Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs



PASSING THROUGH
John Prophet said:

Yup, beyond the vail. Very nice.

October 5th, 2017 05:42

IT\'S ABOUT TIME
WL Schuett said:

I\'ll take the 5th , also

October 4th, 2017 07:51

IT\'S ABOUT TIME
orchidee said:

It\'s the 4th today. We can\'t skip over it - it\'s here all day! it\'ll be the 5th tomorrow! (heehee).

October 4th, 2017 02:14

IT\'S ABOUT TIME
FredPeyer said:

Count me in, Louis! MPS will survive into any dimension and come out of the change smelling like roses.
Great poem!

October 4th, 2017 01:55

IT\'S ABOUT TIME
Goldfinch60 said:

I am with you Louis.

October 4th, 2017 01:06

IT\'S ABOUT TIME
Michael Edwards said:

I have a great concern that the direction on the sat navs (gps) of the most influential leaders in the world all point to different routes and destinations but, yes, the next \'dimension\' is travelling towards us fast.

October 4th, 2017 00:26

THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM
malubotelho said:

I agree with Brian. We see too much science fiction and understand little about science. I remember when I was a child I would watch the Jetsons and dreamed about living like them. I\'m almost sixty and never happened. And all they had was flying vehicles and everything automated. Still far from us. AI I don\'t believe no one can be perfect or better than Gods science.

October 2nd, 2017 08:43

THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS LOUIS ~ For a very reasoned and well crafted Poem on AI ! To anticipate the future and appreciate the impact of AI we must fully understand the Nature of Man ! Before the Industrial Revolution we were more heavily dependent on Animal Power and some Developing Countries still are. Horses for Travel ~ Farm work and Convenience ~ Elephants for heavier work ~ Dogs for a whole range of activities etc etc. Planet of the Apes ~ exciting but JUST a MYTH ~ H Sapiens is not just an Advanced Ape he is a unique Creation able to harness and control the Environment ~ live anywhere on the Planet and even (if the need arises) colonise MARS ! In Industry many \"jobs\" are now carried out by Robots ~ but they don\'t sit in the boardroom and never will. AI is \"created\" by Humans and cannot control us ~ we will always control them ! Even one of the greatest SF Theats to Mankind the DALEKS were controlled by a \"living organism\" not a computer. For a rational assessment of the threat (or otherwise) of AI we must be influenced by SCIENCE FACT and not SCIENCE FICTION ~ OK Yours BRIAN. Please take a ride in my HOT AIR BALLOON ~ Thanks B.

October 2nd, 2017 07:47

THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM
Accidental Poet said:

I see both sides of this write. But one thing I\'d just now thought of, is how man created the atomic bomb which could destroy us all. And man creates AI, which if man takes technology far enough, could teach AI to feel emotions of love, fear, elation, aggression, vengeance, and so many other emotions. No doubt, a precarious scenario it could come to be. But...an excellent write Luis. ; )

October 2nd, 2017 05:25

THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM
FredPeyer said:

Louis, you are touching on an incredibly complex and interesting thought here. How far will AI be able to go? One of my brother in laws is a University professor involved in AI. He also has a degree in philosophy. He thinks AI will relatively soon be incorporated into many aspects of computers, but in the end we, the humans, are still way ahead. Let\'s hope so, I don\'t want a robot to fall in love with my wife!!!! ;-)

October 2nd, 2017 03:29

THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m anything for an easy life- window cleaner, vacuum cleaners, lawn mower all battery operated - just have to remember to recharge them each use. Just wish I could switch them on and they\'d operate themselves. Am I digressing ? Good write Louis.

October 2nd, 2017 02:39

THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM
orchidee said:

A fine write as a poem. Man surely has to make such beings in the first place, so A.I. beings can\'t make themselves. I got me own questions, such as \'Has E.T. gone home really\'? heehee.

October 2nd, 2017 01:53

THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM
Goldfinch60 said:

Data exists. Good write, A-I is with us and will be teaching us before very long, but it will not be able to write poetry because to do that you have to have a soul and be able to feel.

