Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



Why?
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred. Yet if we ask \'Why\' as adults, it\'s often something really complicated and involved, and the answer can be \'Don\'t know\'.

September 17th, 2017 07:16

Why?
Accidental Poet said:

I\'m fast approaching 61 and I\'m the same as you Fred. Where did the childlike innocence go? We all need to see through the eyes of a child sometimes. Great write Fred. ; )

September 17th, 2017 06:38

Why?
Fay Slimm. said:

So so true Fred - -reminds me of what was reported that Christ said as he pointed to young children - \"unless you become like one of these you will not see\" - -

September 17th, 2017 04:40

Why?
kevin browne said:

yes, why can\' we resurrect those memories?



September 17th, 2017 03:21

Slave
myself and me said:

I do not know about you, I need ice cream.
What happen in Hawaii, storm?

September 16th, 2017 18:40

Slave
kevin browne said:

so true on many human levels which in capturing your creation brings about the reality of a swooning one in love. great poem Fred.

September 16th, 2017 13:36

Slave
Adam Shirley said:

I love it! Well done Fred!

September 16th, 2017 13:16

Slave
Aleem Nasir said:

Imagination amazing

September 16th, 2017 11:32

Slave
Fay Slimm. said:

Agree with Martina - - where has that other side of you been hiding Fred - - am watching now for a \"tomato-red complexion\" to show when I am around !!! Great read.

September 16th, 2017 11:05

Slave
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and reply to Santita write.

September 16th, 2017 10:15

Slave
Chloe Rachel Flisher said:

This is very good! Great work!

CR x

September 16th, 2017 07:46

Slave
dusk arising said:

All too easily the ladies forget that inside every gentleman is the lusty animal we control or, if you prefer, keep in reserve. Nice to see you let that lusty man out for a walk this morning my friend. A good read indeed.

September 16th, 2017 06:28

Slave
orchidee said:

If it was Kate Price (or a most hideous USA female) he would have chucked tomatoes at her! She puts me off my food when she is in the paper, which is nearly every day! Yuk!

September 16th, 2017 03:50

Slave
orchidee said:

I wasn\'t sure how a tomato would get in such a poem! heehee. Anyway, I\'ve swooned. A fine write Fred.

September 16th, 2017 03:48

Slave
Michael Edwards said:

Ooooh - I blushed reading it - ah the memories - great stuff Fred

September 16th, 2017 03:30

My Baby Girl
dusk arising said:

Beautiful from your heart writing. Envious.

September 15th, 2017 15:57

My Baby Girl
lasergraph said:

You described perfectly the tender journey every father makes with his little girl. Every step you take with her and those she has to make on her own. Great work.

September 15th, 2017 14:54

My Baby Girl
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

September 15th, 2017 12:09

My Baby Girl
WL Schuett said:

Well done captured what I feel as well ...

September 15th, 2017 11:04

My Baby Girl
Louis Gibbs said:

You speak well for all of us who are privileged to be the fathers of daughters, Fred! Not always an easy relationship, but a beautiful one.

September 15th, 2017 10:23

My Baby Girl
malubotelho said:

So beautiful and sweet Fred. Lovely writing. Must be hard to let go of a baby girl. I love my kids and try to keep them close. I have only two sons, no baby girl daughter but now I have that puddle of joy that is my granddaughter. Thanks for sharing this. You are a luck man to have a beautiful family. Congrats

September 15th, 2017 08:42

My Baby Girl
Seek said:

How well you capture the life of a loved one and the lifelong bonds of a loving father.

September 15th, 2017 08:22

My Baby Girl
myself and me said:

No matter where they are, how far they go, the love of a father to daughter will always follow.
A poem full of great love from a father.

September 15th, 2017 07:51

My Baby Girl
Christina8 said:

Absolutely wonderful! Very sweet write! Loved it!

September 15th, 2017 07:08

My Baby Girl
orchidee said:

Ahhh, a lovely write Fred.

September 15th, 2017 03:50

My Baby Girl
Frank Prem said:

Ages and stages Fred. A whole measure of life in the reflection.

Just look at what you have done!

September 15th, 2017 02:40

My Baby Girl
Michael Edwards said:

Ah - the same for my daughter - seeing her later today to bring back our grandson for a sleepover - where would we be without our family. It\'s those without to whom my heart stretches out. Super write from a great father.

September 15th, 2017 02:28

My Baby Girl
Goldfinch60 said:

They are always \'My baby girl\' no matter what age they are. Great loving write Fred.

September 15th, 2017 01:29

Just Human
dusk arising said:

Walk tall, walk straight and look the world right in the eye... words from an old song. .
A nice bit of running yourself down writing. Can\'t believe these thoughts could be applied to you my friend though. Brilliantly provocative.

September 14th, 2017 18:10

Just Human
malubotelho said:

This is awesome Fred. Clever writing and clever thinking.

September 14th, 2017 16:36



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