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what do you do?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here ~ Thanks for caring & sharing DA. In my 20 years experience (1999 - 2019) of being IN (and OUT) of LOVE ~ This is the most unkindest cut of all ! Someone YOU love being mistreated by someone SHE loves. Paradoxically (apropos your Two Way Street) I saw one such GIRL (Christine ~ arm in a sling & and a black eye) coming down an ESCALATOR as I was going up. She seemed in a daze. When I reached the top I rushed down again but CHRISTINE had gone ~ and I wept. Next time I saw her she was OK and said she had an accident @ work. She was still with DRACULA ! I moved away and we never met again. But I often wonder what would have happenned if we had both been GOING DOWN ? Great Poem in both Form & Function !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
September 2nd, 2019 04:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here ~ Thanks for caring & sharing DA. In my 20 years experience (1999 - 2019) of being IN (and OUT) of LOVE ~ This is the most unkindest cut of all ! Someone YOU love being mistreated by someone SHE loves. Paradoxically (apropos your Two Way Street) I saw one such GIRL (Christine ~ arm in a sling & and a black eye) coming down an ESCALATOR as I was going up. She seemed in a daze. When I reached the top I rushed down again but CHRISTINE had gone ~ and I wept. Next time I saw her she was OK and said she had an accident @ work. She was still with DRACULA ! I moved away and we never met again. But I often wonder what would have happenned if we had both been GOING DOWN ? Great Poem in both Form & Function !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
September 2nd, 2019 04:07
what do you do?
Fay Slimm. said:
Its hard to move on when your heart wants to stay.......... a tear-wrenching read D.A,
September 2nd, 2019 02:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Its hard to move on when your heart wants to stay.......... a tear-wrenching read D.A,
September 2nd, 2019 02:39
what do you do?
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
I got a verse. It starts: \'What do you do when I start to sing?\' Go mad! heehee.
September 2nd, 2019 01:47
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
I got a verse. It starts: \'What do you do when I start to sing?\' Go mad! heehee.
September 2nd, 2019 01:47
what do you do?
Goldfinch60 said:
What do you do when the words of the song,
Bring tears to my eyes as I sing along,
Those tears filled with love,
And words from above,
Move forward in life,
Where there is no strife.
September 2nd, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
What do you do when the words of the song,
Bring tears to my eyes as I sing along,
Those tears filled with love,
And words from above,
Move forward in life,
Where there is no strife.
September 2nd, 2019 01:42
white rabbits
Goldfinch60 said:
September, the beginning of autumn, my favourite time of the year where nature\'s palette covers her world with glorious colours.
September 2nd, 2019 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
September, the beginning of autumn, my favourite time of the year where nature\'s palette covers her world with glorious colours.
September 2nd, 2019 01:31
white rabbits
Suresh said:
Maybe we can say that on a certain day of the week, or why not every day of our lives - nothing to lose, but surely every thing to gain
It\'s all in our attitude
September 1st, 2019 11:40
Suresh said:
Maybe we can say that on a certain day of the week, or why not every day of our lives - nothing to lose, but surely every thing to gain
It\'s all in our attitude
September 1st, 2019 11:40
white rabbits
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - you\'ve got me saying \'White Rabbits\'. Angoras? My tradition on the first day of each month is to check the bank balance.
September 1st, 2019 09:53
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - you\'ve got me saying \'White Rabbits\'. Angoras? My tradition on the first day of each month is to check the bank balance.
September 1st, 2019 09:53
white rabbits
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for posting this poetic reminder of how to greet today\'s incoming of September - -Oh I remember white rabbits well - - my junior school teacher used to tell us to chant as we jumped out of bed on the first day of any month - - WHITE RABBITS three times........ I have never forgotten and even now some months remember to say it....
Hah - strange little habits I agree D.A.
September 1st, 2019 05:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for posting this poetic reminder of how to greet today\'s incoming of September - -Oh I remember white rabbits well - - my junior school teacher used to tell us to chant as we jumped out of bed on the first day of any month - - WHITE RABBITS three times........ I have never forgotten and even now some months remember to say it....
Hah - strange little habits I agree D.A.
September 1st, 2019 05:09
white rabbits
Clara said:
Lovely words. Embracing the new seasons and you make it sound so magical and comforting. I too say white rabbits, three times, on the first day of a new month. Strange isn\'t it?
Take care
CLARA X
September 1st, 2019 04:33
Clara said:
Lovely words. Embracing the new seasons and you make it sound so magical and comforting. I too say white rabbits, three times, on the first day of a new month. Strange isn\'t it?
Take care
CLARA X
September 1st, 2019 04:33
unlikely bunch
Goldfinch60 said:
Those OCI\'s are wondrous people as are all people in the Health Service.
August 31st, 2019 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Those OCI\'s are wondrous people as are all people in the Health Service.
