Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
THE CURSE OF AWARENESS
FredPeyer said:
Louis, I know exactly where you are coming from here. While our immediate environment may be well, the same cannot be said of the whole.
October 13th, 2017 00:08
FredPeyer said:
Louis, I know exactly where you are coming from here. While our immediate environment may be well, the same cannot be said of the whole.
October 13th, 2017 00:08
THE MERRY-GO-ROUND
John Prophet said:
Hi Louis,
I like you are in the 4th quarter of the game and can relate to your words.
Nice work!
October 11th, 2017 16:41
John Prophet said:
Hi Louis,
I like you are in the 4th quarter of the game and can relate to your words.
Nice work!
October 11th, 2017 16:41
THE MERRY-GO-ROUND
WL Schuett said:
Very thought provoking is this about life cycles or reincarnation, good poem
October 11th, 2017 07:51
WL Schuett said:
Very thought provoking is this about life cycles or reincarnation, good poem
October 11th, 2017 07:51
THE MERRY-GO-ROUND
orchidee said:
You going round in circles there? Have a go on the slide, or hobby-horse, if you\'re in a playground!
Or - Stop the world, I want to get off\'?
October 11th, 2017 01:54
orchidee said:
You going round in circles there? Have a go on the slide, or hobby-horse, if you\'re in a playground!
Or - Stop the world, I want to get off\'?
October 11th, 2017 01:54
THE MERRY-GO-ROUND
Goldfinch60 said:
That Merry-go-round is our life and it doesn\'t necessarily go round in the same way, new challenges are always there ahead of us and they can be wonderful. Good write.
October 11th, 2017 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
That Merry-go-round is our life and it doesn\'t necessarily go round in the same way, new challenges are always there ahead of us and they can be wonderful. Good write.
October 11th, 2017 01:07
THE MERRY-GO-ROUND
FredPeyer said:
I am with you Louis, BUT, how do you know that all the challenges have been met and all the life lessons have been learned? The answers lie on the other side, where you will have your de-briefing and R&R, before starting all over again.
Great poem
October 11th, 2017 00:36
FredPeyer said:
I am with you Louis, BUT, how do you know that all the challenges have been met and all the life lessons have been learned? The answers lie on the other side, where you will have your de-briefing and R&R, before starting all over again.
Great poem
October 11th, 2017 00:36
DOUBLE VISION
Poetic Dan said:
As I read your words my mind was set free, even struggling to finish them as my focus became blurd.
Brilliant!
October 10th, 2017 10:29
Poetic Dan said:
As I read your words my mind was set free, even struggling to finish them as my focus became blurd.
Brilliant!
October 10th, 2017 10:29
DOUBLE VISION
malubotelho said:
Great write Louis. I thought I was the only one distracted here. I say I have a scattered mind that flys everywhere and my eyes flutters more than a butterfly. Is this distraction or interest? I\'m not sure. Lovely little piece.
October 9th, 2017 12:27
malubotelho said:
Great write Louis. I thought I was the only one distracted here. I say I have a scattered mind that flys everywhere and my eyes flutters more than a butterfly. Is this distraction or interest? I\'m not sure. Lovely little piece.
October 9th, 2017 12:27
DOUBLE VISION
FredPeyer said:
Your excellent poem made me re-evaluate my own vision, and I realized that I must have a third eye, the one looking backwards at the road traveled. You do have this great abillity to say so much with very little. Kudos!
October 9th, 2017 12:19
FredPeyer said:
Your excellent poem made me re-evaluate my own vision, and I realized that I must have a third eye, the one looking backwards at the road traveled. You do have this great abillity to say so much with very little. Kudos!
October 9th, 2017 12:19
DOUBLE VISION
Goldfinch60 said:
WE should always look at both our lives and what is beyond them. Good deep write.
October 9th, 2017 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
WE should always look at both our lives and what is beyond them. Good deep write.
October 9th, 2017 00:56
IS IT TIME?
malubotelho said:
You are a sweet raising that flag and writing about a complicated subject in this compact simple way. This is genius. I have a long writing waiting to be published and I\'m editing it so I can talk about this without creating too much commotion. You just did and I love you for that. Yes, it is time to awake. I just don\'t know how it can happen. Thanks for your writing Louis.
October 6th, 2017 12:08
malubotelho said:
You are a sweet raising that flag and writing about a complicated subject in this compact simple way. This is genius. I have a long writing waiting to be published and I\'m editing it so I can talk about this without creating too much commotion. You just did and I love you for that. Yes, it is time to awake. I just don\'t know how it can happen. Thanks for your writing Louis.
October 6th, 2017 12:08
IS IT TIME?
