Comments received on poems by dusk arising
in dark woodland
Neville said:
what splendid words sir having more than merely scratched the surface of my own nocte world ................. N
April 17th, 2022 10:37
Neville said:
what splendid words sir having more than merely scratched the surface of my own nocte world ................. N
April 17th, 2022 10:37
in dark woodland
Paul Bell said:
Take yourself out of suburbia and retreat to the forest, where a different world awaits you. The forest at night is where life and dreams for a time come together.
April 17th, 2022 07:16
Paul Bell said:
Take yourself out of suburbia and retreat to the forest, where a different world awaits you. The forest at night is where life and dreams for a time come together.
April 17th, 2022 07:16
beautiful pastime
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow, dusk.
Now that\'s a manly write
Tap dancing on the line
Between a moment poetic
And coveting a life.
April 16th, 2022 13:57
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow, dusk.
Now that\'s a manly write
Tap dancing on the line
Between a moment poetic
And coveting a life.
April 16th, 2022 13:57
beautiful pastime
Bella Shepard said:
The power and magic of touch. It can communicate in ways beyond words. You have captured that beautifully in this poem. Has me swooning.
April 16th, 2022 13:35
Bella Shepard said:
The power and magic of touch. It can communicate in ways beyond words. You have captured that beautifully in this poem. Has me swooning.
April 16th, 2022 13:35
beautiful pastime
Paul Bell said:
Aren\'t women great to look at, and be around. The pleasure of being naked together, is just the pleasure of being together.
April 16th, 2022 04:58
Paul Bell said:
Aren\'t women great to look at, and be around. The pleasure of being naked together, is just the pleasure of being together.
April 16th, 2022 04:58
beautiful pastime
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sensuous write - had me reaching for a beer and a fag - only kidding.
April 16th, 2022 04:50
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sensuous write - had me reaching for a beer and a fag - only kidding.
April 16th, 2022 04:50
beautiful pastime
spilleronsheet said:
Love returns in air
With hues of pink
The paradise of lovers heard in between
Good one dear Dusk….
April 16th, 2022 03:21
spilleronsheet said:
Love returns in air
With hues of pink
The paradise of lovers heard in between
Good one dear Dusk….
April 16th, 2022 03:21
beautiful pastime
Neville said:
tis amazing, just gazing .. but when taken in and digested what a thrill .. truly brill ...................... tis indeedly goodly goodest good sir DA ......... N
April 16th, 2022 02:31
Neville said:
tis amazing, just gazing .. but when taken in and digested what a thrill .. truly brill ...................... tis indeedly goodly goodest good sir DA ......... N
April 16th, 2022 02:31
the love poet
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello dusk arising
This is quite lovely, may your muse whisper many words
tchau...Cassia DeSousa
April 15th, 2022 15:11
Cassia DeSousa said:
Hello dusk arising
This is quite lovely, may your muse whisper many words
tchau...Cassia DeSousa
April 15th, 2022 15:11
the love poet
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully written. I especially love \"a harlequin of words a rhapsody, enchantment not spoken\", what lovely symbolism.
April 15th, 2022 14:00
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully written. I especially love \"a harlequin of words a rhapsody, enchantment not spoken\", what lovely symbolism.
April 15th, 2022 14:00
the love poet
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing dusk 🙂 I love your choice of words
April 15th, 2022 10:08
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing dusk 🙂 I love your choice of words
April 15th, 2022 10:08
whos paying for this lot then
SureshG said:
I believe this unposted poem of mine tells a tale:
From the moment humans left the African plains
And planted new soils with life supporting grains
A tide of immigrants transformed the many lands
Till a flag was planted and nations were born
Fear or necessity force millions to crawl for foreign sands
Once welcomed as labor have become an invading thorn
The solution is simple, and tide can be turned
Once the nations are free of corruption and economies are churned
April 15th, 2022 08:08
SureshG said:
I believe this unposted poem of mine tells a tale:
From the moment humans left the African plains
And planted new soils with life supporting grains
A tide of immigrants transformed the many lands
Till a flag was planted and nations were born
Fear or necessity force millions to crawl for foreign sands
Once welcomed as labor have become an invading thorn
The solution is simple, and tide can be turned
Once the nations are free of corruption and economies are churned
April 15th, 2022 08:08
whos paying for this lot then
Goldfinch60 said:
The MPs have got it covered, they will not lose out or be out of pocket so that\'s alright then.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
The MPs have got it covered, they will not lose out or be out of pocket so that\'s alright then.
