Comments received on poems by dusk arising
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Accidental Poet said:
I too was reminded of a long time love. Beautiful dusk.
September 3rd, 2017 11:45
Accidental Poet said:
I too was reminded of a long time love. Beautiful dusk.
September 3rd, 2017 11:45
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myself and me said:
Reading this makes me feel so relax and a bit sleepy.
So peaceful. Have a wonderful dream.
September 3rd, 2017 11:42
myself and me said:
Reading this makes me feel so relax and a bit sleepy.
So peaceful. Have a wonderful dream.
September 3rd, 2017 11:42
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Michael Edwards said:
What a lovely piece of imagery = well done dusk
September 3rd, 2017 10:30
Michael Edwards said:
What a lovely piece of imagery = well done dusk
September 3rd, 2017 10:30
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BlueDays said:
Wow, i want to dive right into the page. Sumptuous poetry and the imagery it conjures is a masterpiece in its own right. I can see me reading this before bed to my children. Thank you.
Also, do you paint the pictures that go with your poems?
September 3rd, 2017 09:10
BlueDays said:
Wow, i want to dive right into the page. Sumptuous poetry and the imagery it conjures is a masterpiece in its own right. I can see me reading this before bed to my children. Thank you.
Also, do you paint the pictures that go with your poems?
September 3rd, 2017 09:10
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Mugsdaddy said:
Contrast of beauty Vs. A dark view of life based in fact. Excellent job very moving.
M
September 3rd, 2017 09:01
Mugsdaddy said:
Contrast of beauty Vs. A dark view of life based in fact. Excellent job very moving.
M
September 3rd, 2017 09:01
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BlueDays said:
This moved me. A heart warming tribute to woman kind and a true love I hope you hold or soon find, beautifully written
September 3rd, 2017 08:58
BlueDays said:
This moved me. A heart warming tribute to woman kind and a true love I hope you hold or soon find, beautifully written
September 3rd, 2017 08:58
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Mugsdaddy said:
Liked this one, made me think of a past love. Beautifully written
September 3rd, 2017 08:57
Mugsdaddy said:
Liked this one, made me think of a past love. Beautifully written
September 3rd, 2017 08:57
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BlueDays said:
This was a really pleasant read, it made me feel happy and calm. I related it to my children and niece with their soft baby features. I imagined them being visited by a beautiful sleep angel who combed their hair and sent them off to an amazing dreamland thus giving me peace and the ability to drift off myself. Beautiful.
September 3rd, 2017 08:52
BlueDays said:
This was a really pleasant read, it made me feel happy and calm. I related it to my children and niece with their soft baby features. I imagined them being visited by a beautiful sleep angel who combed their hair and sent them off to an amazing dreamland thus giving me peace and the ability to drift off myself. Beautiful.
September 3rd, 2017 08:52
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Noah said:
I enjoyed the diction and syntax in this. As well as the rhyming. Lovely write.
September 3rd, 2017 01:06
Noah said:
I enjoyed the diction and syntax in this. As well as the rhyming. Lovely write.
September 3rd, 2017 01:06
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malubotelho said:
I love ❤️ this DA. Your poem is so beautiful and the music just stunning. Love you playing your sax. Awesome. More please.
September 2nd, 2017 16:56
malubotelho said:
I love ❤️ this DA. Your poem is so beautiful and the music just stunning. Love you playing your sax. Awesome. More please.
September 2nd, 2017 16:56
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Poetic Dan said:
Soothing after at crazy night out, I truly felt this so many times but understand that everything last as long as it needs to. Like your saxophone player was there long enough to do this with you.
Much peace and respect for all the talent involved in this amazing piece of art from the heart
September 2nd, 2017 16:54
Poetic Dan said:
Soothing after at crazy night out, I truly felt this so many times but understand that everything last as long as it needs to. Like your saxophone player was there long enough to do this with you.
