Comments received on poems by dusk arising
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Poetic Dan said:
Soothing after at crazy night out, I truly felt this so many times but understand that everything last as long as it needs to. Like your saxophone player was there long enough to do this with you.
Much peace and respect for all the talent involved in this amazing piece of art from the heart
September 2nd, 2017 16:54
Poetic Dan said:
Soothing after at crazy night out, I truly felt this so many times but understand that everything last as long as it needs to. Like your saxophone player was there long enough to do this with you.
Much peace and respect for all the talent involved in this amazing piece of art from the heart
September 2nd, 2017 16:54
thoughts on time
alienkid said:
This was really good! Loved the bit about time controlling us and going backwards in space. Thank you for posting such a beautiful poem :)
September 2nd, 2017 11:07
alienkid said:
This was really good! Loved the bit about time controlling us and going backwards in space. Thank you for posting such a beautiful poem :)
September 2nd, 2017 11:07
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Diane said:
Took me somewhere magical for just a short while. Thank you :-)
September 2nd, 2017 08:46
Diane said:
Took me somewhere magical for just a short while. Thank you :-)
September 2nd, 2017 08:46
thoughts on time
Poetic Dan said:
Keep writing like this my friend and we will. Sadly this is all in our own hand, just have to stay strong And stick with the plan to create peace in man.
September 2nd, 2017 07:29
Poetic Dan said:
Keep writing like this my friend and we will. Sadly this is all in our own hand, just have to stay strong And stick with the plan to create peace in man.
September 2nd, 2017 07:29
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Goldfinch60 said:
Just read and listened to this after what we were discussing this morning.
Great write, great song and great solo, you must get back into it and wipe the dust off of your saxophone.
September 2nd, 2017 04:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Just read and listened to this after what we were discussing this morning.
Great write, great song and great solo, you must get back into it and wipe the dust off of your saxophone.
September 2nd, 2017 04:13
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Michael Edwards said:
For me too - I was mesmerised by it as I sat here listening - great words, great sax, great voice.
September 2nd, 2017 00:13
Michael Edwards said:
For me too - I was mesmerised by it as I sat here listening - great words, great sax, great voice.
September 2nd, 2017 00:13
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FredPeyer said:
Great song, great writing! Like the last two lines!
September 1st, 2017 22:35
FredPeyer said:
Great song, great writing! Like the last two lines!
September 1st, 2017 22:35
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myself and me said:
Beautiful picture
Beautiful music
Beautiful poem
Such a beautiful feast for eyes, ears and heart.
This will last.
Thank you.
September 1st, 2017 19:32
myself and me said:
Beautiful picture
Beautiful music
Beautiful poem
Such a beautiful feast for eyes, ears and heart.
This will last.
Thank you.
September 1st, 2017 19:32
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Heather T said:
An entrancing stunner, my goodness. Going into my faves for sure.
September 1st, 2017 10:22
Heather T said:
An entrancing stunner, my goodness. Going into my faves for sure.
September 1st, 2017 10:22
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malubotelho said:
I like short poems and this one is so awesome. Devil may never catch me. I\'m too busy and when I\'m not busy I\'m running.
September 1st, 2017 03:58
malubotelho said:
I like short poems and this one is so awesome. Devil may never catch me. I\'m too busy and when I\'m not busy I\'m running.
September 1st, 2017 03:58
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myself and me said:
The devil must be blind. :)
Lucky you.
Love this one.
August 31st, 2017 14:20
myself and me said:
The devil must be blind. :)
Lucky you.
Love this one.
August 31st, 2017 14:20
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Christina8 said:
Very good short poem! Love the last line. Have a great day!
August 31st, 2017 12:35
Christina8 said:
Very good short poem! Love the last line. Have a great day!
August 31st, 2017 12:35
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Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I could have idle hands now I am retired but still seem to be extremely busy.
August 31st, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I could have idle hands now I am retired but still seem to be extremely busy.
August 31st, 2017 08:01
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Frank Prem said:
Yep, that\'s the way it is, DA. You and me both. Oh well! Don\'t work too hard.
August 31st, 2017 03:22
Frank Prem said:
Yep, that\'s the way it is, DA. You and me both. Oh well! Don\'t work too hard.
August 31st, 2017 03:22
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malubotelho said:
This is one of the most beautiful poem I ever read. So soft, serene. It is quenching my thrirsty of poesy and fantasy. Delightfully beautiful.
August 28th, 2017 16:08
malubotelho said:
This is one of the most beautiful poem I ever read. So soft, serene. It is quenching my thrirsty of poesy and fantasy. Delightfully beautiful.
August 28th, 2017 16:08
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myself and me said:
\"my songbird of the woodgreen wild
sings sweetly by the day
as she calls her love from the forest green
where silently i lay \"
So peaceful. Got caught in your poem cant not extricate myself.
August 28th, 2017 15:08
myself and me said:
\"my songbird of the woodgreen wild
sings sweetly by the day
as she calls her love from the forest green
where silently i lay \"
So peaceful. Got caught in your poem cant not extricate myself.
August 28th, 2017 15:08
happened
myself and me said:
It will be a wonderful card for a deserved friend.
August 27th, 2017 17:38
myself and me said:
It will be a wonderful card for a deserved friend.
August 27th, 2017 17:38
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malubotelho said:
Lovely words Dusk. I would have loved to receive such a gift. Just beautiful.
August 27th, 2017 08:37
malubotelho said:
Lovely words Dusk. I would have loved to receive such a gift. Just beautiful.
August 27th, 2017 08:37
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Michael Edwards said:
What lovely words - ideal for a card as intended.
August 27th, 2017 08:15
Michael Edwards said:
What lovely words - ideal for a card as intended.
August 27th, 2017 08:15
thoughts on time
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, time is there for us all to enjoy.
August 27th, 2017 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, time is there for us all to enjoy.
August 27th, 2017 01:59
thoughts on time
Christina8 said:
I absolutely love this poem. Beautiful rhymes! I wonder too if we will ever see a time of peace to all men. Great job!
August 26th, 2017 18:35
Christina8 said:
I absolutely love this poem. Beautiful rhymes! I wonder too if we will ever see a time of peace to all men. Great job!
August 26th, 2017 18:35
thoughts on time
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, great rhyming, and I especially like the ending.
August 26th, 2017 14:45
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, great rhyming, and I especially like the ending.
August 26th, 2017 14:45
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