Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
SOMEDAY
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, though is the Rule a \'thing\'? I feel people need some Being to worship.
November 6th, 2017 02:45
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, though is the Rule a \'thing\'? I feel people need some Being to worship.
November 6th, 2017 02:45
THE TRADE OFF
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, with experience we can discard the unnecessary.
November 4th, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true, with experience we can discard the unnecessary.
November 4th, 2017 00:49
THE TRADE OFF
lasergraph said:
I am amazed that as we age, our vision may fade, but our ability to see with clarity increases dramatically.
November 3rd, 2017 14:03
lasergraph said:
I am amazed that as we age, our vision may fade, but our ability to see with clarity increases dramatically.
November 3rd, 2017 14:03
THE TRADE OFF
FredPeyer said:
I love your poem, Louis!
Are we beginning to understand because we move closer to our souls as we age?
How incredible would it be if we could recall all the knowledge we gained over many lifetimes!
Your short poem is so well written, and now seems to careen around in my head.
November 3rd, 2017 12:35
FredPeyer said:
I love your poem, Louis!
Are we beginning to understand because we move closer to our souls as we age?
How incredible would it be if we could recall all the knowledge we gained over many lifetimes!
Your short poem is so well written, and now seems to careen around in my head.
November 3rd, 2017 12:35
THE TRADE OFF
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I agree with the alternative to the phrase - \"getting old\" - -understanding is what we would like to grow into - - a satisfying read Louis.
November 3rd, 2017 10:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I agree with the alternative to the phrase - \"getting old\" - -understanding is what we would like to grow into - - a satisfying read Louis.
November 3rd, 2017 10:47
AND SO IT GOES
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stars are the light in our world that will always be there for us. Good write.
November 2nd, 2017 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those stars are the light in our world that will always be there for us. Good write.
November 2nd, 2017 01:18
AND SO IT GOES
WL Schuett said:
Love the poem and the so it goes ....
“ the more we know about truth the better we become “ Kurt Vonnegut jr
November 1st, 2017 11:35
WL Schuett said:
Love the poem and the so it goes ....
“ the more we know about truth the better we become “ Kurt Vonnegut jr
November 1st, 2017 11:35
AND SO IT GOES
Michael Edwards said:
Life is not-always-so-merry-go-round but there is something to be said for routine. Well penned Louis
November 1st, 2017 06:16
Michael Edwards said:
Life is not-always-so-merry-go-round but there is something to be said for routine. Well penned Louis
November 1st, 2017 06:16
AND SO IT GOES
Laura🌻 said:
Yes, indeed!
Beautifully described
the life we live!
Great write, Louis!
Thank you!
November 1st, 2017 05:31
Laura🌻 said:
Yes, indeed!
Beautifully described
the life we live!
Great write, Louis!
Thank you!
November 1st, 2017 05:31
AND SO IT GOES
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this description from nights of cavorting to days when parts have to be played - an impressive piece of observed happenings in this we call life my friend.
November 1st, 2017 04:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Love this description from nights of cavorting to days when parts have to be played - an impressive piece of observed happenings in this we call life my friend.
November 1st, 2017 04:49
AND SO IT GOES
orchidee said:
Hmm, yes, does seem to be so, maybe if our life is \'ordinary\'.
Does time go quicker if we\'re enjoying ourselves, as they say? And vice versa?
November 1st, 2017 04:39
orchidee said:
Hmm, yes, does seem to be so, maybe if our life is \'ordinary\'.
Does time go quicker if we\'re enjoying ourselves, as they say? And vice versa?
November 1st, 2017 04:39
AND SO IT GOES
FredPeyer said:
And so it goes!!! Another great poem, with an even greater structure!
November 1st, 2017 04:35
FredPeyer said:
And so it goes!!! Another great poem, with an even greater structure!
November 1st, 2017 04:35
REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS
FredPeyer said:
Great food for thought in this so well written poem, Louis. I have come to depend on your \'eye-openers\'! The first stanza stopped me. Don\'t think I have an answer, maybe because of what you say in your last stanza.
October 31st, 2017 11:31
FredPeyer said:
Great food for thought in this so well written poem, Louis. I have come to depend on your \'eye-openers\'! The first stanza stopped me. Don\'t think I have an answer, maybe because of what you say in your last stanza.
October 31st, 2017 11:31
REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS
Fay Slimm. said:
The value of random acts of kindness so well outlined in this tribute to taking time for reflection Louis - a very good read.
