Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
THE BEAST
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading this makes my heart expand in sympathy for all such young victims dear Louis - - if it was written from experience my wish if for love\'s gentle healing to bring its peace.
January 11th, 2018 06:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading this makes my heart expand in sympathy for all such young victims dear Louis - - if it was written from experience my wish if for love\'s gentle healing to bring its peace.
January 11th, 2018 06:15
THE BEAST
orchidee said:
A fine write Louis. Healing can come I believe - call it emotional healing; healing of the soul; healing of the mind; inner healing; or whatever we may call it. Maybe a combination of one or more of the above.
January 11th, 2018 02:22
orchidee said:
A fine write Louis. Healing can come I believe - call it emotional healing; healing of the soul; healing of the mind; inner healing; or whatever we may call it. Maybe a combination of one or more of the above.
January 11th, 2018 02:22
THE BEAST
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong words, I, like Michael, have never suffered abuse but one of my young relatives did and it is the one thing that I cannot reconcile with the idea of Christian forgiveness, if I see that person I will swing for him.
I pray that the peace and joy within you will not all be sucked up.
January 11th, 2018 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong words, I, like Michael, have never suffered abuse but one of my young relatives did and it is the one thing that I cannot reconcile with the idea of Christian forgiveness, if I see that person I will swing for him.
I pray that the peace and joy within you will not all be sucked up.
January 11th, 2018 02:17
THE BEAST
Resa71 said:
I deeply feel those words you wrote. My father was extremely abusive. Mostly mentally and emotionally to my sister and I. Very physical towards my Mother. I’ve raised my daughter, I’m currently raising my 7 year old son, who is very challenging. To this day, I have to sometimes stop, remind myself not to lash out the way my father did. I’m ashamed of the beast that will forever dwell inside me.Thank you for sharing that amazing poem.
January 11th, 2018 01:57
Resa71 said:
I deeply feel those words you wrote. My father was extremely abusive. Mostly mentally and emotionally to my sister and I. Very physical towards my Mother. I’ve raised my daughter, I’m currently raising my 7 year old son, who is very challenging. To this day, I have to sometimes stop, remind myself not to lash out the way my father did. I’m ashamed of the beast that will forever dwell inside me.Thank you for sharing that amazing poem.
January 11th, 2018 01:57
THE BEAST
Michael Edwards said:
I have never suffered from abuse and dread to think of the effects it can cause - but this is a strong powerful write - good work.
January 11th, 2018 01:06
Michael Edwards said:
I have never suffered from abuse and dread to think of the effects it can cause - but this is a strong powerful write - good work.
January 11th, 2018 01:06
TO A GRANDCHILD IN PASSING
Poetic Dan said:
Tingling all over what a beautiful writing, this means so much to me right now thank you.
January 10th, 2018 13:04
Poetic Dan said:
Tingling all over what a beautiful writing, this means so much to me right now thank you.
January 10th, 2018 13:04
THEY SAY
Elsie said:
Yes, it is, the PERFECT PRESENT. Simple effective writing. Lovely!
January 6th, 2018 20:56
Elsie said:
Yes, it is, the PERFECT PRESENT. Simple effective writing. Lovely!
January 6th, 2018 20:56
TO A GRANDCHILD IN PASSING
Michael Edwards said:
Congratulations Louis on both the birth of your granddaughter and yet another great scribe,
January 4th, 2018 02:45
Michael Edwards said:
Congratulations Louis on both the birth of your granddaughter and yet another great scribe,
January 4th, 2018 02:45
TO A GRANDCHILD IN PASSING
Goldfinch60 said:
Super Louis, those stars will certainly be within her reach with you as her guide.
January 4th, 2018 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Super Louis, those stars will certainly be within her reach with you as her guide.
January 4th, 2018 01:18
TO A GRANDCHILD IN PASSING
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful Louis! And it is also fitting for me and my new just over a month old grandson.
January 4th, 2018 00:21
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful Louis! And it is also fitting for me and my new just over a month old grandson.
January 4th, 2018 00:21
THE ENCOUNTER
Seeker said:
As Winston Churchill said, \"If you are going through hell, keep going\". For some though, this is all the heaven they\'ll ever know. A novel idea Louis and a well crafted piece. Bravo!
January 2nd, 2018 14:38
Seeker said:
As Winston Churchill said, \"If you are going through hell, keep going\". For some though, this is all the heaven they\'ll ever know. A novel idea Louis and a well crafted piece. Bravo!