FredPeyer said:
Your intriguing poem made me think of the French Revolution, the birth of the USA, and the Love and Peace movement of the 60\'s. With the power of today\'s social media, could the next \'revolution\' be a world-wide one by the \'little people\'?
October 6th, 2017 11:42
FredPeyer said:
Your intriguing poem made me think of the French Revolution, the birth of the USA, and the Love and Peace movement of the 60\'s. With the power of today\'s social media, could the next \'revolution\' be a world-wide one by the \'little people\'?
October 6th, 2017 11:42
IS IT TIME?
lasergraph said:
Too many stay asleep and try to hide from the nightmare of reality. Great write.
October 6th, 2017 09:17
lasergraph said:
Too many stay asleep and try to hide from the nightmare of reality. Great write.
October 6th, 2017 09:17
IS IT TIME?
John Prophet said:
If it bleeds it leads.
24/7 news and technology
Is squeezing our brains.
It best to ignore it best you can!
October 6th, 2017 07:51
John Prophet said:
If it bleeds it leads.
24/7 news and technology
Is squeezing our brains.
It best to ignore it best you can!
October 6th, 2017 07:51
IS IT TIME?
Goldfinch60 said:
This dream life we are leading is becoming a nightmare, hopefully soon we will return to the dream of love in all the world.
October 6th, 2017 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
This dream life we are leading is becoming a nightmare, hopefully soon we will return to the dream of love in all the world.
October 6th, 2017 02:12
IS IT TIME?
orchidee said:
But we only get to hear mostly bad news in the world, terrible as it is.
October 6th, 2017 01:41
orchidee said:
But we only get to hear mostly bad news in the world, terrible as it is.
October 6th, 2017 01:41
IS IT TIME?
Michael Edwards said:
I woke 2 hours ago and did hear your alarm - I sometimes think we are living a nightmare with all the bad news - we really do need to wake up - great work Louis.
October 6th, 2017 00:10
Michael Edwards said:
I woke 2 hours ago and did hear your alarm - I sometimes think we are living a nightmare with all the bad news - we really do need to wake up - great work Louis.
October 6th, 2017 00:10
IT\'S ABOUT TIME
malubotelho said:
I would love to scape to 7th heaven. 5th is just the beginning and some part is dangerous too. To travel we need to first conquer our mind. Are you prepared to loose your body and stay there?
October 5th, 2017 14:36
malubotelho said:
I would love to scape to 7th heaven. 5th is just the beginning and some part is dangerous too. To travel we need to first conquer our mind. Are you prepared to loose your body and stay there?
October 5th, 2017 14:36
THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM
John Prophet said:
AI will not have an endocrine system, will not be flushed with hormones which over runs our intellect and logic.
AI will the this as being flawed.
October 5th, 2017 05:47
John Prophet said:
AI will not have an endocrine system, will not be flushed with hormones which over runs our intellect and logic.
AI will the this as being flawed.
October 5th, 2017 05:47
IT\'S ABOUT TIME
orchidee said:
It\'s the 4th today. We can\'t skip over it - it\'s here all day! it\'ll be the 5th tomorrow! (heehee).
October 4th, 2017 02:14
orchidee said:
It\'s the 4th today. We can\'t skip over it - it\'s here all day! it\'ll be the 5th tomorrow! (heehee).
October 4th, 2017 02:14
IT\'S ABOUT TIME
FredPeyer said:
Count me in, Louis! MPS will survive into any dimension and come out of the change smelling like roses.
Great poem!
October 4th, 2017 01:55
FredPeyer said:
Count me in, Louis! MPS will survive into any dimension and come out of the change smelling like roses.
Great poem!
October 4th, 2017 01:55
IT\'S ABOUT TIME
Michael Edwards said:
I have a great concern that the direction on the sat navs (gps) of the most influential leaders in the world all point to different routes and destinations but, yes, the next \'dimension\' is travelling towards us fast.
October 4th, 2017 00:26
Michael Edwards said:
I have a great concern that the direction on the sat navs (gps) of the most influential leaders in the world all point to different routes and destinations but, yes, the next \'dimension\' is travelling towards us fast.
October 4th, 2017 00:26
THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM
malubotelho said:
I agree with Brian. We see too much science fiction and understand little about science. I remember when I was a child I would watch the Jetsons and dreamed about living like them. I\'m almost sixty and never happened. And all they had was flying vehicles and everything automated. Still far from us. AI I don\'t believe no one can be perfect or better than Gods science.
October 2nd, 2017 08:43
malubotelho said:
I agree with Brian. We see too much science fiction and understand little about science. I remember when I was a child I would watch the Jetsons and dreamed about living like them. I\'m almost sixty and never happened. And all they had was flying vehicles and everything automated. Still far from us. AI I don\'t believe no one can be perfect or better than Gods science.
October 2nd, 2017 08:43
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