Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
THE LITTLE THINGS
Fay Slimm. said:
Whatever the form this reads so appealingly with a super last line Louis - a gem of poem and must be put in my favourites.
October 23rd, 2017 16:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Whatever the form this reads so appealingly with a super last line Louis - a gem of poem and must be put in my favourites.
October 23rd, 2017 16:28
THE LITTLE THINGS
lasergraph said:
A good write, as we ponder the structures of life.
October 23rd, 2017 15:04
lasergraph said:
A good write, as we ponder the structures of life.
October 23rd, 2017 15:04
THE LITTLE THINGS
WL Schuett said:
Very good Louis, your formal poem worked well did you enjoy writing it as much as a free formed poem ?
October 23rd, 2017 07:45
WL Schuett said:
Very good Louis, your formal poem worked well did you enjoy writing it as much as a free formed poem ?
October 23rd, 2017 07:45
THE LITTLE THINGS
orchidee said:
I\'m no expert on poetic forms. I suppose most of mine is formal, e.g. lines 1 and 2 rhyme, and lines 3 and 4 rhyme, etc. A fairly simply layout, otherwise too complicated and it would take hours to write!
Stanza 2 - Erm, yes! Both I think.
October 23rd, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
I\'m no expert on poetic forms. I suppose most of mine is formal, e.g. lines 1 and 2 rhyme, and lines 3 and 4 rhyme, etc. A fairly simply layout, otherwise too complicated and it would take hours to write!
Stanza 2 - Erm, yes! Both I think.
October 23rd, 2017 01:52
THE LITTLE THINGS
Goldfinch60 said:
I don\'t \'do\' formal poetry but it is a good write and very meaningful.
October 23rd, 2017 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
I don\'t \'do\' formal poetry but it is a good write and very meaningful.
October 23rd, 2017 00:58
THE LITTLE THINGS
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure it falls into a specific category other than quatrain but has as it\'s so structured it has elegant form - good write Louis.
October 23rd, 2017 00:21
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure it falls into a specific category other than quatrain but has as it\'s so structured it has elegant form - good write Louis.
October 23rd, 2017 00:21
A GLANCE
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes Louis - meeting with sudden eye contact can give a connection sans words - you write it so well in this powerful read.
October 20th, 2017 11:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes Louis - meeting with sudden eye contact can give a connection sans words - you write it so well in this powerful read.
October 20th, 2017 11:56
A GLANCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LOUIS ~ In my experience too ~ the EYES have it ! Thanks for sharing ~ please check my POEM and FUSION on Color ~ Yours BRIAN
October 20th, 2017 10:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LOUIS ~ In my experience too ~ the EYES have it ! Thanks for sharing ~ please check my POEM and FUSION on Color ~ Yours BRIAN
October 20th, 2017 10:55
A GLANCE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so very true. That link with the eyes of strangers can be so meaningful.
October 20th, 2017 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so very true. That link with the eyes of strangers can be so meaningful.
October 20th, 2017 01:13
A GLANCE
Laura🌻 said:
That connection with one’s eyes is very powerful! Whether negative or positive, no words are needed to communicate!
The last two lines summarizes very well!
A great write!
October 20th, 2017 00:29
Laura🌻 said:
That connection with one’s eyes is very powerful! Whether negative or positive, no words are needed to communicate!
The last two lines summarizes very well!
A great write!
October 20th, 2017 00:29
A GLANCE
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Louis - eye contact is so important. My daughter has a new pup which she is currently training and eye contact plays such an important role. Must try it out on humans. lol
October 20th, 2017 00:12
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one Louis - eye contact is so important. My daughter has a new pup which she is currently training and eye contact plays such an important role. Must try it out on humans. lol
October 20th, 2017 00:12
THEY SAY
avigail said:
i like this poem... i\'m into the now past, past :))))
October 18th, 2017 16:11
avigail said:
i like this poem... i\'m into the now past, past :))))
October 18th, 2017 16:11
TOO BAD
FredPeyer said:
Louis, the way I see this poem, the who, what and why is not relevant. The poem tells me not to give up, to keep on going, to see failure as an opportunity, to learn from past mistakes.
Very well written, like it a lot!
October 18th, 2017 11:29
FredPeyer said:
Louis, the way I see this poem, the who, what and why is not relevant. The poem tells me not to give up, to keep on going, to see failure as an opportunity, to learn from past mistakes.
Very well written, like it a lot!
October 18th, 2017 11:29
TOO BAD
Christina8 said:
Good write! This is exactly how I write my poetry....lol. 2 out of 3 poems never make it to the publish button!
