Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Wordsmith
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine summary of the work needed to complete a canvas of artistic poetry - have a great time away Fred - - your work will be missed - safe journey my friend.
September 8th, 2017 02:03
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine summary of the work needed to complete a canvas of artistic poetry - have a great time away Fred - - your work will be missed - safe journey my friend.
September 8th, 2017 02:03
Wordsmith
Frank Prem said:
Nicely said, Fred. We are indeed the crucible for ideas to be forged.
Bravo.
September 8th, 2017 01:43
Frank Prem said:
Nicely said, Fred. We are indeed the crucible for ideas to be forged.
Bravo.
September 8th, 2017 01:43
The Dream
Christina8 said:
Excellent poem! So sensuous and descriptive. Only to be teased that it was a dream. Great job!
September 7th, 2017 17:19
Christina8 said:
Excellent poem! So sensuous and descriptive. Only to be teased that it was a dream. Great job!
September 7th, 2017 17:19
The Dream
FredPeyer said:
Thanks m&m, could have used that spinach dip to cool down!
September 7th, 2017 16:29
FredPeyer said:
Thanks m&m, could have used that spinach dip to cool down!
September 7th, 2017 16:29
The Dream
myself and me said:
Holly spinach dip.
Did you forget to turn the air conditioner on? What make you so hot? How are you going to spend your day with a dream like this?
Oh, what a dream.
September 7th, 2017 11:33
myself and me said:
Holly spinach dip.
Did you forget to turn the air conditioner on? What make you so hot? How are you going to spend your day with a dream like this?
Oh, what a dream.
September 7th, 2017 11:33
The Dream
Louis Gibbs said:
Did you have to wash the sheets? A hot one here, Fred! Enjoyed being a voyeur.
September 7th, 2017 06:43
Louis Gibbs said:
Did you have to wash the sheets? A hot one here, Fred! Enjoyed being a voyeur.
September 7th, 2017 06:43
The Dream
dusk arising said:
No no no no you had me going there, i was seeing images, i broke out in a thirst..... i was gonna send out for popcorn..... a dream.... a flippin dream...... nah .... it was real i tell ya... i know it was.... i could see it.
September 7th, 2017 04:03
dusk arising said:
No no no no you had me going there, i was seeing images, i broke out in a thirst..... i was gonna send out for popcorn..... a dream.... a flippin dream...... nah .... it was real i tell ya... i know it was.... i could see it.
September 7th, 2017 04:03
The Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Good sensuous write, pity it was a dream though.
September 7th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good sensuous write, pity it was a dream though.
September 7th, 2017 00:50
The Dream
Mugsdaddy said:
Excellent alluring steamy. Beautiful flow beautiful story. Most excellent writing.
September 7th, 2017 00:49
Mugsdaddy said:
Excellent alluring steamy. Beautiful flow beautiful story. Most excellent writing.
September 7th, 2017 00:49
The Dream
Michael Edwards said:
Erotica - oh for youth again but love mellows and I wouldn\'t change it. Sheer delight Fred and coincidentally I\'ve written a few one liners on dreams - not typed up and if I can find them I\'ll post them tomorrow.
September 7th, 2017 00:39
Michael Edwards said:
Erotica - oh for youth again but love mellows and I wouldn\'t change it. Sheer delight Fred and coincidentally I\'ve written a few one liners on dreams - not typed up and if I can find them I\'ll post them tomorrow.
September 7th, 2017 00:39
Ocean
myself and me said:
I can hear the sound from mindless, thoughtless and restless movement. It turns rocks to sands.
Such a dramatic picture of ocean.
Great job.
September 6th, 2017 19:14
myself and me said:
I can hear the sound from mindless, thoughtless and restless movement. It turns rocks to sands.
Such a dramatic picture of ocean.
Great job.
September 6th, 2017 19:14
Ocean
WL Schuett said:
Fred this is really a lyrical piece love the musical inner tune lines , well done
September 6th, 2017 09:09
WL Schuett said:
Fred this is really a lyrical piece love the musical inner tune lines , well done
September 6th, 2017 09:09
Ocean
Louis Gibbs said:
A strikingly captured expression of the majesty of ocean waves upon the shore. A favorite for sure! Living on a beach I witness your poem daily. A beauty, Fred.
