Comments received on poems by dusk arising
raft of reeds
MendedFences27 said:
\"lies\" often spell the end of many things, \"bonds\" included. Terrific write DA. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2022 11:47
MendedFences27 said:
\"lies\" often spell the end of many things, \"bonds\" included. Terrific write DA. - Phil A.
April 12th, 2022 11:47
raft of reeds
Neville said:
extraordinarily good sir & most defo no bullshit ........................... N :)
April 12th, 2022 09:43
Neville said:
extraordinarily good sir & most defo no bullshit ........................... N :)
April 12th, 2022 09:43
raft of reeds
Christina8 said:
Once someone has lied its hard to tell when they are telling the truth. Beautifully written dusk!!
April 12th, 2022 08:29
Christina8 said:
Once someone has lied its hard to tell when they are telling the truth. Beautifully written dusk!!
April 12th, 2022 08:29
raft of reeds
L. B. Mek said:
great imagery and a succinct, distillation
of a broken heart\'s, complexities..
thanks for sharing Dusk
April 12th, 2022 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
great imagery and a succinct, distillation
of a broken heart\'s, complexities..
thanks for sharing Dusk
April 12th, 2022 05:41
raft of reeds
Paul Bell said:
The real lie is the one you didn\'t know till the very end when all the cards were played.
April 12th, 2022 04:56
Paul Bell said:
The real lie is the one you didn\'t know till the very end when all the cards were played.
April 12th, 2022 04:56
raft of reeds
Fay Slimm. said:
The opening lines say it all to me Dusk - - - - I relate to that never suspecting a lie and on finding out I weep buckets of not understanding why - - sad but true that it breaks up many relationhips.
April 12th, 2022 02:40
Fay Slimm. said:
The opening lines say it all to me Dusk - - - - I relate to that never suspecting a lie and on finding out I weep buckets of not understanding why - - sad but true that it breaks up many relationhips.
April 12th, 2022 02:40
raft of reeds
Caring dove said:
I don’t like being lied to .. especially if it’s someone you know and thought you could trust .. it definitely affects relationships . A good writing , dusk )
April 12th, 2022 02:28
Caring dove said:
I don’t like being lied to .. especially if it’s someone you know and thought you could trust .. it definitely affects relationships . A good writing , dusk )
April 12th, 2022 02:28
premonition
Neville said:
I dont know how I managed to miss this until now .. thanks for pointing me in the write direction my dear friend and poet .. you have posted almost word for word what I feel sure many would wish to have penned themselves but far more eloquently ............. Neville
April 11th, 2022 16:21
Neville said:
I dont know how I managed to miss this until now .. thanks for pointing me in the write direction my dear friend and poet .. you have posted almost word for word what I feel sure many would wish to have penned themselves but far more eloquently ............. Neville
April 11th, 2022 16:21
the artist
Christina8 said:
This is absolutely wonderful, painting your words with your computer, can easily be worth a thousand words! Love this!
April 11th, 2022 09:51
Christina8 said:
This is absolutely wonderful, painting your words with your computer, can easily be worth a thousand words! Love this!
April 11th, 2022 09:51
the artist
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. Yes, yes, and YES. This is glorious. Poetry is truly a picture painted with words. We all find inspiration via different places and people but we all focus on spreading a message that will ring true. Greatly done!
April 11th, 2022 08:33
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. Yes, yes, and YES. This is glorious. Poetry is truly a picture painted with words. We all find inspiration via different places and people but we all focus on spreading a message that will ring true. Greatly done!
April 11th, 2022 08:33
now ready to depart
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. I love this bittersweet seperation you portray. It feels so real and the colors you paint brings to the mind pictures that dance your words across the screen. Beauty.
April 11th, 2022 08:19
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. I love this bittersweet seperation you portray. It feels so real and the colors you paint brings to the mind pictures that dance your words across the screen. Beauty.
April 11th, 2022 08:19
the artist
L. B. Mek said:
and there, a poem
to remind him
of the poet, he wishes
he may one day
become..
(I read and learn, Dusk
a great write!
thank you for sharing again, glad
I didn\'t miss out on this poetic gem)
April 11th, 2022 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
and there, a poem
to remind him
of the poet, he wishes
he may one day
become..
(I read and learn, Dusk
a great write!
thank you for sharing again, glad
I didn\'t miss out on this poetic gem)
April 11th, 2022 04:00
now ready to depart
L. B. Mek said:
\'beneath a quilt of fear
emboldened love reassures
in passion now re-born
and hesitation \'ere within\'..
simply Beautiful imagery, what choice wording
thank you, dear Poet
April 11th, 2022 03:56
L. B. Mek said:
\'beneath a quilt of fear
emboldened love reassures
in passion now re-born
and hesitation \'ere within\'..
simply Beautiful imagery, what choice wording
thank you, dear Poet
April 11th, 2022 03:56
it aint our summer
L. B. Mek said:
I adore your tone, in painting melancholy
as a gift of reverie, recalling those
bright mementos
we accumulated throughout
our lives
so now, in our Autumn of life
we can look - on
and find the joy, in watching a new
generation
sculpt their own, shards of life\'s
happiness..
