Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Thought (Something to wrap your mind around)
Michael Edwards said:
I was a surprise too - I am 6ft and both my parents were quite short - but Joe the milkman was a big man. Great poem Fred.
September 4th, 2017 16:02
Michael Edwards said:
I was a surprise too - I am 6ft and both my parents were quite short - but Joe the milkman was a big man. Great poem Fred.
September 4th, 2017 16:02
Thought (Something to wrap your mind around)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ behind the Physical Universe I see Beauty ~ Order ~ Purpose ~ Design it is a \"Thought Out\" Universe by our Creator God not just Blind Chance as the Humanists and Evolutionists would have us believe. In discussion wit the Holy Trinity God said \"let us design and create H.Sapiens in our Likeness a Spiritual Being ~ Just a little lower than the ANGELS ~ NOT ~ Just a little higher than the Apes. So we are designed by GOD a separate and special CREATION. Able to understand and communicate with GOD through Prayer and the BIBLE and now everything else through GOOGLE ! Thanks for caring & sharing BRIAN Please check my latest B & S Fusion on DRINK ~ Thanks B
September 4th, 2017 15:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ behind the Physical Universe I see Beauty ~ Order ~ Purpose ~ Design it is a \"Thought Out\" Universe by our Creator God not just Blind Chance as the Humanists and Evolutionists would have us believe. In discussion wit the Holy Trinity God said \"let us design and create H.Sapiens in our Likeness a Spiritual Being ~ Just a little lower than the ANGELS ~ NOT ~ Just a little higher than the Apes. So we are designed by GOD a separate and special CREATION. Able to understand and communicate with GOD through Prayer and the BIBLE and now everything else through GOOGLE ! Thanks for caring & sharing BRIAN Please check my latest B & S Fusion on DRINK ~ Thanks B
September 4th, 2017 15:29
Thought (Something to wrap your mind around)
myself and me said:
Big Bang is too big for my tiny brain, and this \"Thought\" is much bigger than the Big Bang. It did not wrap my mind around, it blew my mind out.
It is such a complicated logic poem.
September 4th, 2017 15:01
myself and me said:
Big Bang is too big for my tiny brain, and this \"Thought\" is much bigger than the Big Bang. It did not wrap my mind around, it blew my mind out.
It is such a complicated logic poem.
September 4th, 2017 15:01
My Soul
myself and me said:
A poem from a true philosopher. The depth, the dimension, and the function of soul described so accurately in your writing.
September 3rd, 2017 12:48
myself and me said:
A poem from a true philosopher. The depth, the dimension, and the function of soul described so accurately in your writing.
September 3rd, 2017 12:48
My Soul
Louis Gibbs said:
An interesting word, verisimilitude, used herein from the perspective of conscious mind perceiving the soul. Perhaps the soul perceives the body-mind the same way, you think? Another splendid, thought-provoking poem from your pen, Fred!
September 3rd, 2017 10:55
Louis Gibbs said:
An interesting word, verisimilitude, used herein from the perspective of conscious mind perceiving the soul. Perhaps the soul perceives the body-mind the same way, you think? Another splendid, thought-provoking poem from your pen, Fred!
September 3rd, 2017 10:55
My Soul
Michael Edwards said:
Great bit of poetry so well put together, a super work Fred
September 3rd, 2017 10:26
Michael Edwards said:
Great bit of poetry so well put together, a super work Fred
September 3rd, 2017 10:26
My Soul
orchidee said:
Ooh a very \'psychological\' poem Fred. Great descriptions, as we can\'t physically see our thoughts, emotions, etc. Well, maybe some, such as sorrow expressed in tears, etc.
Ahh, veri-wotsit, long word there! *Looks up dictionary*! Lots of long words in fact!
September 3rd, 2017 08:36
orchidee said:
Ooh a very \'psychological\' poem Fred. Great descriptions, as we can\'t physically see our thoughts, emotions, etc. Well, maybe some, such as sorrow expressed in tears, etc.
Ahh, veri-wotsit, long word there! *Looks up dictionary*! Lots of long words in fact!
September 3rd, 2017 08:36
My Soul
Heather T said:
These verses shine, friend. One of your finest. You took a subject that I think can lean towards cliche and gave it a new voice. Wonderful!
September 3rd, 2017 08:18
Heather T said:
These verses shine, friend. One of your finest. You took a subject that I think can lean towards cliche and gave it a new voice. Wonderful!
September 3rd, 2017 08:18
My Soul
dusk arising said:
I learned a new word which no doubt i will promptly forget \'verisimilitude\'. In fact your piece, had it not mentioned verisimilitude could be said to contain verisimilitude. I know exactly what you mean. At least in all probability i do. Good writing.
