Comments received on poems by dusk arising
it aint our summer
Lauraš» said:
Dear Dusk,
What a deep and powerful message you have penned. The ups and downs of the seasons of our lifeā¦
ābut here we are, quietly alive,
enriched by those yesterdays
learning the true value of our livesā
Youāre so spot on with this beautiful poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
April 9th, 2022 23:30
Lauraš» said:
Dear Dusk,
What a deep and powerful message you have penned. The ups and downs of the seasons of our lifeā¦
ābut here we are, quietly alive,
enriched by those yesterdays
learning the true value of our livesā
Youāre so spot on with this beautiful poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura š»
April 9th, 2022 23:30
it aint our summer
sorenbarrett said:
Dusky a wonderful write. All seasons have their strengths and as we pass through all of our seasons we need to appreciate each as it comes.
April 9th, 2022 12:33
sorenbarrett said:
Dusky a wonderful write. All seasons have their strengths and as we pass through all of our seasons we need to appreciate each as it comes.
April 9th, 2022 12:33
it aint our summer
Paul Bell said:
I suppose the seasons dictate our lives. I\'m a summer season, and all good things happen in summer.
April 9th, 2022 09:01
Paul Bell said:
I suppose the seasons dictate our lives. I\'m a summer season, and all good things happen in summer.
April 9th, 2022 09:01
it aint our summer
spilleronsheet said:
Like the months of calendar
Like the seasons of year
Like the time of watch
Yonder grows life
Some stuck in spring
Some waning in winters
But sage are those that are capable of evolving
You my dear friend, truly humble and gentle
Witty and so full of knowledge
Thanks for this deep insight
Relished your poetry
Thanks for such fine words
I did meet friends like you herein at MPS
April 9th, 2022 06:26
spilleronsheet said:
Like the months of calendar
Like the seasons of year
Like the time of watch
Yonder grows life
Some stuck in spring
Some waning in winters
But sage are those that are capable of evolving
You my dear friend, truly humble and gentle
Witty and so full of knowledge
Thanks for this deep insight
Relished your poetry
Thanks for such fine words
I did meet friends like you herein at MPS
April 9th, 2022 06:26
it aint our summer
Saxon Crow said:
Cricket! Springs only justed started and although I love this poem spring is my favourite season
April 9th, 2022 01:57
Saxon Crow said:
Cricket! Springs only justed started and although I love this poem spring is my favourite season
April 9th, 2022 01:57
it aint our summer
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words d a, we all know a person like that.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words d a, we all know a person like that.
Andy
April 9th, 2022 00:42
premonition
Michael Edwards said:
What a read - one of your best and that\'s saying something - into my favs.
April 8th, 2022 13:25
Michael Edwards said:
What a read - one of your best and that\'s saying something - into my favs.
April 8th, 2022 13:25
tide
spilleronsheet said:
Deep words well imbibed
Riding upon natureās work
True are the emotions
That yearning and separated love
A new plant shall sprout
So will come the spring
As always so elegant and charismatic words dear Dusk
Sheen straight from sun canāt be hidden
Jewelled poets shine even at their lowest
Cause they are the mettleā of courage
April 8th, 2022 13:12
spilleronsheet said:
Deep words well imbibed
Riding upon natureās work
True are the emotions
That yearning and separated love
A new plant shall sprout
So will come the spring
As always so elegant and charismatic words dear Dusk
Sheen straight from sun canāt be hidden
Jewelled poets shine even at their lowest
Cause they are the mettleā of courage
April 8th, 2022 13:12
premonition
spilleronsheet said:
True are the words with no denial
When humanity is at depletion
The war cries and the destruction of the true satan fills the street
Itās a tragedy but the poetry justifies the demonic era that is surfacing
Very accurately presented dear dusk
April 8th, 2022 13:08
spilleronsheet said:
True are the words with no denial
When humanity is at depletion
The war cries and the destruction of the true satan fills the street
Itās a tragedy but the poetry justifies the demonic era that is surfacing
Very accurately presented dear dusk
April 8th, 2022 13:08
premonition
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderfully stated claim that the human race has not progressed far. We have recently had a technological revolution advancing us beyond our wildest dreams but there has never been a social revolution to put us equal to our technological achievements. May be some day if we survive long enough. I particularly loved your last stanza.
April 8th, 2022 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderfully stated claim that the human race has not progressed far. We have recently had a technological revolution advancing us beyond our wildest dreams but there has never been a social revolution to put us equal to our technological achievements. May be some day if we survive long enough. I particularly loved your last stanza.
April 8th, 2022 11:53
premonition
L. B. Mek said:
so astute, dear Poet
we do, indeed
resemble, a society of
despairing mind\'s, overwhelmed
by chaotically decrepit, Times..
(\'where is this exalted life of harmony\'..
personally, I cherish
that shard, of its promise
I twirl into my cup of tea
and then utilise
its afforded, semblance of solace
as I sigh and exhale
my worries, in every sip..
as Plath, said best:
\'Tea leaves, thwart
those who court catastrophe\')
we must stay strong, morosely
I\'m sure theirs worse to come
before we get our, momentary
reprieve..
April 8th, 2022 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
so astute, dear Poet
we do, indeed
resemble, a society of
despairing mind\'s, overwhelmed
by chaotically decrepit, Times..
