Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Platform Four
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, people watching is a great way to write, I do it quite a lot.
January 18th, 2018 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, people watching is a great way to write, I do it quite a lot.
January 18th, 2018 02:15
Platform Four
Michael Edwards said:
Great observational piece Fred - made me think up the title \'View From A Coffee Shop\' - but you\'ve already done it - I enjoyed the read.
January 17th, 2018 16:25
Michael Edwards said:
Great observational piece Fred - made me think up the title \'View From A Coffee Shop\' - but you\'ve already done it - I enjoyed the read.
January 17th, 2018 16:25
Platform Four
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words vividly portrayed the varied reasons why that platform held all the emotions Fred - - a really fine piece of observation which goes into my faves.
January 17th, 2018 15:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words vividly portrayed the varied reasons why that platform held all the emotions Fred - - a really fine piece of observation which goes into my faves.
January 17th, 2018 15:27
Platform Four
Louis Gibbs said:
A well portrayed snapshot of the human experience this is, Fred. I was right there on the platform with them. Kudos!
January 17th, 2018 15:25
Louis Gibbs said:
A well portrayed snapshot of the human experience this is, Fred. I was right there on the platform with them. Kudos!
January 17th, 2018 15:25
Platform Four
kevin browne said:
one of your best, Fred. the escape when boarding platform four is astounding. good write.
January 17th, 2018 15:15
kevin browne said:
one of your best, Fred. the escape when boarding platform four is astounding. good write.
January 17th, 2018 15:15
No Regret
Louis Gibbs said:
It is what it is, and is just what we signed up for, is it not? Nice work, Fred.
January 16th, 2018 10:20
Louis Gibbs said:
It is what it is, and is just what we signed up for, is it not? Nice work, Fred.
January 16th, 2018 10:20
No Regret
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Life is Crazy. I can Agree a lot with this Poem. Many times in my life I have ask Why???
January 16th, 2018 04:27
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Life is Crazy. I can Agree a lot with this Poem. Many times in my life I have ask Why???
January 16th, 2018 04:27
No Regret
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true Fred, we take what life gives us and the choices we take. The \'what if?\' question will always be asked.
January 16th, 2018 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true Fred, we take what life gives us and the choices we take. The \'what if?\' question will always be asked.
January 16th, 2018 01:54
No Regret
Michael Edwards said:
Looking back it was quite okay really but it\'s even more okay looking forward - super work Fred
January 16th, 2018 00:27
Michael Edwards said:
Looking back it was quite okay really but it\'s even more okay looking forward - super work Fred
January 16th, 2018 00:27
Saved by the Light
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will always be there even in the darkest of times. Good write.
January 12th, 2018 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
The light will always be there even in the darkest of times. Good write.
January 12th, 2018 02:27
Saved by the Light
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling piece with first rate metaphor - -light indeed can come suddenly to change lives. Thanks for posting this Fred.
January 11th, 2018 17:20
Fay Slimm. said:
A telling piece with first rate metaphor - -light indeed can come suddenly to change lives. Thanks for posting this Fred.
January 11th, 2018 17:20
Saved by the Light
Michael Edwards said:
Well written with a great conclusion - a real worthy piece Fred.
January 11th, 2018 17:13
Michael Edwards said:
Well written with a great conclusion - a real worthy piece Fred.
January 11th, 2018 17:13
Saved by the Light
Louis Gibbs said:
In the final analysis, \'the light\', which we all are a part of, is all that there really is ... it is everything. A wonderful metaphor, Fred!
January 11th, 2018 16:30
Louis Gibbs said:
In the final analysis, \'the light\', which we all are a part of, is all that there really is ... it is everything. A wonderful metaphor, Fred!
January 11th, 2018 16:30
Broken Me
kevin browne said:
ah, the softened touch of romance together heart to heart and all those wonderful beautiful feelings that come along with it. penned perfectly here, Fred, the message is clear and fluently posed for a great poem. Keep on loving, my friend.
