Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
I\'ll Be Seeing You.
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ve had this happen to me as well. And it was one of Billie Holiday\'s songs too. It was also in the movie \"Forever Young\" with Mel Gibson. Can\'t remember the name of the song now. Great write Goldfinch. ; )
September 16th, 2017 03:03
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ve had this happen to me as well. And it was one of Billie Holiday\'s songs too. It was also in the movie \"Forever Young\" with Mel Gibson. Can\'t remember the name of the song now. Great write Goldfinch. ; )
September 16th, 2017 03:03
I\'ll Be Seeing You.
dusk arising said:
Needless to say that i\'m familiar with Billie Hilliday\'s work. I read your piece and listened thinking about your words. i Can only imagine how it made you feel, but for me it was quite moving. Thank you for sharing this.
September 16th, 2017 02:12
dusk arising said:
Needless to say that i\'m familiar with Billie Hilliday\'s work. I read your piece and listened thinking about your words. i Can only imagine how it made you feel, but for me it was quite moving. Thank you for sharing this.
September 16th, 2017 02:12
I\'ll Be Seeing You.
Michael Edwards said:
As we said in another stream - how many of us look at art generally - great write, great singer, great song - I\'ll listen to it again later.
September 16th, 2017 02:01
Michael Edwards said:
As we said in another stream - how many of us look at art generally - great write, great singer, great song - I\'ll listen to it again later.
September 16th, 2017 02:01
I\'ll Be Seeing You.
orchidee said:
A fine and sensitive write Gold. Sometimes things can affect us more than at other times. I mean, you would be more sensitive at the times I add water to your whisky, than when I \'m not around! heehee.
September 16th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
A fine and sensitive write Gold. Sometimes things can affect us more than at other times. I mean, you would be more sensitive at the times I add water to your whisky, than when I \'m not around! heehee.
September 16th, 2017 01:51
Hungry Ghosts
dusk arising said:
Oh you made me laugh again..... this is absolutely prescious mate. Goes into favourites... i love it!
September 15th, 2017 15:59
dusk arising said:
Oh you made me laugh again..... this is absolutely prescious mate. Goes into favourites... i love it!
September 15th, 2017 15:59
Hungry Ghosts
Fay Slimm. said:
Good question -- love the reasoning in this one Goldie.
September 15th, 2017 13:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Good question -- love the reasoning in this one Goldie.
September 15th, 2017 13:55
Hungry Ghosts
WL Schuett said:
We have a cookie jar is that the same thing as a biscuit barrel cause ours is always empty too ...fun one made me smile
September 15th, 2017 11:11
WL Schuett said:
We have a cookie jar is that the same thing as a biscuit barrel cause ours is always empty too ...fun one made me smile
September 15th, 2017 11:11
Hungry Ghosts
lasergraph said:
I am thinking a security camera at the biscuit barrel is called for. :D
September 15th, 2017 10:37
lasergraph said:
I am thinking a security camera at the biscuit barrel is called for. :D
September 15th, 2017 10:37
Hungry Ghosts
Louis Gibbs said:
Those biscuit-eaters are the sneakiest of all ghosts! I\'d call on the \'ghost busters\'!
September 15th, 2017 10:32
Louis Gibbs said:
Those biscuit-eaters are the sneakiest of all ghosts! I\'d call on the \'ghost busters\'!
September 15th, 2017 10:32
Hungry Ghosts
myself and me said:
I like how this piece end, \"empty biscuit barrel\".
A fun reading.
September 15th, 2017 07:55
myself and me said:
I like how this piece end, \"empty biscuit barrel\".
A fun reading.
September 15th, 2017 07:55
Hungry Ghosts
Accidental Poet said:
Sorry Goldfinch, I couldn\'t help myself. They\'re sooo good. Just like this write. ; )
September 15th, 2017 04:10
Accidental Poet said:
Sorry Goldfinch, I couldn\'t help myself. They\'re sooo good. Just like this write. ; )
September 15th, 2017 04:10
Hungry Ghosts
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, are you sleep walking to that barrel? Wouldn\'t surprise me!
September 15th, 2017 03:28
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, are you sleep walking to that barrel? Wouldn\'t surprise me!
September 15th, 2017 03:28
Hungry Ghosts
Frank Prem said:
Yup, you\'re onto it GF. Ghosts for sure.
Follow the crumbs.
September 15th, 2017 02:35
Frank Prem said:
Yup, you\'re onto it GF. Ghosts for sure.
Follow the crumbs.
September 15th, 2017 02:35
Hungry Ghosts
Michael Edwards said:
Funny that we have the same problem in our household - except that I\'m the culprit - great observational poem Andy.
September 15th, 2017 02:31
Michael Edwards said:
Funny that we have the same problem in our household - except that I\'m the culprit - great observational poem Andy.
September 15th, 2017 02:31
What is Time?
Seek said:
What a write! Glad I found time to read it; thoroughly enjoyed yours. A refreshing perspective on time. And the coincidence did not escape me. Only yesterday I uploaded my own poem on time with a different take \"Friendly Tyrant\". You may wish to compare notes.
September 15th, 2017 01:42
Seek said:
What a write! Glad I found time to read it; thoroughly enjoyed yours. A refreshing perspective on time. And the coincidence did not escape me. Only yesterday I uploaded my own poem on time with a different take \"Friendly Tyrant\". You may wish to compare notes.
September 15th, 2017 01:42
Endless Love.
malubotelho said:
Very touching write. I\'m happy to know you still love her and taking care of her. I have cases like this on my family but they were not so luck. Sending love for you two. God bless your heart.
September 14th, 2017 23:54
malubotelho said:
Very touching write. I\'m happy to know you still love her and taking care of her. I have cases like this on my family but they were not so luck. Sending love for you two. God bless your heart.
