Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Double Doors
Louis Gibbs said:
A well portrayed example of emerging from a difficult life experience with the determination to press on. Kudos, Fred!
January 9th, 2018 11:24
Louis Gibbs said:
A well portrayed example of emerging from a difficult life experience with the determination to press on. Kudos, Fred!
January 9th, 2018 11:24
Double Doors
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fred, their new life awaits them, a life of love, joy and happiness.
January 9th, 2018 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fred, their new life awaits them, a life of love, joy and happiness.
January 9th, 2018 02:53
Double Doors
Michael Edwards said:
Forward into a new world - great work Fred
January 9th, 2018 01:28
Michael Edwards said:
Forward into a new world - great work Fred
January 9th, 2018 01:28
A Moment in Time
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem, Fred! I can so easily imagine this. Absolutely wonderful indeed!
January 8th, 2018 22:22
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem, Fred! I can so easily imagine this. Absolutely wonderful indeed!
January 8th, 2018 22:22
A Moment in Time
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a heart-moving scene and how many times this must take place Fred - souls that pass so quickly yet never forget that connection.
January 8th, 2018 14:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a heart-moving scene and how many times this must take place Fred - souls that pass so quickly yet never forget that connection.
January 8th, 2018 14:08
A Moment in Time
skyebellasario said:
Love this write Fred! I\'m hoping these strangers meet again :)
January 8th, 2018 12:56
skyebellasario said:
Love this write Fred! I\'m hoping these strangers meet again :)
January 8th, 2018 12:56
A Moment in Time
lasergraph said:
I can visualize the scene and it makes you wish for more, root for a meeting and so forth but sometimes just the connection is all there is.
January 8th, 2018 09:48
lasergraph said:
I can visualize the scene and it makes you wish for more, root for a meeting and so forth but sometimes just the connection is all there is.
January 8th, 2018 09:48
A Moment in Time
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing what a smile from a stranger can do, isn\'t it. Well captured in this good write, Fred!
January 8th, 2018 08:09
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing what a smile from a stranger can do, isn\'t it. Well captured in this good write, Fred!
January 8th, 2018 08:09
A Moment in Time
Michael Edwards said:
I could see the scene in my minds eye - great stuff Fred.
January 8th, 2018 03:10
Michael Edwards said:
I could see the scene in my minds eye - great stuff Fred.
January 8th, 2018 03:10
A Moment in Time
orchidee said:
a fine write Fred. Erm, like me and KP when we first met on a train! lol.
January 8th, 2018 03:01
orchidee said:
a fine write Fred. Erm, like me and KP when we first met on a train! lol.
January 8th, 2018 03:01
A Moment in Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and this can happen more frequently than people imagine. \"Strangers that pass in the night\"
https://youtu.be/ZwAERaRUsp0
January 8th, 2018 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and this can happen more frequently than people imagine. \"Strangers that pass in the night\"
https://youtu.be/ZwAERaRUsp0
January 8th, 2018 02:04
Law of my Mind
poetboy123 said:
Wonderful, relatable piece with great rhythm!
January 7th, 2018 21:45
poetboy123 said:
Wonderful, relatable piece with great rhythm!
January 7th, 2018 21:45
Law of my Mind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ My definition of POETRY is anywords~in~anyorder ! Because of this I always find \"overdrive poetry\" enjoyable to read and impossible to understand ~ perfection ! Thanks for scaring ! Yours BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 16:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ My definition of POETRY is anywords~in~anyorder ! Because of this I always find \"overdrive poetry\" enjoyable to read and impossible to understand ~ perfection ! Thanks for scaring ! Yours BRIAN
January 7th, 2018 16:37
Law of my Mind
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like your fertile mind is roaming outside of the box these days, Fred. Congratulations, and condolences. One can get lost out there, but I am sure you will be fine! Roam on, my friend.
January 7th, 2018 11:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like your fertile mind is roaming outside of the box these days, Fred. Congratulations, and condolences. One can get lost out there, but I am sure you will be fine! Roam on, my friend.
January 7th, 2018 11:24
Law of my Mind
Elsie said:
Yes I often have an awesome thought, (well sometimes) or really good line and then...whoosh...its gawn! I like the \'ping pong\' of the mind!
