Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Missing You
dusk arising said:
An imagined tragedy in the midst of a flaming love. Really the stuff of nighmares. Joni Mitchell wrote a song which i have to say shouted at me on completion of reading your authors note then your piece itself \"why do you dream flat tires?\"
September 22nd, 2017 15:41
dusk arising said:
An imagined tragedy in the midst of a flaming love. Really the stuff of nighmares. Joni Mitchell wrote a song which i have to say shouted at me on completion of reading your authors note then your piece itself \"why do you dream flat tires?\"
September 22nd, 2017 15:41
Missing You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
It happens FRED and good to be prepared when it does ~ even if only poetically ~ Most sad love poems hark back to the past or lament the present. Few project to the future ! This is gem of nostalgia to come ~ RIAN
September 22nd, 2017 14:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
It happens FRED and good to be prepared when it does ~ even if only poetically ~ Most sad love poems hark back to the past or lament the present. Few project to the future ! This is gem of nostalgia to come ~ RIAN
September 22nd, 2017 14:30
Missing You
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute to lost love, Fred. One of life\'s most challenging growth experiences!
September 22nd, 2017 11:00
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful tribute to lost love, Fred. One of life\'s most challenging growth experiences!
September 22nd, 2017 11:00
Missing You
WL Schuett said:
Tender , sad and a beautiful poem , well done
September 22nd, 2017 10:29
WL Schuett said:
Tender , sad and a beautiful poem , well done
September 22nd, 2017 10:29
Missing You
Christina8 said:
Beautiful but sad write. Glad it was an imaginative poem. Good to know your wife is still with you. Very touching!
September 22nd, 2017 09:36
Christina8 said:
Beautiful but sad write. Glad it was an imaginative poem. Good to know your wife is still with you. Very touching!
September 22nd, 2017 09:36
Missing You
malubotelho said:
Yes Fred, sometimes to write we need to put ourselves in an imaginary world. Having the feelings are if it was real. Great writing.
September 22nd, 2017 09:00
malubotelho said:
Yes Fred, sometimes to write we need to put ourselves in an imaginary world. Having the feelings are if it was real. Great writing.
September 22nd, 2017 09:00
Missing You
lasergraph said:
Sometimes memories is all we have left. The good ones can warm us and help push aside the void.
September 22nd, 2017 08:22
lasergraph said:
Sometimes memories is all we have left. The good ones can warm us and help push aside the void.
September 22nd, 2017 08:22
Missing You
Mugsdaddy said:
Great write a true expression of Love.
Mugsdaddy
September 22nd, 2017 07:46
Mugsdaddy said:
Great write a true expression of Love.
Mugsdaddy
September 22nd, 2017 07:46
Missing You
kevin browne said:
keep this work up Fred, it\'s a stunner, my friend and I loved reading it.
September 22nd, 2017 05:53
kevin browne said:
keep this work up Fred, it\'s a stunner, my friend and I loved reading it.
September 22nd, 2017 05:53
Missing You
Fay Slimm. said:
This is always the way when sudden death takes our dearly beloved - your pen wrote the truth about senses picking up vibes from the past - a read to bring me near tears Fred.
September 22nd, 2017 05:05
Fay Slimm. said:
This is always the way when sudden death takes our dearly beloved - your pen wrote the truth about senses picking up vibes from the past - a read to bring me near tears Fred.
September 22nd, 2017 05:05
Missing You
Michael Edwards said:
Others may disagree but I always think the mark of a good poet is being able to write from imagination as well as from experience- this proves it.
September 22nd, 2017 02:19
Michael Edwards said:
Others may disagree but I always think the mark of a good poet is being able to write from imagination as well as from experience- this proves it.
September 22nd, 2017 02:19
Missing You
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, glad that it is form your mind and not from your life.
September 22nd, 2017 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, glad that it is form your mind and not from your life.
September 22nd, 2017 01:46
The Door
poetboy123 said:
All of us feel nervous in the beginning, but that is exactly why we should take a leap into the unknown, wonderful write!
September 21st, 2017 16:58
poetboy123 said:
All of us feel nervous in the beginning, but that is exactly why we should take a leap into the unknown, wonderful write!