October 30th, 2017 04:58
Fay Slimm. said:
The value of random acts of kindness so well outlined in this tribute to taking time for reflection Louis - a very good read.
October 30th, 2017 04:58
REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS
orchidee said:
Probably the small things, I reckon! Reminds of the widow\'s mite. Seems completely useless, humanly speaking, to put two mites in a \'collection\' box, yet it was the quality, not the quantity that mattered. A fine write Louis.
October 30th, 2017 02:21
orchidee said:
Probably the small things, I reckon! Reminds of the widow\'s mite. Seems completely useless, humanly speaking, to put two mites in a \'collection\' box, yet it was the quality, not the quantity that mattered. A fine write Louis.
October 30th, 2017 02:21
REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very true, those small acts of kindness can be so meaningful throughout our lives.
October 30th, 2017 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very true, those small acts of kindness can be so meaningful throughout our lives.
October 30th, 2017 02:06
JUSTIFIABLE DENIAL
Laura🌻 said:
Louis,
A powerful write!
Unfortunately, that’s the world we live in right now! Unless things change, we are self destructing!
October 27th, 2017 02:32
Laura🌻 said:
Louis,
A powerful write!
Unfortunately, that’s the world we live in right now! Unless things change, we are self destructing!
October 27th, 2017 02:32
JUSTIFIABLE DENIAL
Michael Edwards said:
Not only a real serious side but also gave me a smile - love it Louis
October 27th, 2017 00:34
Michael Edwards said:
Not only a real serious side but also gave me a smile - love it Louis
October 27th, 2017 00:34
JUSTIFIABLE DENIAL
FredPeyer said:
Louis, this is just great! It wasn\'t me, but him too! The old children excuse.
But really, what could we say in such a situation? That we are stupid?
I do like your way of writing and thinking.
October 27th, 2017 00:17
FredPeyer said:
Louis, this is just great! It wasn\'t me, but him too! The old children excuse.
But really, what could we say in such a situation? That we are stupid?
I do like your way of writing and thinking.
October 27th, 2017 00:17
ODE TO RARE BEAUTY
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of deep loss after beautiful togetherness wrings through your lines and ends with a truth - yet it must be - - a powerful poem expressing rare meetings of special souls - this I can relate to dear Louis.
October 25th, 2017 11:54
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of deep loss after beautiful togetherness wrings through your lines and ends with a truth - yet it must be - - a powerful poem expressing rare meetings of special souls - this I can relate to dear Louis.
October 25th, 2017 11:54
ODE TO RARE BEAUTY
myself and me said:
I can\'t believe this. What you writing in this poem is what\'s going on in my life. You wrote it so nice.
October 25th, 2017 11:00
myself and me said:
I can\'t believe this. What you writing in this poem is what\'s going on in my life. You wrote it so nice.
October 25th, 2017 11:00
ODE TO RARE BEAUTY
WL Schuett said:
Very thoughtful poem especially when coupled with your notes , I liked this a lot 😎
October 25th, 2017 07:35
WL Schuett said:
Very thoughtful poem especially when coupled with your notes , I liked this a lot 😎
October 25th, 2017 07:35
ODE TO RARE BEAUTY
FredPeyer said:
Louis, your excellent poem expresses both the beauty and the loss of this special kind of \'togetherness\' we sometimes experience with another person. A connection that might seem \'otherwordly\' rather than based on shared interests. Beautiful writing!
October 25th, 2017 00:29
FredPeyer said:
Louis, your excellent poem expresses both the beauty and the loss of this special kind of \'togetherness\' we sometimes experience with another person. A connection that might seem \'otherwordly\' rather than based on shared interests. Beautiful writing!
October 25th, 2017 00:29
ODE TO RARE BEAUTY
Michael Edwards said:
And so it was ever thus - so well expressed Louis
October 25th, 2017 00:04
Michael Edwards said:
And so it was ever thus - so well expressed Louis
October 25th, 2017 00:04
THE LITTLE THINGS
Laura🌻 said:
My structured routine has passed.
Now it’s all about how I fill
the spaces between!
I have to make the most of it!
Well written and thought provoking!
Definitely a favorite!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 01:50
Laura🌻 said:
My structured routine has passed.
Now it’s all about how I fill
the spaces between!
I have to make the most of it!
Well written and thought provoking!
Definitely a favorite!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 01:50
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