Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Hope
WriteBeLight said:
Glad you returned and we got the opportunity to read your poem. I hope you never stop hoping :)
August 11th, 2017 12:45
WriteBeLight said:
Glad you returned and we got the opportunity to read your poem. I hope you never stop hoping :)
August 11th, 2017 12:45
Hope
Louis Gibbs said:
One would hope that there is always hope, hopefully. Welcome back, Fred. Hope you enjoyed your time away, but can appreciate missing this forum. Kudos on the poetic tribute to hope!
August 11th, 2017 07:57
Louis Gibbs said:
One would hope that there is always hope, hopefully. Welcome back, Fred. Hope you enjoyed your time away, but can appreciate missing this forum. Kudos on the poetic tribute to hope!
August 11th, 2017 07:57
Hope
orchidee said:
A fine write F. yet I too think there is always hope, that is not just wishful thinking.
This reminds me of: If one never expects any good to happen, one won\'t be disappointed if all works out badly! Yet that seems pessimistic.
August 11th, 2017 02:03
orchidee said:
A fine write F. yet I too think there is always hope, that is not just wishful thinking.
This reminds me of: If one never expects any good to happen, one won\'t be disappointed if all works out badly! Yet that seems pessimistic.
August 11th, 2017 02:03
Hope
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Hope is always there as without it existence would be non existent.
August 11th, 2017 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Hope is always there as without it existence would be non existent.
August 11th, 2017 00:33
Hope
Michael Edwards said:
Great to see you back BUT there\'s always hope - without it what is the point of anything - anyway still liked the poem - great write
August 11th, 2017 00:30
Michael Edwards said:
Great to see you back BUT there\'s always hope - without it what is the point of anything - anyway still liked the poem - great write
August 11th, 2017 00:30
Last Flight
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. The way you talk about the geckos sounds fascinating, I reckon I would get nothing done as I would just sit watching them.
I hope your work goes well.
August 7th, 2017 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. The way you talk about the geckos sounds fascinating, I reckon I would get nothing done as I would just sit watching them.
I hope your work goes well.
August 7th, 2017 00:59
Last Flight
WriteBeLight said:
Very thought provoking. Thanks and I hope you can get caught up. I can relate. Thanks again!
August 6th, 2017 09:56
WriteBeLight said:
Very thought provoking. Thanks and I hope you can get caught up. I can relate. Thanks again!
August 6th, 2017 09:56
Last Flight
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice poem ... love the punch line, Fred! I look forward to your return.
August 6th, 2017 09:55
Louis Gibbs said:
Nice poem ... love the punch line, Fred! I look forward to your return.
August 6th, 2017 09:55
Last Flight
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Got to love those gecko \"insect control\" commandos - for both entertainment value and utility. Your poem reminds me of the vast, wondrous, and good humored hand of the Creator.
August 6th, 2017 09:54
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Got to love those gecko \"insect control\" commandos - for both entertainment value and utility. Your poem reminds me of the vast, wondrous, and good humored hand of the Creator.
August 6th, 2017 09:54
Last Flight
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one and actually we will miss you but needs must.
August 6th, 2017 07:15
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one and actually we will miss you but needs must.
August 6th, 2017 07:15
Last Flight
burning-embers said:
Nice one Fred. last line joker. Reminded me of when i lived in an apartment in a huge stately home with windows beneath a portico. The bats would whizz around catching moths and one hot summer night a bat flew into my apartment thru the open window. Amazing creatures.
August 6th, 2017 06:02
burning-embers said:
Nice one Fred. last line joker. Reminded me of when i lived in an apartment in a huge stately home with windows beneath a portico. The bats would whizz around catching moths and one hot summer night a bat flew into my apartment thru the open window. Amazing creatures.
August 6th, 2017 06:02
Last Flight
Night Owl said:
I enjoyed this Fred-- The crickets outside my window were quite loud tonight...
August 6th, 2017 04:02
Night Owl said:
I enjoyed this Fred-- The crickets outside my window were quite loud tonight...
