Comments received on poems by dusk arising



pictures
arazimus said:

Great poem, great meaning , I can feel this, thank you

September 16th, 2017 13:07

thoughts on time
arazimus said:

Time to show the bleeding heart of a poet,
Great line. time will tell , our lives revealed,I fear like u the world has more time than love, maybe with enough time the bleeding hearts can change the world but time WILL tell. Until then keep writing poet , great read my frnd

September 16th, 2017 12:50

tower
Fay Slimm. said:

A mighty find Saturday tale with a twist methinks in that minstrel\'s cadence. Magical read.

September 16th, 2017 11:10

tower
FredPeyer said:

This poem is awesome, and so is the picture!

September 16th, 2017 05:11

tower
orchidee said:

What\'s going on in that tower there?! heehee.

September 16th, 2017 02:21

tower
Michael Edwards said:

I am sure he will be smelling of roses - just hope he took the fungal spray with him - my roses are covered in black spot at the moment :) :) Great write dusk

September 16th, 2017 01:12

tower
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, may the knight come up smelling of roses.

September 16th, 2017 01:06

Kat and Santita all at sea
Seek said:

This is masterful writing and sumptuous humor.

September 16th, 2017 00:16

stumble
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a terrific write DA.

September 11th, 2017 01:22

stumble
Michael Edwards said:

Some tale well writ Dusk

September 11th, 2017 01:21

stumble
Mugsdaddy said:

See you on the other side brother. That particular gate will not stop you from greatness.
M

September 10th, 2017 20:35

pulsing fluff
maggie said:

Enchanting I loved this.

September 10th, 2017 12:34

What Kat found in the wreckage.
ruby.e said:

Somehow you make poems beautiful and humorous, it\'s great!

September 10th, 2017 10:53

renzi
Viv Wade said:

A lovely tribute to your friend, and so happy to read all the comments below and see that she has re-appeared! I hope Renzi knows how lucky she is to have so many people who care about her!

September 10th, 2017 07:48

What Kat found in the wreckage.
Goldfinch60 said:

Great fun write, the smile on my face is expanding.

September 9th, 2017 11:11

What Kat found in the wreckage.
Michael Edwards said:

A real twisted bit of thunk - great stuff dusk.

September 9th, 2017 00:09

What Kat found in the wreckage.
myself and me said:

Hahaha. This is much better than the original movie, especially the end.
Brilliant.

September 8th, 2017 21:39

What Kat found in the wreckage.
Mugsdaddy said:

What a beautifully twisted mess your mind must be. That was exquisitely funny.

September 8th, 2017 21:19

What Kat found in the wreckage.
Simple-Man87 said:

Whoa....Whoa. You\'re absolutely amazing with these. Your ability to put us there, regardless in humor or not, is other worldly. The poems we have the most fun with, tend to be the best. I loved this. Thank you.

September 8th, 2017 17:44

Kat and Santita all at sea
Simple-Man87 said:

Very well written. Enjoyed from the start. Gripping, compelling, hilarious. Thank you for sharing.

September 8th, 2017 14:02

Kat and Santita all at sea
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, can\'t wait for the next episode.

September 8th, 2017 01:34

Kat and Santita all at sea
Michael Edwards said:

Next episode please - great read and gave me a smile

September 8th, 2017 00:22

Kat and Santita all at sea
myself and me said:

Mission impossible 5- Guilty ice cubes.
Main character: Kat, San Tita-Nic
Director: Dusk Arising

September 7th, 2017 21:22

Kat and Santita all at sea
Frank Prem said:

Great fun in this. well done.

September 7th, 2017 21:05

Kat and Santita all at sea
FredPeyer said:

Humor of the first degree!!!!!!!!!!!!
d a, I salute you!

September 7th, 2017 20:01

Kat and Santita all at sea
Accidental Poet said:

When\'s the book due out? I want an autographed copy. ; )

September 7th, 2017 19:30

pulsing fluff
Samreen Chowdhury said:

Beautiful write!

September 7th, 2017 05:19

lustfully, greedily
Samreen Chowdhury said:

This is so moving😂! Great write

September 7th, 2017 05:17

lustfully, greedily
Viv Wade said:

Your sensuous words have made me blush,
They gave me a tremendous hot flush!
Sexiness turned up to full throttle...
Forget the glass - pass me the bottle! :)

September 7th, 2017 04:56

lustfully, greedily
Wallace said:

A read to get the juices flowing.
A Casanova at work here.
Enjoyable read.

September 7th, 2017 00:51



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