Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Time to Leave
Fay Slimm. said:
An all too familiar pattern in this troubled society is seeing a female bearing the brunt of domestic violence - a fine reminder of woman\'s tragic position at these times Fred.
August 14th, 2017 12:03
Fay Slimm. said:
An all too familiar pattern in this troubled society is seeing a female bearing the brunt of domestic violence - a fine reminder of woman\'s tragic position at these times Fred.
August 14th, 2017 12:03
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orchidee said:
It\'s the alcohol that does it - affects the mind. Causes people to act like monsters. Of course, we can\'t blame the alcohol itself. it\'s only a \'thing\'. People drink it, and too much at times. A fine write.
August 14th, 2017 08:56
orchidee said:
It\'s the alcohol that does it - affects the mind. Causes people to act like monsters. Of course, we can\'t blame the alcohol itself. it\'s only a \'thing\'. People drink it, and too much at times. A fine write.
August 14th, 2017 08:56
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avigail said:
tell us what is the story behind the story Fred. beautifully written
August 14th, 2017 08:29
avigail said:
tell us what is the story behind the story Fred. beautifully written
August 14th, 2017 08:29
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Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good write over s very sad situation, I just do not understand this type of violence, or any type of violence come to that. Why, oh why cannot we live a peaceful existence.
August 14th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good write over s very sad situation, I just do not understand this type of violence, or any type of violence come to that. Why, oh why cannot we live a peaceful existence.
August 14th, 2017 08:01
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Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful job of imagining yourself in her shoes Fred ... so well expressed! It is a deplorable circumstance and all too common.
August 14th, 2017 06:27
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful job of imagining yourself in her shoes Fred ... so well expressed! It is a deplorable circumstance and all too common.
August 14th, 2017 06:27
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ALAS FRED In Urban Domesticity ~ there is a fine line between LOVE & HARM and domestic violence is all too common. Ladies turn up bruised at Church on Sunday Mornings ~ We give them tea & TLC but have learned not to ask too many questions ! BUT sometimes enough is enough and it\'s TIME TO LEAVE ! Thank GOD we can give them Sanctuary in a Safe House. Thanks for sharing Sad Message in an Elegant Poem ~ BRIAN. Please add a POEM to my FUSION ~ CARS ~ Thanks B
August 14th, 2017 04:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ALAS FRED In Urban Domesticity ~ there is a fine line between LOVE & HARM and domestic violence is all too common. Ladies turn up bruised at Church on Sunday Mornings ~ We give them tea & TLC but have learned not to ask too many questions ! BUT sometimes enough is enough and it\'s TIME TO LEAVE ! Thank GOD we can give them Sanctuary in a Safe House. Thanks for sharing Sad Message in an Elegant Poem ~ BRIAN. Please add a POEM to my FUSION ~ CARS ~ Thanks B
August 14th, 2017 04:48
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Michael Edwards said:
This sad story is so often repeated - I never can understand how men (and women too) can ever act like this to their fellow man (or woman) . Being very politically correct aren\'t I. This is such a sensitive write about such a difficult problem - great stuff Fred
August 14th, 2017 02:56
Michael Edwards said:
This sad story is so often repeated - I never can understand how men (and women too) can ever act like this to their fellow man (or woman) . Being very politically correct aren\'t I. This is such a sensitive write about such a difficult problem - great stuff Fred
August 14th, 2017 02:56
Dandelion Seeds
Heather T said:
A flowing, peaceful beauty that lends to deeper thoughts. Funny. As far as my faith goes, I think I am a dandelion in Christ. That made me giggle, but it hit me sort of profound. This is gorgeous, Fred.
August 13th, 2017 22:49
Heather T said:
A flowing, peaceful beauty that lends to deeper thoughts. Funny. As far as my faith goes, I think I am a dandelion in Christ. That made me giggle, but it hit me sort of profound. This is gorgeous, Fred.
August 13th, 2017 22:49
Dandelion Seeds
burning-embers said:
Could this masterpiece be a tribute to the most successful vegetation on the planet. Either we need to make a breakfast cereal out of the stuff or breed more rabbits.. they seem to dote on dandelion leaves. Nice one fred.