January 7th, 2018 04:59
Elsie said:
Yes I often have an awesome thought, (well sometimes) or really good line and then...whoosh...its gawn! I like the \'ping pong\' of the mind!
January 7th, 2018 04:59
Law of my Mind
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s how my mind works at times as well - the number of times something flashes across it and whilst thinking about what comes next I have lost the last thought. Fine work Fred.
January 7th, 2018 04:34
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s how my mind works at times as well - the number of times something flashes across it and whilst thinking about what comes next I have lost the last thought. Fine work Fred.
January 7th, 2018 04:34
Law of my Mind
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Ahh, you are thinking. That\'s more than some of us do! heehee.
January 7th, 2018 02:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Ahh, you are thinking. That\'s more than some of us do! heehee.
January 7th, 2018 02:58
Law of my Mind
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fred. \"To trust without fear\" is the way that life should always be.
January 7th, 2018 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fred. \"To trust without fear\" is the way that life should always be.
January 7th, 2018 02:16
Out of Body
Elsie said:
it reminds me of an OBE I experienced some years ago. Definitely \'freed of earthly limitation\'. What an interesting subject. Got me thinking about things I could write about.
January 6th, 2018 21:50
Elsie said:
it reminds me of an OBE I experienced some years ago. Definitely \'freed of earthly limitation\'. What an interesting subject. Got me thinking about things I could write about.
January 6th, 2018 21:50
I am
Elsie said:
I am glad orchidee told me what a saguaro is. I am definitely a tree. Love the different powers of each one .
January 6th, 2018 21:42
Elsie said:
I am glad orchidee told me what a saguaro is. I am definitely a tree. Love the different powers of each one .
January 6th, 2018 21:42
The last Day of the Year
Elsie said:
I wish to feel more optimistic - I am sure it will come in time. But lovely writing as always, it seems, from you Fred!
January 6th, 2018 21:38
Elsie said:
I wish to feel more optimistic - I am sure it will come in time. But lovely writing as always, it seems, from you Fred!
January 6th, 2018 21:38
You wanna f**k Tonight?
Elsie said:
ha ha ha, so funny, love the fact that you weren\'t sure about posting it; I would be the same, and then what did you think? F%!k it? I love the hopeful anticipation and then comical let-down - awesome. There is a word for this - can\'t remember; it\'s very very late here and I should be in bed. (On my own!!!)
January 6th, 2018 21:25
Elsie said:
ha ha ha, so funny, love the fact that you weren\'t sure about posting it; I would be the same, and then what did you think? F%!k it? I love the hopeful anticipation and then comical let-down - awesome. There is a word for this - can\'t remember; it\'s very very late here and I should be in bed. (On my own!!!)
January 6th, 2018 21:25
Unfulfilled Dreams
Elsie said:
Oh my, I am actually crying. I have held myself back for so long yearning to be \'freed from chains of regret\'! I would love to \'shed my cloak of fear and worry\' Very thought provoking. Beautifully crafted words.
January 6th, 2018 21:08
Elsie said:
Oh my, I am actually crying. I have held myself back for so long yearning to be \'freed from chains of regret\'! I would love to \'shed my cloak of fear and worry\' Very thought provoking. Beautifully crafted words.
January 6th, 2018 21:08
On the Bus
Elsie said:
This is such an evocative story. Powerful in its simplicity. I am finding myself wondering about his life and what brought him here.
January 6th, 2018 21:02
Elsie said:
This is such an evocative story. Powerful in its simplicity. I am finding myself wondering about his life and what brought him here.
January 6th, 2018 21:02
I am
Christina8 said:
I think it\'s all been said, but it\'s a beautifully written poem, Fred!
January 6th, 2018 20:25
Christina8 said:
I think it\'s all been said, but it\'s a beautifully written poem, Fred!
January 6th, 2018 20:25
I am
Laura🌻 said:
Fred...
A resilient man you are!
Bravo! Loved reading
your poem! The metaphors
are exquisite! Awesome!
~Laura~
January 6th, 2018 13:04
Laura🌻 said:
Fred...
A resilient man you are!
Bravo! Loved reading
your poem! The metaphors
are exquisite! Awesome!
~Laura~
January 6th, 2018 13:04
I am
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor of mankind\'s resilience. Well penned, Fred!
January 6th, 2018 10:00
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor of mankind\'s resilience. Well penned, Fred!
January 6th, 2018 10:00
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