October 2nd, 2017 01:27

PASSING THROUGH
Edward Charles McDevitt said:

We\'re all just passing through Louis, however, the way you put the words make it seem like a magical, mystery ride and, I enjoyed reading this SO much! Thanks for sharing Louis!

October 1st, 2017 08:38

PASSING THROUGH
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 29th, 2017 12:51

PASSING THROUGH
malubotelho said:

Louis, this is really living in the now. A free soul can not be attached. It is like love. True love, just love and never think how long it is going to be because life and love just moves freely and is eternity. You have a beautiful soul.

September 29th, 2017 09:14

PASSING THROUGH
WL Schuett said:

Very thoughtful I never go far but I wander constantly from idea to idea , art to music to poetry
Very cool poem

September 29th, 2017 09:08

PASSING THROUGH
FredPeyer said:

You know Louis, that last stanza, which is great by the way, could even refer to our whole lives on this earth. I really like this poem, it made me think!

September 29th, 2017 02:41

PASSING THROUGH
orchidee said:

Good write Louis. You staying with MPS a good while?

September 29th, 2017 01:46

PASSING THROUGH
Goldfinch60 said:

We all have our travels to continue and we all have pauses but some of those pauses become part of our lives. Good write and I do hope that your pause here will be for a long time Louis.

September 29th, 2017 01:36

PASSING THROUGH
Michael Edwards said:

Got to be one of your very best Louis. I rarely save work but this one is definitely going into my favourites,

September 29th, 2017 00:12

THE UNFOLDING FIASCO
Christina8 said:

Very interesting write. I can tell you have thought about this a lot; Thanks for sharing your views. Again, great poem.

September 27th, 2017 21:09

THE UNFOLDING FIASCO
malubotelho said:

Louis, what a great write. Leave the word there for those that are interested. If is a fiasco or not who can tell. If anyone comes back to say about it, no one believes anyway. The God\'s comedy. Were we created for God\'s to play?

September 27th, 2017 20:46

THE UNFOLDING FIASCO
Thoff1 said:

This is very thought provoking. I like it a lot!

September 27th, 2017 18:28

THE UNFOLDING FIASCO
FredPeyer said:

Louis, you wrote from MY heart! While I could not write it as beautiful as you, the content speaks to me. It is a fiasco, let\'s just hope we can make up for it in our future lifetimes, where I am sure I will meet you again!!!

September 27th, 2017 11:21

THE UNFOLDING FIASCO
WL Schuett said:

Very profound Louis , you\'ve spent sometime thinking about this , well done

September 27th, 2017 09:16

THE UNFOLDING FIASCO
Michael Edwards said:

Fay calls it a journey through life on earth and the poem has rather eerily depicted the shape of coffin - anyway, whatever, a great write Louis.

September 27th, 2017 08:33

THE UNFOLDING FIASCO
Fay Slimm. said:

Enjoyed this read about our journey through life on earth - and the fiasco made of what the experience should teach us. Thanks for sharing it and for the admirable form you used.

September 27th, 2017 06:57

THE UNFOLDING FIASCO
orchidee said:

Good write L. And yet there will be this emphasis, I feel, as man does not naturally think on spiritual things. In fact, it says in the good book that man can\'t naturally understand spiritual things, but needs \'help from above\' to do so.

September 27th, 2017 01:47

THE UNFOLDING FIASCO
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LOUIS an interesting concept to make one ponder on HOMO SAPIENS ~ so early in the morning ! The fact of the Matter is if ADAM & EVE (check my Fusion for a picture of EVE !) walked into a NUDIST COLONY ~ they would look no different from 21st Century Man & Woman ! We never evolved from Simians we were created NOT a little Higher then the Apes but in \"The Likeness of GOD\" ~ just a \"Little lower than the ANGELS !\". We are Spiritual Beings infinitely different from the rest of the Animal Kingdom ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN

September 27th, 2017 00:43



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