August 13th, 2017 21:42
burning-embers said:
Could this masterpiece be a tribute to the most successful vegetation on the planet. Either we need to make a breakfast cereal out of the stuff or breed more rabbits.. they seem to dote on dandelion leaves. Nice one fred.
August 13th, 2017 21:42
Dandelion Seeds
myself and me said:
Feel like I am a dandelion seed myself. Cross the ocean, landed in a place thousands miles away from where I was born. Love this one.
August 13th, 2017 21:08
myself and me said:
Feel like I am a dandelion seed myself. Cross the ocean, landed in a place thousands miles away from where I was born. Love this one.
August 13th, 2017 21:08
Dandelion Seeds
malubotelho said:
Such a sweet writing Fred. I love the dandelions. They are beautiful, soft and medicinal plant. I used to be light them before. Be floating around before I had kids. Now I\'m a lot quieter. Thanks for writing this beauty.
August 13th, 2017 19:58
malubotelho said:
Such a sweet writing Fred. I love the dandelions. They are beautiful, soft and medicinal plant. I used to be light them before. Be floating around before I had kids. Now I\'m a lot quieter. Thanks for writing this beauty.
August 13th, 2017 19:58
Dandelion Seeds
Louis Gibbs said:
A whimsical write that brings to mind the aimless drifting of so many youth today. Well done, Fred!
August 13th, 2017 07:52
Louis Gibbs said:
A whimsical write that brings to mind the aimless drifting of so many youth today. Well done, Fred!
August 13th, 2017 07:52
Dandelion Seeds
Bibbeck said:
Brilliant write Fred! I love this. It makes me think, a seed we see as so beautiful, but don\'t appreciate the plant. There\'s beauty inside everything! Especially so often in presentation in your words.
August 13th, 2017 05:18
Bibbeck said:
Brilliant write Fred! I love this. It makes me think, a seed we see as so beautiful, but don\'t appreciate the plant. There\'s beauty inside everything! Especially so often in presentation in your words.
August 13th, 2017 05:18
Dandelion Seeds
Goldfinch60 said:
That perfect place seems to be my garden! Very good write Fred they are wonderful to watch.
August 13th, 2017 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That perfect place seems to be my garden! Very good write Fred they are wonderful to watch.
August 13th, 2017 02:16
Living
Goldfinch60 said:
LIfe is there to be lived in ALL its various incarnations. Good write Fred.
August 13th, 2017 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
LIfe is there to be lived in ALL its various incarnations. Good write Fred.
August 13th, 2017 02:07
Dandelion Seeds
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Dandelion leaves for our pet piggies! The ones in my pic look a bit like two of our pigs.
August 13th, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Dandelion leaves for our pet piggies! The ones in my pic look a bit like two of our pigs.
August 13th, 2017 01:52
Dandelion Seeds
Michael Edwards said:
The stately dandelion - I love them they bring such colour and vitality - it\'s a shame they are not generally held in high esteem, Love this poem too it does them great justice and so well drafted - nice one Fred.
August 13th, 2017 01:03
Michael Edwards said:
The stately dandelion - I love them they bring such colour and vitality - it\'s a shame they are not generally held in high esteem, Love this poem too it does them great justice and so well drafted - nice one Fred.
August 13th, 2017 01:03
Living
malubotelho said:
Self transcendence. This is the most difficult part to do in life. To transcend yourself you must forget who you are and this is what no one wants to do. We are rather very self important to accept deeply changes. A beautiful writing indeed.
August 12th, 2017 22:43
malubotelho said:
Self transcendence. This is the most difficult part to do in life. To transcend yourself you must forget who you are and this is what no one wants to do. We are rather very self important to accept deeply changes. A beautiful writing indeed.
August 12th, 2017 22:43
Living
myself and me said:
Wow, you come back with such a splendid piece. Act of living, living a meaningful life as we could.
August 12th, 2017 22:24
myself and me said:
Wow, you come back with such a splendid piece. Act of living, living a meaningful life as we could.