(\'where is this exalted life of harmony\'..
personally, I cherish
that shard, of its promise
I twirl into my cup of tea
and then utilise
its afforded, semblance of solace
as I sigh and exhale
my worries, in every sip..
as Plath, said best:
\'Tea leaves, thwart
those who court catastrophe\')
we must stay strong, morosely
I\'m sure theirs worse to come
before we get our, momentary
reprieve..
April 8th, 2022 05:04
premonition
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly seems that the human race is out to destroy itself d a, all it needs is for love to rule the world and peace will come to all.
Oh look! There is a pig flying in the air!!
Andy
April 8th, 2022 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly seems that the human race is out to destroy itself d a, all it needs is for love to rule the world and peace will come to all.
Oh look! There is a pig flying in the air!!
Andy
April 8th, 2022 00:44
tide
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully penned. Brimming over with metaphors, it paints a picture of time past. Catching the wave and riding it as far as it goes. \"but the tide has turned I plough those crests no more\" wonderful lines
April 7th, 2022 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully penned. Brimming over with metaphors, it paints a picture of time past. Catching the wave and riding it as far as it goes. \"but the tide has turned I plough those crests no more\" wonderful lines
April 7th, 2022 13:21
tide
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
and who knows, that tide
may change, once more...
(thanks Dusk
one of your very best
in my humble opinion
and that\'s saying, a lot!)
\'but tide has turned
i plough those crests no more
now birds in the night cry out
and chill of wind kicks sand in my face
the change of season\'
these lines are a poem
within a poem
just by themselves..
April 7th, 2022 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
and who knows, that tide
may change, once more...
(thanks Dusk
one of your very best
in my humble opinion
and that\'s saying, a lot!)
\'but tide has turned
i plough those crests no more
now birds in the night cry out
and chill of wind kicks sand in my face
the change of season\'
these lines are a poem
within a poem
just by themselves..
April 7th, 2022 05:08
tide
Goldfinch60 said:
May the new season bring peace and love to you d a.
Andy
April 7th, 2022 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
May the new season bring peace and love to you d a.
Andy
April 7th, 2022 00:43
storm
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a and a great big laugh at the end, my first laugh of the day, thank you.
Andy
April 7th, 2022 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a and a great big laugh at the end, my first laugh of the day, thank you.
Andy
April 7th, 2022 00:35
storm
Christina8 said:
Goodness gracious that alarm clock ruins everything! What a great story! A very enjoyable read. Beautiful!!
April 6th, 2022 13:33
Christina8 said:
Goodness gracious that alarm clock ruins everything! What a great story! A very enjoyable read. Beautiful!!
April 6th, 2022 13:33
storm
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always noticed when that alarm goes, it goes at that point, usually the pivotal point. I\'ve also noticed you can\'t re-dream dreams, and that\'s so frustrating.
April 6th, 2022 13:11
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve always noticed when that alarm goes, it goes at that point, usually the pivotal point. I\'ve also noticed you can\'t re-dream dreams, and that\'s so frustrating.
April 6th, 2022 13:11
lustfully greedily
GenXer Shamrocker āļø said:
Well written!!! I love reading poems like this.
April 6th, 2022 12:54
GenXer Shamrocker āļø said:
Well written!!! I love reading poems like this.
April 6th, 2022 12:54
storm
sorenbarrett said:
An epic tale or maybe tail. From history to film to childhood to dream my thoughts drifted and wove in and out. Nicely done.
April 6th, 2022 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
An epic tale or maybe tail. From history to film to childhood to dream my thoughts drifted and wove in and out. Nicely done.
April 6th, 2022 12:15
storm
Bella Shepard said:
I love a good story, and this was a gem. The scene beautifully set, the characters come to life. And just when it gets really good, well that\'s the way dreams are. Didn\'t see that end coming, but it made it all the more enjoyable.
April 6th, 2022 11:14
Bella Shepard said:
I love a good story, and this was a gem. The scene beautifully set, the characters come to life. And just when it gets really good, well that\'s the way dreams are. Didn\'t see that end coming, but it made it all the more enjoyable.
April 6th, 2022 11:14
lustfully greedily
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Dusk,
Was this about the wine or are you trying to imply something else ? Wonderful write but really looking for an answer :)
April 5th, 2022 12:02
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Dusk,
Was this about the wine or are you trying to imply something else ? Wonderful write but really looking for an answer :)
April 5th, 2022 12:02
lustfully greedily
Dahlia said:
nicely done poet, this one takes the reader on a roller coaster...enjoyed...
Dahlia
April 5th, 2022 11:39
Dahlia said:
nicely done poet, this one takes the reader on a roller coaster...enjoyed...
Dahlia
April 5th, 2022 11:39
lustfully greedily
jarcher54 said:
I depend on you for my porn poetry... Oh my.
April 5th, 2022 11:15
jarcher54 said:
I depend on you for my porn poetry... Oh my.
April 5th, 2022 11:15
lustfully greedily
Rocky Lagou said:
At first my mind went to āSEX,ā but then I took a second read and I feel that this is just that moment of infatuation when that bond with lover and self becomes almost unbearable to handle. Itās really intense.
April 5th, 2022 08:56
Rocky Lagou said:
At first my mind went to āSEX,ā but then I took a second read and I feel that this is just that moment of infatuation when that bond with lover and self becomes almost unbearable to handle. Itās really intense.
April 5th, 2022 08:56
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