Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Cold Bum
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds to me like the process of spiritual awakening going on, Fred. My condolences and congratulations, my friend. Great write here!
January 24th, 2018 09:50
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds to me like the process of spiritual awakening going on, Fred. My condolences and congratulations, my friend. Great write here!
January 24th, 2018 09:50
Cold Bum
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Nothing much worse than a cold bum! lol. I stand sometimes, while waiting for a bus or train. The waiting room seats/shelters cause me to jump up again, if too cold!
January 24th, 2018 02:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Nothing much worse than a cold bum! lol. I stand sometimes, while waiting for a bus or train. The waiting room seats/shelters cause me to jump up again, if too cold!
January 24th, 2018 02:52
Cold Bum
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, sometime it is worth clearing your mind and wallow in its emptiness. I can sometimes do this and feel more relaxed having done so.
January 24th, 2018 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, sometime it is worth clearing your mind and wallow in its emptiness. I can sometimes do this and feel more relaxed having done so.
January 24th, 2018 02:52
Little Things
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Michael! I think we both understand each other!
January 24th, 2018 02:52
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Michael! I think we both understand each other!
January 24th, 2018 02:52
Cold Bum
Caring dove said:
the cold bum distracted you momentarily from the deep thinking and your reflection lol nice piece of writing which i enjoyed reading
January 24th, 2018 02:48
Caring dove said:
the cold bum distracted you momentarily from the deep thinking and your reflection lol nice piece of writing which i enjoyed reading
January 24th, 2018 02:48
Little Things
Michael Edwards said:
The whole is made up of little things (I know all about little things !!) Fred this a great observational write - love it.
January 24th, 2018 02:47
Michael Edwards said:
The whole is made up of little things (I know all about little things !!) Fred this a great observational write - love it.
January 24th, 2018 02:47
Cold Bum
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Angel! The word \'amazing\' is debatable! But my wife told me that I am actually not as bad as everybody else says I am! So there you go!
January 24th, 2018 02:45
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Angel! The word \'amazing\' is debatable! But my wife told me that I am actually not as bad as everybody else says I am! So there you go!
January 24th, 2018 02:45
Little Things
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fred, those little things can have huge consequences.
January 24th, 2018 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fred, those little things can have huge consequences.
January 24th, 2018 02:44
Cold Bum
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Michael, you are so right. When I was young, my brains were down in my pants. But I think they repatriated upwards again now.
January 24th, 2018 02:09
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Michael, you are so right. When I was young, my brains were down in my pants. But I think they repatriated upwards again now.
January 24th, 2018 02:09
Cold Bum
Michael Edwards said:
Not easy to exercise your brain when your bum is cold - mind you it depends where your brains are lol - love this excellent write Fred.
January 24th, 2018 02:05
Michael Edwards said:
Not easy to exercise your brain when your bum is cold - mind you it depends where your brains are lol - love this excellent write Fred.
January 24th, 2018 02:05
Little Things
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Louis, something a little different. Otherwise I might bore you to death!
January 23rd, 2018 23:21
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Louis, something a little different. Otherwise I might bore you to death!
January 23rd, 2018 23:21
Little Things
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the poem, and love the form of it ... quite interesting both, Fred!
January 23rd, 2018 22:44
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the poem, and love the form of it ... quite interesting both, Fred!
January 23rd, 2018 22:44
Little Things
Accidental Poet said:
So true Fred, the little things do matter.
January 23rd, 2018 20:30
Accidental Poet said:
So true Fred, the little things do matter.
January 23rd, 2018 20:30
Consiousness
skyebellasario said:
Love this piece Fred! It\'s so deep and meaningful :)
January 21st, 2018 05:57
skyebellasario said:
Love this piece Fred! It\'s so deep and meaningful :)
January 21st, 2018 05:57
Consiousness
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, your soul may also be your conciousness.
January 21st, 2018 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, your soul may also be your conciousness.
January 21st, 2018 02:46
Consiousness
Michael Edwards said:
A deep write and Aislinn is right - great last line - super work Fred.
January 21st, 2018 01:19
Michael Edwards said:
A deep write and Aislinn is right - great last line - super work Fred.
January 21st, 2018 01:19
Consiousness
Heather T said:
Someone has been swimming in deep waters! It\'s always interesting to see what others find \"in there\". Certainly makes for fascinating writing.
January 20th, 2018 22:25
Heather T said:
Someone has been swimming in deep waters! It\'s always interesting to see what others find \"in there\". Certainly makes for fascinating writing.
January 20th, 2018 22:25
Consiousness
Louis Gibbs said:
A great existential write, Fred ... profound and deep. I hope you will let me know when you get it all sorted out.
January 20th, 2018 21:30
Louis Gibbs said:
A great existential write, Fred ... profound and deep. I hope you will let me know when you get it all sorted out.
January 20th, 2018 21:30
Consiousness
Aislinn Wilson said:
The final line really punched. Great write, I love your work!
January 20th, 2018 20:11
Aislinn Wilson said:
The final line really punched. Great write, I love your work!
January 20th, 2018 20:11
Consiousness
kevin browne said:
deep work into the human soul and your existence which is revealing your inner thoughts. a brace shout out here, Fred, encouraging work about the revelation of mind.
January 20th, 2018 18:33
kevin browne said:
deep work into the human soul and your existence which is revealing your inner thoughts. a brace shout out here, Fred, encouraging work about the revelation of mind.
January 20th, 2018 18:33
Human Merchandise
kevin browne said:
touching everyone\'s heart who has a heart towards your poem. a tender write and you covered it really well, in FredPeyer, style.
January 19th, 2018 17:05
kevin browne said:
touching everyone\'s heart who has a heart towards your poem. a tender write and you covered it really well, in FredPeyer, style.
January 19th, 2018 17:05
Defunct Marriage
Aislinn Wilson said:
The course of this poem is very entrancing, entrancing in a way that really aids to the feeling of being trapped. Really amazing poem.
January 19th, 2018 12:36
Aislinn Wilson said:
The course of this poem is very entrancing, entrancing in a way that really aids to the feeling of being trapped. Really amazing poem.
January 19th, 2018 12:36
Human Merchandise
Aislinn Wilson said:
To say this has powerful imagery is really the least I can say
January 19th, 2018 12:35
Aislinn Wilson said:
To say this has powerful imagery is really the least I can say
January 19th, 2018 12:35
Human Merchandise
Louis Gibbs said:
A well written portrayal of the desperation and nobility of those who offer themselves as beasts of burden to feed a family or to simply survive. Great write, Fred!
January 19th, 2018 09:32
Louis Gibbs said:
A well written portrayal of the desperation and nobility of those who offer themselves as beasts of burden to feed a family or to simply survive. Great write, Fred!
January 19th, 2018 09:32
Human Merchandise
Lorna said:
There\'s a kind of nobility in how hard most men try to feed their families. The older I get the more the ultra rich disgust me.
January 19th, 2018 04:16
Lorna said:
There\'s a kind of nobility in how hard most men try to feed their families. The older I get the more the ultra rich disgust me.
January 19th, 2018 04:16
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