Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



Cold Bum
Louis Gibbs said:

Sounds to me like the process of spiritual awakening going on, Fred. My condolences and congratulations, my friend. Great write here!

January 24th, 2018 09:50

Cold Bum
orchidee said:

That botty warmed up now?!

January 24th, 2018 09:30

Cold Bum
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred. Nothing much worse than a cold bum! lol. I stand sometimes, while waiting for a bus or train. The waiting room seats/shelters cause me to jump up again, if too cold!

January 24th, 2018 02:52

Cold Bum
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, sometime it is worth clearing your mind and wallow in its emptiness. I can sometimes do this and feel more relaxed having done so.

January 24th, 2018 02:52

Little Things
FredPeyer said:

Thanks so much Michael! I think we both understand each other!

January 24th, 2018 02:52

Cold Bum
Caring dove said:

the cold bum distracted you momentarily from the deep thinking and your reflection lol nice piece of writing which i enjoyed reading

January 24th, 2018 02:48

Little Things
Michael Edwards said:

The whole is made up of little things (I know all about little things !!) Fred this a great observational write - love it.

January 24th, 2018 02:47

Little Things
FredPeyer said:

Thanks Goldie, you got it! They do!

January 24th, 2018 02:46

Cold Bum
FredPeyer said:

Thanks so much Angel! The word \'amazing\' is debatable! But my wife told me that I am actually not as bad as everybody else says I am! So there you go!

January 24th, 2018 02:45

Little Things
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Fred, those little things can have huge consequences.

January 24th, 2018 02:44

Cold Bum
FredPeyer said:

Thanks Michael, you are so right. When I was young, my brains were down in my pants. But I think they repatriated upwards again now.

January 24th, 2018 02:09

Cold Bum
Michael Edwards said:

Not easy to exercise your brain when your bum is cold - mind you it depends where your brains are lol - love this excellent write Fred.

January 24th, 2018 02:05

Little Things
FredPeyer said:

Thanks Louis, something a little different. Otherwise I might bore you to death!

January 23rd, 2018 23:21

Little Things
Louis Gibbs said:

Love the poem, and love the form of it ... quite interesting both, Fred!

January 23rd, 2018 22:44

Little Things
Accidental Poet said:

So true Fred, the little things do matter.

January 23rd, 2018 20:30

Consiousness
skyebellasario said:

Love this piece Fred! It\'s so deep and meaningful :)

January 21st, 2018 05:57

Consiousness
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, your soul may also be your conciousness.

January 21st, 2018 02:46

Consiousness
Michael Edwards said:

A deep write and Aislinn is right - great last line - super work Fred.

January 21st, 2018 01:19

Consiousness
Heather T said:

Someone has been swimming in deep waters! It\'s always interesting to see what others find \"in there\". Certainly makes for fascinating writing.

January 20th, 2018 22:25

Consiousness
Louis Gibbs said:

A great existential write, Fred ... profound and deep. I hope you will let me know when you get it all sorted out.

January 20th, 2018 21:30

Consiousness
Aislinn Wilson said:

The final line really punched. Great write, I love your work!

January 20th, 2018 20:11

Consiousness
kevin browne said:

deep work into the human soul and your existence which is revealing your inner thoughts. a brace shout out here, Fred, encouraging work about the revelation of mind.

January 20th, 2018 18:33

Consiousness
FredPeyer said:

Thanks Tony! Appreciate your comment!

January 20th, 2018 18:00

Consiousness
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 20th, 2018 17:59

Human Merchandise
kevin browne said:

touching everyone\'s heart who has a heart towards your poem. a tender write and you covered it really well, in FredPeyer, style.

January 19th, 2018 17:05

No Regret
Aislinn Wilson said:

Worth multiple reads in a sitting.

January 19th, 2018 12:37

Defunct Marriage
Aislinn Wilson said:

The course of this poem is very entrancing, entrancing in a way that really aids to the feeling of being trapped. Really amazing poem.

January 19th, 2018 12:36

Human Merchandise
Aislinn Wilson said:

To say this has powerful imagery is really the least I can say

January 19th, 2018 12:35

Human Merchandise
Louis Gibbs said:

A well written portrayal of the desperation and nobility of those who offer themselves as beasts of burden to feed a family or to simply survive. Great write, Fred!

January 19th, 2018 09:32

Human Merchandise
Lorna said:

There\'s a kind of nobility in how hard most men try to feed their families. The older I get the more the ultra rich disgust me.

January 19th, 2018 04:16



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