Comments received on poems by Agiel
Seasons of Love
Crowns4Christ said:
How sweet,it\'s amazing how many things we can use to describe our love for somebody
November 17th, 2022 06:32
Crowns4Christ said:
How sweet,it\'s amazing how many things we can use to describe our love for somebody
November 17th, 2022 06:32
Unpolished
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely poem! The way it\'s \"unpolished\" brings out its nature and sentiments. Sometimes refining a poem until \"perfection\" makes it bland or too drawn-out. Good job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 09:38
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely poem! The way it\'s \"unpolished\" brings out its nature and sentiments. Sometimes refining a poem until \"perfection\" makes it bland or too drawn-out. Good job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 09:38
Unpolished
dusk arising said:
I felt you encapsulated one of the wonders of the way things are in our existence.... how the world, stars the whole environment bends to our mood and needs. After all if we are on a downer, the last thing we want is a half baked response from anyone or anything. Maybe you could imagine the moon taking the piss if it helps?
P.S. Your profile shows you have never commented on other poets posts on here... why is that?
February 8th, 2022 07:12
dusk arising said:
I felt you encapsulated one of the wonders of the way things are in our existence.... how the world, stars the whole environment bends to our mood and needs. After all if we are on a downer, the last thing we want is a half baked response from anyone or anything. Maybe you could imagine the moon taking the piss if it helps?
P.S. Your profile shows you have never commented on other poets posts on here... why is that?
February 8th, 2022 07:12
Sound of Intuition
Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem! I love the wording you used.
February 7th, 2022 11:39
Rocky Lagou said:
Great poem! I love the wording you used.
February 7th, 2022 11:39
Endless lake
jarcher54 said:
Many of the poems on MPS reflect despair, sorrow, loneliness, and pain. They do it so poignantly they are clearly based on experience or close observation. They also comment on how writing or creating have a role in dealing with those emotions. Few do it as succinctly and lovely as you have in this poem.
September 20th, 2020 07:09
jarcher54 said:
Many of the poems on MPS reflect despair, sorrow, loneliness, and pain. They do it so poignantly they are clearly based on experience or close observation. They also comment on how writing or creating have a role in dealing with those emotions. Few do it as succinctly and lovely as you have in this poem.
September 20th, 2020 07:09
Ink in my veins
Jane Frye said:
Beautiful and powerful. Thank you for sharing this.
December 29th, 2019 11:11
Jane Frye said:
Beautiful and powerful. Thank you for sharing this.
December 29th, 2019 11:11
Goodbye friend
swyndell said:
Interesting, the pain is so prominent but is expressed beautifully. Like a beautiful drawing, ripped to shreds, yet repaired. It\'s a confusing feeling. Yet it brings me to the conclusion, are you okay?
August 27th, 2018 11:34
swyndell said:
Interesting, the pain is so prominent but is expressed beautifully. Like a beautiful drawing, ripped to shreds, yet repaired. It\'s a confusing feeling. Yet it brings me to the conclusion, are you okay?
August 27th, 2018 11:34
Guilt
misskay said:
Powerful and nicely written
I just hope its the heart crying/releasing thoughts and emotion and doesnt become a tradedy x
August 20th, 2018 05:08
misskay said:
Powerful and nicely written
I just hope its the heart crying/releasing thoughts and emotion and doesnt become a tradedy x
August 20th, 2018 05:08
Reflection
sylviasearcher said:
I felt ever word
How often I stare in the mirror like this but cannot seem to put words to the reflection...
August 14th, 2018 09:34
sylviasearcher said:
I felt ever word
How often I stare in the mirror like this but cannot seem to put words to the reflection...
August 14th, 2018 09:34
Unconditional
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I am sure that you will meet those stars and go on to eternity.
July 30th, 2018 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I am sure that you will meet those stars and go on to eternity.
July 30th, 2018 00:29
Unconditional
Hesther said:
I think this poem is wonderful, each word is powerful.