September 14th, 2017 23:54
Endless Love.
poetboy123 said:
This was a beautiful, I\'m speechless, I only look at you with more respect with each poem you write. Simply wondeful.
September 14th, 2017 19:11
poetboy123 said:
This was a beautiful, I\'m speechless, I only look at you with more respect with each poem you write. Simply wondeful.
September 14th, 2017 19:11
What is Time?
dusk arising said:
If i only had time
to learn my five times table
a timely reminder
Once upon a time a gal called Rosemary (who couldn\'t spell) married time.....
nice writing sir
September 14th, 2017 18:24
dusk arising said:
If i only had time
to learn my five times table
a timely reminder
Once upon a time a gal called Rosemary (who couldn\'t spell) married time.....
nice writing sir
September 14th, 2017 18:24
Endless Love.
dusk arising said:
God has shown you what love is my friend. Real unconditional love is what you are telling us here i think. Very moving writing, from your heart, and affects one and all who read your words here. Saved to favourites.
September 14th, 2017 18:15
dusk arising said:
God has shown you what love is my friend. Real unconditional love is what you are telling us here i think. Very moving writing, from your heart, and affects one and all who read your words here. Saved to favourites.
September 14th, 2017 18:15
Endless Love.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANDY ~ Thanks for reminding us of the heartache you bear because of your Dear Wife\'s Condition. It is so so sad My Dad 65 and my Mum 60 are still hanging in mentally but mnobility for my Dad is getting worse. I attended a Church reunion recently an it was sad to see friend of 70+ incapacitated and not even recognizing me As you say at the end of your poignant POEM ~ Love and more Love is the answer ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN Thanks for Clair de Lune a family favorite !
September 14th, 2017 17:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW ANDY ~ Thanks for reminding us of the heartache you bear because of your Dear Wife\'s Condition. It is so so sad My Dad 65 and my Mum 60 are still hanging in mentally but mnobility for my Dad is getting worse. I attended a Church reunion recently an it was sad to see friend of 70+ incapacitated and not even recognizing me As you say at the end of your poignant POEM ~ Love and more Love is the answer ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN Thanks for Clair de Lune a family favorite !
September 14th, 2017 17:15
Endless Love.
myself and me said:
There are so many diseases far beyond the reach of today\'s medicine, while love is the only hope for all the suffer.
Your love is the best support for your wife.
Very touching poem. Well done.
September 14th, 2017 12:09
myself and me said:
There are so many diseases far beyond the reach of today\'s medicine, while love is the only hope for all the suffer.
Your love is the best support for your wife.
Very touching poem. Well done.
September 14th, 2017 12:09
Endless Love.
Allysnewworld said:
There\'s no real way to quantify poetry but having read this I can say, this is the closest thing to the true heart and beauty that poetry intends on conveying. Honest read with meaning and emotion. I feel it all and I wish you all the best. I hope you find the beauty in the path you will both be walking together.
September 14th, 2017 11:49
Allysnewworld said:
There\'s no real way to quantify poetry but having read this I can say, this is the closest thing to the true heart and beauty that poetry intends on conveying. Honest read with meaning and emotion. I feel it all and I wish you all the best. I hope you find the beauty in the path you will both be walking together.
September 14th, 2017 11:49
Endless Love.
WL Schuett said:
Bless you brother you\'re a good man , keep being strong I know you love her it\'s very evident.... beautiful poem too
September 14th, 2017 07:48
WL Schuett said:
Bless you brother you\'re a good man , keep being strong I know you love her it\'s very evident.... beautiful poem too
September 14th, 2017 07:48
Endless Love.
FredPeyer said:
Reading your incredible poem, Goldfinch, made me think of my dad\'s best friend. For years, after he could not care for her anymore at home, he visited his wife who had Alzheimers, every day, fed her, stayed with her, read to her, even though eventually she did not recognize him anymore. We all have to be prepared to be in the same position one day, and your poem, even though it did bring tears to my eyes, also gave me a lot of hope. It is like a beacon of light in a dark place!
September 14th, 2017 03:36
FredPeyer said:
Reading your incredible poem, Goldfinch, made me think of my dad\'s best friend. For years, after he could not care for her anymore at home, he visited his wife who had Alzheimers, every day, fed her, stayed with her, read to her, even though eventually she did not recognize him anymore. We all have to be prepared to be in the same position one day, and your poem, even though it did bring tears to my eyes, also gave me a lot of hope. It is like a beacon of light in a dark place!
September 14th, 2017 03:36
Endless Love.
orchidee said:
Also, I was struck reading a bit of Revelation lately. It says a time will come with no more mourning, death, crying, or pain. In that time those things are called \'former things\'. Meanwhile they remain, as we all know. Those sort of verses inspire me to some of my most, well, inspirational, poetry. Not that ALL of the present life is as a vale of tears though.
September 14th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
Also, I was struck reading a bit of Revelation lately. It says a time will come with no more mourning, death, crying, or pain. In that time those things are called \'former things\'. Meanwhile they remain, as we all know. Those sort of verses inspire me to some of my most, well, inspirational, poetry. Not that ALL of the present life is as a vale of tears though.
September 14th, 2017 01:51
Endless Love.
orchidee said:
It\'s not the first time a poem of yours triggers something in me - some feeling, and then I shed a tear or two. Even some lesser emotive themes and experiences. Thinking of you both. Love wins through somehow, some way. Anyone can just SAY that, but not the same as living through it.
September 14th, 2017 01:49
orchidee said:
It\'s not the first time a poem of yours triggers something in me - some feeling, and then I shed a tear or two. Even some lesser emotive themes and experiences. Thinking of you both. Love wins through somehow, some way. Anyone can just SAY that, but not the same as living through it.
September 14th, 2017 01:49
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