September 3rd, 2017 06:35
dusk arising said:
I learned a new word which no doubt i will promptly forget \'verisimilitude\'. In fact your piece, had it not mentioned verisimilitude could be said to contain verisimilitude. I know exactly what you mean. At least in all probability i do. Good writing.
September 3rd, 2017 06:35
My Soul
BlueDays said:
Gorgeous words woven together to make the most beautiful patchwork. Dreamy
September 3rd, 2017 05:20
BlueDays said:
Gorgeous words woven together to make the most beautiful patchwork. Dreamy
September 3rd, 2017 05:20
My Soul
Accidental Poet said:
Looking within is always a learning experience to marvel at. Excellent writing Fred. ; )
September 3rd, 2017 04:27
Accidental Poet said:
Looking within is always a learning experience to marvel at. Excellent writing Fred. ; )
September 3rd, 2017 04:27
My Soul
Fay Slimm. said:
So inspiring your definition of the soul Fred - - a mountain of reasons to read its depth over again = a favourite for me and thanks for sharing.
September 3rd, 2017 04:03
Fay Slimm. said:
So inspiring your definition of the soul Fred - - a mountain of reasons to read its depth over again = a favourite for me and thanks for sharing.
September 3rd, 2017 04:03
My Soul
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fred. Within us lies our life and that life will go on to eternity.
September 3rd, 2017 03:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fred. Within us lies our life and that life will go on to eternity.
September 3rd, 2017 03:25
My Soul
Frank Prem said:
And wonderful it sounds, too, Fred.
There is nothing so profound as \'you\' and you ability to know it.
A pleasure and a celebration. Thanks Fred.
September 3rd, 2017 03:13
Frank Prem said:
And wonderful it sounds, too, Fred.
There is nothing so profound as \'you\' and you ability to know it.
A pleasure and a celebration. Thanks Fred.
September 3rd, 2017 03:13
Getting Older
WL Schuett said:
Nice poem lots of wonderful comments ...you have a nice following ,that\'s says a lot about you ...
September 2nd, 2017 20:41
WL Schuett said:
Nice poem lots of wonderful comments ...you have a nice following ,that\'s says a lot about you ...
September 2nd, 2017 20:41
Getting Older
myself and me said:
\"Finding pleasure
Even in
The small things\"
Very good suggestion to follow.
Like your attitude to age.
September 2nd, 2017 15:59
myself and me said:
\"Finding pleasure
Even in
The small things\"
Very good suggestion to follow.
Like your attitude to age.
September 2nd, 2017 15:59
Getting Older
malubotelho said:
Great poem Fred. You got this perfect. Aging is not that bad. I feel better now then when I was twenty. Now I take better care of myself, still looking good for my age, don\'t do things just because others do. I\'m good, I feel good. I don\'t have problems with clothes. They all fit.
September 2nd, 2017 14:37
malubotelho said:
Great poem Fred. You got this perfect. Aging is not that bad. I feel better now then when I was twenty. Now I take better care of myself, still looking good for my age, don\'t do things just because others do. I\'m good, I feel good. I don\'t have problems with clothes. They all fit.
September 2nd, 2017 14:37
Getting Older
Christina8 said:
Fantastic poem! \"Seeing beauty and promise in the ordinary\" is my favorite because it\'s what we should all strive to do. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!
September 2nd, 2017 12:08
Christina8 said:
Fantastic poem! \"Seeing beauty and promise in the ordinary\" is my favorite because it\'s what we should all strive to do. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!
September 2nd, 2017 12:08
Getting Older
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ MPS is important for sharing and caring with Young and Old ! I\'m still in the first third of my life (just !) but I am encouraged by the Joy (and sometimes silliness) of the OLD (60+) and the brashness and sensual freedom of Young and very Young and their ability to verbalise PAIN that we would never share. I tell them it\'s CATHARTIC ~ I wish i knew what that word really meant ~ TO THEM ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
September 2nd, 2017 09:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ MPS is important for sharing and caring with Young and Old ! I\'m still in the first third of my life (just !) but I am encouraged by the Joy (and sometimes silliness) of the OLD (60+) and the brashness and sensual freedom of Young and very Young and their ability to verbalise PAIN that we would never share. I tell them it\'s CATHARTIC ~ I wish i knew what that word really meant ~ TO THEM ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN
September 2nd, 2017 09:16
Getting Older
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Marveling at our capacity to stay young\" ... reflects my feelings about ageing exactly, Fred. I keep my brain active and challenged, stay in shape, and absolutely refuse to become \'old\'. Your poem nails it!
