Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Saved by the Light
Louis Gibbs said:
In the final analysis, \'the light\', which we all are a part of, is all that there really is ... it is everything. A wonderful metaphor, Fred!
January 11th, 2018 16:30
Louis Gibbs said:
In the final analysis, \'the light\', which we all are a part of, is all that there really is ... it is everything. A wonderful metaphor, Fred!
January 11th, 2018 16:30
Broken Me
kevin browne said:
ah, the softened touch of romance together heart to heart and all those wonderful beautiful feelings that come along with it. penned perfectly here, Fred, the message is clear and fluently posed for a great poem. Keep on loving, my friend.
January 10th, 2018 13:36
kevin browne said:
ah, the softened touch of romance together heart to heart and all those wonderful beautiful feelings that come along with it. penned perfectly here, Fred, the message is clear and fluently posed for a great poem. Keep on loving, my friend.
January 10th, 2018 13:36
Broken Me
Poetic Dan said:
Just read that one out loud and cried healing tears, you the man ;)
January 10th, 2018 13:02
Poetic Dan said:
Just read that one out loud and cried healing tears, you the man ;)
January 10th, 2018 13:02
Backwards / Forward
Poetic Dan said:
Mind blown away.... To many thoughts jumping around thank you buddy
January 10th, 2018 12:55
Poetic Dan said:
Mind blown away.... To many thoughts jumping around thank you buddy
January 10th, 2018 12:55
Broken Me
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how a good woman can make a broken man whole. Ya gotta love em! Well written, Fred!
January 10th, 2018 10:57
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how a good woman can make a broken man whole. Ya gotta love em! Well written, Fred!
January 10th, 2018 10:57
Broken Me
orchidee said:
Good write Fred, and not a swoon in sight from me! So this is not too \'hot\' for me. lol.
January 10th, 2018 03:00
orchidee said:
Good write Fred, and not a swoon in sight from me! So this is not too \'hot\' for me. lol.
January 10th, 2018 03:00
Broken Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write, my wife was always there for me and we became one, as it should be.
January 10th, 2018 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write, my wife was always there for me and we became one, as it should be.
January 10th, 2018 01:54
Broken Me
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure that I was ever broken but my wife is there, everywhere, for me and made me whole - super work Fred
January 10th, 2018 01:13
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure that I was ever broken but my wife is there, everywhere, for me and made me whole - super work Fred
January 10th, 2018 01:13
Double Doors
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ I\'m always pleased when my flight is delayed @ Heathrow or Gatwick or even Stanstead ! WHY ? Because it gives me TIME to People Watch and AIR TRAVELLERS are always interesting. I have observed many \"resolute\" Ladies (such as you describe) who erect an \"unapproachable\" barrier ~ BUT I suspect ~ are hurting inside ! Your poem would make an excellent opening to a thriller ! As we all experience (at one level or another ?) \"Hell hath no fury like a Woman scorned !\" Thanks BRIAN
January 9th, 2018 17:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ I\'m always pleased when my flight is delayed @ Heathrow or Gatwick or even Stanstead ! WHY ? Because it gives me TIME to People Watch and AIR TRAVELLERS are always interesting. I have observed many \"resolute\" Ladies (such as you describe) who erect an \"unapproachable\" barrier ~ BUT I suspect ~ are hurting inside ! Your poem would make an excellent opening to a thriller ! As we all experience (at one level or another ?) \"Hell hath no fury like a Woman scorned !\" Thanks BRIAN
January 9th, 2018 17:10
Double Doors
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah u are an observant poet to capture all that without really knowing so. Awesome imagination put to great poetic description of her. Come to think of it I could picture many such a person, both men and women but to put it all so superbly is credit to your great pen. A zillion kudos for this poem, im just swayed by it.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 14:15
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah u are an observant poet to capture all that without really knowing so. Awesome imagination put to great poetic description of her. Come to think of it I could picture many such a person, both men and women but to put it all so superbly is credit to your great pen. A zillion kudos for this poem, im just swayed by it.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 14:15
Double Doors
dusk arising said:
Inner strength, determination and self worth. Great strong positive and empowering reading.
January 9th, 2018 14:01
dusk arising said:
Inner strength, determination and self worth. Great strong positive and empowering reading.
January 9th, 2018 14:01
Double Doors
Fay Slimm. said:
Looking forward is the best thing a lady can do under the cloak of impeccable make-up - - a great read Fred.
January 9th, 2018 13:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Looking forward is the best thing a lady can do under the cloak of impeccable make-up - - a great read Fred.
January 9th, 2018 13:22
Double Doors
Louis Gibbs said:
A well portrayed example of emerging from a difficult life experience with the determination to press on. Kudos, Fred!
