Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Just Human
lasergraph said:
I don\'t see you as stupid but I do see you as human. We are all flawed, we just have hopes the good weighs more than the bad. Great piece.
September 14th, 2017 13:44
lasergraph said:
I don\'t see you as stupid but I do see you as human. We are all flawed, we just have hopes the good weighs more than the bad. Great piece.
September 14th, 2017 13:44
Just Human
myself and me said:
\"I want to embrace
My own stupidity
But my arms are
Too short\"
I could help you to stretch them longer if you like. :)
Their is nothing wrong with stupidity, that is how we were created, as least I was created that way.
Love it.
September 14th, 2017 11:33
myself and me said:
\"I want to embrace
My own stupidity
But my arms are
Too short\"
I could help you to stretch them longer if you like. :)
Their is nothing wrong with stupidity, that is how we were created, as least I was created that way.
Love it.
September 14th, 2017 11:33
Just Human
WL Schuett said:
Fred Great poem loved how you wanted to embrace your stupidity but your arms are too short , fine writing with humor
September 14th, 2017 07:38
WL Schuett said:
Fred Great poem loved how you wanted to embrace your stupidity but your arms are too short , fine writing with humor
September 14th, 2017 07:38
Just Human
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED I am a student of ROBBIE BURNS and your elegant poem echoes a stanza in TO A LOUSE (1786)
Wad some Power the giftie gie us
To see oursels as ithers see us !
It wad frae mony a blunder free us
An\' foolish notion
What airs in dress an\' gait wad lea\'e us
An\' ev\'n devotion !
Poetically speaking BURNS is in a class of his own
Thanks for your sentiments very challenging ~ Yours BRIAN
September 14th, 2017 04:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED I am a student of ROBBIE BURNS and your elegant poem echoes a stanza in TO A LOUSE (1786)
Wad some Power the giftie gie us
To see oursels as ithers see us !
It wad frae mony a blunder free us
An\' foolish notion
What airs in dress an\' gait wad lea\'e us
An\' ev\'n devotion !
Poetically speaking BURNS is in a class of his own
Thanks for your sentiments very challenging ~ Yours BRIAN
September 14th, 2017 04:31
Just Human
Fay Slimm. said:
Good read and helpful to many who find it hard to accept Self - yes being human is the wisest course to take Fred .
September 14th, 2017 02:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Good read and helpful to many who find it hard to accept Self - yes being human is the wisest course to take Fred .
September 14th, 2017 02:51
Just Human
orchidee said:
Now I protest! Some are called humans under false pretences. I mean, who is human in \'Neighbours\'? For USA, think of your most ghastliest soap show instead! heehee.
A fine write Fred.
September 14th, 2017 02:01
orchidee said:
Now I protest! Some are called humans under false pretences. I mean, who is human in \'Neighbours\'? For USA, think of your most ghastliest soap show instead! heehee.
A fine write Fred.
September 14th, 2017 02:01
Just Human
Frank Prem said:
Good luck with that aim, Fred. Best way is to examine it in the form of your own writing. Bravo.
September 14th, 2017 01:42
Frank Prem said:
Good luck with that aim, Fred. Best way is to examine it in the form of your own writing. Bravo.
September 14th, 2017 01:42
Just Human
Michael Edwards said:
The best piece of advice I ever received was from my Dad. He told me to always walk with shoulders back and be proud of who I am. This was instilled into me and to this day I have followed this advice which has given me confidence throughout my life. I have many weaknesses as we all do but Dads advice has always helped me to cope with life. This was Dads gift.
September 14th, 2017 00:51
Michael Edwards said:
The best piece of advice I ever received was from my Dad. He told me to always walk with shoulders back and be proud of who I am. This was instilled into me and to this day I have followed this advice which has given me confidence throughout my life. I have many weaknesses as we all do but Dads advice has always helped me to cope with life. This was Dads gift.
September 14th, 2017 00:51
Just Human
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Goldfinch! We really do need to accept ourselves, but then should also be open to change.
September 14th, 2017 00:15
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Goldfinch! We really do need to accept ourselves, but then should also be open to change.
September 14th, 2017 00:15
Just Human
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need to accept the way we are and move forward. If people have problems with you, or me, remember it is their problem, not yours, or mine. Good write Fred.
September 14th, 2017 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need to accept the way we are and move forward. If people have problems with you, or me, remember it is their problem, not yours, or mine. Good write Fred.
September 14th, 2017 00:14
Ocean Swim
malubotelho said:
Wonderful write Fred. I felt myself floating on the water, staring leisurely into a blue sky. So delicious and relaxing. Great description of a beautiful day.
September 13th, 2017 22:53
malubotelho said:
Wonderful write Fred. I felt myself floating on the water, staring leisurely into a blue sky. So delicious and relaxing. Great description of a beautiful day.
September 13th, 2017 22:53
Ocean Swim
myself and me said:
A worry free moment, with your true self blended into the ocean.
Reading your poem, my mind feel so free.
Wonderful.
September 13th, 2017 11:25
myself and me said:
A worry free moment, with your true self blended into the ocean.
Reading your poem, my mind feel so free.
Wonderful.
September 13th, 2017 11:25
Ocean Swim
Fay Slimm. said:
I was there in that heavenly water with you Fred - a verse which excites yet gives feelings of peace. Favourite for me my friend.