Much peace and respect for all the talent involved in this amazing piece of art from the heart
September 2nd, 2017 16:54
thoughts on time
alienkid said:
This was really good! Loved the bit about time controlling us and going backwards in space. Thank you for posting such a beautiful poem :)
September 2nd, 2017 11:07
alienkid said:
This was really good! Loved the bit about time controlling us and going backwards in space. Thank you for posting such a beautiful poem :)
September 2nd, 2017 11:07
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Diane said:
Took me somewhere magical for just a short while. Thank you :-)
September 2nd, 2017 08:46
Diane said:
Took me somewhere magical for just a short while. Thank you :-)
September 2nd, 2017 08:46
thoughts on time
Poetic Dan said:
Keep writing like this my friend and we will. Sadly this is all in our own hand, just have to stay strong And stick with the plan to create peace in man.
September 2nd, 2017 07:29
Poetic Dan said:
Keep writing like this my friend and we will. Sadly this is all in our own hand, just have to stay strong And stick with the plan to create peace in man.
September 2nd, 2017 07:29
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Goldfinch60 said:
Just read and listened to this after what we were discussing this morning.
Great write, great song and great solo, you must get back into it and wipe the dust off of your saxophone.
September 2nd, 2017 04:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Just read and listened to this after what we were discussing this morning.
Great write, great song and great solo, you must get back into it and wipe the dust off of your saxophone.
September 2nd, 2017 04:13
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Michael Edwards said:
For me too - I was mesmerised by it as I sat here listening - great words, great sax, great voice.
September 2nd, 2017 00:13
Michael Edwards said:
For me too - I was mesmerised by it as I sat here listening - great words, great sax, great voice.
September 2nd, 2017 00:13
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FredPeyer said:
Great song, great writing! Like the last two lines!
September 1st, 2017 22:35
FredPeyer said:
Great song, great writing! Like the last two lines!
September 1st, 2017 22:35
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myself and me said:
Beautiful picture
Beautiful music
Beautiful poem
Such a beautiful feast for eyes, ears and heart.
This will last.
Thank you.
September 1st, 2017 19:32
myself and me said:
Beautiful picture
Beautiful music
Beautiful poem
Such a beautiful feast for eyes, ears and heart.
This will last.
Thank you.
September 1st, 2017 19:32
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Heather T said:
An entrancing stunner, my goodness. Going into my faves for sure.
September 1st, 2017 10:22
Heather T said:
An entrancing stunner, my goodness. Going into my faves for sure.
September 1st, 2017 10:22
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malubotelho said:
I like short poems and this one is so awesome. Devil may never catch me. I\'m too busy and when I\'m not busy I\'m running.
September 1st, 2017 03:58
malubotelho said:
I like short poems and this one is so awesome. Devil may never catch me. I\'m too busy and when I\'m not busy I\'m running.
September 1st, 2017 03:58
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Accidental Poet said:
They\'re not idle hands, they\'re the tools of an artist ; )
August 31st, 2017 19:45
Accidental Poet said:
They\'re not idle hands, they\'re the tools of an artist ; )
August 31st, 2017 19:45
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myself and me said:
The devil must be blind. :)
Lucky you.
Love this one.
August 31st, 2017 14:20
myself and me said:
The devil must be blind. :)
Lucky you.
Love this one.
August 31st, 2017 14:20
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Christina8 said:
Very good short poem! Love the last line. Have a great day!
August 31st, 2017 12:35
Christina8 said:
Very good short poem! Love the last line. Have a great day!
August 31st, 2017 12:35
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Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I could have idle hands now I am retired but still seem to be extremely busy.
August 31st, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I could have idle hands now I am retired but still seem to be extremely busy.
August 31st, 2017 08:01
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Frank Prem said:
Yep, that\'s the way it is, DA. You and me both. Oh well! Don\'t work too hard.
August 31st, 2017 03:22
Frank Prem said:
Yep, that\'s the way it is, DA. You and me both. Oh well! Don\'t work too hard.
August 31st, 2017 03:22
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