Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
A Different Kind of Poem
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Yes, I may reel off some of my poems, in AABB rhyming.
But this takes more thought, having to return to previous lines to make them rhyme.
January 30th, 2018 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Yes, I may reel off some of my poems, in AABB rhyming.
But this takes more thought, having to return to previous lines to make them rhyme.
January 30th, 2018 02:48
Slowdance
dusk arising said:
Slow dancing, touching bodies knowingly blending into relaxed familiarity of such well known heat and relaxation of passions expressed and yet to come. Envious of you. Superb writing.
January 29th, 2018 12:29
dusk arising said:
Slow dancing, touching bodies knowingly blending into relaxed familiarity of such well known heat and relaxation of passions expressed and yet to come. Envious of you. Superb writing.
January 29th, 2018 12:29
Slowdance
Christina8 said:
Absolutely beautiful to read, Fred! I could see it in my mind as I read.
January 29th, 2018 07:39
Christina8 said:
Absolutely beautiful to read, Fred! I could see it in my mind as I read.
January 29th, 2018 07:39
Slowdance
Michael Edwards said:
Keep dancing Fred but don\'t stop writing beauties like this.
January 29th, 2018 06:53
Michael Edwards said:
Keep dancing Fred but don\'t stop writing beauties like this.
January 29th, 2018 06:53
Slowdance
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance on Fred as we will always do, we will meet you on the dance floor.
January 29th, 2018 02:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance on Fred as we will always do, we will meet you on the dance floor.
January 29th, 2018 02:36
Slowdance
Adam Shirley said:
Such a beautiful poem. Your poem brought me to the past and I was in tears, amazing.
January 29th, 2018 01:05
Adam Shirley said:
Such a beautiful poem. Your poem brought me to the past and I was in tears, amazing.
January 29th, 2018 01:05
Final Flight
dusk arising said:
I doubt a final fanfare, I doubt even i shall enjoy that final flight but i\'m sure you\'re right.
I hope the \'tree\' which grows from my rotted leaf bears a far finer foliage than i ever was.
Very thought provoking writing sir!
January 28th, 2018 13:28
dusk arising said:
I doubt a final fanfare, I doubt even i shall enjoy that final flight but i\'m sure you\'re right.
I hope the \'tree\' which grows from my rotted leaf bears a far finer foliage than i ever was.
Very thought provoking writing sir!
January 28th, 2018 13:28
Final Flight
Accidental Poet said:
When the curtain comes down, we\'ll all take our final bow. Excellent Fred.
January 28th, 2018 08:14
Accidental Poet said:
When the curtain comes down, we\'ll all take our final bow. Excellent Fred.
January 28th, 2018 08:14
Final Flight
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. You must cut down on smoking there (??) heehee.
January 28th, 2018 03:10
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. You must cut down on smoking there (??) heehee.
January 28th, 2018 03:10
Final Flight
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Fred and at the end of it all:
On a winters day
at close of play
in a wood cachet
wherein I lay
interred in clay.
January 28th, 2018 02:51
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Fred and at the end of it all:
On a winters day
at close of play
in a wood cachet
wherein I lay
interred in clay.
January 28th, 2018 02:51
Final Flight
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fred, we are both in the autumn of our lives but hoping that winter is a long way ahead, we still have so much to do and to enjoy.
January 28th, 2018 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Fred, we are both in the autumn of our lives but hoping that winter is a long way ahead, we still have so much to do and to enjoy.
January 28th, 2018 02:17
I need You!
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - now that had me fooled - - a yummy read Fred.
January 27th, 2018 15:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - now that had me fooled - - a yummy read Fred.
January 27th, 2018 15:55
I need You!
kevin browne said:
the taste of this poem is so sweet and full of chocolate. love the twist.
January 27th, 2018 12:12
kevin browne said:
the taste of this poem is so sweet and full of chocolate. love the twist.
January 27th, 2018 12:12
I need You!
