Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Another Beautiful Day in Paradise
Michael Edwards said:
Great write with some super lines - I do like: mini skirts short enough to kick start desire.
August 26th, 2017 02:52
Michael Edwards said:
Great write with some super lines - I do like: mini skirts short enough to kick start desire.
August 26th, 2017 02:52
My wife, my lover, my friend
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ for caring & sharing ~ a lovely tribute to your WIFE in particular and MARRIAGE in general ! Yes is does redress some of the sad srories of separation and break up and abuse which have proliferated on MPS recently. Your elegant Poem (love rhyming couplets) covers every aspect of True Love and its culmination in a Happy & Fruitful Marriage. Children are Blessing from God so THREE is a Triple Blessing and you have MULTIPLIED 2 becomes 3 ~ AMEN Loved every word ! Yours BRIAN
Please check the FUSION on Games & Pastimes by SANTITA & Myself and add a Poem.
Click in DEVELOPING and it will come up ~ OK ~ Thanks B.
August 25th, 2017 15:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ for caring & sharing ~ a lovely tribute to your WIFE in particular and MARRIAGE in general ! Yes is does redress some of the sad srories of separation and break up and abuse which have proliferated on MPS recently. Your elegant Poem (love rhyming couplets) covers every aspect of True Love and its culmination in a Happy & Fruitful Marriage. Children are Blessing from God so THREE is a Triple Blessing and you have MULTIPLIED 2 becomes 3 ~ AMEN Loved every word ! Yours BRIAN
Please check the FUSION on Games & Pastimes by SANTITA & Myself and add a Poem.
Click in DEVELOPING and it will come up ~ OK ~ Thanks B.
August 25th, 2017 15:42
My wife, my lover, my friend
myself and me said:
Wow, true love indeed. Deep, soft, warm, and long lasting. You can\'t ask more than this.
Absolutely lovely.
August 25th, 2017 12:26
myself and me said:
Wow, true love indeed. Deep, soft, warm, and long lasting. You can\'t ask more than this.
Absolutely lovely.
August 25th, 2017 12:26
My wife, my lover, my friend
malubotelho said:
Mushy is my fave. Guys are afraid of being mushy but most of the girls like mushy. With sincerity of course. I love this Fred specially when you say she laughs from your old jokes. We all repeat old jokes and expect closer people to laugh again and again. Very sweet of you to drip from your heart a confession publicly. Lucky you two to have encountered each other.
August 25th, 2017 10:58
malubotelho said:
Mushy is my fave. Guys are afraid of being mushy but most of the girls like mushy. With sincerity of course. I love this Fred specially when you say she laughs from your old jokes. We all repeat old jokes and expect closer people to laugh again and again. Very sweet of you to drip from your heart a confession publicly. Lucky you two to have encountered each other.
August 25th, 2017 10:58
My wife, my lover, my friend
dusk arising said:
Fred i love this. So honest and open. You are a lucky man to have such a great lady by your side and so too is she and blessed with your poetic love.
August 25th, 2017 03:13
dusk arising said:
Fred i love this. So honest and open. You are a lucky man to have such a great lady by your side and so too is she and blessed with your poetic love.
August 25th, 2017 03:13
My wife, my lover, my friend
Aa Harvey said:
Purely beautiful. True romance. I love this poem. It is fabulous!
August 25th, 2017 02:50
Aa Harvey said:
Purely beautiful. True romance. I love this poem. It is fabulous!
August 25th, 2017 02:50
My wife, my lover, my friend
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful poem for your wife Fred.
Many a man scoffs at the thought of being a romantic. But love for one woman will be his biggest weakness, while also his greatest strength. Just something I\'ve learned over the last 50 years.
August 25th, 2017 02:49
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful poem for your wife Fred.
Many a man scoffs at the thought of being a romantic. But love for one woman will be his biggest weakness, while also his greatest strength. Just something I\'ve learned over the last 50 years.
August 25th, 2017 02:49
My wife, my lover, my friend
Michael Edwards said:
And for me - great to read something that is uplifting and celebrates love- super write.
August 25th, 2017 02:11
Michael Edwards said:
And for me - great to read something that is uplifting and celebrates love- super write.
August 25th, 2017 02:11
My wife, my lover, my friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true for me as well. I like mushy.
August 25th, 2017 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true for me as well. I like mushy.
August 25th, 2017 02:05
A Date with my Muse
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ It always amazes me how people with STATIC MUSES always manage to produce such perfect odes ~ replete with consistent abab cdcd etc rhyming and perfect meter ! GOD help us lesser poets if ever you do find her ! Yours BRIAN. SANTITA and I are collaborating of a FUSION on Fave Games & Pastimes ~ please add a Poem (press DEVELOPING to find it) ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 15:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ It always amazes me how people with STATIC MUSES always manage to produce such perfect odes ~ replete with consistent abab cdcd etc rhyming and perfect meter ! GOD help us lesser poets if ever you do find her ! Yours BRIAN. SANTITA and I are collaborating of a FUSION on Fave Games & Pastimes ~ please add a Poem (press DEVELOPING to find it) ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 15:43
A Date with my Muse
myself and me said:
So you got a date at late night. Wonderful.
A good evening story write in anamused way.
By the way, may I have some leftover, I am a bit hungry now.
August 24th, 2017 14:40
myself and me said:
So you got a date at late night. Wonderful.
