Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs



FALSE DIETIES
FredPeyer said:

I absolutely love this poem, Louis! While I do believe that everybody has the right to believe whatever it is they want to believe, I also believe that everybody has the right to non-believe! And I do not like it if somebody thinks they can push their believe down my throat.
Finally, I do not think you are a little crazy, I think you just might be a little enlightened!

November 8th, 2017 01:03

SOMEDAY
myself and me said:

Hope this \"someday\" come soon.

November 6th, 2017 08:58

SOMEDAY
WL Schuett said:

I agree , simple words but powerful... the golden rule ....Imagine !

November 6th, 2017 08:53

SOMEDAY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Very true LOUIS ~ BUT from whence comes the GOLDEN RULE ~ I find mine in the BIBLE ~ especially inn the PSALMS. BUT I cannot just have the GOLDEN RULE(S) without being either a JEW or a CHRISTIAN ~ Because I was born (1983) into a Christian Home ~ I am a Christian ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN

November 6th, 2017 05:02

SOMEDAY
FredPeyer said:

Give me some time to think this over, Louis! It is four simple lines, but not a simple subject!!!

November 6th, 2017 03:08

SOMEDAY
orchidee said:

Erm, yes, though is the Rule a \'thing\'? I feel people need some Being to worship.

November 6th, 2017 02:45

THE TRADE OFF
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true, with experience we can discard the unnecessary.

November 4th, 2017 00:49

THE TRADE OFF
lasergraph said:

I am amazed that as we age, our vision may fade, but our ability to see with clarity increases dramatically.

November 3rd, 2017 14:03

THE TRADE OFF
FredPeyer said:

I love your poem, Louis!
Are we beginning to understand because we move closer to our souls as we age?
How incredible would it be if we could recall all the knowledge we gained over many lifetimes!
Your short poem is so well written, and now seems to careen around in my head.

November 3rd, 2017 12:35

THE TRADE OFF
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - I agree with the alternative to the phrase - \"getting old\" - -understanding is what we would like to grow into - - a satisfying read Louis.

November 3rd, 2017 10:47

THE TRADE OFF
Accidental Poet said:

Louis, it\'s a balancing act of what we know and what we thought we knew. As we find things we\'re not, we also find things we are. I remember when I thought I couldn\'t write poetry. And then I heard a voice from within. ; )

November 3rd, 2017 09:49

THE TRADE OFF
orchidee said:

A fine write Louis.

November 3rd, 2017 08:56

AND SO IT GOES
Goldfinch60 said:

Those stars are the light in our world that will always be there for us. Good write.

November 2nd, 2017 01:18

AND SO IT GOES
MaddieJ said:

Ugh this should be in a song! Love it!

November 1st, 2017 21:17

AND SO IT GOES
WL Schuett said:

Love the poem and the so it goes ....
“ the more we know about truth the better we become “ Kurt Vonnegut jr

November 1st, 2017 11:35

AND SO IT GOES
Michael Edwards said:

Life is not-always-so-merry-go-round but there is something to be said for routine. Well penned Louis

November 1st, 2017 06:16

AND SO IT GOES
Laura🌻 said:

Yes, indeed!
Beautifully described
the life we live!
Great write, Louis!
Thank you!

November 1st, 2017 05:31

AND SO IT GOES
Fay Slimm. said:

Love this description from nights of cavorting to days when parts have to be played - an impressive piece of observed happenings in this we call life my friend.

November 1st, 2017 04:49

AND SO IT GOES
orchidee said:

Hmm, yes, does seem to be so, maybe if our life is \'ordinary\'.
Does time go quicker if we\'re enjoying ourselves, as they say? And vice versa?

November 1st, 2017 04:39

AND SO IT GOES
FredPeyer said:

And so it goes!!! Another great poem, with an even greater structure!

November 1st, 2017 04:35

REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS
FredPeyer said:

Great food for thought in this so well written poem, Louis. I have come to depend on your \'eye-openers\'! The first stanza stopped me. Don\'t think I have an answer, maybe because of what you say in your last stanza.

October 31st, 2017 11:31

REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 30th, 2017 10:08

REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS
Fay Slimm. said:

The value of random acts of kindness so well outlined in this tribute to taking time for reflection Louis - a very good read.

October 30th, 2017 04:58

REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS
orchidee said:

Probably the small things, I reckon! Reminds of the widow\'s mite. Seems completely useless, humanly speaking, to put two mites in a \'collection\' box, yet it was the quality, not the quantity that mattered. A fine write Louis.

October 30th, 2017 02:21

REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS
Goldfinch60 said:

This is very true, those small acts of kindness can be so meaningful throughout our lives.

October 30th, 2017 02:06

JUSTIFIABLE DENIAL
Accidental Poet said:

My reply would more than likely go like this: \"Yes, all you say is true, there are those among us who know not what they do. And I can see your wisdom clearly, might I ask of your employment availability?\"
Great concept and write Louis.

October 27th, 2017 08:38

JUSTIFIABLE DENIAL
Laura🌻 said:

Louis,
A powerful write!
Unfortunately, that’s the world we live in right now! Unless things change, we are self destructing!

October 27th, 2017 02:32

JUSTIFIABLE DENIAL
orchidee said:

Good write Louis.

October 27th, 2017 01:43

JUSTIFIABLE DENIAL
Michael Edwards said:

Not only a real serious side but also gave me a smile - love it Louis

October 27th, 2017 00:34

JUSTIFIABLE DENIAL
FredPeyer said:

Louis, this is just great! It wasn\'t me, but him too! The old children excuse.
But really, what could we say in such a situation? That we are stupid?
I do like your way of writing and thinking.

October 27th, 2017 00:17

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