October 18th, 2017 08:24
Christina8 said:
Good write! This is exactly how I write my poetry....lol. 2 out of 3 poems never make it to the publish button!
October 18th, 2017 08:24
TOO BAD
WL Schuett said:
My life in a nutshell ... so close ... nope ....on to the next ...cool poem 😎
October 18th, 2017 07:54
WL Schuett said:
My life in a nutshell ... so close ... nope ....on to the next ...cool poem 😎
October 18th, 2017 07:54
THEY SAY
PACollin said:
beautiful rumination. May we all spend more time in the head space that created this piece.
October 17th, 2017 12:51
PACollin said:
beautiful rumination. May we all spend more time in the head space that created this piece.
October 17th, 2017 12:51
THEY SAY
Fay Slimm. said:
All we can reasonably handle is the now and you have versed this so clearly here for us Louis - - a brilliant write.
October 16th, 2017 16:47
Fay Slimm. said:
All we can reasonably handle is the now and you have versed this so clearly here for us Louis - - a brilliant write.
October 16th, 2017 16:47
THEY SAY
FredPeyer said:
Another great and thought provoking poem, Louis.
Living in the now is what we are supposed to be doing in this life. Live and learn!
The reviews of our past lives will come after we cross over. At least that is my take on this.
October 16th, 2017 10:58
FredPeyer said:
Another great and thought provoking poem, Louis.
Living in the now is what we are supposed to be doing in this life. Live and learn!
The reviews of our past lives will come after we cross over. At least that is my take on this.
October 16th, 2017 10:58
THEY SAY
MendedFences27 said:
An excellent write. \"To what end\"....exactly! If there were past lives then there must be future ones, so enjoy the one you are living. - Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 09:31
MendedFences27 said:
An excellent write. \"To what end\"....exactly! If there were past lives then there must be future ones, so enjoy the one you are living. - Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 09:31
THEY SAY
orchidee said:
Ain\'t we got enough to do with this \'present life\', let alone past lives - which I think is bunkum myself!? A fine write as a poem.
October 16th, 2017 02:04
orchidee said:
Ain\'t we got enough to do with this \'present life\', let alone past lives - which I think is bunkum myself!? A fine write as a poem.
October 16th, 2017 02:04
THEY SAY
Poetic Dan said:
It all matters but not as much as being here now. Great work!
October 16th, 2017 02:03
Poetic Dan said:
It all matters but not as much as being here now. Great work!
October 16th, 2017 02:03
THEY SAY
Goldfinch60 said:
Now is so important, grab every moment, they are wonderful. Good write Louis.
October 16th, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Now is so important, grab every moment, they are wonderful. Good write Louis.
October 16th, 2017 01:10
THE CURSE OF AWARENESS
MendedFences27 said:
Inner peace comes with the acceptance of the outer world as it exists. We can control only our place in it. Personally, I believe the world gets better every day. Happiness is attainable to more persons on this Earth than ever before. Hope you\'re feeling better, soon. Well done poem. - Phil A.
October 13th, 2017 12:20
MendedFences27 said:
Inner peace comes with the acceptance of the outer world as it exists. We can control only our place in it. Personally, I believe the world gets better every day. Happiness is attainable to more persons on this Earth than ever before. Hope you\'re feeling better, soon. Well done poem. - Phil A.
October 13th, 2017 12:20
THE CURSE OF AWARENESS
WL Schuett said:
I can\'t think global without some fear and depression. The world is a dangerous place and getting worse , I wish we had some leaders I had some confidence in .....
October 13th, 2017 07:45
WL Schuett said:
I can\'t think global without some fear and depression. The world is a dangerous place and getting worse , I wish we had some leaders I had some confidence in .....
October 13th, 2017 07:45
THE CURSE OF AWARENESS
Poetic Dan said:
Inspirational writing, I feel these words so deep. This will change but from our prospective of time, it may take awhile ;)
October 13th, 2017 02:07
Poetic Dan said:
Inspirational writing, I feel these words so deep. This will change but from our prospective of time, it may take awhile ;)
October 13th, 2017 02:07
THE CURSE OF AWARENESS
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'peace\' within oneself can be hard to reach but in life we just need to keep on trying to reach it, it is there and it can be reached but the wonder of trying to reach it is our life\'s work.
Very good write Louis.
October 13th, 2017 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'peace\' within oneself can be hard to reach but in life we just need to keep on trying to reach it, it is there and it can be reached but the wonder of trying to reach it is our life\'s work.
Very good write Louis.
October 13th, 2017 00:55
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