Comments received on poems by dusk arising
lustfully greedily
sorenbarrett said:
A passionate gulp with all the taste of a fine wine. I\'m so glad you didn\'t write about a cheap wine love. Great write Dusk
April 5th, 2022 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
A passionate gulp with all the taste of a fine wine. I\'m so glad you didn\'t write about a cheap wine love. Great write Dusk
April 5th, 2022 08:13
lustfully greedily
L. B. Mek said:
some sips, surpass our wildest dreams
and nourish, every pulsing corner of our lives...
some, are just alcohol poisoning
waiting to take effect
and infect, all that we once cherished...
(a great write!
sorry if my interpretation of your metaphor
was off the mark, Dusk)
April 5th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
some sips, surpass our wildest dreams
and nourish, every pulsing corner of our lives...
some, are just alcohol poisoning
waiting to take effect
and infect, all that we once cherished...
(a great write!
sorry if my interpretation of your metaphor
was off the mark, Dusk)
April 5th, 2022 05:09
lustfully greedily
Christina8 said:
This is wonderful! I just love reading these types of writes....Christina
April 5th, 2022 05:05
Christina8 said:
This is wonderful! I just love reading these types of writes....Christina
April 5th, 2022 05:05
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Neville said:
Thank you DA .. a delight to read and took my mind off a whole mess of things ................................... Neville
April 4th, 2022 13:02
Neville said:
Thank you DA .. a delight to read and took my mind off a whole mess of things ................................... Neville
April 4th, 2022 13:02
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Christina8 said:
Love your write! It has grief and sadness but you portray them so well. I can\'t even WATCH the news on Ukraine, feels so helpless doesn\'t it?
April 4th, 2022 10:44
Christina8 said:
Love your write! It has grief and sadness but you portray them so well. I can\'t even WATCH the news on Ukraine, feels so helpless doesn\'t it?
April 4th, 2022 10:44
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Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was truly profound. I felt this journey of grief and sadness but the revelation and awareness. It\'s truly a captivating tale and I commend your artistry.
April 4th, 2022 10:22
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was truly profound. I felt this journey of grief and sadness but the revelation and awareness. It\'s truly a captivating tale and I commend your artistry.
April 4th, 2022 10:22
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Bella Shepard said:
I love the essence of your poem, life is open to interpretation, there is really no set rule, no hard and fast answers. I think that we are multiple layers and you have expressed this so well. I hope you may find peace in mind and spirit, your words come from one who cares deeply.
April 4th, 2022 10:12
Bella Shepard said:
I love the essence of your poem, life is open to interpretation, there is really no set rule, no hard and fast answers. I think that we are multiple layers and you have expressed this so well. I hope you may find peace in mind and spirit, your words come from one who cares deeply.
April 4th, 2022 10:12
forever
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful feel I had reading this. Even without paying attention to the words the cadence was soothing. The images were brilliant and evoked my walks on the beach. Lovely.
April 3rd, 2022 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful feel I had reading this. Even without paying attention to the words the cadence was soothing. The images were brilliant and evoked my walks on the beach. Lovely.
April 3rd, 2022 15:23
slowly into a shadow
tallisman said:
Wow! Clearly you write from the heart! Love it.
April 3rd, 2022 11:47
tallisman said:
Wow! Clearly you write from the heart! Love it.
April 3rd, 2022 11:47
dusk arises
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Stunningly gorgeous dusk. To be in between the days death and the birth of night. I love the lines. My favourite is “pinks and mauves enlight the sky as daylight breathes its final sigh. 🥂🕊🌞
April 3rd, 2022 08:15
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Stunningly gorgeous dusk. To be in between the days death and the birth of night. I love the lines. My favourite is “pinks and mauves enlight the sky as daylight breathes its final sigh. 🥂🕊🌞
April 3rd, 2022 08:15
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Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dusk,
Your words made this time of day come alive. When I was hospitalized, I had a great view of that heavenly sky. I saw the most amazing colors of that magical time of day called dusk. I looked forward to that happening every 24hours. It made me forget about the pain…for a while.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.
Laura🌻
April 2nd, 2022 17:22
Laura🌻 said:
Dear Dusk,
Your words made this time of day come alive. When I was hospitalized, I had a great view of that heavenly sky. I saw the most amazing colors of that magical time of day called dusk. I looked forward to that happening every 24hours. It made me forget about the pain…for a while.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.
Laura🌻
April 2nd, 2022 17:22
forever
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories like that can save on central heating, dusk.
Worthwhile retaining in all it\'s heartwarming detail.