A good evening story write in anamused way.
By the way, may I have some leftover, I am a bit hungry now.
August 24th, 2017 14:40
A Date with my Muse
Christina8 said:
This is a superb write! Tracking down your muse can be so tricky sometimes. Love the rhymes! Great read!
August 24th, 2017 13:07
Christina8 said:
This is a superb write! Tracking down your muse can be so tricky sometimes. Love the rhymes! Great read!
August 24th, 2017 13:07
A Date with my Muse
dusk arising said:
If only my little white muse would stay in its cage and run around on its wheel but it wont. Away it runs, escaping somehow, and brings to me stories of the extraordinary and wit. I dread the thought one day my pet muse will ne\'r return or dread of dreads use the cat flap.
August 24th, 2017 11:14
dusk arising said:
If only my little white muse would stay in its cage and run around on its wheel but it wont. Away it runs, escaping somehow, and brings to me stories of the extraordinary and wit. I dread the thought one day my pet muse will ne\'r return or dread of dreads use the cat flap.
August 24th, 2017 11:14
A Date with my Muse
malubotelho said:
This is great Fred and your muse were very generous with you even when you could not recognize her. She wrote it to you without you had noticed. Great writing Fred.
August 24th, 2017 08:47
malubotelho said:
This is great Fred and your muse were very generous with you even when you could not recognize her. She wrote it to you without you had noticed. Great writing Fred.
August 24th, 2017 08:47
A Date with my Muse
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem describes well the process of surrendering our minds to our muse, without whom a poet is lost. Kudos, Fred!
August 24th, 2017 08:00
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem describes well the process of surrendering our minds to our muse, without whom a poet is lost. Kudos, Fred!
August 24th, 2017 08:00
A Date with my Muse
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - you nailed it again Fred - that Muse does the very same to me when I want to write...........she has to have it HER way with any ideas for my pen.
August 24th, 2017 06:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - you nailed it again Fred - that Muse does the very same to me when I want to write...........she has to have it HER way with any ideas for my pen.
August 24th, 2017 06:29
A Date with my Muse
Accidental Poet said:
Looks like you were on a date and didn\'t even know it. I\'d say that date went well. Gotta listen to that inner voice Fred. Another masterpiece when you thought nothing there. ; )
August 24th, 2017 03:32
Accidental Poet said:
Looks like you were on a date and didn\'t even know it. I\'d say that date went well. Gotta listen to that inner voice Fred. Another masterpiece when you thought nothing there. ; )
August 24th, 2017 03:32
A Date with my Muse
Goldfinch60 said:
That muse can be so tricky to track down sometime. Good write.
August 24th, 2017 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That muse can be so tricky to track down sometime. Good write.
August 24th, 2017 01:01
A Date with my Muse
Michael Edwards said:
You are able to make something out of very little and this is a great example - great write Fred.
August 24th, 2017 00:38
Michael Edwards said:
You are able to make something out of very little and this is a great example - great write Fred.
August 24th, 2017 00:38
Trade Winds
malubotelho said:
This is so light and relaxing. I love your serene imaginative place Fred. It there where I go to cool down. Very hot and muggy here too. Dark and scary. Hurricane season is always ugly.
August 23rd, 2017 11:32
malubotelho said:
This is so light and relaxing. I love your serene imaginative place Fred. It there where I go to cool down. Very hot and muggy here too. Dark and scary. Hurricane season is always ugly.
August 23rd, 2017 11:32
Trade Winds
myself and me said:
Here it comes. Surrender yourself to Hawaii beach, full relaxation by the calm and blue ocean.
I can hear the whisper of the trade wind.
So peaceful, so relaxing. Oh, Hawaii beach, my dream vacation destination.
August 23rd, 2017 11:03
myself and me said:
Here it comes. Surrender yourself to Hawaii beach, full relaxation by the calm and blue ocean.
I can hear the whisper of the trade wind.
So peaceful, so relaxing. Oh, Hawaii beach, my dream vacation destination.
August 23rd, 2017 11:03
Trade Winds
Mugsdaddy said:
Made me long for the days of my youth when the road was my home. Thanks for the tears of joy long forgotten.
August 23rd, 2017 07:07
Mugsdaddy said:
Made me long for the days of my youth when the road was my home. Thanks for the tears of joy long forgotten.
August 23rd, 2017 07:07
Trade Winds
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, my imagination has also taken me there.
August 23rd, 2017 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, my imagination has also taken me there.
August 23rd, 2017 01:31
Trade Winds
dusk arising said:
Up up and away i was taken, cool breeze in my hair. Lovely.
August 23rd, 2017 00:28
dusk arising said:
Up up and away i was taken, cool breeze in my hair. Lovely.
August 23rd, 2017 00:28
Trade Winds
Michael Edwards said:
I ditto Santita\'s comments - a great piece.
August 23rd, 2017 00:24
Michael Edwards said:
I ditto Santita\'s comments - a great piece.
August 23rd, 2017 00:24
Birthday
Accidental Poet said:
A fine write Fred ; )
I once was told
The trick to getting old
Age is all mind over matter
If you don\'t mind, it don\'t matter
August 22nd, 2017 20:42
Accidental Poet said:
A fine write Fred ; )
I once was told
The trick to getting old
Age is all mind over matter
If you don\'t mind, it don\'t matter
August 22nd, 2017 20:42
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