Comments received on poems by dusk arising
he caught her
Lorna said:
Very real memories you put right here on the page! Lovely.
February 3rd, 2018 07:37
Lorna said:
Very real memories you put right here on the page! Lovely.
February 3rd, 2018 07:37
he caught her
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly crafted piece - a great read dusk and so true.
February 3rd, 2018 03:06
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly crafted piece - a great read dusk and so true.
February 3rd, 2018 03:06
Sometimes
Aislinn Wilson said:
This really speaks to a deep emotion. Well done.
January 29th, 2018 13:30
Aislinn Wilson said:
This really speaks to a deep emotion. Well done.
January 29th, 2018 13:30
Sometimes
FredPeyer said:
A well written poem about heartache, one-sided love, and how we deal with it, da! The last line is so true!
January 29th, 2018 12:51
FredPeyer said:
A well written poem about heartache, one-sided love, and how we deal with it, da! The last line is so true!
January 29th, 2018 12:51
Discontent
FredPeyer said:
great poem, da, and so true! If you look at the sad state of affairs all around the world, it could be true just about anywhere.
January 29th, 2018 12:45
FredPeyer said:
great poem, da, and so true! If you look at the sad state of affairs all around the world, it could be true just about anywhere.
January 29th, 2018 12:45
Discontent
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write da, the politics in the UK is completely out of hand, we are lead by a crowd of lying b******s who just come into politice from University and would not a proper days work if it bit them on the a**e. They haven\'t got a clue what proper living is like.
January 29th, 2018 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write da, the politics in the UK is completely out of hand, we are lead by a crowd of lying b******s who just come into politice from University and would not a proper days work if it bit them on the a**e. They haven\'t got a clue what proper living is like.
January 29th, 2018 01:54
Discontent
Michael Edwards said:
I can see where this is pointing and didn\'t read God into it - but then I\'m not a believer anyway - it\'s a powerful address and flows so well. Just one point and I feel a tad mean mentioning it given the quality of the write - but I\'m not too sure about the last line.
January 28th, 2018 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
I can see where this is pointing and didn\'t read God into it - but then I\'m not a believer anyway - it\'s a powerful address and flows so well. Just one point and I feel a tad mean mentioning it given the quality of the write - but I\'m not too sure about the last line.
January 28th, 2018 10:42
Discontent
dusk arising said:
Thank you Hood. High praise from a respected songwriter/poet.
I think you need to be a Brit to see the point of this piece, i\'ll wait for further comments and maybe get a surprise or two.
January 28th, 2018 09:44
dusk arising said:
Thank you Hood. High praise from a respected songwriter/poet.
I think you need to be a Brit to see the point of this piece, i\'ll wait for further comments and maybe get a surprise or two.
January 28th, 2018 09:44
Discontent
dusk arising said:
Ha ha ha does god get re-elected? Puzzles me how you could read a God into being a target for these words.
January 28th, 2018 06:54
dusk arising said:
Ha ha ha does god get re-elected? Puzzles me how you could read a God into being a target for these words.
January 28th, 2018 06:54
right back at me
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write, it is good to see you back here again.
January 9th, 2018 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write, it is good to see you back here again.
January 9th, 2018 02:31
right back at me
Michael Edwards said:
Ah what a lovely tender write - thanks for posting it.
January 9th, 2018 01:30
Michael Edwards said:
Ah what a lovely tender write - thanks for posting it.
January 9th, 2018 01:30
right back at me
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful write! Such a pleasurable memory. Thanks for sharing! Got me in a nostalgic mood!
January 8th, 2018 22:04
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful write! Such a pleasurable memory. Thanks for sharing! Got me in a nostalgic mood!
January 8th, 2018 22:04
afraid
Christina8 said:
So well done dusk. You have expressed that words are more harmful than anything physical. So sad! Thanks for sharing this write!
November 20th, 2017 07:54
Christina8 said:
So well done dusk. You have expressed that words are more harmful than anything physical. So sad! Thanks for sharing this write!
November 20th, 2017 07:54
afraid
Michael Edwards said:
It took me with it all the way and such a sad ending - great work dusk.
November 20th, 2017 04:50
Michael Edwards said:
It took me with it all the way and such a sad ending - great work dusk.
November 20th, 2017 04:50
afraid
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, words can do so much more damage than physical violence.
November 20th, 2017 04:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, words can do so much more damage than physical violence.
November 20th, 2017 04:45
afraid
kevin browne said:
you have expressed what loves damages can do to a human soul. it\'s filled with everything and more than anyone can imagine. great work.
November 20th, 2017 04:16
kevin browne said:
you have expressed what loves damages can do to a human soul. it\'s filled with everything and more than anyone can imagine. great work.
November 20th, 2017 04:16
hum-drum
Noah said:
I get a comfortable feeling from this. I also love the title lol
November 11th, 2017 18:57
Noah said:
I get a comfortable feeling from this. I also love the title lol
November 11th, 2017 18:57
hum-drum
FredPeyer said:
A fine description of an average day, da! There is so much feeling and emotion in these few simple words. Love it!
November 10th, 2017 12:34
FredPeyer said:
A fine description of an average day, da! There is so much feeling and emotion in these few simple words. Love it!
November 10th, 2017 12:34
The artist
Seek said:
Your mind painted a picture that can only be captured by the soul\'s camera. Fantastic write!
November 9th, 2017 00:31
Seek said:
Your mind painted a picture that can only be captured by the soul\'s camera. Fantastic write!
November 9th, 2017 00:31
The artist
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write and so very true, art and poetry (and music) can put so much on our mind\'s canvas.
October 20th, 2017 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write and so very true, art and poetry (and music) can put so much on our mind\'s canvas.
October 20th, 2017 02:53
somehow something
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, sometimes that glue that holds you together just stays so strong.
October 18th, 2017 07:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, sometimes that glue that holds you together just stays so strong.
October 18th, 2017 07:56
somehow something
Laura🌻 said:
Great write! Relationships may waver or wander. If we’re fortunate to have a relationship with a significant other, the glue is necessary. The older we get, the stronger the glue!
October 18th, 2017 07:02
Laura🌻 said:
Great write! Relationships may waver or wander. If we’re fortunate to have a relationship with a significant other, the glue is necessary. The older we get, the stronger the glue!
October 18th, 2017 07:02
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