Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Slowdance
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance on Fred as we will always do, we will meet you on the dance floor.
January 29th, 2018 02:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance on Fred as we will always do, we will meet you on the dance floor.
January 29th, 2018 02:36
Slowdance
Adam Shirley said:
Such a beautiful poem. Your poem brought me to the past and I was in tears, amazing.
January 29th, 2018 01:05
Adam Shirley said:
Such a beautiful poem. Your poem brought me to the past and I was in tears, amazing.
January 29th, 2018 01:05
Final Flight
dusk arising said:
I doubt a final fanfare, I doubt even i shall enjoy that final flight but i\'m sure you\'re right.
I hope the \'tree\' which grows from my rotted leaf bears a far finer foliage than i ever was.
Very thought provoking writing sir!
January 28th, 2018 13:28
dusk arising said:
I doubt a final fanfare, I doubt even i shall enjoy that final flight but i\'m sure you\'re right.
I hope the \'tree\' which grows from my rotted leaf bears a far finer foliage than i ever was.
Very thought provoking writing sir!
January 28th, 2018 13:28
Final Flight
Accidental Poet said:
When the curtain comes down, we\'ll all take our final bow. Excellent Fred.
January 28th, 2018 08:14
Accidental Poet said:
When the curtain comes down, we\'ll all take our final bow. Excellent Fred.
January 28th, 2018 08:14
Final Flight
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. You must cut down on smoking there (??) heehee.
January 28th, 2018 03:10
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. You must cut down on smoking there (??) heehee.
January 28th, 2018 03:10
Final Flight
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Fred and at the end of it all:
On a winters day
at close of play
in a wood cachet
wherein I lay
interred in clay.
January 28th, 2018 02:51
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Fred and at the end of it all:
On a winters day
at close of play
in a wood cachet
wherein I lay
interred in clay.
January 28th, 2018 02:51
Final Flight
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fred, we are both in the autumn of our lives but hoping that winter is a long way ahead, we still have so much to do and to enjoy.
January 28th, 2018 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fred, we are both in the autumn of our lives but hoping that winter is a long way ahead, we still have so much to do and to enjoy.
January 28th, 2018 02:17
I need You!
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - now that had me fooled - - a yummy read Fred.
January 27th, 2018 15:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - now that had me fooled - - a yummy read Fred.
January 27th, 2018 15:55
I need You!
kevin browne said:
the taste of this poem is so sweet and full of chocolate. love the twist.
January 27th, 2018 12:12
kevin browne said:
the taste of this poem is so sweet and full of chocolate. love the twist.
January 27th, 2018 12:12
I need You!
Lorna said:
I had a feeling!!!!! It was the first thing in my mind which goes to show...........
January 27th, 2018 09:43
Lorna said:
I had a feeling!!!!! It was the first thing in my mind which goes to show...........
January 27th, 2018 09:43
I need You!
Accidental Poet said:
Chocolate IS a food group. Thanks for this great tasty treat Fred.
January 27th, 2018 05:24
Accidental Poet said:
Chocolate IS a food group. Thanks for this great tasty treat Fred.
January 27th, 2018 05:24
I need You!
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. if I ate choccie late at night it would keep me awake.
January 27th, 2018 02:47
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. if I ate choccie late at night it would keep me awake.
January 27th, 2018 02:47
I need You!
Michael Edwards said:
My weakness - thanks for the early morning laugh Fred - I guess you have gone to bed as I type this - hope you didn\'t eat the whole bar.
January 27th, 2018 01:47
Michael Edwards said:
My weakness - thanks for the early morning laugh Fred - I guess you have gone to bed as I type this - hope you didn\'t eat the whole bar.
January 27th, 2018 01:47
The Preacher
lasergraph said:
The television is especially full of these guys, who build dynasties at the expense of the poor.
January 26th, 2018 16:11
lasergraph said:
The television is especially full of these guys, who build dynasties at the expense of the poor.