August 6th, 2017 04:02
Never
myself and me said:
Never mean to do it but did it anyways. That is how we hurt others and get hurt. Sometimes, we even did not have the chance to change what we did, and have to swallow the consequences. Never became ever. Nice poem.
August 5th, 2017 17:24
myself and me said:
Never mean to do it but did it anyways. That is how we hurt others and get hurt. Sometimes, we even did not have the chance to change what we did, and have to swallow the consequences. Never became ever. Nice poem.
August 5th, 2017 17:24
Never
burning-embers said:
Oh my word. So many what if\'s this brings to mind. Too many regrets in life, we seem to gather them with our years my friend.
August 5th, 2017 11:19
burning-embers said:
Oh my word. So many what if\'s this brings to mind. Too many regrets in life, we seem to gather them with our years my friend.
August 5th, 2017 11:19
Never
WriteBeLight said:
So sorry about your regrets. But, I guess they are just part of life and something we should try to learn from. I don\'t regret reading this Fred. Very good!
August 5th, 2017 09:09
WriteBeLight said:
So sorry about your regrets. But, I guess they are just part of life and something we should try to learn from. I don\'t regret reading this Fred. Very good!
August 5th, 2017 09:09
Never
malubotelho said:
Delightful reading. I love your poem and can relate to it. Why we lose our temper and say what we don\'t want too. I always wait being attacked three times before I defend myself. If I can hold without say anything I will walk alway before it is too late to apologize. Thanks for this beauty
August 5th, 2017 08:45
malubotelho said:
Delightful reading. I love your poem and can relate to it. Why we lose our temper and say what we don\'t want too. I always wait being attacked three times before I defend myself. If I can hold without say anything I will walk alway before it is too late to apologize. Thanks for this beauty
August 5th, 2017 08:45
Never
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Never meant\" to be Human, is what I read herein. Good one, Fred!
August 5th, 2017 08:42
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Never meant\" to be Human, is what I read herein. Good one, Fred!
August 5th, 2017 08:42
Looking for my Mind
Night Owl said:
Wow Fred- I want to see this film! Full of creative imagery--love that! Immersed in the birth of the universe >>delicious! Yep that monkey mind... as I get older, even my shadows become old friends...
August 5th, 2017 07:26
Night Owl said:
Wow Fred- I want to see this film! Full of creative imagery--love that! Immersed in the birth of the universe >>delicious! Yep that monkey mind... as I get older, even my shadows become old friends...
August 5th, 2017 07:26
Never
Michael Edwards said:
Sometimes, me included, folk can get too wrapt up in our own interests and priorities to recognise the feelings of others. Love the way you have worded this Fred.
August 5th, 2017 06:15
Michael Edwards said:
Sometimes, me included, folk can get too wrapt up in our own interests and priorities to recognise the feelings of others. Love the way you have worded this Fred.
August 5th, 2017 06:15
Tropical Rain
Christina8 said:
This poem is beautiful and uses such magnificent description, it almost felt like I was there. Absolutely amazing poem!
August 4th, 2017 19:47
Christina8 said:
This poem is beautiful and uses such magnificent description, it almost felt like I was there. Absolutely amazing poem!
August 4th, 2017 19:47
Tropical Rain
Bibbeck said:
Wow, wow, wow! Excellent expressive write FP; I can hear it coming down. Your words could easily be the introduction of a great novel, or someone reading an opening to the setting of a movie. I only wish I could use this description when it rains in UK, but it\'s rarely like this.
August 4th, 2017 13:19
Bibbeck said:
Wow, wow, wow! Excellent expressive write FP; I can hear it coming down. Your words could easily be the introduction of a great novel, or someone reading an opening to the setting of a movie. I only wish I could use this description when it rains in UK, but it\'s rarely like this.
August 4th, 2017 13:19
Tropical Rain
malubotelho said:
Fred, from now on every time I look up to the sky I will check on the clouds to see if they are pregnant. Loved your so delicately written verses about nature. So beautiful.
August 4th, 2017 10:13
malubotelho said:
Fred, from now on every time I look up to the sky I will check on the clouds to see if they are pregnant. Loved your so delicately written verses about nature. So beautiful.
August 4th, 2017 10:13
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