Comments received on poems by dusk arising
evening descends
Neville said:
I know precisely where you are coming from DA.... I like this, as it is.... near perfect...
Neville
September 17th, 2019 07:51
Neville said:
I know precisely where you are coming from DA.... I like this, as it is.... near perfect...
Neville
September 17th, 2019 07:51
evening descends
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - this soothes as it is read - and full of gentle acceptance that birdsong needs our attention when \"evenings descends\" - one of my favourites is this sweet tribute.
September 17th, 2019 02:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - - this soothes as it is read - and full of gentle acceptance that birdsong needs our attention when \"evenings descends\" - one of my favourites is this sweet tribute.
September 17th, 2019 02:24
the milk bar
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, of course he would recognise her.
September 17th, 2019 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, of course he would recognise her.
September 17th, 2019 00:29
the milk bar
Neville said:
Brilliant sir.. and make mine a double in a dirty glass if you would be so kind...... N
September 16th, 2019 05:12
Neville said:
Brilliant sir.. and make mine a double in a dirty glass if you would be so kind...... N
September 16th, 2019 05:12
swollen breakers
Suresh said:
My immediate thoughts went after the mystery that you laid out so romantically...
The shot was obviously meant for her, because of the proximity...
but why and by whom - a jilted lover or husband, for it couldn\'t be the one she was with, unless that was a ruse...
September 15th, 2019 14:49
Suresh said:
My immediate thoughts went after the mystery that you laid out so romantically...
The shot was obviously meant for her, because of the proximity...
but why and by whom - a jilted lover or husband, for it couldn\'t be the one she was with, unless that was a ruse...
September 15th, 2019 14:49
swollen breakers
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
You watching them late night films again DA?
Great tension
So many questions
BRAVO!
September 13th, 2019 04:27
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
You watching them late night films again DA?
Great tension
So many questions
BRAVO!
September 13th, 2019 04:27
swollen breakers
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - a story in five little stanzas and leaving me wanting more. Great stuff D.
September 13th, 2019 04:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - a story in five little stanzas and leaving me wanting more. Great stuff D.
September 13th, 2019 04:11
swollen breakers
Neville said:
Hard to beat a bullet
Harder still to better these fine words... Damn good DA
Neville
September 13th, 2019 01:02
Neville said:
Hard to beat a bullet
Harder still to better these fine words... Damn good DA
Neville
September 13th, 2019 01:02
big old moon (love)
Suresh said:
What memories could have inspired to recall these words,
September 12th, 2019 10:26
Suresh said:
What memories could have inspired to recall these words,
September 12th, 2019 10:26
big old moon (love)
Bragee said:
simple and extremely satisfying love poem!
Great writing.
September 12th, 2019 09:28
Bragee said:
simple and extremely satisfying love poem!
Great writing.
September 12th, 2019 09:28
big old moon (love)
Fay Slimm. said:
True love never fades with time passing by D. - loved the rhyming and tender assurance in these few lines.
September 12th, 2019 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
True love never fades with time passing by D. - loved the rhyming and tender assurance in these few lines.
September 12th, 2019 04:24
big old moon (love)
Neville said:
Quite beautiful & without doubt, timeless...
Neville
September 12th, 2019 04:06
Neville said:
Quite beautiful & without doubt, timeless...
Neville
September 12th, 2019 04:06
opposites
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes opposites do attract, I have some friends who are like that, you just wouldn\'t believe that they should be together in the way that they behave until you see the love for each other in their eyes.
September 12th, 2019 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes opposites do attract, I have some friends who are like that, you just wouldn\'t believe that they should be together in the way that they behave until you see the love for each other in their eyes.
