Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Tropical Rain
Louis Gibbs said:
You paint us a lovely, wet picture this morning, Fred! It\'s a tough place to live, but somebody has to do it. Kudos!
August 4th, 2017 07:49
Louis Gibbs said:
You paint us a lovely, wet picture this morning, Fred! It\'s a tough place to live, but somebody has to do it. Kudos!
August 4th, 2017 07:49
Tropical Rain
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poetic expressions of tropical rain are the best I have read - so real I was cringing with you under that waterfall shawl of dense wet - a first class write Fred.
August 4th, 2017 05:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poetic expressions of tropical rain are the best I have read - so real I was cringing with you under that waterfall shawl of dense wet - a first class write Fred.
August 4th, 2017 05:19
Tropical Rain
burning-embers said:
Tis a week of rainfall in my Cornwall excursion. Rainfall can keep u indoors and peering out thru windows of meditation.
August 4th, 2017 04:06
burning-embers said:
Tis a week of rainfall in my Cornwall excursion. Rainfall can keep u indoors and peering out thru windows of meditation.
August 4th, 2017 04:06
Tropical Rain
kevin browne said:
my nostrils are filled with your poem FredPeyer and that along side this piece is a very rainy achieving pleasurable moment. good work FP.
August 4th, 2017 02:07
kevin browne said:
my nostrils are filled with your poem FredPeyer and that along side this piece is a very rainy achieving pleasurable moment. good work FP.
August 4th, 2017 02:07
Tropical Rain
whisperingquill said:
First of all you are lucky as hell getting to reside in Hawaii I\'m on the east coast
So you are lucky
\"The heavens opening up
Dropping the gift of life\"
\"The cloud’s wet offspring\"
\"Dark clouds pregnant with water\"
Very great lines
Enviable
Really great piece Fred 👍🏼
August 4th, 2017 01:33
whisperingquill said:
First of all you are lucky as hell getting to reside in Hawaii I\'m on the east coast
So you are lucky
\"The heavens opening up
Dropping the gift of life\"
\"The cloud’s wet offspring\"
\"Dark clouds pregnant with water\"
Very great lines
Enviable
Really great piece Fred 👍🏼
August 4th, 2017 01:33
Tropical Rain
Michael Edwards said:
Kat is spot on (if you\'ll excuse the pun) - this is such a good poem love \'the clouds wet offspring\' - simply a great piece.
August 4th, 2017 00:55
Michael Edwards said:
Kat is spot on (if you\'ll excuse the pun) - this is such a good poem love \'the clouds wet offspring\' - simply a great piece.
August 4th, 2017 00:55
Tropical Rain
FredPeyer said:
You are making me blush! So stop it!
But thank you anyway for your kind comment.
August 4th, 2017 00:46
FredPeyer said:
You are making me blush! So stop it!
But thank you anyway for your kind comment.
August 4th, 2017 00:46
Class Reunion
malubotelho said:
After so long time it is odd to meet people you are not connected anymore. Nice theme writing.
August 3rd, 2017 17:11
malubotelho said:
After so long time it is odd to meet people you are not connected anymore. Nice theme writing.
August 3rd, 2017 17:11
Class Reunion
P.H.Rose said:
Really good poem Fred
Just brilliant.....
I have been asked many
Time to attend my school
Reunion, but have never gone
Your poem reminded me why..
Thank you....
August 3rd, 2017 13:34
P.H.Rose said:
Really good poem Fred
Just brilliant.....
I have been asked many
Time to attend my school
Reunion, but have never gone
Your poem reminded me why..
Thank you....
August 3rd, 2017 13:34
Class Reunion
Fay Slimm. said:
I remember a class reunion in which I was hard put to tell who was who for the bald heads and wrinkles - -but it did not matter as we discussed the paths our lives had taken. Great reminder of the fun we all that memorable night. Thanks Fred.
August 3rd, 2017 13:12
Fay Slimm. said:
I remember a class reunion in which I was hard put to tell who was who for the bald heads and wrinkles - -but it did not matter as we discussed the paths our lives had taken. Great reminder of the fun we all that memorable night. Thanks Fred.
August 3rd, 2017 13:12
Class Reunion
WriteBeLight said:
Those are tough events. Good news and sad news. But, still something you should attend if you can, or deep down really want to. Otherwise, just blow it off. :) Great idea for a poem Fred!
August 3rd, 2017 12:25
WriteBeLight said:
Those are tough events. Good news and sad news. But, still something you should attend if you can, or deep down really want to. Otherwise, just blow it off. :) Great idea for a poem Fred!
August 3rd, 2017 12:25
Class Reunion
kevin browne said:
I love reunions and it\'s great fun. I love your poem here Fed. great reminder we should never forget those school days friends.
August 3rd, 2017 11:07
kevin browne said:
I love reunions and it\'s great fun. I love your poem here Fed. great reminder we should never forget those school days friends.
August 3rd, 2017 11:07
Class Reunion
Goldfinch60 said:
The class reunion is on of those things that is not on my Bucket List. Very good write Fred reminding me why it is not there.
August 3rd, 2017 07:58
Goldfinch60 said:
The class reunion is on of those things that is not on my Bucket List. Very good write Fred reminding me why it is not there.
August 3rd, 2017 07:58
Class Reunion
Louis Gibbs said:
To me, nothing could be more pointless than a class reunion. I echo Michael\'s comment. Your poem sums it up very well, Fred!