August 31st, 2019 00:14
unlikely bunch
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DA ~ Both ANGELA & I are familiar with the ravages of BIG-C. Physiotherapy & Massage can bring some relief ! In my case it is caring for Members of my Extended Family and Students (some as Young as 20) ~ Invaded by BIG-C. I love the Story of Marie Curie and the development of RADIUM in the fight against BIG-C. And The Marie Curie Nurses & The McMillan Nurse. Like yoiur Volunteers they are there when you need them ! Thanks for sharing an awesome TRIBUTE !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
August 30th, 2019 11:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DA ~ Both ANGELA & I are familiar with the ravages of BIG-C. Physiotherapy & Massage can bring some relief ! In my case it is caring for Members of my Extended Family and Students (some as Young as 20) ~ Invaded by BIG-C. I love the Story of Marie Curie and the development of RADIUM in the fight against BIG-C. And The Marie Curie Nurses & The McMillan Nurse. Like yoiur Volunteers they are there when you need them ! Thanks for sharing an awesome TRIBUTE !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
August 30th, 2019 11:28
unlikely bunch
kevin browne said:
What a beautifully written poem about the unsung heroes in your life. The dedication you put into words is quite remarkable..Nice work, DA...
August 30th, 2019 04:42
kevin browne said:
What a beautifully written poem about the unsung heroes in your life. The dedication you put into words is quite remarkable..Nice work, DA...
August 30th, 2019 04:42
unlikely bunch
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe the need for unlikely strangers meeting to fight the good fight so heart-breakingly well my friend - and those volunteer heroes need such a tribute - - this goes into my favourites.
August 30th, 2019 03:06
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe the need for unlikely strangers meeting to fight the good fight so heart-breakingly well my friend - and those volunteer heroes need such a tribute - - this goes into my favourites.
August 30th, 2019 03:06
unlikely bunch
orchidee said:
You and they (the volunteers) both are the heroes. I don\'t know, but I might give up spiritual help (my faith) if I was in the position of some people.
I send you human compassion anyway, if the spiritual side may not bring you much, or any, comfort.
August 30th, 2019 03:05
orchidee said:
You and they (the volunteers) both are the heroes. I don\'t know, but I might give up spiritual help (my faith) if I was in the position of some people.
I send you human compassion anyway, if the spiritual side may not bring you much, or any, comfort.
August 30th, 2019 03:05
shroud
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we all have a hanger on which we put personal traits we wish to be seen - - a haunting reminder of need to become whole and unafraid to show all therefore........ thanks for this post today D.A.
August 28th, 2019 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we all have a hanger on which we put personal traits we wish to be seen - - a haunting reminder of need to become whole and unafraid to show all therefore........ thanks for this post today D.A.
August 28th, 2019 03:46
shroud
Neville said:
this is a great write DA and one of those with multiple interpretations I suspect...... N
August 28th, 2019 03:38
Neville said:
this is a great write DA and one of those with multiple interpretations I suspect...... N
August 28th, 2019 03:38
if time would
kevin browne said:
Keep that smile smiling forever more and don\'t worry too much about those elusive ££££££££
August 28th, 2019 00:45
kevin browne said:
Keep that smile smiling forever more and don\'t worry too much about those elusive ££££££££
August 28th, 2019 00:45
shroud
kevin browne said:
That\'s a scary [eive of work. I\'ll be forever lookking over my shoulder and won\'t be haning arouund any door hangers anymore....
August 28th, 2019 00:24
kevin browne said:
That\'s a scary [eive of work. I\'ll be forever lookking over my shoulder and won\'t be haning arouund any door hangers anymore....
August 28th, 2019 00:24
if time would
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for caring DA ! Our MANTRA is *Smile & the World smiles with You ~ Frown & You Frown alone ~ But if yo cance to cry for good reason ~ Someone in The World will rush to your side and comfort you ~ AMEN !*
Blessings to You & Yours
Yours B & A 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 27th, 2019 16:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for caring DA ! Our MANTRA is *Smile & the World smiles with You ~ Frown & You Frown alone ~ But if yo cance to cry for good reason ~ Someone in The World will rush to your side and comfort you ~ AMEN !*
Blessings to You & Yours
Yours B & A 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 27th, 2019 16:58
if time would
Fay Slimm. said:
So true and well written - a smile within lights up the soul - - a lovely read and thank you D.A.
August 27th, 2019 13:26
Fay Slimm. said:
So true and well written - a smile within lights up the soul - - a lovely read and thank you D.A.
August 27th, 2019 13:26
if time would
Christina8 said:
A very positive write for today, da. I like it!
August 27th, 2019 11:52
Christina8 said:
A very positive write for today, da. I like it!
August 27th, 2019 11:52
if time would
orchidee said:
A fine write DA. Aww, why people give ME a pound every time, on condition that I don\'t sing?! I\'m a billionaire cos of it, ya know! lol.
August 27th, 2019 01:51
orchidee said:
A fine write DA. Aww, why people give ME a pound every time, on condition that I don\'t sing?! I\'m a billionaire cos of it, ya know! lol.
August 27th, 2019 01:51
gain
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
Yes, ‘patience’...
the key to a happier and healthier outlook on life...a definite “gain”!
A wonderful write to remind us of the importance of ‘patience’!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 10:17
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
Yes, ‘patience’...
the key to a happier and healthier outlook on life...a definite “gain”!
A wonderful write to remind us of the importance of ‘patience’!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 10:17
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