January 2nd, 2018 14:38
FUTURE REFLECTIONS
poelove said:
I\'ve always thought that\'s the way life works...the focus has to be intense-as intense as the imagry...today I imagine I can be a writer of poetry..tomorrow I must remain focused..good poem louis/food for thought
December 29th, 2017 21:26
poelove said:
I\'ve always thought that\'s the way life works...the focus has to be intense-as intense as the imagry...today I imagine I can be a writer of poetry..tomorrow I must remain focused..good poem louis/food for thought
December 29th, 2017 21:26
THE MAN I KNEW
FredPeyer said:
Louis, this poem is incredible! Love the idea, the words, the structure!
You are one Hell-of-a-poet!
December 21st, 2017 12:01
FredPeyer said:
Louis, this poem is incredible! Love the idea, the words, the structure!
You are one Hell-of-a-poet!
December 21st, 2017 12:01
THE MAN I KNEW
orchidee said:
A fine write Louis. Yet we know it didn\'t end with His death - as some films portray Him. Doh! They\'ve missed out the \'ending\'.
December 21st, 2017 03:01
orchidee said:
A fine write Louis. Yet we know it didn\'t end with His death - as some films portray Him. Doh! They\'ve missed out the \'ending\'.
December 21st, 2017 03:01
THE MAN I KNEW
Michael Edwards said:
Written with reel feeling - great work Louis
December 21st, 2017 01:54
Michael Edwards said:
Written with reel feeling - great work Louis
December 21st, 2017 01:54
TRUE BEAUTY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LOUIS ~ For a reminder of what TRUE BEAUTY really is ! In several of my Poems I have have referred to the TRANSIENSE of Outer Beauty ~ cosmetics ~ clothes etc which fades with Age ! True Beauty is inner beauty (from the soul) which is ETERNAL and increases with Age. Mother Theresa is an excellent example ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN ~ CHRISTINA S is blessed with INNER (& OUTER !) Beauty. Pleases add a poem to her new FUSION ~ Love is ~ Thanks B.
December 18th, 2017 05:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LOUIS ~ For a reminder of what TRUE BEAUTY really is ! In several of my Poems I have have referred to the TRANSIENSE of Outer Beauty ~ cosmetics ~ clothes etc which fades with Age ! True Beauty is inner beauty (from the soul) which is ETERNAL and increases with Age. Mother Theresa is an excellent example ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN ~ CHRISTINA S is blessed with INNER (& OUTER !) Beauty. Pleases add a poem to her new FUSION ~ Love is ~ Thanks B.
December 18th, 2017 05:45
TRUE BEAUTY
Michael Edwards said:
Beauty lies
where it\'s assigned
within the eyes
within the mind.
Grand work Louis
December 18th, 2017 03:16
Michael Edwards said:
Beauty lies
where it\'s assigned
within the eyes
within the mind.
Grand work Louis
December 18th, 2017 03:16
TRUE BEAUTY
orchidee said:
Good write Louis. True beauty (of a sort) is me not singing! People say \'Beautiful, can\'t hear ya caterwaul!\' lol.
December 18th, 2017 02:37
orchidee said:
Good write Louis. True beauty (of a sort) is me not singing! People say \'Beautiful, can\'t hear ya caterwaul!\' lol.
December 18th, 2017 02:37
THE ENCOUNTER
Michael Edwards said:
Nothing comes without a price - grand write Louis
December 15th, 2017 03:44
Michael Edwards said:
Nothing comes without a price - grand write Louis
December 15th, 2017 03:44
THE ENCOUNTER
FredPeyer said:
I\'m with you all the way, Louis! Got my space helmet ready.
Your poem also reminded me of myself. Nearly every time I walk into my bedroom I just stand there and try to remember what brought me there! :-)
December 15th, 2017 03:24
FredPeyer said:
I\'m with you all the way, Louis! Got my space helmet ready.
Your poem also reminded me of myself. Nearly every time I walk into my bedroom I just stand there and try to remember what brought me there! :-)
December 15th, 2017 03:24
THE ENCOUNTER
Goldfinch60 said:
This maybe very true. See you on the other side Louis.
December 15th, 2017 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
This maybe very true. See you on the other side Louis.
December 15th, 2017 02:16
TEACHINGS
FredPeyer said:
Louis, I made this a favorite because I want to read it again and again. It\'s a \"thinker\" poem that opens up a whole range of questions. What is taught, what is instinct? What comes natural?
Very well written and very intriguing.
December 14th, 2017 14:09
FredPeyer said:
Louis, I made this a favorite because I want to read it again and again. It\'s a \"thinker\" poem that opens up a whole range of questions. What is taught, what is instinct? What comes natural?
Very well written and very intriguing.
December 14th, 2017 14:09
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