Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs



THE RECURRING DREAM
myself and me said:

Life is a dream weave with time. When you are gone, the dreams disappeared.
Interesting dream and real poem.

September 13th, 2017 11:15

THE RECURRING DREAM
WL Schuett said:

Nice concept poem very cool

September 13th, 2017 09:02

THE RECURRING DREAM
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Dream Dream Dream LOUIS ~ All I have to do is DREAM Yours BRIAN There are al lot of Dreams in our latest Collaboration ~ Seasons of Love ~ please check ~ Thanks SANTI & BRIAN

September 13th, 2017 03:15

THE RECURRING DREAM
orchidee said:

Ta-dah! And now that dream has come true! Good write Louis.

September 13th, 2017 02:02

THE RECURRING DREAM
Goldfinch60 said:

May your dreams always give us your poetry. Good write.

September 13th, 2017 01:27

THE RECURRING DREAM
Frank Prem said:

And so, you did! Grand dream writing Louis. Bravo.

September 13th, 2017 01:08

THE RECURRING DREAM
FredPeyer said:

So this is a mad and dark, awful and splendid, yet rather curious poem!

September 13th, 2017 01:04

THE RECURRING DREAM
UnspokenVoice92 said:

All dreams seem to mean something. This one just happen to be one easier to interpret. Interesting.

September 13th, 2017 00:33

THE RECURRING DREAM
Michael Edwards said:

A surrealist thought - grand little poem Louis

September 13th, 2017 00:14

TICK TOCK
orchidee said:

Thanks Louis. One angle is the James Bond film \'Moonraker\'. The villain takes supposedly \'super-people\' into his space station thingy. But he forgot - they are still people. They would mess it up there, if it had survived.
Meanwhile - how would they go shopping on the space station, and other practical things?! heehee.

September 11th, 2017 09:24

TICK TOCK
WL Schuett said:

We keep passing the open window , cool poem

September 11th, 2017 07:48

TICK TOCK
orchidee said:

Well, I been here millions of years, so I say! (lol). But seriously, I see Christianity, with its faith and beliefs, as the only full solution.
I don\'t mean \'religion\', people mucking about how many times they cross themselves, rituals, rites, etc. Saw someone recently do it . Nearly drove me potty. I would be worn out doing that lot!

September 11th, 2017 06:47

TICK TOCK
FredPeyer said:

Louis, I love it! Who knows, maybe our time already expired, we just didn\'t realize it yet.

September 11th, 2017 03:08

TICK TOCK
Goldfinch60 said:

Tick tock indeed. It is only a matter of time.

September 11th, 2017 01:27

TICK TOCK
dusk arising said:

Maybe mans existence is compatible we\'ve just got it so wrong so far. tick tock. nice writing

September 11th, 2017 01:22

TICK TOCK
Michael Edwards said:

Time will tell but long after I\'ve gone - tock tick...


September 11th, 2017 01:14

TICK TOCK
Seek said:

Short but well said! I would go further to suggest that Man may be the first species to bring about his own extinction. Indeed, tick tock.

September 11th, 2017 00:38

THE BROKEN
myself and me said:

Thank you. I find the answer for my puzzle \"why I am not a poet?\" Because I am still in the process of breaking, not broken yet.


September 8th, 2017 19:46

THE BROKEN
Christina8 said:

Bravo! A fine write. A great tribute to us all!

September 8th, 2017 10:40

THE BROKEN
Goldfinch60 said:

A very fine tribute to all Poets Louis.

September 8th, 2017 02:25

THE BROKEN
Fay Slimm. said:

Broken but writing the pain away - a good description and tribute to the finest of poets dear Louis

September 8th, 2017 02:07

THE BROKEN
Frank Prem said:

Cheers, Louis. (Salud!)

September 8th, 2017 01:45

THE BROKEN
dusk arising said:

Im not so much broken as cracked!

September 8th, 2017 01:39

THE BROKEN
FredPeyer said:

Thank you, thank you, thank you, Louis, you just put some duct tape on me!

September 8th, 2017 00:59

THE BROKEN
Michael Edwards said:

A great tribute indeed - to our merry band of scribes.

September 8th, 2017 00:26

THE GREAT DECEPTION
myself and me said:

\"here and now\"
where we belong.
Deep insight.

September 6th, 2017 20:05

THE GREAT DECEPTION
Fay Slimm. said:

Time is as we here on earth see it but really the moment is all we ever need - good read Louis.

September 6th, 2017 13:28

THE GREAT DECEPTION
poetboy123 said:

A beautiful message!

September 6th, 2017 12:09

THE GREAT DECEPTION
FredPeyer said:

Louis, this poem speaks to me, not yesterday, not tomorrow, but right now, and forevermore!
No choice, had to make it a favorite!

I have been grappling with the concept of time, and the more I think of it, the less I understand it. But it is fascinating and one day I will hopefully reach your level!

September 6th, 2017 11:25

THE GREAT DECEPTION
Michael Edwards said:

Great piece and so well expressed Louis.

September 6th, 2017 10:11



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