January 10th, 2018 13:36
kevin browne said:
ah, the softened touch of romance together heart to heart and all those wonderful beautiful feelings that come along with it. penned perfectly here, Fred, the message is clear and fluently posed for a great poem. Keep on loving, my friend.
January 10th, 2018 13:36
Broken Me
Poetic Dan said:
Just read that one out loud and cried healing tears, you the man ;)
January 10th, 2018 13:02
Poetic Dan said:
Just read that one out loud and cried healing tears, you the man ;)
January 10th, 2018 13:02
Backwards / Forward
Poetic Dan said:
Mind blown away.... To many thoughts jumping around thank you buddy
January 10th, 2018 12:55
Poetic Dan said:
Mind blown away.... To many thoughts jumping around thank you buddy
January 10th, 2018 12:55
Broken Me
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how a good woman can make a broken man whole. Ya gotta love em! Well written, Fred!
January 10th, 2018 10:57
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how a good woman can make a broken man whole. Ya gotta love em! Well written, Fred!
January 10th, 2018 10:57
Broken Me
orchidee said:
Good write Fred, and not a swoon in sight from me! So this is not too \'hot\' for me. lol.
January 10th, 2018 03:00
orchidee said:
Good write Fred, and not a swoon in sight from me! So this is not too \'hot\' for me. lol.
January 10th, 2018 03:00
Broken Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write, my wife was always there for me and we became one, as it should be.
January 10th, 2018 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write, my wife was always there for me and we became one, as it should be.
January 10th, 2018 01:54
Broken Me
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure that I was ever broken but my wife is there, everywhere, for me and made me whole - super work Fred
January 10th, 2018 01:13
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure that I was ever broken but my wife is there, everywhere, for me and made me whole - super work Fred
January 10th, 2018 01:13
Double Doors
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ I\'m always pleased when my flight is delayed @ Heathrow or Gatwick or even Stanstead ! WHY ? Because it gives me TIME to People Watch and AIR TRAVELLERS are always interesting. I have observed many \"resolute\" Ladies (such as you describe) who erect an \"unapproachable\" barrier ~ BUT I suspect ~ are hurting inside ! Your poem would make an excellent opening to a thriller ! As we all experience (at one level or another ?) \"Hell hath no fury like a Woman scorned !\" Thanks BRIAN
January 9th, 2018 17:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ I\'m always pleased when my flight is delayed @ Heathrow or Gatwick or even Stanstead ! WHY ? Because it gives me TIME to People Watch and AIR TRAVELLERS are always interesting. I have observed many \"resolute\" Ladies (such as you describe) who erect an \"unapproachable\" barrier ~ BUT I suspect ~ are hurting inside ! Your poem would make an excellent opening to a thriller ! As we all experience (at one level or another ?) \"Hell hath no fury like a Woman scorned !\" Thanks BRIAN
January 9th, 2018 17:10
Double Doors
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah u are an observant poet to capture all that without really knowing so. Awesome imagination put to great poetic description of her. Come to think of it I could picture many such a person, both men and women but to put it all so superbly is credit to your great pen. A zillion kudos for this poem, im just swayed by it.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 14:15
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah u are an observant poet to capture all that without really knowing so. Awesome imagination put to great poetic description of her. Come to think of it I could picture many such a person, both men and women but to put it all so superbly is credit to your great pen. A zillion kudos for this poem, im just swayed by it.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 14:15
Double Doors
dusk arising said:
Inner strength, determination and self worth. Great strong positive and empowering reading.
January 9th, 2018 14:01
dusk arising said:
Inner strength, determination and self worth. Great strong positive and empowering reading.
January 9th, 2018 14:01
Double Doors
Fay Slimm. said:
Looking forward is the best thing a lady can do under the cloak of impeccable make-up - - a great read Fred.
January 9th, 2018 13:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Looking forward is the best thing a lady can do under the cloak of impeccable make-up - - a great read Fred.
January 9th, 2018 13:22
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