September 21st, 2017 16:58
The Door
dusk arising said:
Yes we continually move e away from the comfortable room to the next but often we have a choice of doors thru which to pass dont we. Therein is the dilemma, which to choose and once chosen we are often nagged by the \'i shoulda taken the other door\' doubts.
Of course the white door at the end of the tunnel we are told is the biggy..... once you go thru that you\'re back where you started ready to be reborn and a whole new corridor of doors. Great writing.
September 21st, 2017 15:14
dusk arising said:
Yes we continually move e away from the comfortable room to the next but often we have a choice of doors thru which to pass dont we. Therein is the dilemma, which to choose and once chosen we are often nagged by the \'i shoulda taken the other door\' doubts.
Of course the white door at the end of the tunnel we are told is the biggy..... once you go thru that you\'re back where you started ready to be reborn and a whole new corridor of doors. Great writing.
September 21st, 2017 15:14
Slave
Christina8 said:
I\'m glad I read this! Very powerful sensual poem; Everyone (I hope) in love has experienced this and you capture it so well in your poem! Bravo!
September 21st, 2017 14:40
Christina8 said:
I\'m glad I read this! Very powerful sensual poem; Everyone (I hope) in love has experienced this and you capture it so well in your poem! Bravo!
September 21st, 2017 14:40
The Door
myself and me said:
We have opened so many doors in our life, and each to a different place, we explored, we experienced, we success, we failed, so much behind each door.
Love the door story.
September 21st, 2017 13:47
myself and me said:
We have opened so many doors in our life, and each to a different place, we explored, we experienced, we success, we failed, so much behind each door.
Love the door story.
September 21st, 2017 13:47
The Door
Christina8 said:
An excellent poem! I think we all have that realization that if we could see our future, would we? It\'s a very hard question for each and every one of us. Great write!
September 21st, 2017 10:03
Christina8 said:
An excellent poem! I think we all have that realization that if we could see our future, would we? It\'s a very hard question for each and every one of us. Great write!
September 21st, 2017 10:03
The Door
WL Schuett said:
I have that same room behind that door , nice poem Fred
September 21st, 2017 09:13
WL Schuett said:
I have that same room behind that door , nice poem Fred
September 21st, 2017 09:13
The Door
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing Fred. I always stand curious and excited behind a door before it opens for me. Remember that most of the time if you don\'t like what is behind the door you can always go back to the room before. The one that you already know.
September 21st, 2017 08:13
malubotelho said:
Awesome writing Fred. I always stand curious and excited behind a door before it opens for me. Remember that most of the time if you don\'t like what is behind the door you can always go back to the room before. The one that you already know.
September 21st, 2017 08:13
The Door
Michael Edwards said:
Love the idea on which this is based - and a good write to do it justice.
September 21st, 2017 01:35
Michael Edwards said:
Love the idea on which this is based - and a good write to do it justice.
September 21st, 2017 01:35
The Door
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Erm, when one door opened, did another one slam in your face?! doh! lol.
September 21st, 2017 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Erm, when one door opened, did another one slam in your face?! doh! lol.
September 21st, 2017 01:33
The Door
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fred, sometimes we just want to remain in our comfort zone but it could be a wonderfully fulfilling surprise if you open that door. Many of the doors that I have opened in my life have brought me sorrow but more of them have brought me wonder and love.
September 21st, 2017 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fred, sometimes we just want to remain in our comfort zone but it could be a wonderfully fulfilling surprise if you open that door. Many of the doors that I have opened in my life have brought me sorrow but more of them have brought me wonder and love.
September 21st, 2017 00:57
Nobody\'s Fool, a short story
WL Schuett said:
Thanks Fred for putting this out for us to read . I\'m impressed with your writing , it\'s not that easy and you made it seem effortless. I think you had a nice premise and told the story well
This piece also makes me question my own outlook on the day to day, on the mundane, the unexciting routine of life ...
It\'s a beautiful day Fred , thanks
September 20th, 2017 16:14
WL Schuett said:
Thanks Fred for putting this out for us to read . I\'m impressed with your writing , it\'s not that easy and you made it seem effortless. I think you had a nice premise and told the story well
This piece also makes me question my own outlook on the day to day, on the mundane, the unexciting routine of life ...
