Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Little Things
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fred, those little things can have huge consequences.
January 24th, 2018 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fred, those little things can have huge consequences.
January 24th, 2018 02:44
Cold Bum
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Michael, you are so right. When I was young, my brains were down in my pants. But I think they repatriated upwards again now.
January 24th, 2018 02:09
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Michael, you are so right. When I was young, my brains were down in my pants. But I think they repatriated upwards again now.
January 24th, 2018 02:09
Cold Bum
Michael Edwards said:
Not easy to exercise your brain when your bum is cold - mind you it depends where your brains are lol - love this excellent write Fred.
January 24th, 2018 02:05
Michael Edwards said:
Not easy to exercise your brain when your bum is cold - mind you it depends where your brains are lol - love this excellent write Fred.
January 24th, 2018 02:05
Little Things
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Louis, something a little different. Otherwise I might bore you to death!
January 23rd, 2018 23:21
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Louis, something a little different. Otherwise I might bore you to death!
January 23rd, 2018 23:21
Little Things
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the poem, and love the form of it ... quite interesting both, Fred!
January 23rd, 2018 22:44
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the poem, and love the form of it ... quite interesting both, Fred!
January 23rd, 2018 22:44
Consiousness
skyebellasario said:
Love this piece Fred! It\'s so deep and meaningful :)
January 21st, 2018 05:57
skyebellasario said:
Love this piece Fred! It\'s so deep and meaningful :)
January 21st, 2018 05:57
Consiousness
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, your soul may also be your conciousness.
January 21st, 2018 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, your soul may also be your conciousness.
January 21st, 2018 02:46
Consiousness
Michael Edwards said:
A deep write and Aislinn is right - great last line - super work Fred.
January 21st, 2018 01:19
Michael Edwards said:
A deep write and Aislinn is right - great last line - super work Fred.
January 21st, 2018 01:19
Consiousness
Heather T said:
Someone has been swimming in deep waters! It\'s always interesting to see what others find \"in there\". Certainly makes for fascinating writing.
January 20th, 2018 22:25
Heather T said:
Someone has been swimming in deep waters! It\'s always interesting to see what others find \"in there\". Certainly makes for fascinating writing.
January 20th, 2018 22:25
Consiousness
Louis Gibbs said:
A great existential write, Fred ... profound and deep. I hope you will let me know when you get it all sorted out.
January 20th, 2018 21:30
Louis Gibbs said:
A great existential write, Fred ... profound and deep. I hope you will let me know when you get it all sorted out.
January 20th, 2018 21:30
Consiousness
Aislinn Wilson said:
The final line really punched. Great write, I love your work!
January 20th, 2018 20:11
Aislinn Wilson said:
The final line really punched. Great write, I love your work!
January 20th, 2018 20:11
Consiousness
kevin browne said:
deep work into the human soul and your existence which is revealing your inner thoughts. a brace shout out here, Fred, encouraging work about the revelation of mind.
January 20th, 2018 18:33
kevin browne said:
deep work into the human soul and your existence which is revealing your inner thoughts. a brace shout out here, Fred, encouraging work about the revelation of mind.
January 20th, 2018 18:33
Human Merchandise
kevin browne said:
touching everyone\'s heart who has a heart towards your poem. a tender write and you covered it really well, in FredPeyer, style.
January 19th, 2018 17:05
kevin browne said:
touching everyone\'s heart who has a heart towards your poem. a tender write and you covered it really well, in FredPeyer, style.
January 19th, 2018 17:05
Defunct Marriage
Aislinn Wilson said:
The course of this poem is very entrancing, entrancing in a way that really aids to the feeling of being trapped. Really amazing poem.
January 19th, 2018 12:36
Aislinn Wilson said:
The course of this poem is very entrancing, entrancing in a way that really aids to the feeling of being trapped. Really amazing poem.
January 19th, 2018 12:36
Human Merchandise
Aislinn Wilson said:
To say this has powerful imagery is really the least I can say
January 19th, 2018 12:35
Aislinn Wilson said:
To say this has powerful imagery is really the least I can say
January 19th, 2018 12:35
Human Merchandise
Louis Gibbs said:
A well written portrayal of the desperation and nobility of those who offer themselves as beasts of burden to feed a family or to simply survive. Great write, Fred!