April 2nd, 2022 16:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories like that can save on central heating, dusk.
Worthwhile retaining in all it\'s heartwarming detail.
April 2nd, 2022 16:31
forever
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful and serene
Love and it’s pain
Yearnings that grave inside
A wonderful piece dear dusk
April 2nd, 2022 14:42
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful and serene
Love and it’s pain
Yearnings that grave inside
A wonderful piece dear dusk
April 2nd, 2022 14:42
forever
Christina8 said:
Lovely emotions and images dear Dusk! A compelling poem of love and don\'t we all have those stolen moments...or at least I hope we do..Christina
April 2nd, 2022 14:09
Christina8 said:
Lovely emotions and images dear Dusk! A compelling poem of love and don\'t we all have those stolen moments...or at least I hope we do..Christina
April 2nd, 2022 14:09
forever
Bella Shepard said:
\"Moments forever imprinted on his soul\", how beautifully penned. I think the soul is where our memories may safely abide, and you\'ve captured that.
April 2nd, 2022 11:53
Bella Shepard said:
\"Moments forever imprinted on his soul\", how beautifully penned. I think the soul is where our memories may safely abide, and you\'ve captured that.
April 2nd, 2022 11:53
dusk arises
SureshG said:
Ahhhh! yes, the time when the Sun wears a veil, to calm its intensity and the royal colors explode in its wake, that yours words have exposed us for all to nourish
April 2nd, 2022 10:44
SureshG said:
Ahhhh! yes, the time when the Sun wears a veil, to calm its intensity and the royal colors explode in its wake, that yours words have exposed us for all to nourish
April 2nd, 2022 10:44
of Elspenor part 3
Rocky Lagou said:
I love this rhyme scheme you got sort of strewn throughout the piece. I definitely see that \"less is more\" you mentioned in my post today. It\'s nice to see that succinctness being utilized to allow the reader space to interpret. Also I\'ve read \"The Odyssey\" and isn\'t Elspenor the drunken who stayed behind when Odysseus and his crew visited Circe?
April 1st, 2022 10:22
Rocky Lagou said:
I love this rhyme scheme you got sort of strewn throughout the piece. I definitely see that \"less is more\" you mentioned in my post today. It\'s nice to see that succinctness being utilized to allow the reader space to interpret. Also I\'ve read \"The Odyssey\" and isn\'t Elspenor the drunken who stayed behind when Odysseus and his crew visited Circe?
April 1st, 2022 10:22
of Elspenor part 3
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oh hear ye gods of elspenore
who\'s glory songs we choir
bear witness I shall yield no more\'..
fantasy, with liberating
closet mind\'s
as its nucleus of intent..
a wonderful read Dusk
thank you, again
April 1st, 2022 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'Oh hear ye gods of elspenore
who\'s glory songs we choir
bear witness I shall yield no more\'..
fantasy, with liberating
closet mind\'s
as its nucleus of intent..
a wonderful read Dusk
thank you, again
April 1st, 2022 04:29
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Goldfinch60 said:
Super words d a, dusk is a wonderful time of the day.
Andy
April 1st, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words d a, dusk is a wonderful time of the day.
Andy
April 1st, 2022 00:38
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Bella Shepard said:
Love your beautiful description of sunset ebbing towards dusk, it\'s one of my favorite times of the day. Well done!
March 31st, 2022 13:16
Bella Shepard said:
Love your beautiful description of sunset ebbing towards dusk, it\'s one of my favorite times of the day. Well done!
March 31st, 2022 13:16
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Christina8 said:
This is just beautiful, dusk! I really don\'t have words to convey how much I like this poem but will favorite it for later....Christina
March 31st, 2022 08:51
Christina8 said:
This is just beautiful, dusk! I really don\'t have words to convey how much I like this poem but will favorite it for later....Christina
March 31st, 2022 08:51
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Rocky Lagou said:
So is this where you got your username from? The imagery is spectacular, I love this journey of colors and paintings in the sky. Beautiful.
March 31st, 2022 08:11
Rocky Lagou said:
So is this where you got your username from? The imagery is spectacular, I love this journey of colors and paintings in the sky. Beautiful.
March 31st, 2022 08:11
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Neville said:
that in-between time is glorious & you have certainly done justice to it today sir ........................... Neville :)
March 31st, 2022 08:03
Neville said:
that in-between time is glorious & you have certainly done justice to it today sir ........................... Neville :)
March 31st, 2022 08:03
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Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely poem , dusk ) like your words
March 31st, 2022 07:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely poem , dusk ) like your words
March 31st, 2022 07:53
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