Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



Final Flight
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write Fred, we are both in the autumn of our lives but hoping that winter is a long way ahead, we still have so much to do and to enjoy.

January 28th, 2018 02:17

I need You!
skyebellasario said:

Loved this Fred! Hilarious twist :)

January 27th, 2018 18:06

I need You!
Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - now that had me fooled - - a yummy read Fred.

January 27th, 2018 15:55

I need You!
kevin browne said:

the taste of this poem is so sweet and full of chocolate. love the twist.

January 27th, 2018 12:12

I need You!
Lorna said:

I had a feeling!!!!! It was the first thing in my mind which goes to show...........

January 27th, 2018 09:43

I need You!
orchidee said:

Good write Fred. if I ate choccie late at night it would keep me awake.

January 27th, 2018 02:47

I need You!
Michael Edwards said:

My weakness - thanks for the early morning laugh Fred - I guess you have gone to bed as I type this - hope you didn\'t eat the whole bar.

January 27th, 2018 01:47

I need You!
Goldfinch60 said:

Smashing twist Fred, enjoy your bar.

January 27th, 2018 01:14

The Preacher
lasergraph said:

The television is especially full of these guys, who build dynasties at the expense of the poor.

January 26th, 2018 16:11

The Preacher
Louis Gibbs said:

Your poem speaks for itself, Fred, and quite well indeed. Re your response to Orchidee ... to me, \"legitimate religion\" is an oxymoron.

January 26th, 2018 11:45

The Preacher
orchidee said:

I know what you mean Fred. There was a smug con-man preacher in some film. Possibly a James Bond film. He would always say \'Bless your heart\' mostly when they gave him money!
It was a semi-humorous way, but it gets sickening in reality.

January 26th, 2018 02:59

The Preacher
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, there are so called \"preachers\" out there who are just looking for financial gain.

January 26th, 2018 01:42

Our Next Mission
Goldfinch60 said:

Brilliant write Fred and so true, our adventures will never cease. I will see you in eternity.

January 26th, 2018 01:37

The Preacher
Michael Edwards said:

Sadly this has been reality for many conned by false hope - a great work Fred.

January 26th, 2018 01:35

Our Next Mission
Louis Gibbs said:

Well penned portrayal of the unending journey, Fred! At least, if there is an end, it escapes my imagination what it would look like.

January 25th, 2018 19:41

Our Next Mission
kevin browne said:

and you\'re next mission is to keep on writing these wonderful stories you breed from out of life. great write, Fred.

January 25th, 2018 16:36

Our Next Mission
Michael Edwards said:

And this is the in-between bit with more adventures before the end-bit. Also I\'m with you on the last verse. Yes I really enjoyed this write.

January 25th, 2018 15:44

Our Next Mission
orchidee said:

Good write Fred. I differ as to the last verse - you may know.

January 25th, 2018 14:12

Cold Bum
poetboy123 said:

A great humorous piece, detailing contemplations we\'ve all had some time or another, haven\'t we? Definitely a brilliant write.

January 24th, 2018 20:09

Cold Bum
WL Schuett said:

A fine poem Fred a fun one also , I don’t know what you’ve done in your life but I think you would have made a fine teacher !

January 24th, 2018 19:28

Cold Bum
FredPeyer said:

Thanks, tepo! These two stanzas must have reminded you of scuba diving! I never dived, but I can imagine that it must be awesome!

January 24th, 2018 13:22

Cold Bum
Louis Gibbs said:

Sounds to me like the process of spiritual awakening going on, Fred. My condolences and congratulations, my friend. Great write here!

January 24th, 2018 09:50

Cold Bum
orchidee said:

That botty warmed up now?!

January 24th, 2018 09:30

Cold Bum
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred. Nothing much worse than a cold bum! lol. I stand sometimes, while waiting for a bus or train. The waiting room seats/shelters cause me to jump up again, if too cold!

January 24th, 2018 02:52

Cold Bum
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, sometime it is worth clearing your mind and wallow in its emptiness. I can sometimes do this and feel more relaxed having done so.

January 24th, 2018 02:52

Little Things
FredPeyer said:

Thanks so much Michael! I think we both understand each other!

January 24th, 2018 02:52

Cold Bum
Caring dove said:

the cold bum distracted you momentarily from the deep thinking and your reflection lol nice piece of writing which i enjoyed reading

January 24th, 2018 02:48

Little Things
Michael Edwards said:

The whole is made up of little things (I know all about little things !!) Fred this a great observational write - love it.

January 24th, 2018 02:47

Little Things
FredPeyer said:

Thanks Goldie, you got it! They do!

January 24th, 2018 02:46

Cold Bum
FredPeyer said:

Thanks so much Angel! The word \'amazing\' is debatable! But my wife told me that I am actually not as bad as everybody else says I am! So there you go!

January 24th, 2018 02:45



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