Comments received on poems by Agiel

Ink in my veins
Jane Frye said:

Beautiful and powerful. Thank you for sharing this.

December 29th, 2019 11:11

Tears of cold rain
Unsub said:


few words needed to comment. I felt it deeply.


November 30th, 2019 08:53

Goodbye friend
Mene said:

Interesting, the pain is so prominent but is expressed beautifully. Like a beautiful drawing, ripped to shreds, yet repaired. It\'s a confusing feeling. Yet it brings me to the conclusion, are you okay?

August 27th, 2018 11:34

misskay said:

Powerful and nicely written
I just hope its the heart crying/releasing thoughts and emotion and doesnt become a tradedy x

August 20th, 2018 05:08

clareuk said:


August 20th, 2018 00:41

Fading Away
Crystal Hope said:

Wow! So beautifully and excellently done.

August 18th, 2018 00:17

Fading Away
jbd57 said:


August 18th, 2018 00:09

Broken Hope
lcmcfadden said:

Love this

August 15th, 2018 22:22

Unsub said:


love this line:

In this world
I do not belong

I guess we all have moments when we feel this way.

I\'m sure you\'re not crazy but maybe you are; who knows what crazy really is.

Smash that mirror & only look forwards.

Enjoyed the poem.


August 15th, 2018 14:18

sylviasearcher said:

I felt ever word

How often I stare in the mirror like this but cannot seem to put words to the reflection...

August 14th, 2018 09:34

Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. I am sure that you will meet those stars and go on to eternity.

July 30th, 2018 00:29

Hesther said:

I think this poem is wonderful, each word is powerful.

July 29th, 2018 10:29

Masking said:

Beautiful, I Really enjoyed every word in this poem. As it\'s incredibly relatable and told in an interesting way. The only missing thing, Is your ending. I think it needs a bit more oomph.

July 29th, 2018 08:09

Love is strength
The Poet Doctor said:

Though short stanzas they make huge impact. The flow of words is very good.

July 1st, 2018 08:46

Love is strength
Anasyil said:

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I am so happy for you!

July 1st, 2018 07:04

Love is strength
Heartwriter said:

Such contrast in this write. Brilliantly done. Bravo!

July 1st, 2018 06:35

A letter of Broken Dreams
Anasyil said:

I felt the pain within this poem. It has made me teared a bit. It is certainly a telling tale of the tragedy behind one who suffers from depression.

June 23rd, 2018 13:36

Consequences of love
SLR said:

It\'s sad when you realize how many people end their lives because of the end of a relationship. They can\'t see pay the pain that they\'re going through to the other side. Well written.

May 11th, 2018 19:01

Chaos and Peace
yellowrose said:

a powerful , strong poem . i especially love these lines..
\'\'Like a fatal tsunami you crashed into me\'\'

\'\'Our love will echo on the walls of eternity
Just like thunders.\'\'

you expressed this so well , a really good poem , well done

March 26th, 2018 14:48

The Magical Place
Nicholas Browning said:

Regrets teach you many lessons. Never forget the consequences of giving up. Best wishes and hopes to you friend.

March 14th, 2018 17:04

A letter of Broken Dreams
lost-but-not-broken17 said:

Love this. It shows compassion through the words. It\'s a story untold through the words you write. It\'s really beautiful

June 26th, 2017 23:50

How many times ?
lost-but-not-broken17 said:

This is so deep. It similar to the things I write. I felt your passion in this. I love it!

June 26th, 2017 23:48

The Ocean Of My Mind
Stella_Suicide said:

that is...amazing

April 24th, 2017 15:16

The Ocean Of My Mind
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

April 21st, 2017 00:59

A letter of Broken Dreams
Carol Coelho said:

I like it. Hope you\'ll continue to write. Good essence and meaning, we all need that. Superficial is just boring.

April 19th, 2017 22:32