January 19th, 2018 09:32
Louis Gibbs said:
A well written portrayal of the desperation and nobility of those who offer themselves as beasts of burden to feed a family or to simply survive. Great write, Fred!
January 19th, 2018 09:32
Human Merchandise
Lorna said:
There\'s a kind of nobility in how hard most men try to feed their families. The older I get the more the ultra rich disgust me.
January 19th, 2018 04:16
Lorna said:
There\'s a kind of nobility in how hard most men try to feed their families. The older I get the more the ultra rich disgust me.
January 19th, 2018 04:16
Human Merchandise
Michael Edwards said:
I saw a programme last night about the Liverpool dockers a century ago lining up hoping to be chosen that day - we have so much to be grateful for being born when we were.
January 19th, 2018 03:41
Michael Edwards said:
I saw a programme last night about the Liverpool dockers a century ago lining up hoping to be chosen that day - we have so much to be grateful for being born when we were.
January 19th, 2018 03:41
Human Merchandise
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very true for many in a world where there is enough for all but those with will not give to those without!
Good write Fred.
January 19th, 2018 03:06
Goldfinch60 said:
This is very true for many in a world where there is enough for all but those with will not give to those without!
Good write Fred.
January 19th, 2018 03:06
Human Merchandise
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. It\'s a miserable existence for some.
Similarly, I see some homeless sitting out in all weathers. They are either genuinely homeless, or determined cheats just begging.
January 19th, 2018 02:45
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. It\'s a miserable existence for some.
Similarly, I see some homeless sitting out in all weathers. They are either genuinely homeless, or determined cheats just begging.
January 19th, 2018 02:45
Defunct Marriage
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very true write Fred for many people, I am very grateful that I am not one of them, although life is hard with my wife\'s dementia our love is still there and shine through us.
January 19th, 2018 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very true write Fred for many people, I am very grateful that I am not one of them, although life is hard with my wife\'s dementia our love is still there and shine through us.
January 19th, 2018 01:51
Defunct Marriage
Michael Edwards said:
Reading this makes me realise how privileged I am - super work Fred
January 19th, 2018 00:32
Michael Edwards said:
Reading this makes me realise how privileged I am - super work Fred
January 19th, 2018 00:32
Defunct Marriage
Laura🌻 said:
Fred,
A metaphorically rich write to describe a defunct marriage! Kudos my friend! It’s going right into my favorites in case I need to reference it!
Unfortunately it’s a sad subject matter, but realistic for many!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 18:50
Laura🌻 said:
Fred,
A metaphorically rich write to describe a defunct marriage! Kudos my friend! It’s going right into my favorites in case I need to reference it!
Unfortunately it’s a sad subject matter, but realistic for many!
~Laura~
January 18th, 2018 18:50
Defunct Marriage
Heather T said:
Some rise from the smoking heap, and many do not. You\'ve captured the ruins perfectly. This was a poem in itself:
\"Nothing left but silence
In a cemetery of words\"
January 18th, 2018 17:57
Heather T said:
Some rise from the smoking heap, and many do not. You\'ve captured the ruins perfectly. This was a poem in itself:
\"Nothing left but silence
In a cemetery of words\"
January 18th, 2018 17:57
Defunct Marriage
Louis Gibbs said:
Been there, done that, a few times. Not a fun way for a relationship to end. Your poem says it all, Fred!
January 18th, 2018 17:05
Louis Gibbs said:
Been there, done that, a few times. Not a fun way for a relationship to end. Your poem says it all, Fred!
January 18th, 2018 17:05
Defunct Marriage
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I needed this more than you\'ll ever know my friend. Thank you kindly
January 18th, 2018 16:56
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I needed this more than you\'ll ever know my friend. Thank you kindly
January 18th, 2018 16:56
Platform Four
Aislinn Wilson said:
What a striking snapshot, this is a very good poem.
January 18th, 2018 11:02
Aislinn Wilson said:
What a striking snapshot, this is a very good poem.
January 18th, 2018 11:02
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