Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Empathy
Accidental Poet said:
Many a man has scoffed
At the thought of being a romantic
But love for one woman
Will be his biggest weakness
While also his greatest strength
Excellent write Fred. Mushy just shows you are human. ; )
September 26th, 2017 04:11
Accidental Poet said:
Many a man has scoffed
At the thought of being a romantic
But love for one woman
Will be his biggest weakness
While also his greatest strength
Excellent write Fred. Mushy just shows you are human. ; )
September 26th, 2017 04:11
Empathy
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fed. How long will ya be perturbed?! lol.
September 26th, 2017 01:59
orchidee said:
A lovely write Fed. How long will ya be perturbed?! lol.
September 26th, 2017 01:59
Seeing
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so true, we must not just look but see, we must not hear but listen.
We must understand the differences in each other.
September 26th, 2017 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so true, we must not just look but see, we must not hear but listen.
We must understand the differences in each other.
September 26th, 2017 01:08
Seeing
Accidental Poet said:
As poets, I wonder do we have a perception more focused on trying to see beauty in all things or as many as possible? Whereas someone else who was brought up differently sees something else. Excellent poem Fred. It does really open up the mind and eyes to new awareness. ; )
September 25th, 2017 19:20
Accidental Poet said:
As poets, I wonder do we have a perception more focused on trying to see beauty in all things or as many as possible? Whereas someone else who was brought up differently sees something else. Excellent poem Fred. It does really open up the mind and eyes to new awareness. ; )
September 25th, 2017 19:20
Seeing
dusk arising said:
The poet in us all here looks, perceives things in all manner of differing ways Fred so i think we may be among the enlightened. But does that enroll us into the \'sat on the fence\' echelon of society. No fear, we\'re far too outspoken a bunch. I enjoyed your piece thank you sir!
September 25th, 2017 18:19
dusk arising said:
The poet in us all here looks, perceives things in all manner of differing ways Fred so i think we may be among the enlightened. But does that enroll us into the \'sat on the fence\' echelon of society. No fear, we\'re far too outspoken a bunch. I enjoyed your piece thank you sir!
September 25th, 2017 18:19
Seeing
Michael Edwards said:
Underlines that we are all unique - as an artist this is especially so. rarely if ever do two people independently agree in the interpretation of one of one of my abstracts for example. Great write
September 25th, 2017 14:11
Michael Edwards said:
Underlines that we are all unique - as an artist this is especially so. rarely if ever do two people independently agree in the interpretation of one of one of my abstracts for example. Great write
September 25th, 2017 14:11
Seeing
Mugsdaddy said:
You can only see life from your own perception governing good or bad right from wrong until we make the conscience choice to choose compation and look at life through anothers eyes. In that we become truly human.
September 25th, 2017 13:49
Mugsdaddy said:
You can only see life from your own perception governing good or bad right from wrong until we make the conscience choice to choose compation and look at life through anothers eyes. In that we become truly human.
September 25th, 2017 13:49
Seeing
Louis Gibbs said:
\'Selective seeing\' is as real as \'selective hearing\' ... we neither see nor hear exactly what another \'chooses\' to see or hear out of the total spectrum of that which is \'there\' ... what is meant by \'each experiencing our own reality\'. Your poem speaks to this concisely and exquisitely, Fred! Love it.
September 25th, 2017 13:38
Louis Gibbs said:
\'Selective seeing\' is as real as \'selective hearing\' ... we neither see nor hear exactly what another \'chooses\' to see or hear out of the total spectrum of that which is \'there\' ... what is meant by \'each experiencing our own reality\'. Your poem speaks to this concisely and exquisitely, Fred! Love it.
September 25th, 2017 13:38
Two Smiles
malubotelho said:
Sweet Fred. A smile is always gratifying. I think we should smile a lot more. In my pictures I look a lot younger if smiling.
September 24th, 2017 20:51
malubotelho said:
Sweet Fred. A smile is always gratifying. I think we should smile a lot more. In my pictures I look a lot younger if smiling.
September 24th, 2017 20:51
Two Smiles
dusk arising said:
Let me greet you with a smile as i pass along the way.
For the smile is just my face letting my heart have it\'s way.
(specially composed in response to your poems here.. actually i\'ve a good mind to publish that two liner.. Thanks for the inspiration).
September 24th, 2017 17:43
dusk arising said:
Let me greet you with a smile as i pass along the way.
For the smile is just my face letting my heart have it\'s way.
(specially composed in response to your poems here.. actually i\'ve a good mind to publish that two liner.. Thanks for the inspiration).
