Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
The Play
skyebellasario said:
You really are a wonderful poet Fred, loved this!
February 2nd, 2018 17:18
skyebellasario said:
You really are a wonderful poet Fred, loved this!
February 2nd, 2018 17:18
The Play
Christina8 said:
This is wonderful, Fred! I love how you wrote this. My favorite play of all. (When there is a sun to be seen :-))
February 2nd, 2018 15:20
Christina8 said:
This is wonderful, Fred! I love how you wrote this. My favorite play of all. (When there is a sun to be seen :-))
February 2nd, 2018 15:20
The Play
kevin browne said:
your a clever poet, Fred, you delve into am realm of beauty which captures the imagination and that\'\'s what makes a great poet. standing behind life on the stage of delving deep into your imagination open up the curtains to reveal the true you. a very well written poem here and I love it all. perfectly staged, my friend.
February 2nd, 2018 05:08
kevin browne said:
your a clever poet, Fred, you delve into am realm of beauty which captures the imagination and that\'\'s what makes a great poet. standing behind life on the stage of delving deep into your imagination open up the curtains to reveal the true you. a very well written poem here and I love it all. perfectly staged, my friend.
February 2nd, 2018 05:08
I can write!
orchidee said:
Yep, and there it is - another fine poem! Yes, phrases people use when I sing: \'I\'ll get your coat, shall I?\' \'Don\'t overstay your welcome\', etc. All meaning - Clear off With that caterwauling! heehee.
February 2nd, 2018 02:31
orchidee said:
Yep, and there it is - another fine poem! Yes, phrases people use when I sing: \'I\'ll get your coat, shall I?\' \'Don\'t overstay your welcome\', etc. All meaning - Clear off With that caterwauling! heehee.
February 2nd, 2018 02:31
The Play
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, the changing day is beautiful in it ways and as with all nights we know that morning will come, and in our lives Fred we have seen many of them.
February 2nd, 2018 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, the changing day is beautiful in it ways and as with all nights we know that morning will come, and in our lives Fred we have seen many of them.
February 2nd, 2018 01:59
I can write!
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens sometimes and then the muse just takes over without you knowing. Good write Fred.
February 2nd, 2018 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens sometimes and then the muse just takes over without you knowing. Good write Fred.
February 2nd, 2018 01:42
The Play
Michael Edwards said:
Well your muse is musing Fred and love the metaphorical concept of this fine write.
February 2nd, 2018 01:16
Michael Edwards said:
Well your muse is musing Fred and love the metaphorical concept of this fine write.
February 2nd, 2018 01:16
I can write!
Kurt Philip Behm said:
What a great two lines, Fred....
\"being a silent witness at my own cremation
Watching my dreams flow out the exhaust\"
Kurt
February 2nd, 2018 00:24
Kurt Philip Behm said:
What a great two lines, Fred....
\"being a silent witness at my own cremation
Watching my dreams flow out the exhaust\"
Kurt
February 2nd, 2018 00:24
I can write!
Fay Slimm. said:
You have no writing drought Fred by the construction of such inspiring rhyming.First class read.
February 1st, 2018 17:24
Fay Slimm. said:
You have no writing drought Fred by the construction of such inspiring rhyming.First class read.
February 1st, 2018 17:24
I can write!
Michael Edwards said:
I need to recharge - yes I\'ve heard that as well - it\'s a bit like all the other meaningless (in my mind at least) phrases like: I need to switch off, I need space, I need some air, I need a break etcetera. I can see a poem - see even thinking about someone else\'s poem can inspire so all is not lost. I\'m tired and I\'m rambling and I need some shut eye. Well this poem turned out nice Fred - keep writing my friend.
February 1st, 2018 15:38
Michael Edwards said:
I need to recharge - yes I\'ve heard that as well - it\'s a bit like all the other meaningless (in my mind at least) phrases like: I need to switch off, I need space, I need some air, I need a break etcetera. I can see a poem - see even thinking about someone else\'s poem can inspire so all is not lost. I\'m tired and I\'m rambling and I need some shut eye. Well this poem turned out nice Fred - keep writing my friend.
February 1st, 2018 15:38
A Different Kind of Poem
kevin browne said:
sounds and reads fab, Fred, well worth the effort so you must be pleased. I know I am. thank you.
