Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
TEACHINGS
Michael Edwards said:
So true but controversially \'taught\' can often be a synonym for \'told\' - great work Louis
December 13th, 2017 02:31
Michael Edwards said:
So true but controversially \'taught\' can often be a synonym for \'told\' - great work Louis
December 13th, 2017 02:31
TEACHINGS
Synesthesia said:
Indeed, curious!
Not a wasted word, nice work.
Only thing, my penny’s worth, take out your commas, add one after above. Just mho.
S
December 13th, 2017 00:09
Synesthesia said:
Indeed, curious!
Not a wasted word, nice work.
Only thing, my penny’s worth, take out your commas, add one after above. Just mho.
S
December 13th, 2017 00:09
FUTURE REFLECTIONS
Realistic Venture said:
I think that was powerful, when you said \"if we simply avoid destroying ourselves first.\" That is the challenge we face...
Overall a deep poem. Noice!
December 11th, 2017 21:19
Realistic Venture said:
I think that was powerful, when you said \"if we simply avoid destroying ourselves first.\" That is the challenge we face...
Overall a deep poem. Noice!
December 11th, 2017 21:19
FUTURE REFLECTIONS
WL Schuett said:
I tend to think time is simultaneous , but who knows , another thoughtful writing from you . Well done
December 11th, 2017 08:45
WL Schuett said:
I tend to think time is simultaneous , but who knows , another thoughtful writing from you . Well done
December 11th, 2017 08:45
FUTURE REFLECTIONS
orchidee said:
Well, I would say we can imagine it to a certain degree. There\'s also interacting with others, sometimes having to do what others say, so there\'s a balance, I think.
Meanwhile - Am I me? Is that me in the mirror? Yep, cos the mirror cracked. It always does when it see me! Oh and I got headache thinking this deep first thing of a morning! heehee.
December 11th, 2017 02:55
orchidee said:
Well, I would say we can imagine it to a certain degree. There\'s also interacting with others, sometimes having to do what others say, so there\'s a balance, I think.
Meanwhile - Am I me? Is that me in the mirror? Yep, cos the mirror cracked. It always does when it see me! Oh and I got headache thinking this deep first thing of a morning! heehee.
December 11th, 2017 02:55
FUTURE REFLECTIONS
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? One of the most telling questions in our life. Good write.
December 11th, 2017 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? One of the most telling questions in our life. Good write.
December 11th, 2017 02:49
FUTURE REFLECTIONS
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, interesting concept, Louis! That future could have been yesterday. Maybe in a different dimension.
December 11th, 2017 02:36
FredPeyer said:
Well penned, interesting concept, Louis! That future could have been yesterday. Maybe in a different dimension.
December 11th, 2017 02:36
FUTURE REFLECTIONS
Michael Edwards said:
If only, if only.... great thoughts Louis.
December 11th, 2017 01:05
Michael Edwards said:
If only, if only.... great thoughts Louis.
December 11th, 2017 01:05
POETRY IS
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve been pointed your direction
Glad I did as your mirror inspired
More of your wonderful wisdom
I shall give my own as you have
Thank you again for the idea!
December 10th, 2017 09:31
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve been pointed your direction
Glad I did as your mirror inspired
More of your wonderful wisdom
I shall give my own as you have
Thank you again for the idea!
December 10th, 2017 09:31
POETRY IS
Accidental Poet said:
Fred had challenged me Louis, so I\'ll be doing a \"Poetry Is\" too. Great write here of your own.
December 9th, 2017 15:03
Accidental Poet said:
Fred had challenged me Louis, so I\'ll be doing a \"Poetry Is\" too. Great write here of your own.
December 9th, 2017 15:03
POETRY IS
kevin browne said:
Poetry is
all Gods light
all Gods darkness
all Gods words.
December 8th, 2017 13:38
kevin browne said:
Poetry is
all Gods light
all Gods darkness
all Gods words.
December 8th, 2017 13:38
POETRY IS
FredPeyer said:
Very eloquent definition of poetry. I admire your penmanship, Louis.
But (there is always a but) I do think that there are many more definitions that are equally valid. Be it as it may, your poem is excellent.
December 8th, 2017 03:37
FredPeyer said:
Very eloquent definition of poetry. I admire your penmanship, Louis.
But (there is always a but) I do think that there are many more definitions that are equally valid. Be it as it may, your poem is excellent.
December 8th, 2017 03:37
PASSING STRANGERS
FredPeyer said:
Definitely a favorite, Louis!
You do have a gift of getting to the essential in a very short time (or in very few words).
Btw, any idea of what I should say when I finally meet myself? \'Hi, how do you do?\' just doesn\'t feel right.
December 6th, 2017 02:59
FredPeyer said:
Definitely a favorite, Louis!
You do have a gift of getting to the essential in a very short time (or in very few words).
Btw, any idea of what I should say when I finally meet myself? \'Hi, how do you do?\' just doesn\'t feel right.
December 6th, 2017 02:59
PASSING STRANGERS
orchidee said:
Do you mean like going shopping and meeting our self, who has just done the shopping, and is returning home?!
Erm, you\'ve not quite understood this Orchi. lol.
December 6th, 2017 02:40
orchidee said:
Do you mean like going shopping and meeting our self, who has just done the shopping, and is returning home?!
Erm, you\'ve not quite understood this Orchi. lol.
December 6th, 2017 02:40
PASSING STRANGERS
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, we must know ourselves to be able to move forward in our lives.
December 6th, 2017 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, we must know ourselves to be able to move forward in our lives.
December 6th, 2017 02:28
THE PERPETUAL PRODUCTION
FredPeyer said:
Wow, Louis, you described life perfectly. \'A play without an ending\' is the only line I cannot agree with, am thinking more of \'A play without known ending\', since in my interpretation of the poem as life, it will end, we just don\'t know when or how. But that is only me and not a criticism. Beautiful poem, definitely a favorite!
December 4th, 2017 03:43
FredPeyer said:
Wow, Louis, you described life perfectly. \'A play without an ending\' is the only line I cannot agree with, am thinking more of \'A play without known ending\', since in my interpretation of the poem as life, it will end, we just don\'t know when or how. But that is only me and not a criticism. Beautiful poem, definitely a favorite!
December 4th, 2017 03:43
THE PERPETUAL PRODUCTION
orchidee said:
I see what you mean, yet I don\'t go along much with \'All the world\'s a stage\', etc. A good write Louis.
December 4th, 2017 02:54
orchidee said:
I see what you mean, yet I don\'t go along much with \'All the world\'s a stage\', etc. A good write Louis.
December 4th, 2017 02:54
THE PERPETUAL PRODUCTION
Michael Edwards said:
And we play the part but the curtain will fall - we simply don\'t know when. This is a superb poem Louis and so true - nice one.
December 4th, 2017 01:23
Michael Edwards said:
And we play the part but the curtain will fall - we simply don\'t know when. This is a superb poem Louis and so true - nice one.
December 4th, 2017 01:23
THE PERPETUAL PRODUCTION
Goldfinch60 said:
We must not stop as that audition will lead us into our lives.
December 4th, 2017 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
We must not stop as that audition will lead us into our lives.
December 4th, 2017 01:16
THE CAVE
Fay Slimm. said:
Your perception of autism brought out in these lines is so moving to read Louis -- this affliction is so often misunderstood. Keeping this verse in my favourites dear friend.
December 1st, 2017 17:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Your perception of autism brought out in these lines is so moving to read Louis -- this affliction is so often misunderstood. Keeping this verse in my favourites dear friend.
December 1st, 2017 17:26
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