Lorna said:
I had a feeling!!!!! It was the first thing in my mind which goes to show...........
January 27th, 2018 09:43
Lorna said:
I had a feeling!!!!! It was the first thing in my mind which goes to show...........
January 27th, 2018 09:43
I need You!
Accidental Poet said:
Chocolate IS a food group. Thanks for this great tasty treat Fred.
January 27th, 2018 05:24
Accidental Poet said:
Chocolate IS a food group. Thanks for this great tasty treat Fred.
January 27th, 2018 05:24
I need You!
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. if I ate choccie late at night it would keep me awake.
January 27th, 2018 02:47
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. if I ate choccie late at night it would keep me awake.
January 27th, 2018 02:47
I need You!
Michael Edwards said:
My weakness - thanks for the early morning laugh Fred - I guess you have gone to bed as I type this - hope you didn\'t eat the whole bar.
January 27th, 2018 01:47
Michael Edwards said:
My weakness - thanks for the early morning laugh Fred - I guess you have gone to bed as I type this - hope you didn\'t eat the whole bar.
January 27th, 2018 01:47
The Preacher
lasergraph said:
The television is especially full of these guys, who build dynasties at the expense of the poor.
January 26th, 2018 16:11
lasergraph said:
The television is especially full of these guys, who build dynasties at the expense of the poor.
January 26th, 2018 16:11
The Preacher
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem speaks for itself, Fred, and quite well indeed. Re your response to Orchidee ... to me, \"legitimate religion\" is an oxymoron.
January 26th, 2018 11:45
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem speaks for itself, Fred, and quite well indeed. Re your response to Orchidee ... to me, \"legitimate religion\" is an oxymoron.
January 26th, 2018 11:45
The Preacher
orchidee said:
I know what you mean Fred. There was a smug con-man preacher in some film. Possibly a James Bond film. He would always say \'Bless your heart\' mostly when they gave him money!
It was a semi-humorous way, but it gets sickening in reality.
January 26th, 2018 02:59
orchidee said:
I know what you mean Fred. There was a smug con-man preacher in some film. Possibly a James Bond film. He would always say \'Bless your heart\' mostly when they gave him money!
It was a semi-humorous way, but it gets sickening in reality.
January 26th, 2018 02:59
The Preacher
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, there are so called \"preachers\" out there who are just looking for financial gain.
January 26th, 2018 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, there are so called \"preachers\" out there who are just looking for financial gain.
January 26th, 2018 01:42
Our Next Mission
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write Fred and so true, our adventures will never cease. I will see you in eternity.
January 26th, 2018 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant write Fred and so true, our adventures will never cease. I will see you in eternity.
January 26th, 2018 01:37
The Preacher
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly this has been reality for many conned by false hope - a great work Fred.
January 26th, 2018 01:35
Michael Edwards said:
Sadly this has been reality for many conned by false hope - a great work Fred.
January 26th, 2018 01:35
Our Next Mission
Louis Gibbs said:
Well penned portrayal of the unending journey, Fred! At least, if there is an end, it escapes my imagination what it would look like.
January 25th, 2018 19:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Well penned portrayal of the unending journey, Fred! At least, if there is an end, it escapes my imagination what it would look like.
January 25th, 2018 19:41
Our Next Mission
kevin browne said:
and you\'re next mission is to keep on writing these wonderful stories you breed from out of life. great write, Fred.
January 25th, 2018 16:36
kevin browne said:
and you\'re next mission is to keep on writing these wonderful stories you breed from out of life. great write, Fred.
January 25th, 2018 16:36
Our Next Mission
Michael Edwards said:
And this is the in-between bit with more adventures before the end-bit. Also I\'m with you on the last verse. Yes I really enjoyed this write.
January 25th, 2018 15:44
Michael Edwards said:
And this is the in-between bit with more adventures before the end-bit. Also I\'m with you on the last verse. Yes I really enjoyed this write.
January 25th, 2018 15:44
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