Andy
April 15th, 2022 00:36
tide
Neville said:
I am glad I found these words in my attempt to claw back some of the time I was unable to be here recently .. and for the simple reason, it is so very rare for me to both simultaneously empathise with & to enjoy so much, such words as these ... Neville
April 14th, 2022 09:34
Neville said:
I am glad I found these words in my attempt to claw back some of the time I was unable to be here recently .. and for the simple reason, it is so very rare for me to both simultaneously empathise with & to enjoy so much, such words as these ... Neville
April 14th, 2022 09:34
whos paying for this lot then
L. B. Mek said:
please don\'t hate, all us immigrants
dear Poet
we\'re not all bad, promise
and though your words, account
for us who had to run
from wart torn, lands
may I, humbly suggest
while other\'s, \'economic\' reasons
may seem, flimsy
or self-serving, only
most of these
guys and girls, and most
at such a young age
choosing to brave, such a treacherous
journey, submitting themselves
to those flimsy profiteering
bullies and rapists, with insidious
and inhumane malice, intent..
do so
so they can stand in line, beside you or me
in those waiting rooms
for job applicants
knowing, they will be discriminated
against
but having no better, avenue
to seek, that better
all those profiteering Hollywood dreams
sale to them..
or those conquering, Imperialist regimes
made them believe
in the warped textbooks, they left behind
once they finished, looting
those once, self sustaining
lands...
(theirs more to numbers
than mere digits, my friend
their are lives, imbued
in each rounded-up, figure
whole, entire lives
full of fallible mistakes
broken dreams
and suffering, endless
endless
crimson rivers of suffering
that those tiny boats
paddle through, to find
frustrated mindsets, like yours
as their horror greeting\'s..
such is life
for some..
for other\'s
they most likely
won\'t even make it, this far!
and died, not knowing
what a morose reality
awaited them
at their, dream destinations)
April 14th, 2022 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
please don\'t hate, all us immigrants
dear Poet
we\'re not all bad, promise
and though your words, account
for us who had to run
from wart torn, lands
may I, humbly suggest
while other\'s, \'economic\' reasons
may seem, flimsy
or self-serving, only
most of these
guys and girls, and most
at such a young age
choosing to brave, such a treacherous
journey, submitting themselves
to those flimsy profiteering
bullies and rapists, with insidious
and inhumane malice, intent..
do so
so they can stand in line, beside you or me
in those waiting rooms
for job applicants
knowing, they will be discriminated
against
but having no better, avenue
to seek, that better
all those profiteering Hollywood dreams
sale to them..
or those conquering, Imperialist regimes
made them believe
in the warped textbooks, they left behind
once they finished, looting
those once, self sustaining
lands...
(theirs more to numbers
than mere digits, my friend
their are lives, imbued
in each rounded-up, figure
whole, entire lives
full of fallible mistakes
broken dreams
and suffering, endless
endless
crimson rivers of suffering
that those tiny boats
paddle through, to find
frustrated mindsets, like yours
as their horror greeting\'s..
such is life
for some..
for other\'s
they most likely
won\'t even make it, this far!
and died, not knowing
what a morose reality
awaited them
at their, dream destinations)
April 14th, 2022 05:49
principles
Fay Slimm. said:
You got them nailed Dusk - and I second your point.
April 13th, 2022 15:29
Fay Slimm. said:
You got them nailed Dusk - and I second your point.
April 13th, 2022 15:29
principles
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on dusk - and then they were found out and the firefighting began all over again.
April 13th, 2022 14:32
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on dusk - and then they were found out and the firefighting began all over again.
April 13th, 2022 14:32
principles
Saxon Crow said:
I am a good boy. I am a good boy..... Oh sod it. Those blo..... Fu....... Ars.........
April 13th, 2022 11:11
Saxon Crow said:
I am a good boy. I am a good boy..... Oh sod it. Those blo..... Fu....... Ars.........
April 13th, 2022 11:11
raft of reeds
spilleronsheet said:
Upon some lies life was laid
Amidst the one was a saying that read
“ Your the most precious” but all that was a golden lie
Amidst that misery most lives were loved until they met the grave
Truly understand your feels dear Dusk
Well inked dear Dusk
April 13th, 2022 00:09
spilleronsheet said:
Upon some lies life was laid
Amidst the one was a saying that read
“ Your the most precious” but all that was a golden lie
Amidst that misery most lives were loved until they met the grave
Truly understand your feels dear Dusk
Well inked dear Dusk
April 13th, 2022 00:09
raft of reeds
Rozina said:
Some people are so good at telling lies in such a \'truthful\' fashion. When the truth comes out, it\'s a real shock that it was false. The End.
Your poem expresses this beautifully.
April 12th, 2022 18:24
Rozina said:
Some people are so good at telling lies in such a \'truthful\' fashion. When the truth comes out, it\'s a real shock that it was false. The End.
Your poem expresses this beautifully.
April 12th, 2022 18:24
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