September 12th, 2019 00:56
opposites
Christina8 said:
I love this DA! Ha ha! thanks for sharing this fabulous poem today
September 11th, 2019 14:03
Christina8 said:
I love this DA! Ha ha! thanks for sharing this fabulous poem today
September 11th, 2019 14:03
opposites
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING DA ~ Opposites attracting ? It really made us think ! Angela (now asleep in bed !) and I have much in common ~ but also much that separates us ! My background is N English hers is Spanish ~ she is a Wine Bottle ~ Im a Beer Can ~ she is a Classical Pianist ~ Im a Guitarist mainly Folk & Country ! She loves Spicey Food I prefer Bland - She loves Summer & Winter I prefer Autumn & Spring. She is an Anatomist and an Expert on the external Physical Human Body (also a Maseusse !) ~ I am a Biochemist and an expert on the Internal Workings of the Human Body ~ we are both Nutritionists. But we are REALLY in LOVE and perhaps thats all that matters !
I love the obvious diferences of your Couple ~ but their mutual affection (and fruitfulness) is obvious despite them. A story about Toilet Seats ! Angela were invited to a Wedding and on the present list was a £30 mahogany Toilet Seat which we thought would be a *fun* present so we bought and it was delivered. A few months after the Wedding we received a circular *Thank You Letter* *Thank you for you lovely present ~ we shall think of you whenever we use it !* Loved the structure & subject of the POEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
September 11th, 2019 08:57
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING DA ~ Opposites attracting ? It really made us think ! Angela (now asleep in bed !) and I have much in common ~ but also much that separates us ! My background is N English hers is Spanish ~ she is a Wine Bottle ~ Im a Beer Can ~ she is a Classical Pianist ~ Im a Guitarist mainly Folk & Country ! She loves Spicey Food I prefer Bland - She loves Summer & Winter I prefer Autumn & Spring. She is an Anatomist and an Expert on the external Physical Human Body (also a Maseusse !) ~ I am a Biochemist and an expert on the Internal Workings of the Human Body ~ we are both Nutritionists. But we are REALLY in LOVE and perhaps thats all that matters !
I love the obvious diferences of your Couple ~ but their mutual affection (and fruitfulness) is obvious despite them. A story about Toilet Seats ! Angela were invited to a Wedding and on the present list was a £30 mahogany Toilet Seat which we thought would be a *fun* present so we bought and it was delivered. A few months after the Wedding we received a circular *Thank You Letter* *Thank you for you lovely present ~ we shall think of you whenever we use it !* Loved the structure & subject of the POEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
September 11th, 2019 08:57
opposites
Neville said:
stupendous sir.... funny and true.. I like it no matter how I look at it.... N
September 11th, 2019 08:14
Neville said:
stupendous sir.... funny and true.. I like it no matter how I look at it.... N
September 11th, 2019 08:14
opposites
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
LOL DA
I would have put money on the fact that line 16 did not exist in any poem
Wrong again Andrew
Brilliant crescendo DA
BRAVO much enjoyed
September 11th, 2019 07:10
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
LOL DA
I would have put money on the fact that line 16 did not exist in any poem
Wrong again Andrew
Brilliant crescendo DA
BRAVO much enjoyed
September 11th, 2019 07:10
opposites
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - - your pen never ceases to amaze with its unique looks at life D.A. - - yes opposites do attract and charmingly change but some of those years later tasks gave me the giggles especially the thought of her now \"repairing firearms\" --- love your sense of humour my friend
September 11th, 2019 05:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - - your pen never ceases to amaze with its unique looks at life D.A. - - yes opposites do attract and charmingly change but some of those years later tasks gave me the giggles especially the thought of her now \"repairing firearms\" --- love your sense of humour my friend
September 11th, 2019 05:39
last dance
Fay Slimm. said:
That last dance is always the saddest and this little write has all the hallmarks of personal loss........... a poignant read D.A.
September 10th, 2019 13:21
Fay Slimm. said:
That last dance is always the saddest and this little write has all the hallmarks of personal loss........... a poignant read D.A.
September 10th, 2019 13:21
last dance
Neville said:
make no mistake, and while it takes two to tango... tis a little cracker sir...
September 10th, 2019 11:38
Neville said:
make no mistake, and while it takes two to tango... tis a little cracker sir...
September 10th, 2019 11:38
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