(such a beautiful worded, read
exemplifying the freeing, power
in accepting ourselves
at every point of our lives
just, as we are
no facelifts or makeup, needed
theirs supreme, grace
in such a simple realisation)
thank you! dear Poet
April 11th, 2022 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
I adore your tone, in painting melancholy
as a gift of reverie, recalling those
bright mementos
we accumulated throughout
our lives
so now, in our Autumn of life
we can look - on
and find the joy, in watching a new
generation
sculpt their own, shards of life\'s
happiness..
(such a beautiful worded, read
exemplifying the freeing, power
in accepting ourselves
at every point of our lives
just, as we are
no facelifts or makeup, needed
theirs supreme, grace
in such a simple realisation)
thank you! dear Poet
April 11th, 2022 03:53
the artist
spilleronsheet said:
That’s a truly brilliant work
You said your muse was on rest
Dating the poetry to 2017
But it sounds so relevant
As if you had the premonitions of growing devils inside few brains
The encroachment
The war
The enslavement and violence
All pictured in canvas of mind
To the few hundred words describing the pleasant times
Well inked dear Dusk
April 11th, 2022 00:45
spilleronsheet said:
That’s a truly brilliant work
You said your muse was on rest
Dating the poetry to 2017
But it sounds so relevant
As if you had the premonitions of growing devils inside few brains
The encroachment
The war
The enslavement and violence
All pictured in canvas of mind
To the few hundred words describing the pleasant times
Well inked dear Dusk
April 11th, 2022 00:45
the artist
Rozina said:
Your poem is so true, art can often be bewildering to the viewers, having their own interpretations of a look, a smile, an abstract painting. Brilliant.
April 11th, 2022 00:30
Rozina said:
Your poem is so true, art can often be bewildering to the viewers, having their own interpretations of a look, a smile, an abstract painting. Brilliant.
April 11th, 2022 00:30
the artist
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words d a, the artist (and the poet) can be interpreted in so many different ways.
Andy
April 11th, 2022 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words d a, the artist (and the poet) can be interpreted in so many different ways.
Andy
April 11th, 2022 00:18
now ready to depart
spilleronsheet said:
The lovely words that lace
The beautiful emotions that weds
Uniting at the core of hearts
A beautiful analogy “ depart “
What a lover shall yearn
A greatest compliment
The pastel shades that you use
Strings her heart
Soon comes the spring
When the winter departs
Yearning for the refreshing breeze amidst the blazing sun
The striking words lace the poetry
Causing a sudden stop to the chaotic hearts
Very beautiful dear Dusk
An endless piece of praise feels like writing for such fine art
April 10th, 2022 14:26
spilleronsheet said:
The lovely words that lace
The beautiful emotions that weds
Uniting at the core of hearts
A beautiful analogy “ depart “
What a lover shall yearn
A greatest compliment
The pastel shades that you use
Strings her heart
Soon comes the spring
When the winter departs
Yearning for the refreshing breeze amidst the blazing sun
The striking words lace the poetry
Causing a sudden stop to the chaotic hearts
Very beautiful dear Dusk
An endless piece of praise feels like writing for such fine art
April 10th, 2022 14:26
now ready to depart
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, phrasing, sentiment. May love keep you in its arms and hold you dear.
April 10th, 2022 13:23
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful words, phrasing, sentiment. May love keep you in its arms and hold you dear.
April 10th, 2022 13:23
now ready to depart
sorenbarrett said:
Very well done, a style I have never tried but can appreciate. Great write Love conquers all.
April 10th, 2022 11:50
sorenbarrett said:
Very well done, a style I have never tried but can appreciate. Great write Love conquers all.
April 10th, 2022 11:50
now ready to depart
Fay Slimm. said:
Hesitation lifting her veil is such a sheer dream of a line to read aloud
- -- you have excelled yet again dear Dusk with this taste of love after so long alone. Must have this in my list.
April 10th, 2022 11:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Hesitation lifting her veil is such a sheer dream of a line to read aloud
- -- you have excelled yet again dear Dusk with this taste of love after so long alone. Must have this in my list.
April 10th, 2022 11:35
now ready to depart
Michael Edwards said:
Pure poetry - I\'ve read it several times and it just gets better.
April 10th, 2022 10:30
Michael Edwards said:
Pure poetry - I\'ve read it several times and it just gets better.
April 10th, 2022 10:30
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Christina8 said:
These are excellent visual words and i swear dusk, they belong in a poetry book! Great job!
April 10th, 2022 07:58
Christina8 said:
These are excellent visual words and i swear dusk, they belong in a poetry book! Great job!
April 10th, 2022 07:58
now ready to depart
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes the wait is worth it, and how many times does someone really special come into your life, and into your life at the right time too.
Good times ahead, methinks.
April 10th, 2022 03:54
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes the wait is worth it, and how many times does someone really special come into your life, and into your life at the right time too.
Good times ahead, methinks.
April 10th, 2022 03:54
now ready to depart
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic done and Mellow morning read, may that love stay deep within me!
And you if you want it? lol
April 10th, 2022 01:44
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic done and Mellow morning read, may that love stay deep within me!
And you if you want it? lol
April 10th, 2022 01:44
now ready to depart
Caring dove said:
So beautiful ! 🙂 lovely writing , dusk ))
April 10th, 2022 01:00
Caring dove said:
So beautiful ! 🙂 lovely writing , dusk ))
April 10th, 2022 01:00
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