Comments received on poems by dusk arising
confidence
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write DA
February is such a depressing month it would eat away anyone\'s perfumed confidence
September 8th, 2019 13:58
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great write DA
February is such a depressing month it would eat away anyone\'s perfumed confidence
September 8th, 2019 13:58
confidence
Alta H Mabin said:
Damn, this is deeply emotive. Absolutely loved it.
September 8th, 2019 13:56
Alta H Mabin said:
Damn, this is deeply emotive. Absolutely loved it.
September 8th, 2019 13:56
confidence
Clara said:
Oh, truthfully I had to read this a few times. Really let it soak in. This is actually rather deep I think... I haven\'t fully grasped its full implications but I\'m definitely pondering. Particularly purfumed confidence, wishful misdemeanor and blood stained truth seeking solace... Oh its actually too deep. I\'m going to return to this one. I think my lazy Sunday mind is inhibiting my brain a little!
Excellent though. Thank you.
CLARA X
September 8th, 2019 07:04
Clara said:
Oh, truthfully I had to read this a few times. Really let it soak in. This is actually rather deep I think... I haven\'t fully grasped its full implications but I\'m definitely pondering. Particularly purfumed confidence, wishful misdemeanor and blood stained truth seeking solace... Oh its actually too deep. I\'m going to return to this one. I think my lazy Sunday mind is inhibiting my brain a little!
Excellent though. Thank you.
CLARA X
September 8th, 2019 07:04
confidence
Neville said:
amazingly poetic and deeper than might first be imagined I Imagine.... a real little gem sir... N
September 8th, 2019 06:09
Neville said:
amazingly poetic and deeper than might first be imagined I Imagine.... a real little gem sir... N
September 8th, 2019 06:09
smouldered
Suresh said:
touching, a few words crafted a scene of great depth
September 7th, 2019 13:22
Suresh said:
touching, a few words crafted a scene of great depth
September 7th, 2019 13:22
smouldered
Michael Edwards said:
I can read so much into this - super write dusk.
September 7th, 2019 04:39
Michael Edwards said:
I can read so much into this - super write dusk.
September 7th, 2019 04:39
smouldered
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
How sad out dogs miss us as much as our loved ones and probably more
True DA true
September 7th, 2019 03:39
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
How sad out dogs miss us as much as our loved ones and probably more
True DA true
September 7th, 2019 03:39
smouldered
Clara said:
Oh this leaves me wanting more! In a few lines, you\'ve hinted at such a story. The depth and feeling that\'s in those lines.... Tell us more please!
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 02:42
Clara said:
Oh this leaves me wanting more! In a few lines, you\'ve hinted at such a story. The depth and feeling that\'s in those lines.... Tell us more please!
CLARA X
September 7th, 2019 02:42
smouldered
Neville said:
this is really both beautiful and sad.. if it were a fine wine it would have great depth and some very intriguing undertones... N
September 7th, 2019 01:39
Neville said:
this is really both beautiful and sad.. if it were a fine wine it would have great depth and some very intriguing undertones... N
September 7th, 2019 01:39
conjeal
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
... and does it matter now anyway
fab 7 lines of intrigue my friend
BRAVO!
September 6th, 2019 07:16
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
... and does it matter now anyway
fab 7 lines of intrigue my friend
BRAVO!
September 6th, 2019 07:16
conjeal
Neville said:
this is bril and I am not talking fish.. brevity at its poetic finest.. so much said and so many ways to interpret... now said enough...... Neville
September 6th, 2019 02:53
Neville said:
this is bril and I am not talking fish.. brevity at its poetic finest.. so much said and so many ways to interpret... now said enough...... Neville
September 6th, 2019 02:53
conjeal
Fay Slimm. said:
A most beguiling read D. that leaves me wanting a sequel. A deep and meaningful feel to between these few lines - - -
September 6th, 2019 02:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A most beguiling read D. that leaves me wanting a sequel. A deep and meaningful feel to between these few lines - - -
September 6th, 2019 02:47
conjeal
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing write, had to read it several times in different ways. Good thought provoking write d a.
September 6th, 2019 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing write, had to read it several times in different ways. Good thought provoking write d a.
September 6th, 2019 01:53
conjeal
orchidee said:
I thought this may be about someone cutting themselves having a sharp pair of scissors, while cutting off bacon rind or something!
I suspect it\'s deeper - theme makes me shudder!
September 6th, 2019 01:49
orchidee said:
I thought this may be about someone cutting themselves having a sharp pair of scissors, while cutting off bacon rind or something!
I suspect it\'s deeper - theme makes me shudder!
September 6th, 2019 01:49
what do you do?
Neville said:
this is indeed a heartfelt song of a poem...
sometimes when things aint what they should be, we are moved to take some kind of action, whether it be in the form of a poem or the outbreak of war... at other times, it may be best to do nothing... whatever the case, these things are often remembered much later on in the day.....