July 29th, 2018 10:29
Hesther said:
I think this poem is wonderful, each word is powerful.
July 29th, 2018 10:29
Unconditional
Masking said:
Beautiful, I Really enjoyed every word in this poem. As it\'s incredibly relatable and told in an interesting way. The only missing thing, Is your ending. I think it needs a bit more oomph.
July 29th, 2018 08:09
Masking said:
Beautiful, I Really enjoyed every word in this poem. As it\'s incredibly relatable and told in an interesting way. The only missing thing, Is your ending. I think it needs a bit more oomph.
July 29th, 2018 08:09
Love is strength
The Poet Doctor said:
Though short stanzas they make huge impact. The flow of words is very good.
July 1st, 2018 08:46
The Poet Doctor said:
Though short stanzas they make huge impact. The flow of words is very good.
July 1st, 2018 08:46
Love is strength
Anasyil said:
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I am so happy for you!
July 1st, 2018 07:04
Anasyil said:
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I am so happy for you!
July 1st, 2018 07:04
Love is strength
Heartwriter said:
Such contrast in this write. Brilliantly done. Bravo!
July 1st, 2018 06:35
Heartwriter said:
Such contrast in this write. Brilliantly done. Bravo!
July 1st, 2018 06:35
A letter of Broken Dreams
Anasyil said:
I felt the pain within this poem. It has made me teared a bit. It is certainly a telling tale of the tragedy behind one who suffers from depression.
June 23rd, 2018 13:36
Anasyil said:
I felt the pain within this poem. It has made me teared a bit. It is certainly a telling tale of the tragedy behind one who suffers from depression.
June 23rd, 2018 13:36
Consequences of love
SLR said:
It\'s sad when you realize how many people end their lives because of the end of a relationship. They can\'t see pay the pain that they\'re going through to the other side. Well written.
May 11th, 2018 19:01
SLR said:
It\'s sad when you realize how many people end their lives because of the end of a relationship. They can\'t see pay the pain that they\'re going through to the other side. Well written.
May 11th, 2018 19:01
Chaos and Peace
Caring dove said:
a powerful , strong poem . i especially love these lines..
\'\'Like a fatal tsunami you crashed into me\'\'
\'\'Our love will echo on the walls of eternity
Just like thunders.\'\'
you expressed this so well , a really good poem , well done
March 26th, 2018 14:48
Caring dove said:
a powerful , strong poem . i especially love these lines..
\'\'Like a fatal tsunami you crashed into me\'\'
\'\'Our love will echo on the walls of eternity
Just like thunders.\'\'
you expressed this so well , a really good poem , well done
March 26th, 2018 14:48
The Magical Place
Nicholas Browning said:
Regrets teach you many lessons. Never forget the consequences of giving up. Best wishes and hopes to you friend.
March 14th, 2018 17:04
Nicholas Browning said:
Regrets teach you many lessons. Never forget the consequences of giving up. Best wishes and hopes to you friend.
March 14th, 2018 17:04
A letter of Broken Dreams
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
Love this. It shows compassion through the words. It\'s a story untold through the words you write. It\'s really beautiful
June 26th, 2017 23:50
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
Love this. It shows compassion through the words. It\'s a story untold through the words you write. It\'s really beautiful
June 26th, 2017 23:50
How many times ?
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
This is so deep. It similar to the things I write. I felt your passion in this. I love it!
June 26th, 2017 23:48
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
This is so deep. It similar to the things I write. I felt your passion in this. I love it!
June 26th, 2017 23:48
A letter of Broken Dreams
Carol Coelho said:
I like it. Hope you\'ll continue to write. Good essence and meaning, we all need that. Superficial is just boring.
April 19th, 2017 22:32
Carol Coelho said:
I like it. Hope you\'ll continue to write. Good essence and meaning, we all need that. Superficial is just boring.
April 19th, 2017 22:32
