Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
The Dream
myself and me said:
Holly spinach dip.
Did you forget to turn the air conditioner on? What make you so hot? How are you going to spend your day with a dream like this?
Oh, what a dream.
September 7th, 2017 11:33
myself and me said:
Holly spinach dip.
Did you forget to turn the air conditioner on? What make you so hot? How are you going to spend your day with a dream like this?
Oh, what a dream.
September 7th, 2017 11:33
The Dream
Louis Gibbs said:
Did you have to wash the sheets? A hot one here, Fred! Enjoyed being a voyeur.
September 7th, 2017 06:43
Louis Gibbs said:
Did you have to wash the sheets? A hot one here, Fred! Enjoyed being a voyeur.
September 7th, 2017 06:43
The Dream
dusk arising said:
No no no no you had me going there, i was seeing images, i broke out in a thirst..... i was gonna send out for popcorn..... a dream.... a flippin dream...... nah .... it was real i tell ya... i know it was.... i could see it.
September 7th, 2017 04:03
dusk arising said:
No no no no you had me going there, i was seeing images, i broke out in a thirst..... i was gonna send out for popcorn..... a dream.... a flippin dream...... nah .... it was real i tell ya... i know it was.... i could see it.
September 7th, 2017 04:03
The Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Good sensuous write, pity it was a dream though.
September 7th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good sensuous write, pity it was a dream though.
September 7th, 2017 00:50
The Dream
Mugsdaddy said:
Excellent alluring steamy. Beautiful flow beautiful story. Most excellent writing.
September 7th, 2017 00:49
Mugsdaddy said:
Excellent alluring steamy. Beautiful flow beautiful story. Most excellent writing.
September 7th, 2017 00:49
The Dream
Michael Edwards said:
Erotica - oh for youth again but love mellows and I wouldn\'t change it. Sheer delight Fred and coincidentally I\'ve written a few one liners on dreams - not typed up and if I can find them I\'ll post them tomorrow.
September 7th, 2017 00:39
Michael Edwards said:
Erotica - oh for youth again but love mellows and I wouldn\'t change it. Sheer delight Fred and coincidentally I\'ve written a few one liners on dreams - not typed up and if I can find them I\'ll post them tomorrow.
September 7th, 2017 00:39
Ocean
myself and me said:
I can hear the sound from mindless, thoughtless and restless movement. It turns rocks to sands.
Such a dramatic picture of ocean.
Great job.
September 6th, 2017 19:14
myself and me said:
I can hear the sound from mindless, thoughtless and restless movement. It turns rocks to sands.
Such a dramatic picture of ocean.
Great job.
September 6th, 2017 19:14
Ocean
WL Schuett said:
Fred this is really a lyrical piece love the musical inner tune lines , well done
September 6th, 2017 09:09
WL Schuett said:
Fred this is really a lyrical piece love the musical inner tune lines , well done
September 6th, 2017 09:09
Ocean
Louis Gibbs said:
A strikingly captured expression of the majesty of ocean waves upon the shore. A favorite for sure! Living on a beach I witness your poem daily. A beauty, Fred.
September 6th, 2017 06:28
Louis Gibbs said:
A strikingly captured expression of the majesty of ocean waves upon the shore. A favorite for sure! Living on a beach I witness your poem daily. A beauty, Fred.
September 6th, 2017 06:28
Ocean
dusk arising said:
Amazing unceasing motion of energy isn\'t it. Like so many people i am enriched and renewed by being close to its majestic meeting with the coast - envigorating perhaps. Dammit your words make me want to dash off 120miles to my favourite beach.
September 6th, 2017 05:39
dusk arising said:
Amazing unceasing motion of energy isn\'t it. Like so many people i am enriched and renewed by being close to its majestic meeting with the coast - envigorating perhaps. Dammit your words make me want to dash off 120miles to my favourite beach.
September 6th, 2017 05:39
Ocean
Fay Slimm. said:
The ocean\'s precocious behaviour in a fine nutshell my friend - -love that line - - \"A dispassionate whore\" - to describe her mindless dance. Sent to my Favs.
September 6th, 2017 04:55
Fay Slimm. said:
The ocean\'s precocious behaviour in a fine nutshell my friend - -love that line - - \"A dispassionate whore\" - to describe her mindless dance. Sent to my Favs.
