Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
FAIR WARNING
John Prophet said:
Nice, may your journey be blessed and fruitful.
September 22nd, 2017 16:15
John Prophet said:
Nice, may your journey be blessed and fruitful.
September 22nd, 2017 16:15
FAIR WARNING
dusk arising said:
Who let that pussycat in here? Everything must change, tis one of the laws of nature be it only death or decay a change will come. But you can doso much better than that with willpower and the good help of friends around you.
September 22nd, 2017 15:31
dusk arising said:
Who let that pussycat in here? Everything must change, tis one of the laws of nature be it only death or decay a change will come. But you can doso much better than that with willpower and the good help of friends around you.
September 22nd, 2017 15:31
FAIR WARNING
lasergraph said:
Great write. I hope your transformation is smooth and event free.
September 22nd, 2017 08:37
lasergraph said:
Great write. I hope your transformation is smooth and event free.
September 22nd, 2017 08:37
FAIR WARNING
malubotelho said:
Great write Louis. We are doing about the same thing. Looking for changes leaving behind what we don\'t need.
September 22nd, 2017 08:34
malubotelho said:
Great write Louis. We are doing about the same thing. Looking for changes leaving behind what we don\'t need.
September 22nd, 2017 08:34
FAIR WARNING
wordseven7 said:
Inner change will reflect outward.
This we all need.....
September 22nd, 2017 08:06
wordseven7 said:
Inner change will reflect outward.
This we all need.....
September 22nd, 2017 08:06
FAIR WARNING
orchidee said:
A fine write L. I believe it\'s the \'inner self\' that needs changing, not (or not only) the \'outward state\' of \'society\' as some abstract thing.
September 22nd, 2017 01:49
orchidee said:
A fine write L. I believe it\'s the \'inner self\' that needs changing, not (or not only) the \'outward state\' of \'society\' as some abstract thing.
September 22nd, 2017 01:49
FAIR WARNING
FredPeyer said:
I think it is nearly impossible to change one\'s character without help. Your plea is perfect!
September 22nd, 2017 01:18
FredPeyer said:
I think it is nearly impossible to change one\'s character without help. Your plea is perfect!
September 22nd, 2017 01:18
FAIR WARNING
Mugsdaddy said:
Kind of a montra for a fresh start. I like it.
Mugsdaddy
September 22nd, 2017 00:37
Mugsdaddy said:
Kind of a montra for a fresh start. I like it.
Mugsdaddy
September 22nd, 2017 00:37
FAIR WARNING
Michael Edwards said:
I see this as a plea to the inner self - great write Louis.
September 22nd, 2017 00:05
Michael Edwards said:
I see this as a plea to the inner self - great write Louis.
September 22nd, 2017 00:05
A HARD LESSON
Goldfinch60 said:
I think with many of us on MPS we find that writing helps us to cope with our lives. There will be an end to your suffering, it may be hard but looking forward is the cure.
September 20th, 2017 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
I think with many of us on MPS we find that writing helps us to cope with our lives. There will be an end to your suffering, it may be hard but looking forward is the cure.
September 20th, 2017 00:43
A HARD LESSON
Fay Slimm. said:
Facing our demons is the way to freedom and as this verse admits this is a hard lesson to learn Louis - \"fury hurts most those who to anger are prone\".
September 19th, 2017 13:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Facing our demons is the way to freedom and as this verse admits this is a hard lesson to learn Louis - \"fury hurts most those who to anger are prone\".
September 19th, 2017 13:39
A HARD LESSON
FredPeyer said:
Louis, while I am one of the lucky ones with no ghosts in my closet, I can instinctively understand where you and others are coming from. While I may not be able to help, I want you all to know that I do feel for you and sincerely hope you will break free of these chains. And I am convinced that writing is the best therapy! So keep on writing, we will be behind you 100%!
September 19th, 2017 12:41
FredPeyer said:
Louis, while I am one of the lucky ones with no ghosts in my closet, I can instinctively understand where you and others are coming from. While I may not be able to help, I want you all to know that I do feel for you and sincerely hope you will break free of these chains. And I am convinced that writing is the best therapy! So keep on writing, we will be behind you 100%!
September 19th, 2017 12:41
A HARD LESSON
malubotelho said:
Louis, I love the way you state your suffering because unresolved matters from your childhood. Like Angelica said reading your poem help us cope with our own problems. Thank you for doing so. I\'m at this process too of going back and put the flashlight on my past to see what I left behind that needs to be reaccessed and brought to light. It is hard for me because I don\'t feel the damage. It is like if it is there I\'m like in comma because I don\'t see it. I will keep looking though. Thanks again
September 19th, 2017 10:15
malubotelho said:
Louis, I love the way you state your suffering because unresolved matters from your childhood. Like Angelica said reading your poem help us cope with our own problems. Thank you for doing so. I\'m at this process too of going back and put the flashlight on my past to see what I left behind that needs to be reaccessed and brought to light. It is hard for me because I don\'t feel the damage. It is like if it is there I\'m like in comma because I don\'t see it. I will keep looking though. Thanks again
September 19th, 2017 10:15
A HARD LESSON
Poetic Dan said:
Words so true
Facing the childhood
I thought I\'d done mine 6 months ago
But today I see I\'m still a long way on that road to go.
Your words give me strength to face tomorrow.
September 19th, 2017 08:14
Poetic Dan said:
Words so true
Facing the childhood
I thought I\'d done mine 6 months ago
But today I see I\'m still a long way on that road to go.
Your words give me strength to face tomorrow.
September 19th, 2017 08:14
VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION
dusk arising said:
Always a better you after such confrontation..... a new day, a new dawn, a new beginning, A NEW YOU.
Heartfelt and expressive.
