Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Searching
Louis Gibbs said:
The journey to self is a difficult and non-ending one. You describe it well, Fred. I can appreciate this one!
August 29th, 2017 07:12
Louis Gibbs said:
The journey to self is a difficult and non-ending one. You describe it well, Fred. I can appreciate this one!
August 29th, 2017 07:12
Searching
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Sometimes FRED our senses rae closed to reality ! But nil desperandum ~ we must never give up ! SEEK and you will FIND ~ ASK and you will RECEIVE ~ KNOCK and the door will OPEN. Thanks for reminding us of our own inadequacies and failure to see GOD when He is with us all the time ! Thanks for your comment on my latest POEM and you might also like to comment on the COMPLETED PASTIMES FUSION (15 poems ~ thanks for yours !) Yours BRIAN
August 29th, 2017 04:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Sometimes FRED our senses rae closed to reality ! But nil desperandum ~ we must never give up ! SEEK and you will FIND ~ ASK and you will RECEIVE ~ KNOCK and the door will OPEN. Thanks for reminding us of our own inadequacies and failure to see GOD when He is with us all the time ! Thanks for your comment on my latest POEM and you might also like to comment on the COMPLETED PASTIMES FUSION (15 poems ~ thanks for yours !) Yours BRIAN
August 29th, 2017 04:22
Searching
dusk arising said:
Though we search for our spiritual essence it seems it is intentionally a closed door to our earthbound consciousness. It is a wonder in itself that we feel this need to search, let alone what we may find. There is plenty of evidence that more does exist but that doesn\'t mean every individual can find any of it. Really thought provoking writing and demanding of several re-reads. I enjoyed this.
August 29th, 2017 04:05
dusk arising said:
Though we search for our spiritual essence it seems it is intentionally a closed door to our earthbound consciousness. It is a wonder in itself that we feel this need to search, let alone what we may find. There is plenty of evidence that more does exist but that doesn\'t mean every individual can find any of it. Really thought provoking writing and demanding of several re-reads. I enjoyed this.
August 29th, 2017 04:05
Marriage
dusk arising said:
Amazing piece of writing which im sure resonates with all who are a part of or have been a part of the union of marriage. Certainly reminds me of what i am missing.
August 29th, 2017 01:31
dusk arising said:
Amazing piece of writing which im sure resonates with all who are a part of or have been a part of the union of marriage. Certainly reminds me of what i am missing.
August 29th, 2017 01:31
Marriage
Michael Edwards said:
So well expressed Fed - like Christina I can relate to this.
August 28th, 2017 23:14
Michael Edwards said:
So well expressed Fed - like Christina I can relate to this.
August 28th, 2017 23:14
Marriage
Louis Gibbs said:
Having tasted the bliss of a happy marriage, I can certainly relate to this tribute to it. Well written, Fred!
August 28th, 2017 20:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Having tasted the bliss of a happy marriage, I can certainly relate to this tribute to it. Well written, Fred!
August 28th, 2017 20:48
Marriage
malubotelho said:
This is beautiful Fred. Congrats on your marriage and the poem. Your wife must be happy with all your writings for her.
August 28th, 2017 20:24
malubotelho said:
This is beautiful Fred. Congrats on your marriage and the poem. Your wife must be happy with all your writings for her.
August 28th, 2017 20:24
Marriage
myself and me said:
\"Two drops of warm rain
United, everything to gain\"
\"Swans drifting on a quiet lake
One asleep the other awake\"
So beautiful, so peaceful and so sweet. A happy marriage is such a blessing.
August 28th, 2017 20:22
myself and me said:
\"Two drops of warm rain
United, everything to gain\"
\"Swans drifting on a quiet lake
One asleep the other awake\"
So beautiful, so peaceful and so sweet. A happy marriage is such a blessing.
August 28th, 2017 20:22
Marriage
Christina8 said:
This poem is wonderful! I\'ve been married a long time and I love the last few lines of your poem! So many great things about this write!
August 28th, 2017 18:41
Christina8 said:
This poem is wonderful! I\'ve been married a long time and I love the last few lines of your poem! So many great things about this write!
August 28th, 2017 18:41
Love Haiku
dusk arising said:
Whoever wants to solve such a mystery? No no no, its a mystery THRILLER.... and i\'ll elect to be the whodunnit every time please. This is great writing. Haiku haiko, hikey hikey yiy yay!
August 27th, 2017 11:22
dusk arising said:
Whoever wants to solve such a mystery? No no no, its a mystery THRILLER.... and i\'ll elect to be the whodunnit every time please. This is great writing. Haiku haiko, hikey hikey yiy yay!
August 27th, 2017 11:22
Love Haiku
malubotelho said:
It is funny Fred that I just commented on Brian\'s poem today and I said that similar. I\'ve said that one can not understand love but only love. Thanks for sharing your love thought.