August 12th, 2017 22:24
Living
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree with Antonio your work is a needed reminder that life is for loving and repaying in kind. Another gem Fred and thanks for sharing.
August 12th, 2017 17:08
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree with Antonio your work is a needed reminder that life is for loving and repaying in kind. Another gem Fred and thanks for sharing.
August 12th, 2017 17:08
Living
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. But I don\'t go along with Erich\'s quote myself. yet the poems seems to move from \"the act of living itself\" through to the end \"Finally, there is meaning in our life\". Otherwise I think we would be all wrapped up in \'self, self, self\' and nothing and nobody else. Oohh I\'m waffling a bit now! lol.
August 12th, 2017 14:55
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. But I don\'t go along with Erich\'s quote myself. yet the poems seems to move from \"the act of living itself\" through to the end \"Finally, there is meaning in our life\". Otherwise I think we would be all wrapped up in \'self, self, self\' and nothing and nobody else. Oohh I\'m waffling a bit now! lol.
August 12th, 2017 14:55
Living
Michael Edwards said:
Fred - I can\'t really add anything to the praises expressed above which so well describe this excellent write.
August 12th, 2017 13:29
Michael Edwards said:
Fred - I can\'t really add anything to the praises expressed above which so well describe this excellent write.
August 12th, 2017 13:29
Living
Louis Gibbs said:
What ... you couldn\'t pick a simpler theme than the meaning of life? Like anyone is qualified to agree or disagree with your take? Noble analysis, your thought-provoking poem, Fred! I need some aspirin.
August 12th, 2017 13:00
Louis Gibbs said:
What ... you couldn\'t pick a simpler theme than the meaning of life? Like anyone is qualified to agree or disagree with your take? Noble analysis, your thought-provoking poem, Fred! I need some aspirin.
August 12th, 2017 13:00
Jack the little yellow Dinosaur
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, I bet your grandkids enjoyed it.
August 12th, 2017 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, I bet your grandkids enjoyed it.
August 12th, 2017 00:31
Jack the little yellow Dinosaur
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Enjoyed your poem Fred. I understand Dr. Seuss poems were written in predominantly anapest metric feet (uuS); had the pleasure walking through the Dr. Seuss themed area at Universal Studios a few weeks ago (Orlando) your poem brings this all rushing back to mind.
August 11th, 2017 21:35
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Enjoyed your poem Fred. I understand Dr. Seuss poems were written in predominantly anapest metric feet (uuS); had the pleasure walking through the Dr. Seuss themed area at Universal Studios a few weeks ago (Orlando) your poem brings this all rushing back to mind.
August 11th, 2017 21:35
Jack the little yellow Dinosaur
Michael Edwards said:
Such a great fun read - nice one Frank.
August 11th, 2017 21:28
Michael Edwards said:
Such a great fun read - nice one Frank.
August 11th, 2017 21:28
Jack the little yellow Dinosaur
Louis Gibbs said:
I love poems with a happy ending! I\'m sure your granddaughter will like it too, Fred.
August 11th, 2017 20:06
Louis Gibbs said:
I love poems with a happy ending! I\'m sure your granddaughter will like it too, Fred.
August 11th, 2017 20:06
Jack the little yellow Dinosaur
malubotelho said:
Wow! I love this cute tale. I have a little blue dinosaur on my bed side table together with a lamb, a cat and a little mouse that resembles Stuart. I love them. I even talk to them. Those are mine and I don\'t give them to my granddaughter. Thanks for sharing Fred.
August 11th, 2017 17:02
malubotelho said:
Wow! I love this cute tale. I have a little blue dinosaur on my bed side table together with a lamb, a cat and a little mouse that resembles Stuart. I love them. I even talk to them. Those are mine and I don\'t give them to my granddaughter. Thanks for sharing Fred.
August 11th, 2017 17:02
Hope
malubotelho said:
Fine writing Fred. Nice to see you back. Hope you are feeling good.
August 11th, 2017 14:59
malubotelho said:
Fine writing Fred. Nice to see you back. Hope you are feeling good.
August 11th, 2017 14:59
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