September 6th, 2017 06:28
Louis Gibbs said:
A strikingly captured expression of the majesty of ocean waves upon the shore. A favorite for sure! Living on a beach I witness your poem daily. A beauty, Fred.
September 6th, 2017 06:28
Ocean
dusk arising said:
Amazing unceasing motion of energy isn\'t it. Like so many people i am enriched and renewed by being close to its majestic meeting with the coast - envigorating perhaps. Dammit your words make me want to dash off 120miles to my favourite beach.
September 6th, 2017 05:39
dusk arising said:
Amazing unceasing motion of energy isn\'t it. Like so many people i am enriched and renewed by being close to its majestic meeting with the coast - envigorating perhaps. Dammit your words make me want to dash off 120miles to my favourite beach.
September 6th, 2017 05:39
Ocean
Fay Slimm. said:
The ocean\'s precocious behaviour in a fine nutshell my friend - -love that line - - \"A dispassionate whore\" - to describe her mindless dance. Sent to my Favs.
September 6th, 2017 04:55
Fay Slimm. said:
The ocean\'s precocious behaviour in a fine nutshell my friend - -love that line - - \"A dispassionate whore\" - to describe her mindless dance. Sent to my Favs.
September 6th, 2017 04:55
God ?
dusk arising said:
Too many people taking this religious stuff as dead serious so its a pleasure to see something light hearted about it. After all - if we are created in the image of god then its ok to have our god given sense of humour innit! I enjoyed this.
September 6th, 2017 04:41
dusk arising said:
Too many people taking this religious stuff as dead serious so its a pleasure to see something light hearted about it. After all - if we are created in the image of god then its ok to have our god given sense of humour innit! I enjoyed this.
September 6th, 2017 04:41
Ocean
Michael Edwards said:
One of my favourite subjects and you\'ve done it proud Fred
September 6th, 2017 02:46
Michael Edwards said:
One of my favourite subjects and you\'ve done it proud Fred
September 6th, 2017 02:46
God ?
myself and me said:
\"When shaving I wondered
Does GOD shave too?
Then remembered
SHE is a woman\"
Woman shave too :). So the answer is , Yes, God shave too.
I love this group of poem. The middle one got me.
September 5th, 2017 21:10
myself and me said:
\"When shaving I wondered
Does GOD shave too?
Then remembered
SHE is a woman\"
Woman shave too :). So the answer is , Yes, God shave too.
I love this group of poem. The middle one got me.
September 5th, 2017 21:10
God ?
sue.evans said:
Good fun - it is quite amusing to write down thoughts as they wander round our minds with no real beginning or end - just muses - fun😊
September 5th, 2017 14:35
sue.evans said:
Good fun - it is quite amusing to write down thoughts as they wander round our minds with no real beginning or end - just muses - fun😊
September 5th, 2017 14:35
God ?
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t even understand them these days let alone know the answer if there ever is one.
September 5th, 2017 10:35
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t even understand them these days let alone know the answer if there ever is one.
September 5th, 2017 10:35
God ?
WL Schuett said:
A lighthearted look ,a good idea thanks for the humor
September 5th, 2017 10:01
WL Schuett said:
A lighthearted look ,a good idea thanks for the humor
September 5th, 2017 10:01
God ?
orchidee said:
I shall check out if the sherry at the bottom is as good as that at the top!
September 5th, 2017 08:02
orchidee said:
I shall check out if the sherry at the bottom is as good as that at the top!
September 5th, 2017 08:02
God ?
Christina8 said:
Very clever write. I liked the part where you said that God was a woman. Lol. Also the last stanza too! Great piece all around!
September 5th, 2017 07:19
Christina8 said:
Very clever write. I liked the part where you said that God was a woman. Lol. Also the last stanza too! Great piece all around!
September 5th, 2017 07:19
God ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Those riddles get harder to solve the older I get. I need t ask Goog... oops I mean God.
In my belief God is a Force.
September 5th, 2017 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Those riddles get harder to solve the older I get. I need t ask Goog... oops I mean God.
In my belief God is a Force.
September 5th, 2017 02:55
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