of ageing, yes my friend. Do you remember when you first noticed how young the policemen were these days? Nice work again. pleasure to read.
August 13th, 2017 21:38
New Generations.
myself and me said:
I guess soon ladder will be out of market. :)
August 13th, 2017 21:33
myself and me said:
I guess soon ladder will be out of market. :)
August 13th, 2017 21:33
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