Comments received on poems by Agiel



Endless lake
jarcher54 said:

Many of the poems on MPS reflect despair, sorrow, loneliness, and pain. They do it so poignantly they are clearly based on experience or close observation. They also comment on how writing or creating have a role in dealing with those emotions. Few do it as succinctly and lovely as you have in this poem.

September 20th, 2020 07:09

Endless lake
Trenz Pruca said:

I enjoyed your poem a lot.

September 19th, 2020 14:10

Memories of Steel
Goldfinch60 said:

The warmth of love can break any steel and make life so wonderful.

Andy

August 11th, 2020 00:05

Memories of Steel
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Boa Noite AGIEL ~ Obrigado por seu POEMA ELEGANTE ! We have a sying in English *His heart was cold as Steel* Befor we met each other four Years ago (weve been married since March 2020) BRIAN & I both had Relationships (I with Men & Brian with Ladies !) which were cold as ICE or STEEL no warmth of LOVE ! We met at a Hospital Dance (a good place to meet !) and as the night progressed (and as your poem expresses) Love produces HEAT ~ HEAT melts cold Hearts *E nossa Vida juntos e semprre Doce e Quenta !*

Amo ~ Paz e Alegria ~ de Nos para Voce
Angel e Brian e Gato Fumo (Smokey Cat) ! ! !
Please check our Site and our FUSION POEM
pleaes add a Poem ! Click on DEVELOPING
to see it. Spanish is our Second Language
which as you know is very similar to Portuguese !
WE love PORTUGAL ~ The Algarve ~ Lisbon
and the Duro for the Port. Angela aqui ~ Mi Padre
es Espanol (Mecante del Vino Rioja) but I was
Born (1988) and raised in England. Mi Madre es Ingles
Iam a PHYSIOTHERAPIST. Brian (36) is a Lecturer in
Applied Sciene ina Vocational College ! Es Un Caballero
Verdad ~ Fluente en Espanol ~ Amorado de Todas cosas Hispanicos
Toca La Guitarra Classica ! He was Spanish Enough for Mi
Padre to say SI SI SI ~ AMEN !

August 10th, 2020 16:15

Ink in my veins
Jane Frye said:

Beautiful and powerful. Thank you for sharing this.

December 29th, 2019 11:11

Tears of cold rain
Unsub said:

Agiel,

few words needed to comment. I felt it deeply.

Unsub.

November 30th, 2019 08:53

Goodbye friend
Mene said:

Interesting, the pain is so prominent but is expressed beautifully. Like a beautiful drawing, ripped to shreds, yet repaired. It\'s a confusing feeling. Yet it brings me to the conclusion, are you okay?

August 27th, 2018 11:34

Guilt
misskay said:

Powerful and nicely written
I just hope its the heart crying/releasing thoughts and emotion and doesnt become a tradedy x

August 20th, 2018 05:08

Guilt
clareuk said:

❤️

August 20th, 2018 00:41

Fading Away
Crystal Hope said:

Wow! So beautifully and excellently done.

August 18th, 2018 00:17

Fading Away
jbd57 said:

Beautiful

August 18th, 2018 00:09

Broken Hope
lcmcfadden said:

Love this

August 15th, 2018 22:22

Reflection
Unsub said:

Agiel,

love this line:

In this world
I do not belong

I guess we all have moments when we feel this way.

I\'m sure you\'re not crazy but maybe you are; who knows what crazy really is.

Smash that mirror & only look forwards.

Enjoyed the poem.

Unsub.

August 15th, 2018 14:18

Reflection
sylviasearcher said:

I felt ever word

How often I stare in the mirror like this but cannot seem to put words to the reflection...

August 14th, 2018 09:34

Unconditional
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. I am sure that you will meet those stars and go on to eternity.

July 30th, 2018 00:29

Unconditional
Hesther said:

I think this poem is wonderful, each word is powerful.

July 29th, 2018 10:29

Unconditional
Masking said:

Beautiful, I Really enjoyed every word in this poem. As it\'s incredibly relatable and told in an interesting way. The only missing thing, Is your ending. I think it needs a bit more oomph.

July 29th, 2018 08:09

Love is strength
The Poet Doctor said:

Though short stanzas they make huge impact. The flow of words is very good.

July 1st, 2018 08:46

Love is strength
Anasyil said:

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I am so happy for you!

July 1st, 2018 07:04

Love is strength
Heartwriter said:

Such contrast in this write. Brilliantly done. Bravo!

July 1st, 2018 06:35

A letter of Broken Dreams
Anasyil said:

I felt the pain within this poem. It has made me teared a bit. It is certainly a telling tale of the tragedy behind one who suffers from depression.

June 23rd, 2018 13:36

Consequences of love
SLR said:

It\'s sad when you realize how many people end their lives because of the end of a relationship. They can\'t see pay the pain that they\'re going through to the other side. Well written.

May 11th, 2018 19:01

Chaos and Peace
yellowrose said:

a powerful , strong poem . i especially love these lines..
\'\'Like a fatal tsunami you crashed into me\'\'

\'\'Our love will echo on the walls of eternity
Just like thunders.\'\'

you expressed this so well , a really good poem , well done




March 26th, 2018 14:48

The Magical Place
Nicholas Browning said:

Regrets teach you many lessons. Never forget the consequences of giving up. Best wishes and hopes to you friend.

March 14th, 2018 17:04

A letter of Broken Dreams
lost-but-not-broken17 said:

Love this. It shows compassion through the words. It\'s a story untold through the words you write. It\'s really beautiful

June 26th, 2017 23:50

How many times ?
lost-but-not-broken17 said:

This is so deep. It similar to the things I write. I felt your passion in this. I love it!

June 26th, 2017 23:48

The Ocean Of My Mind
Stella_Suicide said:

that is...amazing

April 24th, 2017 15:16

The Ocean Of My Mind
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

April 21st, 2017 00:59

A letter of Broken Dreams
Carol Coelho said:

I like it. Hope you\'ll continue to write. Good essence and meaning, we all need that. Superficial is just boring.

April 19th, 2017 22:32