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white rabbits
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - you\'ve got me saying \'White Rabbits\'. Angoras? My tradition on the first day of each month is to check the bank balance.
September 1st, 2019 09:53
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - you\'ve got me saying \'White Rabbits\'. Angoras? My tradition on the first day of each month is to check the bank balance.
September 1st, 2019 09:53
white rabbits
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for posting this poetic reminder of how to greet today\'s incoming of September - -Oh I remember white rabbits well - - my junior school teacher used to tell us to chant as we jumped out of bed on the first day of any month - - WHITE RABBITS three times........ I have never forgotten and even now some months remember to say it....
Hah - strange little habits I agree D.A.
September 1st, 2019 05:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for posting this poetic reminder of how to greet today\'s incoming of September - -Oh I remember white rabbits well - - my junior school teacher used to tell us to chant as we jumped out of bed on the first day of any month - - WHITE RABBITS three times........ I have never forgotten and even now some months remember to say it....
Hah - strange little habits I agree D.A.
September 1st, 2019 05:09
white rabbits
Clara said:
Lovely words. Embracing the new seasons and you make it sound so magical and comforting. I too say white rabbits, three times, on the first day of a new month. Strange isn\'t it?
Take care
CLARA X
September 1st, 2019 04:33
Clara said:
Lovely words. Embracing the new seasons and you make it sound so magical and comforting. I too say white rabbits, three times, on the first day of a new month. Strange isn\'t it?
Take care
CLARA X
September 1st, 2019 04:33
unlikely bunch
Goldfinch60 said:
Those OCI\'s are wondrous people as are all people in the Health Service.
August 31st, 2019 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Those OCI\'s are wondrous people as are all people in the Health Service.
August 31st, 2019 00:14
unlikely bunch
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DA ~ Both ANGELA & I are familiar with the ravages of BIG-C. Physiotherapy & Massage can bring some relief ! In my case it is caring for Members of my Extended Family and Students (some as Young as 20) ~ Invaded by BIG-C. I love the Story of Marie Curie and the development of RADIUM in the fight against BIG-C. And The Marie Curie Nurses & The McMillan Nurse. Like yoiur Volunteers they are there when you need them ! Thanks for sharing an awesome TRIBUTE !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
August 30th, 2019 11:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DA ~ Both ANGELA & I are familiar with the ravages of BIG-C. Physiotherapy & Massage can bring some relief ! In my case it is caring for Members of my Extended Family and Students (some as Young as 20) ~ Invaded by BIG-C. I love the Story of Marie Curie and the development of RADIUM in the fight against BIG-C. And The Marie Curie Nurses & The McMillan Nurse. Like yoiur Volunteers they are there when you need them ! Thanks for sharing an awesome TRIBUTE !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
August 30th, 2019 11:28
unlikely bunch
kevin browne said:
What a beautifully written poem about the unsung heroes in your life. The dedication you put into words is quite remarkable..Nice work, DA...
August 30th, 2019 04:42
kevin browne said:
What a beautifully written poem about the unsung heroes in your life. The dedication you put into words is quite remarkable..Nice work, DA...
August 30th, 2019 04:42
unlikely bunch
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe the need for unlikely strangers meeting to fight the good fight so heart-breakingly well my friend - and those volunteer heroes need such a tribute - - this goes into my favourites.
August 30th, 2019 03:06
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe the need for unlikely strangers meeting to fight the good fight so heart-breakingly well my friend - and those volunteer heroes need such a tribute - - this goes into my favourites.
August 30th, 2019 03:06
unlikely bunch
orchidee said:
You and they (the volunteers) both are the heroes. I don\'t know, but I might give up spiritual help (my faith) if I was in the position of some people.
I send you human compassion anyway, if the spiritual side may not bring you much, or any, comfort.
August 30th, 2019 03:05
orchidee said:
You and they (the volunteers) both are the heroes. I don\'t know, but I might give up spiritual help (my faith) if I was in the position of some people.
I send you human compassion anyway, if the spiritual side may not bring you much, or any, comfort.
August 30th, 2019 03:05
shroud
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we all have a hanger on which we put personal traits we wish to be seen - - a haunting reminder of need to become whole and unafraid to show all therefore........ thanks for this post today D.A.
August 28th, 2019 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes we all have a hanger on which we put personal traits we wish to be seen - - a haunting reminder of need to become whole and unafraid to show all therefore........ thanks for this post today D.A.
August 28th, 2019 03:46
shroud
Neville said:
this is a great write DA and one of those with multiple interpretations I suspect...... N
August 28th, 2019 03:38
Neville said:
this is a great write DA and one of those with multiple interpretations I suspect...... N
August 28th, 2019 03:38
if time would
kevin browne said:
Keep that smile smiling forever more and don\'t worry too much about those elusive ££££££££
August 28th, 2019 00:45
kevin browne said:
Keep that smile smiling forever more and don\'t worry too much about those elusive ££££££££
August 28th, 2019 00:45
shroud
kevin browne said:
That\'s a scary [eive of work. I\'ll be forever lookking over my shoulder and won\'t be haning arouund any door hangers anymore....