August 3rd, 2017 07:00
Louis Gibbs said:
To me, nothing could be more pointless than a class reunion. I echo Michael\'s comment. Your poem sums it up very well, Fred!
August 3rd, 2017 07:00
Class Reunion
Michael Edwards said:
Never been to one but I can imagine the strain on trying to communicate with folk who might just as well be complete strangers. Not something I would relish and the poem sums it all up so well for me.
August 3rd, 2017 04:51
Michael Edwards said:
Never been to one but I can imagine the strain on trying to communicate with folk who might just as well be complete strangers. Not something I would relish and the poem sums it all up so well for me.
August 3rd, 2017 04:51
My Motorcycle
Heather T said:
The passion felt leaks gloriously through your words. I remember my dad \"tucking\" me in to ride with him. He looped our belts together, and mom would push my hands down deep in his jean\'s pockets. I begged him to go faster, but mom said no, which meant wait until we got out of sight!
All of my friends ride Harleys. Including my girlfriends, who make regular wind therapy dates. My sweet uncle RJ loved his ride so much (I think he owned four bikes) that upon his way too early death, his favorite bike was brought in to the funeral parlor. That says much.
Super enjoyed your write.
August 2nd, 2017 10:20
Heather T said:
The passion felt leaks gloriously through your words. I remember my dad \"tucking\" me in to ride with him. He looped our belts together, and mom would push my hands down deep in his jean\'s pockets. I begged him to go faster, but mom said no, which meant wait until we got out of sight!
All of my friends ride Harleys. Including my girlfriends, who make regular wind therapy dates. My sweet uncle RJ loved his ride so much (I think he owned four bikes) that upon his way too early death, his favorite bike was brought in to the funeral parlor. That says much.
Super enjoyed your write.
August 2nd, 2017 10:20
My Motorcycle
Louis Gibbs said:
You nailed the glorious, therapeutic feeling of a good ride ... nothing like it! I find any excuse, like a three hour ride this week just to have lunch in another town. A \"parallel universe\" ... good description, Fred, and a good poem!
August 2nd, 2017 07:56
Louis Gibbs said:
You nailed the glorious, therapeutic feeling of a good ride ... nothing like it! I find any excuse, like a three hour ride this week just to have lunch in another town. A \"parallel universe\" ... good description, Fred, and a good poem!
August 2nd, 2017 07:56
My Motorcycle
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, well worth the wait my friend.
Have you ever read the book \" zen and the art of motorcycle maintenance\" you reminded me of this with you great wisdom in this post and others about corners ;)
August 2nd, 2017 06:38
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, well worth the wait my friend.
Have you ever read the book \" zen and the art of motorcycle maintenance\" you reminded me of this with you great wisdom in this post and others about corners ;)
August 2nd, 2017 06:38
My Motorcycle
orchidee said:
That you on that bike there?! You about to ride off on it?! A fine write Fred.
August 2nd, 2017 05:21
orchidee said:
That you on that bike there?! You about to ride off on it?! A fine write Fred.
August 2nd, 2017 05:21
Secret Place
S.louise said:
My special place is my bedroom with my ipod on and pen in my hand.
Its the only time I can feel truly at peace and away from the madness in the world.
Like you said its like a secret room away from it all.
Great write.
Thanks for sharing.
August 2nd, 2017 04:17
S.louise said:
My special place is my bedroom with my ipod on and pen in my hand.
Its the only time I can feel truly at peace and away from the madness in the world.
Like you said its like a secret room away from it all.
Great write.
Thanks for sharing.
August 2nd, 2017 04:17
My Motorcycle
Goldfinch60 said:
Totally understand your love of two wheels. Good write.
August 2nd, 2017 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Totally understand your love of two wheels. Good write.
August 2nd, 2017 01:55
My Motorcycle
whisperingquill said:
I never rode one in my life bro
but this write has me pondering I have thought about it recently. You make it seem otherworldly you make it seem like being really alive. Great description really surreal.
August 2nd, 2017 01:50
whisperingquill said:
I never rode one in my life bro
but this write has me pondering I have thought about it recently. You make it seem otherworldly you make it seem like being really alive. Great description really surreal.
August 2nd, 2017 01:50
My Motorcycle
kevin browne said:
love your passion for the two wheeler\'s Fred. I too was brought up around road and motocross bikes. my father owned and ran a bike shop for 15 yrs so I know the sounds of bikes pretty well.
August 2nd, 2017 01:49
kevin browne said:
love your passion for the two wheeler\'s Fred. I too was brought up around road and motocross bikes. my father owned and ran a bike shop for 15 yrs so I know the sounds of bikes pretty well.
August 2nd, 2017 01:49
My Motorcycle
Michael Edwards said:
Do you know I\'ve never ridden a motorcycle but I can well imagine the freedom of it - like this one very muck Fred.
August 2nd, 2017 01:20
Michael Edwards said:
Do you know I\'ve never ridden a motorcycle but I can well imagine the freedom of it - like this one very muck Fred.
August 2nd, 2017 01:20
On the Bus
orchidee said:
Now, now - surely you\'re not THAT old! Erm, I was gonna write a similar poem (was I?! heehee) but I missed my bus! lol.
August 1st, 2017 12:52
orchidee said:
Now, now - surely you\'re not THAT old! Erm, I was gonna write a similar poem (was I?! heehee) but I missed my bus! lol.
August 1st, 2017 12:52
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