September 6th, 2017 04:55
God ?
dusk arising said:
Too many people taking this religious stuff as dead serious so its a pleasure to see something light hearted about it. After all - if we are created in the image of god then its ok to have our god given sense of humour innit! I enjoyed this.
September 6th, 2017 04:41
dusk arising said:
Too many people taking this religious stuff as dead serious so its a pleasure to see something light hearted about it. After all - if we are created in the image of god then its ok to have our god given sense of humour innit! I enjoyed this.
September 6th, 2017 04:41
Ocean
Michael Edwards said:
One of my favourite subjects and you\'ve done it proud Fred
September 6th, 2017 02:46
Michael Edwards said:
One of my favourite subjects and you\'ve done it proud Fred
September 6th, 2017 02:46
God ?
myself and me said:
\"When shaving I wondered
Does GOD shave too?
Then remembered
SHE is a woman\"
Woman shave too :). So the answer is , Yes, God shave too.
I love this group of poem. The middle one got me.
September 5th, 2017 21:10
myself and me said:
\"When shaving I wondered
Does GOD shave too?
Then remembered
SHE is a woman\"
Woman shave too :). So the answer is , Yes, God shave too.
I love this group of poem. The middle one got me.
September 5th, 2017 21:10
God ?
sue.evans said:
Good fun - it is quite amusing to write down thoughts as they wander round our minds with no real beginning or end - just muses - fun😊
September 5th, 2017 14:35
sue.evans said:
Good fun - it is quite amusing to write down thoughts as they wander round our minds with no real beginning or end - just muses - fun😊
September 5th, 2017 14:35
God ?
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t even understand them these days let alone know the answer if there ever is one.
September 5th, 2017 10:35
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t even understand them these days let alone know the answer if there ever is one.
September 5th, 2017 10:35
God ?
WL Schuett said:
A lighthearted look ,a good idea thanks for the humor
September 5th, 2017 10:01
WL Schuett said:
A lighthearted look ,a good idea thanks for the humor
September 5th, 2017 10:01
God ?
orchidee said:
I shall check out if the sherry at the bottom is as good as that at the top!
September 5th, 2017 08:02
orchidee said:
I shall check out if the sherry at the bottom is as good as that at the top!
September 5th, 2017 08:02
God ?
Christina8 said:
Very clever write. I liked the part where you said that God was a woman. Lol. Also the last stanza too! Great piece all around!
September 5th, 2017 07:19
Christina8 said:
Very clever write. I liked the part where you said that God was a woman. Lol. Also the last stanza too! Great piece all around!
September 5th, 2017 07:19
God ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Those riddles get harder to solve the older I get. I need t ask Goog... oops I mean God.
In my belief God is a Force.
September 5th, 2017 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Those riddles get harder to solve the older I get. I need t ask Goog... oops I mean God.
In my belief God is a Force.
September 5th, 2017 02:55
Thought (Something to wrap your mind around)
Goldfinch60 said:
That thought that produced the big bang was created by a force that is my God.
Good write.
September 5th, 2017 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
That thought that produced the big bang was created by a force that is my God.
Good write.
September 5th, 2017 01:27
Thought (Something to wrap your mind around)
MaddieJ said:
Haha! I think about this all the time! Sometimes I have to stop before I give myself a headache though!
September 4th, 2017 23:44
MaddieJ said:
Haha! I think about this all the time! Sometimes I have to stop before I give myself a headache though!
September 4th, 2017 23:44
Thought (Something to wrap your mind around)
WL Schuett said:
A thoughtful piece but still faith based there are still more questions than answers for me . I\'m still searching ... good poem
September 4th, 2017 21:05
WL Schuett said:
A thoughtful piece but still faith based there are still more questions than answers for me . I\'m still searching ... good poem
September 4th, 2017 21:05
Thought (Something to wrap your mind around)
Poetic Dan said:
I love the concept of your work.
From my own understanding is that thoughts are so powerful! Mix that with vibrations and emotions, my bang is pretty big sometimes!
September 4th, 2017 16:45
Poetic Dan said:
I love the concept of your work.
From my own understanding is that thoughts are so powerful! Mix that with vibrations and emotions, my bang is pretty big sometimes!
September 4th, 2017 16:45
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