September 2nd, 2017 08:47
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Marveling at our capacity to stay young\" ... reflects my feelings about ageing exactly, Fred. I keep my brain active and challenged, stay in shape, and absolutely refuse to become \'old\'. Your poem nails it!
September 2nd, 2017 08:47
Getting Older
dusk arising said:
\"Take kindly the counsel of the years, gracefully surrendering the things of youth. Nurture strength of spirit to shield you in sudden misfortune.\" words of Max Ehrmann \'Desiderata\' to which i return time and again for it\'s wisdom. Your words have wisdom and are beautifully assembled here.
September 2nd, 2017 05:19
dusk arising said:
\"Take kindly the counsel of the years, gracefully surrendering the things of youth. Nurture strength of spirit to shield you in sudden misfortune.\" words of Max Ehrmann \'Desiderata\' to which i return time and again for it\'s wisdom. Your words have wisdom and are beautifully assembled here.
September 2nd, 2017 05:19
Getting Older
Michael Edwards said:
When I retired I looked at elderly people in my town with big bellies and badly dressed and vowed not me. I exercise daily and take a great pride in my wardrobe - I don\'t wear baggy trousers (where do old men buy them?) or tee shirts covered in undignified graffiti ( if I do wear them which is not often I prefer plain coloured ones of good quality). I wear modern clothing but suitable for my age. Grow old with dignity . Always something to plan for with plenty of interests and NEVER look back. So yes this resonates with me - a great piece Fred. Oh yes I also like to rant - my one concession to age - Victor Meldrew is my role model.
September 2nd, 2017 05:06
Michael Edwards said:
When I retired I looked at elderly people in my town with big bellies and badly dressed and vowed not me. I exercise daily and take a great pride in my wardrobe - I don\'t wear baggy trousers (where do old men buy them?) or tee shirts covered in undignified graffiti ( if I do wear them which is not often I prefer plain coloured ones of good quality). I wear modern clothing but suitable for my age. Grow old with dignity . Always something to plan for with plenty of interests and NEVER look back. So yes this resonates with me - a great piece Fred. Oh yes I also like to rant - my one concession to age - Victor Meldrew is my role model.
September 2nd, 2017 05:06
Getting Older
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true. Now at my age any new fact that comes my way fills me with pleasure.
September 2nd, 2017 04:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true. Now at my age any new fact that comes my way fills me with pleasure.
September 2nd, 2017 04:25
Getting Older
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen well the right attitude to aging Fred - we have choices as to what passing years do to our minds. A fine reminder.
September 2nd, 2017 03:01
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen well the right attitude to aging Fred - we have choices as to what passing years do to our minds. A fine reminder.
September 2nd, 2017 03:01
Honu
Heather T said:
Last year, I visited our sea turtle rescue and rehab in the Outer Banks. Amazing creatures. Lovely write, worthy muse.
September 1st, 2017 20:50
Heather T said:
Last year, I visited our sea turtle rescue and rehab in the Outer Banks. Amazing creatures. Lovely write, worthy muse.
September 1st, 2017 20:50
Choices
dusk arising said:
Oh i love it Fred. I wish everybody could think like like that instead of whingeing and whining \'it\'s not fair\'.
Excellent thought and writing.
P.S. I share your opinions on reincarnation, the spiritual world to which we return after \'death\' etc.
September 1st, 2017 19:29
dusk arising said:
Oh i love it Fred. I wish everybody could think like like that instead of whingeing and whining \'it\'s not fair\'.
Excellent thought and writing.
P.S. I share your opinions on reincarnation, the spiritual world to which we return after \'death\' etc.
September 1st, 2017 19:29
Choices
Poetic Dan said:
Such a great writing, inspiring so many great comments. I\'ll not put all mine here now but you\'ll see them in a few days on my post, think it will be titled \"what I used to think.\" second read today that has sparked of words in my head, thank you my friend.
September 1st, 2017 16:52
Poetic Dan said:
Such a great writing, inspiring so many great comments. I\'ll not put all mine here now but you\'ll see them in a few days on my post, think it will be titled \"what I used to think.\" second read today that has sparked of words in my head, thank you my friend.
September 1st, 2017 16:52
Choices
myself and me said:
\"I did not choose to live
But the choices I make
Are MINE\"
So you decided to post the first poem for today, I guess.
Very deep thoughtful poem.
September 1st, 2017 10:59
myself and me said:
\"I did not choose to live
But the choices I make
Are MINE\"
So you decided to post the first poem for today, I guess.
Very deep thoughtful poem.
September 1st, 2017 10:59
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