August 28th, 2019 00:24
kevin browne said:
That\'s a scary [eive of work. I\'ll be forever lookking over my shoulder and won\'t be haning arouund any door hangers anymore....
August 28th, 2019 00:24
if time would
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for caring DA ! Our MANTRA is *Smile & the World smiles with You ~ Frown & You Frown alone ~ But if yo cance to cry for good reason ~ Someone in The World will rush to your side and comfort you ~ AMEN !*
Blessings to You & Yours
Yours B & A 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 27th, 2019 16:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thnaks for caring DA ! Our MANTRA is *Smile & the World smiles with You ~ Frown & You Frown alone ~ But if yo cance to cry for good reason ~ Someone in The World will rush to your side and comfort you ~ AMEN !*
Blessings to You & Yours
Yours B & A 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 27th, 2019 16:58
if time would
Fay Slimm. said:
So true and well written - a smile within lights up the soul - - a lovely read and thank you D.A.
August 27th, 2019 13:26
Fay Slimm. said:
So true and well written - a smile within lights up the soul - - a lovely read and thank you D.A.
August 27th, 2019 13:26
if time would
Christina8 said:
A very positive write for today, da. I like it!
August 27th, 2019 11:52
Christina8 said:
A very positive write for today, da. I like it!
August 27th, 2019 11:52
if time would
orchidee said:
A fine write DA. Aww, why people give ME a pound every time, on condition that I don\'t sing?! I\'m a billionaire cos of it, ya know! lol.
August 27th, 2019 01:51
orchidee said:
A fine write DA. Aww, why people give ME a pound every time, on condition that I don\'t sing?! I\'m a billionaire cos of it, ya know! lol.
August 27th, 2019 01:51
gain
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
Yes, ‘patience’...
the key to a happier and healthier outlook on life...a definite “gain”!
A wonderful write to remind us of the importance of ‘patience’!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 10:17
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
Yes, ‘patience’...
the key to a happier and healthier outlook on life...a definite “gain”!
A wonderful write to remind us of the importance of ‘patience’!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 10:17
big old moon (paranoia)
Suresh said:
That\'s what moonshine whiskey does, it spills all the beans - HUH!!!! - better not to disclose my inner secrets.
It would be nice to get into the writers head, to feel what encourages them to write such alluring songs.
August 24th, 2019 09:55
Suresh said:
That\'s what moonshine whiskey does, it spills all the beans - HUH!!!! - better not to disclose my inner secrets.
It would be nice to get into the writers head, to feel what encourages them to write such alluring songs.
August 24th, 2019 09:55
big old moon (paranoia)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS DA ! Very instructive ! The MOON operates between dusk & dawn and sees everything so it knows who*s been playing loose who*s faithful ! It has its time cut out with Angela & I ~ 24/7 ! We are not only 11,500 miles apart but also 11 hours ! So when its NIGHT for ANGELA its DAY for ME and vice-versa. So far the MOON has not reported any shenanakins despite a year apart !
Love your Poem / Song ! Every SONG normally starts with a POETIC LYRIC ~ except YESTERDAY which started for Paul Mc with a tune ! A lyric has to SCAN and normally has some form of Rhyme Pattern ! Many *POEMS* on MPS lack both and fall (down) into the genre of *MODERN POETRY* ! Love the structure & subject. Vs 1 2 3 iform us how the MOON informs on observed infidelity and this is amplified in Choruses 1 & 2. Great SONG & great POETRY !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💙💙🧡💙🧡💙💙💙
August 24th, 2019 04:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS DA ! Very instructive ! The MOON operates between dusk & dawn and sees everything so it knows who*s been playing loose who*s faithful ! It has its time cut out with Angela & I ~ 24/7 ! We are not only 11,500 miles apart but also 11 hours ! So when its NIGHT for ANGELA its DAY for ME and vice-versa. So far the MOON has not reported any shenanakins despite a year apart !
Love your Poem / Song ! Every SONG normally starts with a POETIC LYRIC ~ except YESTERDAY which started for Paul Mc with a tune ! A lyric has to SCAN and normally has some form of Rhyme Pattern ! Many *POEMS* on MPS lack both and fall (down) into the genre of *MODERN POETRY* ! Love the structure & subject. Vs 1 2 3 iform us how the MOON informs on observed infidelity and this is amplified in Choruses 1 & 2. Great SONG & great POETRY !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💙💙🧡💙🧡💙💙💙
August 24th, 2019 04:07
big old moon (paranoia)
Goldfinch60 said:
Great read d a. Would be good to hear it.
August 24th, 2019 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Great read d a. Would be good to hear it.
August 24th, 2019 00:30
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