January 9th, 2018 11:24
Louis Gibbs said:
A well portrayed example of emerging from a difficult life experience with the determination to press on. Kudos, Fred!
January 9th, 2018 11:24
Double Doors
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fred, their new life awaits them, a life of love, joy and happiness.
January 9th, 2018 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fred, their new life awaits them, a life of love, joy and happiness.
January 9th, 2018 02:53
Double Doors
Michael Edwards said:
Forward into a new world - great work Fred
January 9th, 2018 01:28
Michael Edwards said:
Forward into a new world - great work Fred
January 9th, 2018 01:28
A Moment in Time
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem, Fred! I can so easily imagine this. Absolutely wonderful indeed!
January 8th, 2018 22:22
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem, Fred! I can so easily imagine this. Absolutely wonderful indeed!
January 8th, 2018 22:22
A Moment in Time
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a heart-moving scene and how many times this must take place Fred - souls that pass so quickly yet never forget that connection.
January 8th, 2018 14:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a heart-moving scene and how many times this must take place Fred - souls that pass so quickly yet never forget that connection.
January 8th, 2018 14:08
A Moment in Time
skyebellasario said:
Love this write Fred! I\'m hoping these strangers meet again :)
January 8th, 2018 12:56
skyebellasario said:
Love this write Fred! I\'m hoping these strangers meet again :)
January 8th, 2018 12:56
A Moment in Time
lasergraph said:
I can visualize the scene and it makes you wish for more, root for a meeting and so forth but sometimes just the connection is all there is.
January 8th, 2018 09:48
lasergraph said:
I can visualize the scene and it makes you wish for more, root for a meeting and so forth but sometimes just the connection is all there is.
January 8th, 2018 09:48
A Moment in Time
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing what a smile from a stranger can do, isn\'t it. Well captured in this good write, Fred!
January 8th, 2018 08:09
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing what a smile from a stranger can do, isn\'t it. Well captured in this good write, Fred!
January 8th, 2018 08:09
A Moment in Time
Michael Edwards said:
I could see the scene in my minds eye - great stuff Fred.
January 8th, 2018 03:10
Michael Edwards said:
I could see the scene in my minds eye - great stuff Fred.
January 8th, 2018 03:10
A Moment in Time
orchidee said:
a fine write Fred. Erm, like me and KP when we first met on a train! lol.
January 8th, 2018 03:01
orchidee said:
a fine write Fred. Erm, like me and KP when we first met on a train! lol.
January 8th, 2018 03:01
A Moment in Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and this can happen more frequently than people imagine. \"Strangers that pass in the night\"
https://youtu.be/ZwAERaRUsp0
January 8th, 2018 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and this can happen more frequently than people imagine. \"Strangers that pass in the night\"
https://youtu.be/ZwAERaRUsp0
January 8th, 2018 02:04
Law of my Mind
poetboy123 said:
Wonderful, relatable piece with great rhythm!
January 7th, 2018 21:45
poetboy123 said:
Wonderful, relatable piece with great rhythm!
January 7th, 2018 21:45
Law of my Mind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ My definition of POETRY is anywords~in~anyorder ! Because of this I always find \"overdrive poetry\" enjoyable to read and impossible to understand ~ perfection ! Thanks for scaring ! Yours BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 16:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ My definition of POETRY is anywords~in~anyorder ! Because of this I always find \"overdrive poetry\" enjoyable to read and impossible to understand ~ perfection ! Thanks for scaring ! Yours BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 16:37
Law of my Mind
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like your fertile mind is roaming outside of the box these days, Fred. Congratulations, and condolences. One can get lost out there, but I am sure you will be fine! Roam on, my friend.
January 7th, 2018 11:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like your fertile mind is roaming outside of the box these days, Fred. Congratulations, and condolences. One can get lost out there, but I am sure you will be fine! Roam on, my friend.
January 7th, 2018 11:24
Law of my Mind
Accidental Poet said:
Not easy to keep all the thoughts of a genius in line. But you do a great job of it when writing Fred.
January 7th, 2018 07:54
Accidental Poet said:
Not easy to keep all the thoughts of a genius in line. But you do a great job of it when writing Fred.
January 7th, 2018 07:54
Law of my Mind
Elsie said:
Yes I often have an awesome thought, (well sometimes) or really good line and then...whoosh...its gawn! I like the \'ping pong\' of the mind!
January 7th, 2018 04:59
Elsie said:
Yes I often have an awesome thought, (well sometimes) or really good line and then...whoosh...its gawn! I like the \'ping pong\' of the mind!
January 7th, 2018 04:59
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