It\'s a beautiful day Fred , thanks
September 20th, 2017 16:14
Nobody\'s Fool, a short story
dusk arising said:
Great writing Fred in both your literary style and of course content. People find me odd like Jack because i\'m cheerful. Monday mornings to me are a time i\'m happy to be out and about at work whereas so many find these mornings a chore. I guess the i\'m blessed with the ability to see the good and positive in most things and in my comments on poets works here on mps i try to pass this on, if i\'m not making one of my daft jokes. Forgiving people who do you a disservice becomes easy if you take time to think of their motivations too, anyway i certainly wouldn\'t want the baggage of carrying any negative grudges around with me. Whoever our god is, \'he/she/it\' is a god of love and shows us love, once we begin to understand love then love itself begins to teach us more about love. A wonderful circle.
September 20th, 2017 15:35
dusk arising said:
Great writing Fred in both your literary style and of course content. People find me odd like Jack because i\'m cheerful. Monday mornings to me are a time i\'m happy to be out and about at work whereas so many find these mornings a chore. I guess the i\'m blessed with the ability to see the good and positive in most things and in my comments on poets works here on mps i try to pass this on, if i\'m not making one of my daft jokes. Forgiving people who do you a disservice becomes easy if you take time to think of their motivations too, anyway i certainly wouldn\'t want the baggage of carrying any negative grudges around with me. Whoever our god is, \'he/she/it\' is a god of love and shows us love, once we begin to understand love then love itself begins to teach us more about love. A wonderful circle.
September 20th, 2017 15:35
Nobody\'s Fool, a short story
Louis Gibbs said:
A great illustration of the power of perspective, Fred, and the fact that it is within our control!
September 20th, 2017 14:48
Louis Gibbs said:
A great illustration of the power of perspective, Fred, and the fact that it is within our control!
September 20th, 2017 14:48
Nobody\'s Fool, a short story
Christina8 said:
What an absolutely beautiful story! This is going straight into the favorites. I have never known someone like Jack. This has changed my outlook on today and hopefully more days to come. Thanks for sharing this beautiful story!
September 20th, 2017 11:02
Christina8 said:
What an absolutely beautiful story! This is going straight into the favorites. I have never known someone like Jack. This has changed my outlook on today and hopefully more days to come. Thanks for sharing this beautiful story!
September 20th, 2017 11:02
Nobody\'s Fool, a short story
malubotelho said:
Fred, wonderful. I could be here and write all the good about your writing but would take a long time. I have a lot of that Jack on myself, so much that one day I\'ve met a customer and I was so happy about seeing her and her project. See looked at me and said; you are so happy all the time that it is disgusting. The whole world is suffering and you are always happy. What is wrong with you? And I told her; exactly because you see so many wrong things in the world is why I need to be happy all the time. The world have enough of unhappy people, I don\'t need to contribute to it. Luckily I did not lose the customer.
I love being Jack.
September 20th, 2017 08:33
malubotelho said:
Fred, wonderful. I could be here and write all the good about your writing but would take a long time. I have a lot of that Jack on myself, so much that one day I\'ve met a customer and I was so happy about seeing her and her project. See looked at me and said; you are so happy all the time that it is disgusting. The whole world is suffering and you are always happy. What is wrong with you? And I told her; exactly because you see so many wrong things in the world is why I need to be happy all the time. The world have enough of unhappy people, I don\'t need to contribute to it. Luckily I did not lose the customer.
I love being Jack.
September 20th, 2017 08:33
Nobody\'s Fool, a short story
myself and me said:
Such a wonderful story to read. Beauty in sadness, marvelous. I sure learned a lot of from this ten-year-old boy. It remind me of the movie \"Forrest Gump\".
One thing should remember, do not trust any psychologist, they themselves need treatment.
September 20th, 2017 07:55
myself and me said:
Such a wonderful story to read. Beauty in sadness, marvelous. I sure learned a lot of from this ten-year-old boy. It remind me of the movie \"Forrest Gump\".
One thing should remember, do not trust any psychologist, they themselves need treatment.
September 20th, 2017 07:55
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