September 15th, 2017 16:03
dusk arising said:
Always a better you after such confrontation..... a new day, a new dawn, a new beginning, A NEW YOU.
Heartfelt and expressive.
September 15th, 2017 16:03
VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION
malubotelho said:
Thanks for sharing this Louis. Eventually we all have to confront our mental unresolved problems. I myself keep asking if I have any unresolved feeling concerning my childhood and the problems my family went through because of my alcoholic father but I don\'t feel bad about. It is like it does not affect me. But I ask just to make sure.
September 15th, 2017 10:38
malubotelho said:
Thanks for sharing this Louis. Eventually we all have to confront our mental unresolved problems. I myself keep asking if I have any unresolved feeling concerning my childhood and the problems my family went through because of my alcoholic father but I don\'t feel bad about. It is like it does not affect me. But I ask just to make sure.
September 15th, 2017 10:38
VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION
WL Schuett said:
Congratulations on a fine poem and striving to overcome, enough is enough I like that
September 15th, 2017 09:10
WL Schuett said:
Congratulations on a fine poem and striving to overcome, enough is enough I like that
September 15th, 2017 09:10
VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION
myself and me said:
\"Dismissed\", what a relief.
So glad to see you move on with a strong heart.
Very well penned.
September 15th, 2017 07:23
myself and me said:
\"Dismissed\", what a relief.
So glad to see you move on with a strong heart.
Very well penned.
September 15th, 2017 07:23
VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION
Christina8 said:
Great poem and good for you! It\'s a courageous thing to do to \"dismiss\" your childhood grief. I can relate. Great job!
September 15th, 2017 07:17
Christina8 said:
Great poem and good for you! It\'s a courageous thing to do to \"dismiss\" your childhood grief. I can relate. Great job!
September 15th, 2017 07:17
VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION
FredPeyer said:
Congratulations Louis, on a great poem and an even greater victory! May the force be with you!
September 15th, 2017 03:16
FredPeyer said:
Congratulations Louis, on a great poem and an even greater victory! May the force be with you!
September 15th, 2017 03:16
THOUGHTS ON MADNESS
Seek said:
I read Genius first. Together with this, your glorious madness has surely taken root. A philosophical treasure.
September 15th, 2017 01:54
Seek said:
I read Genius first. Together with this, your glorious madness has surely taken root. A philosophical treasure.
September 15th, 2017 01:54
VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION
orchidee said:
A fine write Louis. I shall never win the battle to overcome putting water in people\'s whisky! They will shoot me for it. Well, it saves money if you dilute it! heehee.
September 15th, 2017 01:53
orchidee said:
A fine write Louis. I shall never win the battle to overcome putting water in people\'s whisky! They will shoot me for it. Well, it saves money if you dilute it! heehee.
September 15th, 2017 01:53
GENIUS
Seek said:
And as some writer who I forget wrote about the pleasures of being mad known only to madmen. Your poem makes me yearn for madness! The happy variety for sure! I know there is a streak of that in me, no matter how subtle: I prefer being alone than being surrounded by hordes of sane people, lol. Thanks for sharing that gem.
September 15th, 2017 01:51
Seek said:
And as some writer who I forget wrote about the pleasures of being mad known only to madmen. Your poem makes me yearn for madness! The happy variety for sure! I know there is a streak of that in me, no matter how subtle: I prefer being alone than being surrounded by hordes of sane people, lol. Thanks for sharing that gem.
September 15th, 2017 01:51
VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION
Goldfinch60 said:
Our inner struggle can be debilitating but your strength has overcome your darkness, go on in the light. Good write Louis.
September 15th, 2017 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Our inner struggle can be debilitating but your strength has overcome your darkness, go on in the light. Good write Louis.
September 15th, 2017 01:20
VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION
Frank Prem said:
Bravo Louis. revel in it. Sometimes you have to concede in order to regain momentum. Moving on is its own victory.
September 15th, 2017 01:04
Frank Prem said:
Bravo Louis. revel in it. Sometimes you have to concede in order to regain momentum. Moving on is its own victory.
September 15th, 2017 01:04
VICTORIOUS CAPITULATION
Michael Edwards said:
Not a cry for help as so much poetry is but a shout for victory - I can\'t relate personally with this but I can still feel for the journey you have been on - a testament to a great poem.
September 15th, 2017 00:34
Michael Edwards said:
Not a cry for help as so much poetry is but a shout for victory - I can\'t relate personally with this but I can still feel for the journey you have been on - a testament to a great poem.
September 15th, 2017 00:34
THE RECURRING DREAM
malubotelho said:
Hello Louis. Nice poem. I\'ve read in spiritual books about that collective fantasy, or dream. If it is true we only get to awake after we die. It is quite confuse though because some says after we die some of us still don\'t realize the change because we are not prepared spiritually.
September 13th, 2017 22:48
malubotelho said:
Hello Louis. Nice poem. I\'ve read in spiritual books about that collective fantasy, or dream. If it is true we only get to awake after we die. It is quite confuse though because some says after we die some of us still don\'t realize the change because we are not prepared spiritually.
September 13th, 2017 22:48
THE RECURRING DREAM
MendedFences27 said:
And thusly, you may have found the cure for your recurring dream. Intriguing poem, well written, stirring the imagination. Can dreams remembered be separated from reality? As for life being a dream, it is of course, for what comes after life/? oblivion? Or another dream? Got to go now, got some daydreaming to do. - Phil A.
September 13th, 2017 14:53
MendedFences27 said:
And thusly, you may have found the cure for your recurring dream. Intriguing poem, well written, stirring the imagination. Can dreams remembered be separated from reality? As for life being a dream, it is of course, for what comes after life/? oblivion? Or another dream? Got to go now, got some daydreaming to do. - Phil A.
September 13th, 2017 14:53
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