Comments received on poems by dusk arising
unprepared
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your life continue in ts new love.
February 16th, 2018 08:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your life continue in ts new love.
February 16th, 2018 08:58
unprepared
Heather T said:
There is a book in this brief beauty. Sigh-worthy work!
February 16th, 2018 08:55
Heather T said:
There is a book in this brief beauty. Sigh-worthy work!
February 16th, 2018 08:55
words your eyes will never see
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive laden write.
February 14th, 2018 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive laden write.
February 14th, 2018 01:30
words your eyes will never see
Royboy said:
Truly amazing. Very similar like you say but with more depth and emotion.
February 13th, 2018 17:45
Royboy said:
Truly amazing. Very similar like you say but with more depth and emotion.
February 13th, 2018 17:45
words your eyes will never see
Michael Edwards said:
A great work that tears at the soul.
February 13th, 2018 16:52
Michael Edwards said:
A great work that tears at the soul.
February 13th, 2018 16:52
he caught her
Accidental Poet said:
WOW, now you\'re right up my alley. I love photography and old cameras. In the photo at top I have the two cameras on the left and others similar to the one on right. Love how you wrote this da. And especially the last stanza where he caught her in his mind. Excellent write my friend.
February 3rd, 2018 08:37
Accidental Poet said:
WOW, now you\'re right up my alley. I love photography and old cameras. In the photo at top I have the two cameras on the left and others similar to the one on right. Love how you wrote this da. And especially the last stanza where he caught her in his mind. Excellent write my friend.
February 3rd, 2018 08:37
he caught her
Lorna said:
Very real memories you put right here on the page! Lovely.
February 3rd, 2018 07:37
Lorna said:
Very real memories you put right here on the page! Lovely.
February 3rd, 2018 07:37
he caught her
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly crafted piece - a great read dusk and so true.
February 3rd, 2018 03:06
Michael Edwards said:
Superbly crafted piece - a great read dusk and so true.
February 3rd, 2018 03:06
Sometimes
Aislinn Wilson said:
This really speaks to a deep emotion. Well done.
January 29th, 2018 13:30
Aislinn Wilson said:
This really speaks to a deep emotion. Well done.
January 29th, 2018 13:30
Sometimes
FredPeyer said:
A well written poem about heartache, one-sided love, and how we deal with it, da! The last line is so true!
January 29th, 2018 12:51
FredPeyer said:
A well written poem about heartache, one-sided love, and how we deal with it, da! The last line is so true!
January 29th, 2018 12:51
Discontent
FredPeyer said:
great poem, da, and so true! If you look at the sad state of affairs all around the world, it could be true just about anywhere.
January 29th, 2018 12:45
FredPeyer said:
great poem, da, and so true! If you look at the sad state of affairs all around the world, it could be true just about anywhere.
January 29th, 2018 12:45
Discontent
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write da, the politics in the UK is completely out of hand, we are lead by a crowd of lying b******s who just come into politice from University and would not a proper days work if it bit them on the a**e. They haven\'t got a clue what proper living is like.
January 29th, 2018 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write da, the politics in the UK is completely out of hand, we are lead by a crowd of lying b******s who just come into politice from University and would not a proper days work if it bit them on the a**e. They haven\'t got a clue what proper living is like.
January 29th, 2018 01:54
Discontent
Accidental Poet said:
I actually thought it about President Trump. And I do have trouble calling him \"President Trump\". As I feel he\'s the biggest disgrace in the history of U.S. Presidency. Great write dusk.
January 28th, 2018 12:22
Accidental Poet said:
I actually thought it about President Trump. And I do have trouble calling him \"President Trump\". As I feel he\'s the biggest disgrace in the history of U.S. Presidency. Great write dusk.
January 28th, 2018 12:22
Discontent
Michael Edwards said:
I can see where this is pointing and didn\'t read God into it - but then I\'m not a believer anyway - it\'s a powerful address and flows so well. Just one point and I feel a tad mean mentioning it given the quality of the write - but I\'m not too sure about the last line.
January 28th, 2018 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
I can see where this is pointing and didn\'t read God into it - but then I\'m not a believer anyway - it\'s a powerful address and flows so well. Just one point and I feel a tad mean mentioning it given the quality of the write - but I\'m not too sure about the last line.
January 28th, 2018 10:42
Discontent
dusk arising said:
Thank you Hood. High praise from a respected songwriter/poet.
I think you need to be a Brit to see the point of this piece, i\'ll wait for further comments and maybe get a surprise or two.
January 28th, 2018 09:44
dusk arising said:
Thank you Hood. High praise from a respected songwriter/poet.
I think you need to be a Brit to see the point of this piece, i\'ll wait for further comments and maybe get a surprise or two.
January 28th, 2018 09:44
Discontent
dusk arising said:
Ha ha ha does god get re-elected? Puzzles me how you could read a God into being a target for these words.
January 28th, 2018 06:54
dusk arising said:
Ha ha ha does god get re-elected? Puzzles me how you could read a God into being a target for these words.
January 28th, 2018 06:54
right back at me
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write, it is good to see you back here again.
January 9th, 2018 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving write, it is good to see you back here again.
January 9th, 2018 02:31
right back at me
Michael Edwards said:
Ah what a lovely tender write - thanks for posting it.
January 9th, 2018 01:30
Michael Edwards said:
Ah what a lovely tender write - thanks for posting it.
January 9th, 2018 01:30
right back at me
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful write! Such a pleasurable memory. Thanks for sharing! Got me in a nostalgic mood!
January 8th, 2018 22:04
Christina8 said:
What a wonderful write! Such a pleasurable memory. Thanks for sharing! Got me in a nostalgic mood!
January 8th, 2018 22:04
afraid
Christina8 said:
So well done dusk. You have expressed that words are more harmful than anything physical. So sad! Thanks for sharing this write!
November 20th, 2017 07:54
Christina8 said:
So well done dusk. You have expressed that words are more harmful than anything physical. So sad! Thanks for sharing this write!
November 20th, 2017 07:54
afraid
Michael Edwards said:
It took me with it all the way and such a sad ending - great work dusk.
November 20th, 2017 04:50
Michael Edwards said:
It took me with it all the way and such a sad ending - great work dusk.
November 20th, 2017 04:50
afraid
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, words can do so much more damage than physical violence.
November 20th, 2017 04:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, words can do so much more damage than physical violence.
November 20th, 2017 04:45
afraid
kevin browne said:
you have expressed what loves damages can do to a human soul. it\'s filled with everything and more than anyone can imagine. great work.
November 20th, 2017 04:16
kevin browne said:
you have expressed what loves damages can do to a human soul. it\'s filled with everything and more than anyone can imagine. great work.
November 20th, 2017 04:16
hum-drum
Noah said:
I get a comfortable feeling from this. I also love the title lol
November 11th, 2017 18:57
Noah said:
I get a comfortable feeling from this. I also love the title lol
November 11th, 2017 18:57
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