Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



Thought
MaddieJ said:

I laughed as I finished reading because it reminds me of how often I lose a thought!!! Good write!

September 12th, 2017 01:38

Thought
Michael Edwards said:

Thoughts about poems but no pen to hand - soon forgotten - I\'m there all the time - enjoyed the read Fred

September 12th, 2017 01:00

Thought
FredPeyer said:

Thanks Goldfinch! Happens to me more and more!!! :-)

September 12th, 2017 00:57

Thought
Goldfinch60 said:

Thoughts can often be misplaced never to be seen again. Good write Fred.

September 12th, 2017 00:44

Another Day Gone
myself and me said:

\"Think hard
There could be
Something more
Than nothing\"
Reading your poem is something good to do, that is what I am doing now.

September 11th, 2017 19:01

Another Day Gone
dusk arising said:

These days all to frequent when your prime is past. \'with nothing in between, the nothing not important\' kind of says it all. Well crafted for the subject.

September 11th, 2017 16:26

Another Day Gone
WL Schuett said:

I guess everyone relates to this I know I do , nicely expressed

September 11th, 2017 12:45

Another Day Gone
Louis Gibbs said:

Thornton Wilder\'s award winning play \"Our Town\", a production of which I\'m currently participating in, focuses beautifully on the appreciation of every moment of life as we live it, including the \'mundane\' moments, which are only fully appreciated after death.
Understandably hard to appreciate though after beach days on Maui!

September 11th, 2017 10:06

Another Day Gone
orchidee said:

Ta-dah! And so you \'Turn simple existence, Into glorious life\'. But how? Why, another of your fine poems appeared, that\'s how! heehee. Will flattery get me everywhere?!

September 11th, 2017 08:15

Another Day Gone
Goldfinch60 said:

The muse will return soon, as it has with these words.

September 11th, 2017 08:01

Another Day Gone
Seek said:

Hard to imagine you only started writing poetry this year, Fred. Your poem reminds me of my early retirement period when the dread of a routine life was getting to me and had to leave. Miami of all places. You put it so well for those of us who\'ve been there!

September 11th, 2017 05:40

Another Day Gone
Poetic Dan said:

I really like this! My mind is ticking

September 11th, 2017 04:51

Another Day Gone
FredPeyer said:

Thanks Martina,
can\'t wait to read your poem!
Now it is time to catch up on my sleep.

September 11th, 2017 04:15

Wordsmith
Seek said:

Nothing is quite what it seems, especially for a labor of love. How you encapsulate that so well. Thanks for that timely reminder. Wherever it is you are headed, have a wonderful trip.

September 10th, 2017 23:11

Wordsmith
ruby.e said:

Loved your poem and have fun in Maui!

September 10th, 2017 10:51

Moon Candy
Aa Harvey said:

If you find a stick, Archimedes says you could move the planet closer to the moon and get your moon candy.

September 9th, 2017 15:06

Wordsmith
myself and me said:

It is not so easy to be a wordsmith, not only it require heavy labor (hammer, beat), but also need to tolerant high heat.
Have a nice trip.

September 8th, 2017 20:01

Wordsmith
BlueDays said:

❤️ Have a lovely holiday Fred, stay safe.

September 8th, 2017 14:30

Wordsmith
Louis Gibbs said:

You have forged a masterful description of the \'process\' of creating poetry, Fred. You deserve a vacation in Maui with your kids! Have fun.

September 8th, 2017 10:22

Wordsmith
poetboy123 said:

Hope you have a good trip! This was a wonderful poem.

September 8th, 2017 10:18

Wordsmith
WL Schuett said:

Nicely forged smitty ....love this cool poem

September 8th, 2017 09:09

Wordsmith
Christina8 said:

You certainly have a way with words. Such a great poem. Have a safe flight, we will miss you!

September 8th, 2017 06:50

Wordsmith
dusk arising said:

Scrap is a bit high and mighty for my efforts, being a five letter word, maybe if you take away the first letter the remaining four letter word is my level of output.
Nice writing sir!

September 8th, 2017 04:10

Wordsmith
Michael Edwards said:

Love this and find it quite inspiring

September 8th, 2017 03:17

Wordsmith
Accidental Poet said:

No Fred, we are not the lucky ones when we won\'t have your presence here on MPS for the weekend. But your family will be the lucky ones. Great write, and you have a safe and wonderful weekend. ; )

September 8th, 2017 02:51

Wordsmith
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, that forge within our minds must always be true to itself.

September 8th, 2017 02:32

Wordsmith
Fay Slimm. said:

A fine summary of the work needed to complete a canvas of artistic poetry - have a great time away Fred - - your work will be missed - safe journey my friend.

September 8th, 2017 02:03

Wordsmith
Frank Prem said:

Nicely said, Fred. We are indeed the crucible for ideas to be forged.

Bravo.

September 8th, 2017 01:43

The Dream
Christina8 said:

Excellent poem! So sensuous and descriptive. Only to be teased that it was a dream. Great job!

September 7th, 2017 17:19

The Dream
FredPeyer said:

Thanks m&m, could have used that spinach dip to cool down!

September 7th, 2017 16:29



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