January 26th, 2018 16:11
The Preacher
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem speaks for itself, Fred, and quite well indeed. Re your response to Orchidee ... to me, \"legitimate religion\" is an oxymoron.
January 26th, 2018 11:45
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem speaks for itself, Fred, and quite well indeed. Re your response to Orchidee ... to me, \"legitimate religion\" is an oxymoron.
January 26th, 2018 11:45
The Preacher
orchidee said:
I know what you mean Fred. There was a smug con-man preacher in some film. Possibly a James Bond film. He would always say \'Bless your heart\' mostly when they gave him money!
It was a semi-humorous way, but it gets sickening in reality.
January 26th, 2018 02:59
orchidee said:
I know what you mean Fred. There was a smug con-man preacher in some film. Possibly a James Bond film. He would always say \'Bless your heart\' mostly when they gave him money!
It was a semi-humorous way, but it gets sickening in reality.
January 26th, 2018 02:59
The Preacher
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, there are so called \"preachers\" out there who are just looking for financial gain.
January 26th, 2018 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, there are so called \"preachers\" out there who are just looking for financial gain.
January 26th, 2018 01:42
Our Next Mission
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write Fred and so true, our adventures will never cease. I will see you in eternity.
January 26th, 2018 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write Fred and so true, our adventures will never cease. I will see you in eternity.
January 26th, 2018 01:37
The Preacher
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly this has been reality for many conned by false hope - a great work Fred.
January 26th, 2018 01:35
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly this has been reality for many conned by false hope - a great work Fred.
January 26th, 2018 01:35
Our Next Mission
Louis Gibbs said:
Well penned portrayal of the unending journey, Fred! At least, if there is an end, it escapes my imagination what it would look like.
January 25th, 2018 19:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Well penned portrayal of the unending journey, Fred! At least, if there is an end, it escapes my imagination what it would look like.
January 25th, 2018 19:41
Our Next Mission
kevin browne said:
and you\'re next mission is to keep on writing these wonderful stories you breed from out of life. great write, Fred.
January 25th, 2018 16:36
kevin browne said:
and you\'re next mission is to keep on writing these wonderful stories you breed from out of life. great write, Fred.
January 25th, 2018 16:36
Our Next Mission
Michael Edwards said:
And this is the in-between bit with more adventures before the end-bit. Also I\'m with you on the last verse. Yes I really enjoyed this write.
January 25th, 2018 15:44
Michael Edwards said:
And this is the in-between bit with more adventures before the end-bit. Also I\'m with you on the last verse. Yes I really enjoyed this write.
January 25th, 2018 15:44
Our Next Mission
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. I differ as to the last verse - you may know.
January 25th, 2018 14:12
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. I differ as to the last verse - you may know.
January 25th, 2018 14:12
Cold Bum
poetboy123 said:
A great humorous piece, detailing contemplations we\'ve all had some time or another, haven\'t we? Definitely a brilliant write.
January 24th, 2018 20:09
poetboy123 said:
A great humorous piece, detailing contemplations we\'ve all had some time or another, haven\'t we? Definitely a brilliant write.
January 24th, 2018 20:09
Cold Bum
WL Schuett said:
A fine poem Fred a fun one also , I don’t know what you’ve done in your life but I think you would have made a fine teacher !
January 24th, 2018 19:28
WL Schuett said:
A fine poem Fred a fun one also , I don’t know what you’ve done in your life but I think you would have made a fine teacher !
January 24th, 2018 19:28
Cold Bum
FredPeyer said:
Thanks, tepo! These two stanzas must have reminded you of scuba diving! I never dived, but I can imagine that it must be awesome!
January 24th, 2018 13:22
FredPeyer said:
Thanks, tepo! These two stanzas must have reminded you of scuba diving! I never dived, but I can imagine that it must be awesome!
January 24th, 2018 13:22
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