August 27th, 2017 08:23
malubotelho said:
It is funny Fred that I just commented on Brian\'s poem today and I said that similar. I\'ve said that one can not understand love but only love. Thanks for sharing your love thought.
August 27th, 2017 08:23
Love Haiku
Accidental Poet said:
As it was meant to be. Beautiful write Fred (as always) ; )
August 27th, 2017 07:11
Accidental Poet said:
As it was meant to be. Beautiful write Fred (as always) ; )
August 27th, 2017 07:11
Love Haiku
Louis Gibbs said:
Best definition of love I\'ve seen! Kudos, Fred.
August 27th, 2017 07:05
Louis Gibbs said:
Best definition of love I\'ve seen! Kudos, Fred.
August 27th, 2017 07:05
Love Haiku
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ That\'s the Glory of ~ that\'s the Story of LOVE ! Please check my poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
August 27th, 2017 02:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ That\'s the Glory of ~ that\'s the Story of LOVE ! Please check my poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
August 27th, 2017 02:55
Another Beautiful Day in Paradise
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fred. This way of life has been around forever and not a great deal can be done about it, but in some ways it does solve a problem for some.
August 27th, 2017 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fred. This way of life has been around forever and not a great deal can be done about it, but in some ways it does solve a problem for some.
August 27th, 2017 00:43
Another Beautiful Day in Paradise
myself and me said:
Beautiful day with a beautiful crime. Full of humor.
\"Like drunks hold on to their
Precious bottles of cheap wine\"
Someone going to be mad.
August 26th, 2017 19:36
myself and me said:
Beautiful day with a beautiful crime. Full of humor.
\"Like drunks hold on to their
Precious bottles of cheap wine\"
Someone going to be mad.
August 26th, 2017 19:36
Another Beautiful Day in Paradise
malubotelho said:
Well, this is all normal and like Fred said it is the oldest profession. I like in Brazil that we can mix and put everybody in the same sidewalk or elevator. The transgender, the dogs, the oldies, the old profession girls, the babies on they carriages, the tourists we are all a share the same Copacabana. Just human beings with excitement and imperfections. Nice Writing Fred. I could see the picture.
August 26th, 2017 16:06
malubotelho said:
Well, this is all normal and like Fred said it is the oldest profession. I like in Brazil that we can mix and put everybody in the same sidewalk or elevator. The transgender, the dogs, the oldies, the old profession girls, the babies on they carriages, the tourists we are all a share the same Copacabana. Just human beings with excitement and imperfections. Nice Writing Fred. I could see the picture.
August 26th, 2017 16:06
Another Beautiful Day in Paradise
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ For lifting the lid on WAIKIKI ! I have visited HONOLULU must have gone to the wrong beach ! Does TRUMP know these Ladies are making AMERICA great again because they have a YEN for it ! My main reason for visiting HAWAII was to visit Pearl Harbor and the ARIZONA ~ very moving ! Love HAWAII and the HAWAIIAN girls ~ singing and dancing ~ that was a far as I got ! Thanks for SHARING ~ Yours BRIAN
August 26th, 2017 15:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ For lifting the lid on WAIKIKI ! I have visited HONOLULU must have gone to the wrong beach ! Does TRUMP know these Ladies are making AMERICA great again because they have a YEN for it ! My main reason for visiting HAWAII was to visit Pearl Harbor and the ARIZONA ~ very moving ! Love HAWAII and the HAWAIIAN girls ~ singing and dancing ~ that was a far as I got ! Thanks for SHARING ~ Yours BRIAN
August 26th, 2017 15:53
Another Beautiful Day in Paradise
dusk arising said:
Tits and bums and legs and Fred. Its all here on my poetic side folks! Try to stay focussed and dont fall off the sidewalk mister the traffic is heavy today and i\'ve just broken out in a sweat. Great work FredPeyer. (are u on commission?).
August 26th, 2017 12:50
dusk arising said:
Tits and bums and legs and Fred. Its all here on my poetic side folks! Try to stay focussed and dont fall off the sidewalk mister the traffic is heavy today and i\'ve just broken out in a sweat. Great work FredPeyer. (are u on commission?).
August 26th, 2017 12:50
Another Beautiful Day in Paradise
orchidee said:
Erm I apologise I couldn\'t read this, on account of swooning at the first line! heehee. Well, I would even if it was remotely \'hot\'!
August 26th, 2017 08:13
orchidee said:
Erm I apologise I couldn\'t read this, on account of swooning at the first line! heehee. Well, I would even if it was remotely \'hot\'!
August 26th, 2017 08:13
Another Beautiful Day in Paradise
Louis Gibbs said:
Well written description of a couple of working girls plying their trade, Fred. Nothing beats teamwork, for sure!
August 26th, 2017 07:38
Louis Gibbs said:
Well written description of a couple of working girls plying their trade, Fred. Nothing beats teamwork, for sure!
August 26th, 2017 07:38
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