September 13th, 2017 10:39
Fay Slimm. said:
I was there in that heavenly water with you Fred - a verse which excites yet gives feelings of peace. Favourite for me my friend.
September 13th, 2017 10:39
Ocean Swim
Louis Gibbs said:
A great way to replicate the thrilling escape from gravity we experience in our flying dreams, isn\'t it? Enjoyed sharing your swim, Fred!
September 13th, 2017 10:05
Louis Gibbs said:
A great way to replicate the thrilling escape from gravity we experience in our flying dreams, isn\'t it? Enjoyed sharing your swim, Fred!
September 13th, 2017 10:05
Ocean Swim
WL Schuett said:
Very nice , peaceful, warm Could really picture it
September 13th, 2017 09:04
WL Schuett said:
Very nice , peaceful, warm Could really picture it
September 13th, 2017 09:04
Ocean Swim
Michael Edwards said:
A superb read which I greatly enjoyed - wish I was swimming in those waters right now.
September 13th, 2017 04:41
Michael Edwards said:
A superb read which I greatly enjoyed - wish I was swimming in those waters right now.
September 13th, 2017 04:41
Ocean Swim
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic read, set me up for a fantastic day.
September 13th, 2017 02:25
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic read, set me up for a fantastic day.
September 13th, 2017 02:25
Ocean Swim
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. I might know zen, but I don\'t know those Yin and Yang fellas! lol.
September 13th, 2017 02:16
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. I might know zen, but I don\'t know those Yin and Yang fellas! lol.
September 13th, 2017 02:16
Ocean Swim
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful peaceful write, I wojld like to say that I was with you but I cannot swim except in your words.
September 13th, 2017 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful peaceful write, I wojld like to say that I was with you but I cannot swim except in your words.
September 13th, 2017 01:29
Ocean Swim
rrodriguez said:
Wow... I enjoyed swimming the clear blue waters with you... And the grandkids? Didn\'t yell, grandpa, come quick? Nice... relacong prose.
September 13th, 2017 01:11
rrodriguez said:
Wow... I enjoyed swimming the clear blue waters with you... And the grandkids? Didn\'t yell, grandpa, come quick? Nice... relacong prose.
September 13th, 2017 01:11
Ocean Swim
Frank Prem said:
You\'ve got some serious zen going in this piece Fred. Lovely to read. You\'ve done it well here.
September 13th, 2017 01:06
Frank Prem said:
You\'ve got some serious zen going in this piece Fred. Lovely to read. You\'ve done it well here.
September 13th, 2017 01:06
Thought
lasergraph said:
Good piece. I have had many thoughts that just died of loneliness.
September 12th, 2017 13:05
lasergraph said:
Good piece. I have had many thoughts that just died of loneliness.
September 12th, 2017 13:05
Thought
myself and me said:
Short lived thought vanished in the universe, no where to find.
Today\'s thought has been saved here.
September 12th, 2017 11:50
myself and me said:
Short lived thought vanished in the universe, no where to find.
Today\'s thought has been saved here.
September 12th, 2017 11:50
Thought
WL Schuett said:
My memory sucks I always forget things and never seem to get back thoughts I\'ve had and lost Definitely relate
September 12th, 2017 10:15
WL Schuett said:
My memory sucks I always forget things and never seem to get back thoughts I\'ve had and lost Definitely relate
September 12th, 2017 10:15
Thought
Louis Gibbs said:
I had a fleeting thought on a clever response to this poem ... but, alas! You speak for us all, Fred.
September 12th, 2017 08:09
Louis Gibbs said:
I had a fleeting thought on a clever response to this poem ... but, alas! You speak for us all, Fred.
September 12th, 2017 08:09
Thought
dusk arising said:
Ahhh thats one of those top of the stairs moments isn\'t it \'now what have i come upstairs for?\'
September 12th, 2017 03:15
dusk arising said:
Ahhh thats one of those top of the stairs moments isn\'t it \'now what have i come upstairs for?\'
September 12th, 2017 03:15
Thought
Mugsdaddy said:
Excellent choice of topics. We all have those moments where the universe aligns all the pieces fall into place and we have these amazing ideas that will change the world. Then we commit them to memory only forget them behind the grocery list or the doctors appointment or... Or... A what was I talking about? Oh yea I need yogurt.
Mugsdaddy
September 12th, 2017 02:57
Mugsdaddy said:
Excellent choice of topics. We all have those moments where the universe aligns all the pieces fall into place and we have these amazing ideas that will change the world. Then we commit them to memory only forget them behind the grocery list or the doctors appointment or... Or... A what was I talking about? Oh yea I need yogurt.
Mugsdaddy
September 12th, 2017 02:57
Thought
orchidee said:
Know what you mean - on occasions a poem may come from \'nowhere\' but then forgotten. No pen and paper to hand.
September 12th, 2017 01:49
orchidee said:
Know what you mean - on occasions a poem may come from \'nowhere\' but then forgotten. No pen and paper to hand.
September 12th, 2017 01:49
Thought
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Was there ever any thoughts in me head to start with?! Are me lights on, but no one at home?! lol
September 12th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Was there ever any thoughts in me head to start with?! Are me lights on, but no one at home?! lol
September 12th, 2017 01:48
Thought
Frank Prem said:
And the thought will be your poem Fred. Keep your notepad handy.
September 12th, 2017 01:45
Frank Prem said:
And the thought will be your poem Fred. Keep your notepad handy.
September 12th, 2017 01:45
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