Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Human Merchandise
Michael Edwards said:
I saw a programme last night about the Liverpool dockers a century ago lining up hoping to be chosen that day - we have so much to be grateful for being born when we were.
January 19th, 2018 03:41
Michael Edwards said:
I saw a programme last night about the Liverpool dockers a century ago lining up hoping to be chosen that day - we have so much to be grateful for being born when we were.
January 19th, 2018 03:41
Human Merchandise
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very true for many in a world where there is enough for all but those with will not give to those without!
Good write Fred.
January 19th, 2018 03:06
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very true for many in a world where there is enough for all but those with will not give to those without!
Good write Fred.
January 19th, 2018 03:06
Human Merchandise
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. It\'s a miserable existence for some.
Similarly, I see some homeless sitting out in all weathers. They are either genuinely homeless, or determined cheats just begging.
January 19th, 2018 02:45
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. It\'s a miserable existence for some.
Similarly, I see some homeless sitting out in all weathers. They are either genuinely homeless, or determined cheats just begging.
January 19th, 2018 02:45
Defunct Marriage
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very true write Fred for many people, I am very grateful that I am not one of them, although life is hard with my wife\'s dementia our love is still there and shine through us.
January 19th, 2018 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very true write Fred for many people, I am very grateful that I am not one of them, although life is hard with my wife\'s dementia our love is still there and shine through us.
January 19th, 2018 01:51
Defunct Marriage
Michael Edwards said:
Reading this makes me realise how privileged I am - super work Fred
January 19th, 2018 00:32
Michael Edwards said:
Reading this makes me realise how privileged I am - super work Fred
January 19th, 2018 00:32
Defunct Marriage
Accidental Poet said:
Been down that road once Fred. All I found was a dead end. Great write.
January 18th, 2018 20:23
Accidental Poet said:
Been down that road once Fred. All I found was a dead end. Great write.
January 18th, 2018 20:23
Defunct Marriage
Laura🌻 said:
Fred,
A metaphorically rich write to describe a defunct marriage! Kudos my friend! It’s going right into my favorites in case I need to reference it!
Unfortunately it’s a sad subject matter, but realistic for many!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 18:50
Laura🌻 said:
Fred,
A metaphorically rich write to describe a defunct marriage! Kudos my friend! It’s going right into my favorites in case I need to reference it!
Unfortunately it’s a sad subject matter, but realistic for many!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 18:50
Defunct Marriage
Heather T said:
Some rise from the smoking heap, and many do not. You\'ve captured the ruins perfectly. This was a poem in itself:
\"Nothing left but silence
In a cemetery of words\"
January 18th, 2018 17:57
Heather T said:
Some rise from the smoking heap, and many do not. You\'ve captured the ruins perfectly. This was a poem in itself:
\"Nothing left but silence
In a cemetery of words\"
January 18th, 2018 17:57
Defunct Marriage
Louis Gibbs said:
Been there, done that, a few times. Not a fun way for a relationship to end. Your poem says it all, Fred!
January 18th, 2018 17:05
Louis Gibbs said:
Been there, done that, a few times. Not a fun way for a relationship to end. Your poem says it all, Fred!
January 18th, 2018 17:05
Defunct Marriage
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I needed this more than you\'ll ever know my friend. Thank you kindly
January 18th, 2018 16:56
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I needed this more than you\'ll ever know my friend. Thank you kindly
January 18th, 2018 16:56
Platform Four
Aislinn Wilson said:
What a striking snapshot, this is a very good poem.
January 18th, 2018 11:02
Aislinn Wilson said:
What a striking snapshot, this is a very good poem.
January 18th, 2018 11:02
Platform Four
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, people watching is a great way to write, I do it quite a lot.
January 18th, 2018 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, people watching is a great way to write, I do it quite a lot.
January 18th, 2018 02:15
Platform Four
Accidental Poet said:
What can I say that others have not already said? And these observations go on and on every single day. Very observant and a great poem Fred.
January 17th, 2018 18:55
Accidental Poet said:
What can I say that others have not already said? And these observations go on and on every single day. Very observant and a great poem Fred.
January 17th, 2018 18:55
Platform Four
Michael Edwards said:
Great observational piece Fred - made me think up the title \'View From A Coffee Shop\' - but you\'ve already done it - I enjoyed the read.
January 17th, 2018 16:25
Michael Edwards said:
Great observational piece Fred - made me think up the title \'View From A Coffee Shop\' - but you\'ve already done it - I enjoyed the read.
January 17th, 2018 16:25
Platform Four
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words vividly portrayed the varied reasons why that platform held all the emotions Fred - - a really fine piece of observation which goes into my faves.
January 17th, 2018 15:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words vividly portrayed the varied reasons why that platform held all the emotions Fred - - a really fine piece of observation which goes into my faves.
January 17th, 2018 15:27
Platform Four
Louis Gibbs said:
A well portrayed snapshot of the human experience this is, Fred. I was right there on the platform with them. Kudos!
January 17th, 2018 15:25
Louis Gibbs said:
A well portrayed snapshot of the human experience this is, Fred. I was right there on the platform with them. Kudos!
January 17th, 2018 15:25
Platform Four
kevin browne said:
one of your best, Fred. the escape when boarding platform four is astounding. good write.
January 17th, 2018 15:15
kevin browne said:
one of your best, Fred. the escape when boarding platform four is astounding. good write.
January 17th, 2018 15:15
No Regret
Louis Gibbs said:
It is what it is, and is just what we signed up for, is it not? Nice work, Fred.
January 16th, 2018 10:20
Louis Gibbs said:
It is what it is, and is just what we signed up for, is it not? Nice work, Fred.
January 16th, 2018 10:20
No Regret
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Life is Crazy. I can Agree a lot with this Poem. Many times in my life I have ask Why???
January 16th, 2018 04:27
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Life is Crazy. I can Agree a lot with this Poem. Many times in my life I have ask Why???
January 16th, 2018 04:27
No Regret
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true Fred, we take what life gives us and the choices we take. The \'what if?\' question will always be asked.
January 16th, 2018 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true Fred, we take what life gives us and the choices we take. The \'what if?\' question will always be asked.
January 16th, 2018 01:54
No Regret
Michael Edwards said:
Looking back it was quite okay really but it\'s even more okay looking forward - super work Fred
January 16th, 2018 00:27
Michael Edwards said:
Looking back it was quite okay really but it\'s even more okay looking forward - super work Fred
January 16th, 2018 00:27
Saved by the Light
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will always be there even in the darkest of times. Good write.
January 12th, 2018 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will always be there even in the darkest of times. Good write.
January 12th, 2018 02:27
Saved by the Light
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling piece with first rate metaphor - -light indeed can come suddenly to change lives. Thanks for posting this Fred.
January 11th, 2018 17:20
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling piece with first rate metaphor - -light indeed can come suddenly to change lives. Thanks for posting this Fred.
January 11th, 2018 17:20
Saved by the Light
Michael Edwards said:
Well written with a great conclusion - a real worthy piece Fred.
January 11th, 2018 17:13
Michael Edwards said:
Well written with a great conclusion - a real worthy piece Fred.
January 11th, 2018 17:13
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