Comments received on poems by orchidee



Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Fay Slimm. said:

Faith can certainly turn into wise ways of dealing with life\'s challenges Orchi - thank you for sharing the need for humility to see good results

June 21st, 2019 03:49

Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Goldfinch60 said:

May that wisdom fill everyone with the Peace of the World.

June 21st, 2019 03:08

Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Neville said:

tis certainly wise if we are talking fruits, to have your five a day.... N

June 21st, 2019 02:33

Remembrance Recollections
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening ANGELA HERE ! Thanks UNCLE STEVE for sharing another GREAT HYMN ! *I am trusting Thee Lord Jesus* : Morning or Evening (Its 8am Friday here !). Sorry you didnt get more takers for your EUCHARIST ! In the Churches in NZ the Communion Services are the same as in SPAIN - THE UK and everywhere in the World (variations with DENOMINATION) : The Catholic Eucharists are identical in the Tridentine (Latin) Mass and very very similar in all languages. Wherever we are in the WORLD : Brian & I attend COMMUNION (even when we are not familiar with the Vernacular) and we are always made very very welcome ! We consider it is very important to *Celebrate the Lords Supper* at least once per week to keep us NEAR THE CROSS : AMEN. It was instituted in order that : when we do it : We focus on JESUS and his ATONEMENT on the CROSS. Please keep up the GOOD WORK of sharing JESUS on MPS every single DAY : AMEN
In BRIANS CHURCH (Evangelical) they have a Portable Communion Set and the Elders (and Decons) can take it out to *Shut Ins* Brian & I have been involved in this Ministry : It is very very humbling !

Blessing & Joy for YOU & FIDOMO !
Love in the Spirit ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡

June 20th, 2019 14:07

Remembrance Recollections
Suresh said:

Well no seat at the table for me again -



June 20th, 2019 12:33

Remembrance Recollections
Michael Edwards said:

Well writ O

June 20th, 2019 09:12

Remembrance Recollections
dusk arising said:

Come on Orchidee, fess-up, what is this you need forgiving for?

June 20th, 2019 07:56

Remembrance Recollections
Neville said:

I always make a point of remembering the fallen on Remembrance Sunday.. everything else, I regret, I forget..... tis not an age thing....... I respect the message you get across here tho.... Neville

June 20th, 2019 03:10

Remembrance Recollections
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Orchi but as you know my faith in the Christian church has gone so I will not be at that table.

June 20th, 2019 02:37

Peaceful Providence
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE STEVE : Love the HYMN and video ! BRIAN tells me Good Poeming requires an infinite vocabulary ! repetition of a line is GOOD but not of a WORD ! I would suggest DECREASE for the last WORD in V 5. You could delete AND to preserve the METRE : OK By removing CEASE in line 4 you can now leave CEASE in line 2 : which i like because it creates Internal Rhyme which ameliorates FLOW. I have been attending a Poetry Class here (dont tell Brian !) where they instruct us in the fine art of POETIC STRUCTURE ! This is why BRIAN & I produce so many PANTOUMS etc etc. I love BRIANS POEM today It is a masterpiece of 15 Rhyming Couplets : awesome !

Thanks for caring & sharing & uplifting !
Blessings for YOU & HOUND DOG
Yours Tout Suite ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡

June 19th, 2019 03:37

Peaceful Providence
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

June 19th, 2019 02:57

Peaceful Providence
Neville said:

what about..... desist

I enjoyed this poem and the challenge


June 19th, 2019 02:16

Peaceful Providence
orchidee said:

Can you help? In verse 5 I have use \'cease\' twice. I need another word for \'noise stopping\' (in line 2).
I have already used \'stills\' in line 1.
Suppose I could use \'stops\' as one option.

June 19th, 2019 01:53

Fret Not To Do Evil
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one once more Orchi.

June 19th, 2019 00:14

Fret Not To Do Evil
dusk arising said:

You know what, i wish it would happen.

June 18th, 2019 12:44

Fret Not To Do Evil
Suresh said:

Your belief is your strength

June 18th, 2019 11:09

Fret Not To Do Evil
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS UNCLE STEVE ~ Great Hymn ~ Great Tune ~ Great Poem all about Seeking ~ Choosing ~ Being Guided & Witnessing ~ LOVE IT ~ AMEN ! Please check Our BALANCED DIET ~ Thanks

Blessings & Joy to YOU & FIDO
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡

June 18th, 2019 10:52

Fret Not To Do Evil
Neville said:

there is a green hill far away he sat and watched from his ancient wobbly throne....

June 18th, 2019 04:06

Fret Not To Do Evil
orchidee said:

A fluster I said, not a hot flush! Though I am very old, and may need to look out for them! lol.

June 18th, 2019 02:07

Ageless Advocate
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

June 18th, 2019 00:06

Ageless Advocate
dusk arising said:

In my mirror today i saw your title - an \"ageing avocado\".

and i contemplated one of your lines \'so more in you we shall grow\'.



June 17th, 2019 10:14

Ageless Advocate
Neville said:

I\'m as old as my tongue and a little bit older than my teeth...... but it means nowt without direction...... Neville

June 17th, 2019 04:40

Ageless Advocate
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA here : Thanks : UNCLE STEVE : for sharing & caring about all of US on MPS ! We all need an ADVOCATE and a PARACLETE to infil us & guide us day by DAY ! Love the HYMN & POEM ! My POEM today *POSITIVITY* is about the NINE FRUIT of the SPIRIT and the THREE Scout Laws in NZ. Such lovely KIDS in the Video ! Its 10:25 pm here so getting ready for BED after a hard days work in the CLINIC & Aquatherapy Pool. l need the Nine Fruit of the Spirit all day in MY JOB : AMEN

Love to You & FIDO (does He like WATER ?)
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡

June 17th, 2019 04:30

Ageless Advocate
orchidee said:

Nope, I\'m not the Advocate, though I\'m nearly ageless - since about 1066 at least! lol.

June 17th, 2019 02:10

Tuneful Times
Neville said:

if you hum it.. I will tap my foot along with ya...

I take it this is nothing to do with electricity meters...


June 16th, 2019 12:21

Tuneful Times
dusk arising said:

LOL praise him all u like .... he won\'t hear u Orchidee.

June 16th, 2019 03:02

Tuneful Times
Michael Edwards said:

Still counting those metres - get them wrong and it\'s Trub Berles.

June 16th, 2019 02:04

Tuneful Times
Goldfinch60 said:

Not sure about the last line of the first stanza unless the answer he gives when I call is no.

June 16th, 2019 01:34

Giving Glory
Goldfinch60 said:

Good Good write write Orchi Orchi.

June 16th, 2019 00:25

Giving Glory
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE STEVE ~ One of the gtreateast Modern Hymns (worth a Double Posting !) Love Psalm 96 great message !

GOD is here ~ GOD is now
Its a time for celebration !
Our PRAISE outstrips the OLD SONGS
Let us create NEW SONGS to Praise our GOD
No need for expensive Organs or Great Choirs
Be like KEN DODD & just BANG ........................
The BIG DRUM of KNOTTY ASH ............. AMEN !

Blessings & a big drum BEAT for FIDO !
Yours to the Beating of the Drum ~ A & B ~ 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡

June 15th, 2019 18:56



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