February 1st, 2018 12:40
kevin browne said:
sounds and reads fab, Fred, well worth the effort so you must be pleased. I know I am. thank you.
February 1st, 2018 12:40
A Different Kind of Poem
Christina8 said:
This was a great poem that worked out well with your new rhyme scheme! Great job! I enjoyed the read!
January 30th, 2018 13:53
Christina8 said:
This was a great poem that worked out well with your new rhyme scheme! Great job! I enjoyed the read!
January 30th, 2018 13:53
A Different Kind of Poem
Aislinn Wilson said:
Interesting rhyme scheme! I was awfully intrigued! Nice method of storytelling, and great poem.
January 30th, 2018 13:37
Aislinn Wilson said:
Interesting rhyme scheme! I was awfully intrigued! Nice method of storytelling, and great poem.
January 30th, 2018 13:37
A Different Kind of Poem
Michael Edwards said:
Gives it a great lilt and works so well and the story line carries you along.
January 30th, 2018 12:44
Michael Edwards said:
Gives it a great lilt and works so well and the story line carries you along.
January 30th, 2018 12:44
A Different Kind of Poem
Lorna said:
Really clever Fred! And you told a story! Compact and neat!
January 30th, 2018 04:19
Lorna said:
Really clever Fred! And you told a story! Compact and neat!
January 30th, 2018 04:19
A Different Kind of Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I know it is quite a feat to do things this way, it worked well.
January 30th, 2018 03:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I know it is quite a feat to do things this way, it worked well.
January 30th, 2018 03:12
A Different Kind of Poem
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Yes, I may reel off some of my poems, in AABB rhyming.
But this takes more thought, having to return to previous lines to make them rhyme.
January 30th, 2018 02:48
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Yes, I may reel off some of my poems, in AABB rhyming.
But this takes more thought, having to return to previous lines to make them rhyme.
January 30th, 2018 02:48
Slowdance
dusk arising said:
Slow dancing, touching bodies knowingly blending into relaxed familiarity of such well known heat and relaxation of passions expressed and yet to come. Envious of you. Superb writing.
January 29th, 2018 12:29
dusk arising said:
Slow dancing, touching bodies knowingly blending into relaxed familiarity of such well known heat and relaxation of passions expressed and yet to come. Envious of you. Superb writing.
January 29th, 2018 12:29
Slowdance
Christina8 said:
Absolutely beautiful to read, Fred! I could see it in my mind as I read.
January 29th, 2018 07:39
Christina8 said:
Absolutely beautiful to read, Fred! I could see it in my mind as I read.
January 29th, 2018 07:39
Slowdance
Michael Edwards said:
Keep dancing Fred but don\'t stop writing beauties like this.
January 29th, 2018 06:53
Michael Edwards said:
Keep dancing Fred but don\'t stop writing beauties like this.
January 29th, 2018 06:53
Slowdance
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance on Fred as we will always do, we will meet you on the dance floor.
January 29th, 2018 02:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Dance on Fred as we will always do, we will meet you on the dance floor.
January 29th, 2018 02:36
Slowdance
Adam Shirley said:
Such a beautiful poem. Your poem brought me to the past and I was in tears, amazing.
January 29th, 2018 01:05
Adam Shirley said:
Such a beautiful poem. Your poem brought me to the past and I was in tears, amazing.
January 29th, 2018 01:05
Final Flight
dusk arising said:
I doubt a final fanfare, I doubt even i shall enjoy that final flight but i\'m sure you\'re right.
I hope the \'tree\' which grows from my rotted leaf bears a far finer foliage than i ever was.
Very thought provoking writing sir!
January 28th, 2018 13:28
dusk arising said:
I doubt a final fanfare, I doubt even i shall enjoy that final flight but i\'m sure you\'re right.
I hope the \'tree\' which grows from my rotted leaf bears a far finer foliage than i ever was.
Very thought provoking writing sir!
January 28th, 2018 13:28
Final Flight
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. You must cut down on smoking there (??) heehee.
January 28th, 2018 03:10
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. You must cut down on smoking there (??) heehee.
January 28th, 2018 03:10
Final Flight
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Fred and at the end of it all:
On a winters day
at close of play
in a wood cachet
wherein I lay
interred in clay.
January 28th, 2018 02:51
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Fred and at the end of it all:
On a winters day
at close of play
in a wood cachet
wherein I lay
interred in clay.
January 28th, 2018 02:51
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