I wonder what triggered today\'s post....
Neville
September 5th, 2019 02:25
Neville said:
this is indeed a heartfelt song of a poem...
sometimes when things aint what they should be, we are moved to take some kind of action, whether it be in the form of a poem or the outbreak of war... at other times, it may be best to do nothing... whatever the case, these things are often remembered much later on in the day.....
I wonder what triggered today\'s post....
Neville
September 5th, 2019 02:25
what do you do?
Suresh said:
OHHHHH! The emotional web in which we trap ourselves - all are victims of such tragedy
September 4th, 2019 10:07
Suresh said:
OHHHHH! The emotional web in which we trap ourselves - all are victims of such tragedy
September 4th, 2019 10:07
white rabbits
Neville said:
a delightful and timely post.. and oh chocka full of truths.... n
September 4th, 2019 01:40
Neville said:
a delightful and timely post.. and oh chocka full of truths.... n
September 4th, 2019 01:40
unlikely bunch
Neville said:
each a hero and now so well writ into history... ..
September 2nd, 2019 12:28
Neville said:
each a hero and now so well writ into history... ..
September 2nd, 2019 12:28
what do you do?
Clara said:
It is so hard to love someone who loves another.... Even more so if that person is being mistreated.
Huge sense of yearning. Great read.
CLARA X
September 2nd, 2019 10:21
Clara said:
It is so hard to love someone who loves another.... Even more so if that person is being mistreated.
Huge sense of yearning. Great read.
CLARA X
September 2nd, 2019 10:21
what do you do?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here ~ Thanks for caring & sharing DA. In my 20 years experience (1999 - 2019) of being IN (and OUT) of LOVE ~ This is the most unkindest cut of all ! Someone YOU love being mistreated by someone SHE loves. Paradoxically (apropos your Two Way Street) I saw one such GIRL (Christine ~ arm in a sling & and a black eye) coming down an ESCALATOR as I was going up. She seemed in a daze. When I reached the top I rushed down again but CHRISTINE had gone ~ and I wept. Next time I saw her she was OK and said she had an accident @ work. She was still with DRACULA ! I moved away and we never met again. But I often wonder what would have happenned if we had both been GOING DOWN ? Great Poem in both Form & Function !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
September 2nd, 2019 04:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here ~ Thanks for caring & sharing DA. In my 20 years experience (1999 - 2019) of being IN (and OUT) of LOVE ~ This is the most unkindest cut of all ! Someone YOU love being mistreated by someone SHE loves. Paradoxically (apropos your Two Way Street) I saw one such GIRL (Christine ~ arm in a sling & and a black eye) coming down an ESCALATOR as I was going up. She seemed in a daze. When I reached the top I rushed down again but CHRISTINE had gone ~ and I wept. Next time I saw her she was OK and said she had an accident @ work. She was still with DRACULA ! I moved away and we never met again. But I often wonder what would have happenned if we had both been GOING DOWN ? Great Poem in both Form & Function !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
September 2nd, 2019 04:07
what do you do?
Fay Slimm. said:
Its hard to move on when your heart wants to stay.......... a tear-wrenching read D.A,
September 2nd, 2019 02:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Its hard to move on when your heart wants to stay.......... a tear-wrenching read D.A,
September 2nd, 2019 02:39
what do you do?
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
I got a verse. It starts: \'What do you do when I start to sing?\' Go mad! heehee.
September 2nd, 2019 01:47
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
I got a verse. It starts: \'What do you do when I start to sing?\' Go mad! heehee.
September 2nd, 2019 01:47
what do you do?
Goldfinch60 said:
What do you do when the words of the song,
Bring tears to my eyes as I sing along,
Those tears filled with love,
And words from above,
Move forward in life,
Where there is no strife.
September 2nd, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
What do you do when the words of the song,
Bring tears to my eyes as I sing along,
Those tears filled with love,
And words from above,
Move forward in life,
Where there is no strife.
September 2nd, 2019 01:42
white rabbits
Goldfinch60 said:
September, the beginning of autumn, my favourite time of the year where nature\'s palette covers her world with glorious colours.
September 2nd, 2019 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
September, the beginning of autumn, my favourite time of the year where nature\'s palette covers her world with glorious colours.
September 2nd, 2019 01:31
white rabbits
Suresh said:
Maybe we can say that on a certain day of the week, or why not every day of our lives - nothing to lose, but surely every thing to gain
It\'s all in our attitude
September 1st, 2019 11:40
Suresh said:
Maybe we can say that on a certain day of the week, or why not every day of our lives - nothing to lose, but surely every thing to gain
It\'s all in our attitude
September 1st, 2019 11:40
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