September 24th, 2017 17:43
Mind Games
malubotelho said:
Great writing Fred. Our mind does plays games with us. We need to be strong. Spiritually they call the mind the donkey. We should ride on the back of it and not let it ride on us. There is a saying: Take your mind for a ride but make sure you sit on the driver side.
September 24th, 2017 16:24
malubotelho said:
Great writing Fred. Our mind does plays games with us. We need to be strong. Spiritually they call the mind the donkey. We should ride on the back of it and not let it ride on us. There is a saying: Take your mind for a ride but make sure you sit on the driver side.
September 24th, 2017 16:24
Mind Games
Christina8 said:
Great write! This one had me thinking a bit. But very true!
September 24th, 2017 13:34
Christina8 said:
Great write! This one had me thinking a bit. But very true!
September 24th, 2017 13:34
Two Smiles
Christina8 said:
Great write! Smiles are contagious! a heartfelt and wonderful read.
September 24th, 2017 12:44
Christina8 said:
Great write! Smiles are contagious! a heartfelt and wonderful read.
September 24th, 2017 12:44
Mind Games
Poetic Dan said:
I see the game you play
I give up my house
Just walking like a stray
Great write!
September 24th, 2017 10:46
Poetic Dan said:
I see the game you play
I give up my house
Just walking like a stray
Great write!
September 24th, 2017 10:46
Mind Games
Louis Gibbs said:
And what if \'we\', the collective mind, are making up the rules as we go along? And if so, are the odds of \'winning\' any better? And how do we define \'winning?
See, you poem was very thought-provoking, as a good poem should be. Loved it. Kudos, Fred!
September 24th, 2017 09:57
Louis Gibbs said:
And what if \'we\', the collective mind, are making up the rules as we go along? And if so, are the odds of \'winning\' any better? And how do we define \'winning?
See, you poem was very thought-provoking, as a good poem should be. Loved it. Kudos, Fred!
September 24th, 2017 09:57
Mind Games
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. Has the house got loaded dice?!
September 24th, 2017 09:40
orchidee said:
A fine write AP. Has the house got loaded dice?!
September 24th, 2017 09:40
Two Smiles
Accidental Poet said:
A smile is universal, everyone understands it. : D
September 24th, 2017 08:42
Accidental Poet said:
A smile is universal, everyone understands it. : D
September 24th, 2017 08:42
Mind Games
Accidental Poet said:
But if we all play our own game by our own rules, we play against each other. What then? ; )
September 24th, 2017 07:47
Accidental Poet said:
But if we all play our own game by our own rules, we play against each other. What then? ; )
September 24th, 2017 07:47
Mind Games
Fay Slimm. said:
Something to think on in that last stanza my friend and very well expressed - my mind often plays games and leaves me with \"no chance of winning\".
September 24th, 2017 05:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Something to think on in that last stanza my friend and very well expressed - my mind often plays games and leaves me with \"no chance of winning\".
September 24th, 2017 05:42
Mind Games
dusk arising said:
Oh so true.... but when we do are we blinkered?... aha....
Dunno...to be honest this made me think about it quite a bit.
Brilliant writing, i love to be forced into thought. Thank you.
September 24th, 2017 04:29
dusk arising said:
Oh so true.... but when we do are we blinkered?... aha....
Dunno...to be honest this made me think about it quite a bit.
Brilliant writing, i love to be forced into thought. Thank you.
September 24th, 2017 04:29
Mind Games
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, the house always wins. Good write.
September 24th, 2017 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, the house always wins. Good write.
September 24th, 2017 02:32
Two Smiles
Goldfinch60 said:
Smiles are so important in our lives and makes people react in a positive way (usually). Good write.
\"SMILE, IT CONFUSES PEOPLE\"
September 24th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Smiles are so important in our lives and makes people react in a positive way (usually). Good write.
\"SMILE, IT CONFUSES PEOPLE\"
September 24th, 2017 00:51
Two Smiles
Michael Edwards said:
A smile can break down even the most surly of folk: in a shop, on transport, in the street. I find a smile can always help and make a point of smiling at people - what a difference it makes. Love the write Fred.
September 24th, 2017 00:10
Michael Edwards said:
A smile can break down even the most surly of folk: in a shop, on transport, in the street. I find a smile can always help and make a point of smiling at people - what a difference it makes. Love the write Fred.
September 24th, 2017 00:10
Two Smiles
Brie said:
I don\'t usually make comments, I just observe and read, but this is really beautiful.
September 23rd, 2017 23:04
Brie said:
I don\'t usually make comments, I just observe and read, but this is really beautiful.
September 23rd, 2017 23:04
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